SS: Desi Pasta...PLAGARISED NOTE pg 21 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
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such a cute story..!!...:-) continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yaar lovely uodate
i so love ur DESI PASTA
would want to have more
pls update soon😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
haha now arnav will wash clothes??!
awesome update..
luvd it !
update soon..
thank yu for the pm.. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Some problem in hitting the like button...
I didnt like it... But, I loved it sooo muchhh...
You write sooo beautifullyy... LOL...
Arnav and Khushiii are sooo in love with each other...
Arnav could sense that she didnt have her breakfast...thats soo sweett...
And our Madhumatijisss INDIAN WASHING MACHINE was really hilarious...
LOve you for this update...Please update this often... You know what this was the story I fell in love with in your works... then only I came to know about other works...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
indian washing machine!!!!


laughing my bums off !!!😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WARNING

The story is going through a writer's block phase... therefore the quality of content is not up to the mark. I apologize in advance.


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An exhausted and overworked Arnav slumped on Khushi's bed and made a call to Khushi. After few rings Khushi picked up the phone and let out an exhausted "Arnav!" which was returned by Arnav with an equal exhausting voice "Khushi"

"Arnav why are you panting so much? What happened baby?", Khushi asked concerned and confused.

"Now I get it, why you don't gain an ounce of weight!", he declared.

"Means?",Khushi was confused.

"Khushi Kumari Gupta, I washed my clothes with that bat thingy, I squeezed them off water, I hung them, Hell lot of work, good way to lose calories",he was still panting. Khushi was almost in loss of words in shock.

"Arnav you washed your clothes ? with your hand?", she asked trying to confirm.

"No, I hired that crazy… I mean buaji's soft hands", he commented sarcastically, "Of course I did"

"I am sorry Arnav we happen to do all our works by ourselves. I am sorry you have to go through all of these", she was guilty. She was feeling really bad for Arnav and the mess he has gotten into.

Arnav sensed her uneasiness and tried easing her off. "Relax Khushi… we decided to let us go through this whole thing didn't we? it does not matter really. I love you", he confessed.

"I love you a lot"

"Now tell me why were you panting?", he queried.

"Arnav , Anjali di brought me to a club to play squash", she informed.

"Lucky man!", he was missing clubbing and heard her pout and blabber.

"Lucky? You call that game lucky? It's a silly game, hitting the ball to the wall with the racket and the opponent stands right next to you. I just don't understand, why my opponent will be standing next to me, he should stand opposite to me. What a pathetic game and pathetic people. Every time I am introduced to anyone by Anjali di that person touches their cheeks with mine… how irritating is that…"

"Khushi Khushi Khushi", he interrupted her. "That is the way people greet each other"

"Sure. They don't know what a Namaste is", she retorted. "A hello also would have been much better", she concluded huffing.

"Khushi tum theek ho?", she heard him say and felt her tiredness leaving her at that instance. Her heart warmed up to his concern and she finally smiled.

"I am fine Arnav", she assured. He smiled and was about to reply her when both of them heard.

"Arnav babua, did you broom your room?"

Not again. He banged his head to the pillow.

"Arnav!", Khushi called him clearly obvious to his reactions.

"I am fine Khushi… I'll be brooming now, talk to you later."

"I am sorry Arnav, we do all our works by ourselves", she felt bad again.

"I know. Now bye", he disconnected the call and went out in search of a broom.

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"Where were you Khushi?", Anjali caught hold her by her arms. Khushi wiped off her sweat and turned her face into a smile.

"No where di, tell me"

"Come Khushi, we need to meet some more people!", Anjali dragged her.

Khushi recalled all cheek to cheek brush with fake kiss sounds, fake blinking of eyes through fake lashes and dreaded.

"Let it be di", she resisted but Anjali was adamant.

"No let's go", she pulled her again and saw Khushi's eyes turning misty. As Raizadas were forewarned by Madhumati she decided to ignore her misty eyes but Anjali was getting affected by Khushi's tears.

A little more tears Khushi, a little more, come on you can do it, I know it , come on girl.

Khushi mentally encouraged herself and continued bringing out waters through her eyes. She saw Anjali huff

"Khushi", she cupped her face. "You are going to be a part of our life forever, you need to face these people then. If you have to do it later, why not do it now huh? And its really easy you see. Follow four steps, Go, Greet, Compliment and Excuse Yourself, getit?"

Khushi, 'Mission Ganga Jamuna' failed. She mentally cringed and let herself be dragged by Anjali.

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Hope you liked it

Priyo😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Very Nice. Loved it. Waiting to read more.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
Lol, it's not hard to adapt to both kinds of worlds!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
tht was a superbbb update...loving this ss .waiting 4 the next part...😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great part!! LOL, Khushi's description of playing squash was so funny!
Thank you very much for the pm!
Keep up the great work!

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