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hi guys ...im back with another attempt. i call this sweet moments 1,2 3etc...coz i really cant think of good titles. but let me tell you its NOT a continuation from where i left off...i would rather like to call it instances which are sequenced...what i mean is ...these might happen in sequence because thats the way i think...but it wont be continued like from point to point or day to day.

SWEET MOMENTS #3 (the first kiss)

( you can think that once they have confessed...there might have been a peck on the cheek or kiss on the forehead...but this one the real passionate kiss.)

Rishab woke up from his sleep as drops of water fell on his face. he slowly opened his eyes to find his biwi...his awww so beautiful biwi...was just out of her bath drying her hair...throwing her hair from this side to that side...not even realizing that water from her hair had fallen on him. she had now stopped wiping he hair and had neatly combed it all to one side...leaving one side of her neck exposed ...giving an excellent view of her creamy white back. the instant attraction made him stand up from his bed as he walked slowly to her.

RK slowly slid his hands onto her waist pulling her into back hug. madhu was totally surprised of this gesture. he very slowly placed an open mouthed kiss on her neck and with his husky voice he whispered into her ears "good morning beautiful". a shiver was running through her spine...she closed her eyes and enjoyed the feel of him close to her.

a blush slowly crept her face and she turned around still feeling shy ...with a small smile on her face ...she said "good morning handsome...go freshen up...i will get your coffee and breakfast."

R: (still hugging her) biwi...you know what...you are supposed to wake me up with a kiss every morning...unlike throwing water droplets from your hair.

M: is that so? (teasingly) ...i have never heard about that.

R: never heard about it? ...so let me tell you...you know its very romantic to wake up your hubby with a kiss.

M: ahan... but today you woke up...so cancelled . and leave me...i need to do pooja and get you some breakkfast. chodo!!! (trying to wiggle out of his embrace)

R: not until you give me that...

M: what..

R: my morning kiss

M: nooo...

R: yess...

R: was closing on her as she closed her eyes...she could feel his breath on her face...he was millimeters away from her lips...and he heard bittuji calling "chief"

M: madhu opened her eyes in shock and pushed RK from her not wanting to face the embarresment...she quietly walked away from there.

bittuji had come to discuss his schedule for the day. RK was irritated but did not say anything. madhu had send his breakfast with the housekeeper coz for the first time she was feeling weird to be around him. she loved to be with him...hugg him...but the thought of getting closer to him...kissing him...the thought itself was sending shivers through her spine.

madhu was walking to the kitchen when she suddenly felt a pull...as she realised it was her husband. he pulled her close to him behind the huge pillar so that nobody could see them.

R: you are avoiding me?

M: no...why would i do that?

R: then why didnt you bring breakfast for me?

M: woh...woh...mujhe kaam tha.

R: really.

M: haan...maa has given me some work to do...i dont want to upset her even more ...so i better do that fast. she was about to leave when he pinned her to the wall.

R: he closed to her...putting both his hands on the wall ...their bodies pressing each other. they were really really close. " not until you give me my kiss"

M: not now...not here...sombody will see

R: so let them

M: noo...what will they think...

R: im kissing my wife...so what should they think?

M: please RK

R: biwi can you please stop wasting time...as he was closing on her...he caressed he cheek in his palms...their lips just a touch away... madhu closed her eyes for her first kiss... and someone called from behind " chief...kahan ho aap?"

R: he just put his head on her shoulders and said "not again"

M: smiled...and so did he...as he pulled away from her...and left with bittuji for the shoot. madhu blushed at the thought of how close they were.

RK had returned early from his shoot today...he had been waiting in the room eagerly for his biwi. when he had no signs of her coming to the room...he would call out for her. she was acting extra busy and would send munna up for each of his call...munna would give excuses as to bhabi was busy with this and that. Rk was now pissed. in the night when she walked up to the room...finally as that was her end destination...she could see it in his face that he was irritated.

R: so u have decided to show up?

M: where else would i go?

R: now walking towards her... where were you?

M: madhu was walking backwards for each step that he takes towards her...i was down...busy with some work

R: didnt you hear me calling you?

M: but i had send munna

R: i dont need munna...i need you.

M: now hit the wall...RK please...

R: closing towards her...please what biwi...why did you ignore me?

M: i did not

R: you did!!...caressed her cheek with the back of her hands...didnt you miss me? ...why are you ignoring me? dont you like to be with me?

M: could see love in his eyes...RK its nothing like that...its just that...and she trailed off..."its nothing"

R: what is it biwi?...now calm..."its just that...he prompted her to complete what she said.

M: its just that i was scared.

R: of what?

M: of you.

R: me?? why??

M: when you come close to me...my heart beats just go up...i feel weird...

R: he was sliding his hands up her arms...but you shouldnt be...its me jaan...

M: now putting her hands on his chest...i know...

R: dont you love me?...madhu simply nodded...dont you wanna feel me close to you?...dont you want me to love you?

M: RK...was all tht came out of mouth...she was so close to him...just a touch away...

R: madhu...let me kiss you...let me love you...

M: could feel the love oozing out of his heart for her...only for her..."how many times do you wanna kiss me?"

R: just once...for now ( he added)

M: smiled...and she bend forward and very softly kissed his cheek...giving him permission to continue what he wants to do.

RK closed to her...kissed her right cheek first...then her left and then he looked into her eyes...then her lips...he came closer to her and slightly pecked on her lower lip. he just waited for a second to see her reaction. she closed her eyes and had a light smile on her face ...just waiting to be loved...he couldnt control anymore...he took her lips. its started with a light kiss in the begininning and then grew into a passionate one...his hands roaming around her back holding her tightly...feeling every part of her body. she kissed him back with equal passion her hands around his neck...her fingers caressing his hair.

they finally broke the kiss when they felt they had become out of breath...both of them were panting...he rested his head on her forehead...she kissed his cheek again and whispered "i love you"...as RK bit her cheeks to say...love you tooo...

M:ouch!!

R: thats punishment for ignoring me!!!!

both of them chuckled and hugged eachother

here you go guys...i hope you like it.




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Its really 9ce 1 😳
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naaza_deen great story! Please write more! I loved it!




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excellent update loved it👏
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thankyou everyone for liking my OS...well i dont really know if my writing skills are great...but i am just trying.
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superb awesome
plz pm me whn ever you update
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hey guys thanks a lot for the appreciation. but i dont know if i can write anymore...im not really a creative person. i had some ideas...but writing is not really me. 😊

but i love to read a lot of fictions...so i will be around reading the amazing short fictions in this forum.
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short & sweet ,,,, kaash yeh saach hoti...!!!!!

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