Pt2/3'Forbidden Fire(Devil's Tale)' Pg5/69 - Page 41

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Forbidden Fire (A devil's tale)
Copyright Aniee.H

Part 3

It was a farm house and the building in front of her looked like a castle. This place seemed to be extracted from a fairy tale where an evil had grounded a princess for lifetime. He walked inside with perfect ease as his guards held the door for him. He stopped when he reached inside the room. His gaze was still fixed on her as he laid her on the bed. Geet brought her knees together, wrapping herself protectively with her arms.

"I don't want to stay here," Geet purred, trying to hide her fear as she crawled backward on the bed. Sense of helplessness and fear had heightened her emotions. She was angry on herself and on the situation she was in. She was angry on him and at the same time, he intimidated her.

But he was perfectly calm. It was impossible to comprehend anything from the steeled expression he wore.

"And what makes you think that I would oblige to your demands like a robot?" He asked as he leaned on her and she slanted her head, away from him.

"What do you want?" she asked.

"I have already told you about my plan. It's your mistake that you never took my words seriously. A big mistake," He said as he grabbed her arm, bringing her closer.

Geet couldn't believe that such an insane person could even exist to walk on the face of this Earth. He was insane and she had no idea how to deal with him.

"You brought me here to ruin me," She stammered, saying what was in her mind. Her senses were so numb that she couldn't even hear her own words.

"Not yet." He answered.

"Yet," He stressed menacingly, after a slight pause.

"You can trust me on that," He said.

"You are asking me to trust a devil?" Her throat burned and her eyes welled up.

"Then I am afraid that you can't even trust the angels. Don't you know that the devil was also an angel once?" He mocked.

What does he exactly wants? She wondered.

"You kidnapped me, in front of hundreds of people, just to have dinner with me?" She said slowly in a state of shock as it all felt peculiar and strange.

"Are you disappointed that so much effort was made only for the dinner? You want more?" He asked, grinning slyly.

"What? Are you insane?" She protested in a low voice.

"Even I don't know who I am," He stated as a matter of fact as if this insanity was a common trait of his personality and there was nothing unusual about it.

"And let me make it clear. I didn't kidnap you. I just picked you for the dinner. You are lucky that Maan Singh Khurana gave you the honor. Do you know how many girls die just to spend some time with me?"

How a person can be insensitive enough to do such a thing? Geet wondered with disgust and the desire to jerk him away enhanced in her.

"It was my wedding day. You ruined my wedding for your dinner? I can't believe.." Geet wanted to shout. She wanted to ask him. His manners and his presence repulsed her to the core.

"I have already told you that you have to come for the dinner. It wasn't my fault that your wedding clashed with my plans. I am too mean to drop my plans for others."

His rude words enraged her. It was her wedding, not some birthday party or a night out with friends and he had ruined everything just for a dinner. Forget about the remorse or guilt, he was least bothered. All he cared about was what he wanted. Her emotions of anger and fear combined made her retaliate impulsively.

"What do you think of yourself? You want to have dinner with me? Forget about dinner, no sane person can breathe in the air you have breathed. Girls may die to be with you but I would die rather than spending a minute with you." Geet spat without realizing that the person sitting in front of her was not habitual to rejection. She had dared him and that was one of the biggest mistakes that could have been made.

Next moment she felt his one hand on her waist and his other hand traced her arm up and down.

She could feel his hot breath on her face. She knew he would kiss her or taint her virginity. She kept her eyes closed as he traced her jawline with his nose.

He was right. The girls would have surely died to have him in the bed. He was handsome, rich, strong and extremely hot. But to his surprise, today it was he who was burning so badly. The attraction and desire was driving him insane.

From the deepest, darkest
Depths of Hell
There rises a passion
The fury of which the universe
Has never known.

But he wanted to control her, instead of being controlled by his own feelings. His stubborn side wanted her to accept him and crave for him, rather than the other way around. She froze when she saw so much hostility in his expressions. He removed her dupata from her head. She was still in her bridal jewelry and outfit.

"You look tired," He said, still tracing her jawline and this wasn't an answer she was expecting. In response to her insolent words, he had told her that she looked tired.

His nose traced her jaw and paused at her chin. Very lightly, he circled her chin. His hands opened her braid to set her hair free. She tried to move away but his other hand held her securely in her place.

