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Posted: 12 years ago
Forbidden Fire (A devil's tale)
Copyright Aniee.H
Part 4

The threat in his voice made it evident that he wouldn't hesitate before doing this. She was under him, in his house, on his bed, dressed as a bride. And this person couldn't be trusted at any cost. He was right. She wouldn't be able to do anything to stop him.

She could feel darkness in front of her eyes, as he uttered those shameful words. Just when she felt that was going to faint, he left her with a sudden jerk. It took her some time to recover. Quickly, she spread her dupata around her to hide herself from his hungry eyes.

"You said that you would die rather than spending a minute with me." His voice was little agonized but it was also harsh at the same time.

"Did you really mean that?" He looked away and chuckled. She wasn't sure that what she should answer, if lying would be the best option or she should tell him the truth.

"Answer me!" He raised his voice and she nodded her head slightly to indicate yes.

"Liar," He glanced into her eyes directly and she lowered her head immediately. Maan lifted her chin to look into her eyes.

"Tell me, do you really mean it?"

"I.." She stammered because she knew that it was not wise to make him more furious. But he was adamant enough to know and she knew that he wouldn't settle for anything less than the truth.

"I meant it." She said in a meek voice.

"Here we go. Humans! Big intentions, even bigger claims and a very small heart and even smaller courage.." He said but her eyes reflected that she was still not convinced.

Taking a deep breath, he looked away for a moment. For some unknown reasons, her disgust towards him bothered him. She was the first person in whose eyes he wanted to see something different than disgust and hatred. And this fact only made him harsher, and he wanted to prove her wrong so that he could prove himself right, so that he could find little peace.

"Alright, prove it." He said calmly as he took out his gun from the drawer of the side table and handed it to her.

"Here it is. I say that from today onwards you would have to spend each and every minute with me. You said that you would die instead of spending a minute with me. Now go on and kill yourself..!"

Geet glanced at the insane person and her hands shivered. The cold metal in her hand felt heavier than anything she had ever held.

"Interesting, I don't know why you people exaggerate so much. All the time, you keep on saying so many things and the moment you get the chance to do them, you back out. Why you people lack courage to do what you say or mean?" He mocked.

Geet was gawking at the gun in a shock. She hated violence and she was one of kinds who couldn't watch any sort of violence even on the TV.

"So, where would you like to hit?" He asked rudely.

"Right over your brain, who is compelling you to run away from me?" He asked as his hands guided the gun towards her head.

"Or, right above your heart, who is convincing you to despise me," He asked, placing the gun right above her heart. But she jerked the gun away.

"Finally, you realized that living with me would be better than dying. See, it is not that difficult to breath in the air I have breathed."

Geet kept on gazing at him. The word insane couldn't even do justice to his character. He was more than insane.

"You know, this is the difference between you and me." He walked towards the table and threw the gun lazily.

"When I say something, I mean it. This is what makes me Maan Singh khurana,"

"Always do what you say or this world won't take you seriously and eventually a point would come when even you would also stop taking yourself seriously."

But she failed to understand his implied meaning. He turned around, facing his back towards her. Rising on her feet, Geet quickly ran towards the door. She wanted to get away from there as soon as possible but she didn't realize that the person who could abduct her in presence of hundreds of people wouldn't hesitate to do it again.

Maan smirked when he saw her fighting with the door lock. She was doing her best to open the door.

"You won't be able to escape, no matter how much you try." He said and her movements ceased. But she couldn't dare to turn around and face him.

"What have I done? Why are you punishing me like this?" Geet asked as she pressed her forehead against the cold wooden door.

"Yes, I would punish you, as long as I live, I would never forgive you for what you have done." He said and she realized that he was standing right behind her. She could feel the heat emitting from his body.

"Punishment for what? What have I done?" She asked in helplessness and frustration.

"You mercilessly burned every inch of my existence in a blistering fire in these two days. I want to burn this whole world in it, along with me. I will not forgive you for this, as long as this fire exists." He said but his one hand pressed her tummy so that she was pressed into his body.

"Your voice wakes something in me. Believes me, whatever it is, it's too dangerous, too unsafe and too painful," Geet was standing but was lying on his chest. Her hair was open and his one hand was still pressing her tummy.

"You are burning me even more by barely breathing in my proximity. These heart beats are capable of shifting something inside my chest and I hate it. I want to hate you...half as much as I hate myself."

"I will never forgive you for this as long as the word hatred exists,"

"The way you are affecting me with your eyes and with the fear in your eyes, I will never forgive that."

"Believe me; I will never forgive you,

as long as you exist,
as long as I exist,

as long as this world exists,"

There was a madness and obsession in his voice. From the moment he had met her, his world was changing, and this fact was taunting the devil inside him.

