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Posted: 12 years ago
Mahi this was very nce and cute update.😛.I really love the cute nok jhok of Manveer in ur FF..👏.But plz make it long next time...I feel so sad jab khatam ho jata hai😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

Mahi this was very nce and cute update.😛.I really love the cute nok jhok of Manveer in ur FF..👏.But plz make it long next time...I feel so sad jab khatam ho jata hai😭

aww thnks jarur try karungi to make dem long!
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey mahi...whn r u going to update nxt???? m waiting :|
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Posted: 12 years ago

WITHOUT PAIN NO LOVE

PART 12: MANVEER:::::::: <3 :::::::

Anya turns back after closing the door'.

Sees a surprised niks standing in front of her'.

Looking at her curiously'.

Anya avoids her intense gaze'.

Niks: princess ye sab kyat ha??

Anya: anya'

Niks: what??

Anya shy: mujhe princess sirf..

Niks interrupts: mera Uday bula sakta hai..hai na??

Anya: mera Uday nahi sirf Uday '

Niks: oh c'mon ab man bhi lo who tumhara Uday hai'.pata hai mene toh suna tha ki yuvraj udaveer singh kisi bhi ladki ko ek ghante se jyada nahi jhel sakta'.suna tha ki who ek khudgarz manipulative stupid raheezada hai jisme heart ya feelings naam ki koi cheej hi nahi hai'.

Anya:esa nahi hai niks..uske paas bhi feelings hai..uske paas bhi dil hai'ek pure gold heart you know'

Par duniya ne use esa bana diya'.woh bhale hi bahar se dikhata ho ki who khudgarz manupalative heartless insaan hai'but sachai toh ye hai'ki use bhi farak padta hai'.kahi uske ke dil ke kone mein use farak padta hai'mein janti hun'.

Yad hai hum pehli bar car accident wale din mile the'.mujhe uski ankon mein ajeeb sa dard dikha'

Esa laga jese use kisi cheej ko apne andar chupane ke wajah se ghutan ho rahi hai'

Anya's upset'

Niks: tumhe itna sab kuch kese pata chala who bhi ek din mein??

Anya: uski ankhein bahot kuch bolti hai '..mujhe apne aap samajh ata hai'.i dnt know kese yar'.pata hai meinne use itna avoid kiya'.par ek bhi din esa nahi guzra ki meine uske bare mein kuch socha nahi'humesha man mein usike khyal the'jese mein use bahot achi tarah janti thi'jese kabhi hum bahot close the'..par uski ankhon mein who dard bahot chubta tha aur ab bhi chubta hai'.

Niks surprised: wow anya tumhe use pyaar ho gaya hai'.

Anya shocked:what??no esa nahi hai niks'.mein toh use janti bhi nahi hu'humare dosti ko toh sirf ek hi din hua hai'pagal ho gai hai tu'.

Niks softly..:anya sweet heart pyar kab karna hai iski ijaazat humare dimag ko nahi dil ko hoti hai jispe humara koi kabu nahi hota'.aur pyaar kisi ko janane na janane se nahi hota who toh bas ho jata hai'.

Anya is lost in her own thoughts of Uday while he had listened all the conversation'.he came to call niks down but listening to anya he was left dumbstruck'.

He didn't know she knew him so well'.

His eyes were full of tears'

With the satisfaction that his princess loved him too'

He stood there thinking of anya'his angel'his princess manyata'.thinking all the moments they spent together same was with her'.

tujhe dekh dekh sona
tujhe dekh kar hain jagna
maine yeh zindagani
sang tere bitaani
tujhmein basi hain meri jaan haai
jiya dhadak dhadak
jaayen

jiya dhadak dhadak
jaayen

he then goes inside her room'.

As soon as he enters the girls shout together'

" tum"

Uday: are han hum'.are kya hua ese kyun dekh rahe ho jese koi rakshas dekhliya ho'.

Anya: tum meri life mein rakshas se kam nahi ho'han nahi to'.vese tu yaha kya kar raha hai?

Anya niks look at each other worried thinking what if he heard their conversation'.

Uday: are hum toh niks ko bulane aye the'

Both girls relieved that he didn't knew anything'.

Uday smirks: are kya hua ese kyun dekh rahe ho ek dusre ko jese koi gunah kiya ho'.

Anya gulps: esa kuch nahi hai'niks tum iske sath jao mein taiyar hoke ati hu'

Niks: ok'jaldi ana'

Both Uday and niks go down'

And anya goes to freshen up'.

Still thinking of Uday and what niks told her'.

After that she opens her wardrobe in which Uday had kept her dress'.

She is amazed how simple red the dress was yet extremely beautiful'

Dress link

http://www.google.co.in/imgres?hl=en&biw=1280&bih=654&tbm=isch&tbnid=AMehR0ZlXmq4jM:&imgrefurl=http://www.dressale.com/tags/Front-Tie-Belly-Shirt/&imgurl=http://images.dressale.com/images/large/7/235577.jpg&w=300&h=450&ei=Vo9HUP7pHILqrAf7o4CoDg&zoom=1&iact=hc&vpx=680&vpy=12&dur=753&hovh=262&hovw=176&tx=88&ty=138&sig=102507261379899072447&page=2&tbnh=148&tbnw=113&start=29&ndsp=36&ved=1t:429,r:4,s:29,i:177

jwellery

http://www.google.co.in/imgres?hl=en&biw=1280&bih=654&tbm=isch&tbnid=UYpUGeHKMQDUWM:&imgrefurl=http://www.deekclothings.com/2008/07/deek-fashion-pendant_01.html&imgurl=http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_0WYSDQXbk9M/SaFH7V7HJnI/AAAtM/aS_kG2k3KoU/s400/AAY-7266.JPG&w=300&h=400&ei=W5FHUKOfNceIrAfxloGYDQ&zoom=1&iact=hc&vpx=359&vpy=176&dur=2381&hovh=259&hovw=194&tx=136&ty=186&sig=102507261379899072447&page=1&tbnh=131&tbnw=98&start=0&ndsp=21&ved=1t:429,r:1,s:0,i:76

She wears the dress applies kajol'.looking totally like a fairy'

Everyone was sitting down on breakfast table'..