"I don't understand you. You just left me, when you could have done anything.You could have ruined me but you didn't. What do you exactly want from me?"

"Yes, I want to ruin you. But I want to ruin you more than that. Few minutes back, I could have ruined your body, anyone could have done that. And I am not anybody, I am Maan Singh Khurana. My desire is to ruin your heart, your soul, your everything. I want to ruin you to an extent where you will find peace nowhere but to burn in this fire along with me, on your own accord."

He made no sense to her, neither did his words.

"Don't think so hard, you would have plenty of time for that. Let's have dinner now." He said as he opened the door and made her walk towards the other room. He was holding her as if she was made of glass and would break if he didn't handle her properly.

He made her sit on the table and gestured her to continue. Geet didn't want to eat. She felt like breaking everything. She hated being commanded like that. All the events from the night flashed in front of her.

"Eat," He said but his voice was lost in the hazy state of her mind. She was sitting like a statue, unable to eat or say anything.

"I said eat," He pressed her but she held her throbbing head between her palms. Everything was fuzzy, mixed with his voice in the background. All the incidents of the nights flashed in front of her eyes.

"Eat," His voice was high and she failed to take it this time.

"Stop it,"

"I said, stop it," She yelled helplessly in frustration and the next moment she threw everything from the table. Whole table was a mess and she gasped when she realized what she had done.

What would he do now? Her heart lurched at the thought as she rose on her feet. Maan's eyes were spitting fire. She walked backward clutching her dupata, right above her heart.

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Edited by anshra - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
burahhh
ballay ballay ballay ballay
I am the first I am the firsttt
wowww after a looonnnggg time I am the first I am the first. I ammm the firsssttt
aaha aaha aaha
uff faizie back to business, I mean back to comment
wohoo Devil aaya devil aaya
O god Not again Faizie
back to comment otherwise readers and Aniee will surely throw u out
I am sorry guys. me back to comment
but did u ppl knw I am the...
ooye put ur jooties down
I am not saying I am the first. I was saying I am a die hard fan of Devil
poori baat to sun lia karo

ok ab serious wala comment
here we goes
welcome to the world of Devil
well all of u are officially welcomed by Aniee in the world of devil where its a strong chance that you will fall in love with Devil.
I am already in love with Devil not now but from Devil in love.
and this Devil is more ruthless than ever
he kidnapped her just for a dinner
he threat her he can do anything to her
and he is right in his words. Yes he can do
But he did not why is the question which is in Geet and no doubt in every reader's Mind
well he is a devil and he has his own ways so we cant perdict anything abt him
hain na
he is unpredictable but the way he asked her is she determined on what she said
and Oh here come the DEVIL
he is giving her his gun to shoot herself because she said she cant breath in the same air he is breathing😲
so rude and cruel
he is giving her choice
nice 👏

"Right over your brain, who is compelling you to run away from me?" He asked as his hands guided the gun towards her head.

"Or, right above your heart, who is convincing you to despise me," He asked, placing the gun right above her heart. But she jerked the gun away.

I doubt he has some feelings abt her
but here he comes again

he has a doubt abt his feelings towards him

but the helplessness in his words tells us clearly that he has some feeling for her

right now he is denying it and he is giving the name of HATE to his feelings but its love

or should I say the start of some love????

but again we cant perdict anything abt devil


for u Aniee

fabulous update amazing

you knw what one thing I love abt you devils is "Their philosophy of life". their dialogues. no doubt how rude or ruthless they are but the way they see the world is a very correct way and this is what I like abt your devils.

2nd this devil of your is totally different from previous devils. more curel, more ruthless more bitter and hope more possessive

and this took my heart

I want to hate you...half as much as I hate myself."

"I will never forgive you for this as long as the word hatred exists,"

"The way you are affecting me with your eyes and with the fear in your eyes, I will never forgive that."

"Believe me; I will never forgive you as long as you exist,

as long as I exist,

as long as this world exists,"


and these



"Yes, I want to ruin you. But I want to ruin you more than that. Few minutes back, I could have ruined your body, anyone could have done that. And I am not anybody, I am Maan Singh Khurana. My desire is to ruin your heart, your soul, your everything. I want to ruin to the extent where you will find peace nowhere but to burn in this fire along with me, on your own accord."


Edited by PariNain - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
😊

After reading this part .. only one sentence is coming to my mind "he is the man of words"…😉


Caught her lie and so that he wanted to prove her wrong..


"Yes, I would punish you, as long as I live, I would never forgive you for what you have done.


Was thinking what did she do ???😕


And his ans… thud🤢


You burned every inch of my existence in a blistering fire so mercilessly that within two days. I want to burn this whole world in it, along with me. I will not forgive you for this, as long as this fire exists."


Ops geet is completely trapped ..


"I will never forgive you for this as long as the word hatred exists,"

"The way you are affecting me with your eyes and with the fear in your eyes, I will never forgive that."

"Believe me; I will never forgive you as long as you exist,

as long as I exist,

as long as this world exists,"


maan is totally out of mind..😲


My desire is to ruin your heart, your soul, your everything. I want to ruin to the extent where you will find peace nowhere but to burn in this fire along with me, on your own accord.


So basically maan wants her to love him…


Hailaa what courage geet showed messing with his dinner plans😲



wondering will maan be soft with her after all this mess???



well umm yes... dinner tou karna hai naa... 😉



awesome part aniee 👏



love yaa

Edited by drrose31 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
heyyy Anieee yah0oo0o0o
finally u updated ...ufff after almost 2 dayz wait sara wondering*😲
me doing bhangraaa sab ajao letzz doo Maaneet's signature bhangra step😃
chalo my tummy full hogaya uff dinner karnay ke baad comment karnay ka maza araha😳
Aniee soch rahi hogiii comment to kar sara😆😆
oyee excitment to batanay deee⭐️
pheww

now my comment
u rocked aniee
tumhe to hollywood mai hona chahyee LOL😃
haiyeee me insanely,madly,and umm apni taraf sy laga doo ...in love wid this devil what to doo your updates are sooo
damn unpredictable ...mai nay kuch orr socha orr result haiyeee😕
haaawww😲😲😲😲😲
ye kyaaa "Here it is. I say that from today onwards you would have to spend each and every minute with me. You said that you would die instead of spending a minute with me. Now go on and kill yourself"
khud hi ussy gun dediii just to test her determination
haiyeee ayse devil ke sath rahtay kis ko marna acha lage gaaa...😳
poor geet traped in the devil's den😲😲
haiyeee me inlove wid these linesss
"When I say something, I mean it. This is what makes me Maan Singh khurana,'
"Always do what you say or this world won't take you seriously and eventually a point would come when even you would stop taking yourself seriously"
thats true MSK this makes u our ruthless devil
but one thing jo wo bhi nahi janta that he is in love wid this angel
"You burned every inch of my existence in a blistering fire so mercilessly that within two days. I want to burn this whole world in it, along with me. I will not forgive you for this, as long as this fire exists.
i love this madness he wants her to burn wid him in this forbbiden fire the way he is burning...
kabhi kabhi kisi kay aik nazar dekhnay say hum apna ab kuch kho bethtay han orr jis aag ki garmi ko kabhi mahsoos bhi nahi karna chahtay jaanay anjaanay usshi mai jal ke sukoon ata hai 😉😉 hailla mai to poet ban gayiii Anieee😆😆
here the devil comes again ufff koi too rok looo
"Yes, I want to ruin you. But I want to ruin you more than that. Few minutes back, I could have ruined your body, anyone could have done that. And I am not anybody, I am Maan Singh Khurana. My desire is to ruin your heart, your soul, your everything. I want to ruin to the extent where you will find peace nowhere but to burn in this fire along with me, on your own accord." OMG OMG anieee wanna hug you tight 😳😳

ufff want to comment more n more but phir baki sab ka kya hoga lolzz
loved ur update to the core
my unpredictable queen btw u deserves this title
now eagerly waiting for the next
more hotness n intense n passion on its wayyy yahooo
chal now me going finally
luv u lotsss
tight wala hug to my DevilEmbarrassed😳


Edited by 786muskaan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Congrats for 400 likes

Great update👏👏
Maaneet conversation superb👏..Loved their dialogues..👍🏼
Maan is real devil..He is full of desire and want geet to burn with him..Geet is really trapped

Geet is so innocent..not able to predict maan...
Maan does whatever he thinks...Poor geet not able to think anything..Full of confused😕

Omg😲...He scared geet by gaving gun..😆
opps. Geet throw-ed all foods. Maan is full of anger😲..Now what he is going to do..How will geet escape..

Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next😊
Edited by srirad - 12 years ago
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thanks for updating me in peace
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nice update...Geet speaks without thinking...and maan does whatever he likes...both are unexpected...congo on the 400...

I am afraid abt his next step now..:O
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Posted: 12 years ago
my poor, never working, yieldless,good-for-nothing, indescribably worst,patience testing, network made me to reply so lately.


Aniee di,thank u so much for ur wishes.

u made my day(intact last day)

poor geet

I'm speechless

awesome fantastic fabulous wonderful marvelous super update.


Thank you.
Edited by Ravz333 - 12 years ago
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1, 2, 3, 4 , 5 sab slots Gaye 😭
Par ki farq painda hai yaron 😆
Me still reserving 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
di its fabulous no one can understand MSk easily

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