Uday: are yar ye anya kaha reh gayi??

Niks: uv chill maro who aa rahi hai'kahi bhag thodi na jane wali hai'

Uday: are iska koi bharosa nahi kab man mein aye aur miss express train shuru ho jaye bhagne'.

Vijay juice pite pite: are express train hai to kya hua ghum phirke uska station to udayveer banna ke di'(uv shots him a glare) I'.i mean uv ke ghar hi hai na'.

Then vijay ki najar stairs par jati hai'use esa shock lagta hai ki'who sara juice uske muh mese uday ke chehre pe spray paint karta hai'matlab thukta hai'

Uske gale mein juice atka hai'so uski chest ko ek hath se mar raha hai'and also coughing'.. but uski najar to stairs par hi atki hai'

Uday gets up cleaning his face with a tissue'

Uday: oho vijaybanna ye kya bachpana hai'

Having no response from vijay he looks in the direction vijay was staring'.

Seeing at the top step of the stairs'his mouth for the first step fall open forming a big "O"

Same was with others'..

Uday's princess was standing there looking like an angel'.

She decends down'looking at every1 but avoiding Uday's gaze'

With her every step down Uday's heart beats rate speeded up'

Uday use dekhte dekhte stairs ke yaha pohach jata hai'.

She is at the third last step'.when her heels twist and she falls'

But before touching the ground she is held by two strong arms'.

She was scared and closed her eyes'

She held his collar tightly.. made his face come more closer to her'.

She had hid her face in his chest'

His breath hitting her face hard like cyclones'.

Uday whispers in her ears'

Uday: you are looking extra ordinarily beautiful today princess'.

No wonder vijay banna ne humare muh par apne juice se spray painting kar diya'.

Recognizing his voice anya's eyes shot open'..

Their eyes meet'both lost in each others eyes so deep that they almost forgot that niks unnati and vijay were also there'.

kabse hai dil mein mere armaan kai ankahe
inko tu sunle aaja chaahat ke rang chadha jaa
kehna kabhi to mera maan haai
jiya dhadak dhadak
jaayen

unnati clicks a photo and then decides to interrupt'.

Unnati: dada anya pura din ese hi bahon mein bahe dalke bitana hai kya??

Both of them quickly separate out'blushing..

Vijay: oh god blush toh dekho kitna kar rahe hai'.

Anya: shut up vijay chauhan'.

J comes from behind'

J: hi guyz'

Everyone: hey'

She saw anya and was amazed at her new look'.then she saw Uday standing very close to her'.

She sees Uday's hand which was still on anya's waist'.

She was fuming in anger but doesn't show'you know na rajwada attitude'.

Uday finally speaks: tum charo ek kam karo college jao'hum princess ko breakfast karwake late hai'

Every1 say: ok'bye'

They all leave while Uday and anya were standing in same position'

Uday then moves forward forgetting that his hand was on her waist'

Due to his movement there is an akward twist between them and they fall on the sofa beside them'.

Anya down and Uday on top of her'

His breath cyclones again hitting her face hard'

He looks a bit up'

Both again lost in each other's eyes..forgetting everything'forgetting every1'.

Forgetting in what position they were'

Just lost in each other's sweet little heaven'.

lagta hain yeh kyu mujhe sadiyon se chaahu tujhe
mere sapno mein aake apna mujhko banake
mujhpe tu kar ehsaan haai
jiya dhadak dhadak
jaayen
tujhe dekh dekh sona
tujhe dekh kar hain jagna
maine yeh zindagani
sang tere hain bitani haai
jiya dhadak dhadak
jaayen

jiya dhadak dhadak
jaayen

~mahi~

guyz...do leave ur cummentz...

Edited by MAHI1198 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing Parts
Just read the last 2 updates sorry for late comments im very behind so I read most of the fanfics now will comment on them
This part was so sweet I loved the song its my favourite Anya is in love with Uday
Cont Soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Amazing Parts

Just read the last 2 updates sorry for late comments im very behind so I read most of the fanfics now will comment on them
This part was so sweet I loved the song its my favourite Anya is in love with Uday
Cont Soon

THNKS YA WILL CONTINUE SOONN... AND NO NEED TO SAY SORRY...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update
Yes Anya is in love
Can't wait till the next update
Hey I have a question why dose jai hate Anya ?
Just confused
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow just loved it so anya loves uday hmmm interesting... loved how they fell on the sofa hayee it made me blush really cant wait for the next part now update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome updates Mahi!

Just read last 3 updates in one go. Soo beautiful n romantic updates. Loving them. Superb work
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very sweet part.Anya understands uday very well.Uday is happy 2 no tht she has feelings4 him.plz make them confess tjeir luv.cant wait.loved d dress & ornaments.as u wrote i know tht she looked like a fairy.Uday holding her wen she was abt 2 fall down,then he falling on her...d romantic sing jiya dhadak...everything was so romantic.plz update soon

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