If things would have gone the way they were supposed to be, right now she would have been sitting with Karan as his bride. Even then she would have been scared and hesitant to let him touch her. But now, an unknown person was touching her. Nothing could have been more unnerving than this.

She could hear her heart drumming against her ribs but she failed to hear his ragged breathing. Very slowly, he moved lower, towards her neckline. His other hand had freed her hair from her braid.

Geet held her breath. There was no pleasure but fear that had made her numb. Her mind was too much stressed and since so many days she hadn't slept well. She hadn't eaten anything since morning and right now she was trembling like a dry leaf.

She could feel his breath all over her as he traced her neck with his nose and then stopped right above her cleavage. Her hands tried to push him as she gripped his biceps and tried to shove him away. But he was further stimulated to have her trembling beneath him and then her fingers on his biceps enhanced that feeling.

His hand that was gripping her waist started to crawl up and she froze when she felt his hand right below her curves. A strange type of darkness started to consume her. The thought of his untamed hands on her untouched parts scared her to an extent that made her dizzy.

His mouth started moving up as he traced the other side of her jaw and stopped once he reached her right ear.

"You didn't want to breathe in the air I have breathed. Now I have breathed all over you. What would you do now?" His voice was harsh.

"Let.. l.. let me go," Geet stammered feeling the dizziness.

"Do you know what I can do with you right now? It would take only a few minutes to remove your dress and have you right under me." He said and his hand moved down as he placed it on her bare tummy.

"No one would be able to stop me from seeing what you have been hiding from others," His dexterous fingers started making patterns on her tummy. She again tried to shove him but failed.

"Not even you," He spat as his freed hand pinned her both hands above her head.

"And it won't take long before I mark each and every part of your body as mine."

He pushed her shirt a little to gain more access to her skin. And then his finger traced every inch of her naked skin. She tried to shove him off by using her legs but he had pinned her legs with his weight on her. her hands were already in his tight grip. Geet failed to move and he kept on making patterns on her abdomen and waist.

"I can do whatever I want, right now, right here, as much as I want, as long as I want." His voice grew harsh and so did his hands.

"And how would you stop me if I did anything I want with you? Would you be able to stop me, if I marked you as mine, right here?" He smiled but there was so much bitterness in his expressions.

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Edited by anshra - 12 years ago
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hiii Anieee😃😃
haiyeee haiyeee damn HOT updatee
loved it alot...am speechless...lolzz phr b comment karing😃😃
lolzz fairytale like castle šŸ˜†
hmm in love wid this Devil😳😳 😳
Ahaan something fishy in this sentencešŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰ soo he was an angel once orr going to be angel 😳😳
Then I am afraid that you can't even trust the angels. Don't you know that the devil was also an angel once?"
hahahahaha me dead laughing
It wasn't my fault that your wedding clashed with my plans. I am too mean to drop my plans for others."
soo he kidnnaped her for their first date Rofl
aysa kabhi nahi dekhaaa haiyee mujhe b aysa hi karna hai😲😲 me blushing😳😳
The attraction and desire was driving him insane.
just wait my Insane Devil this desire n attraction will drive you crazyy to noo extent😳
"What do you think of yourself? You want to have dinner with me? Forget about dinner, no sane person can breathe in the air you have breathed. Girls may die to be with you but I would die rather than spending a minute with you."
opppzzz shit wrong move geet ...now wait for the result haiyeee n treat for me😳😳😳
haiyeee noo sweet of him he knew that she is hell tired warna devil sy kya umeed kar sktay hanšŸ˜›šŸ˜›
noww geet chup bilkul chup rahoo n wait for his sweet, hot ,passionate,intense torture haiyyyeee me blushing😳😳😳


loved this line sooo much Aniee luv u for thatšŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘

"You didn't want to breathe in the air I have breathed. Now I have breathed all over you. What would you do now?"

haiyeee me in my dreamlanddd thud*😲😲
tu nay maar dala aniee wese hi halat kuch khass achi nahi😳😳😳
luv u sooo much
n sowie sweets injured hands sy bss itna hi comment huaa😭😭
hugsss
and sowie faiii teri jaga nahi leni thi by chance😭 ab sy khayal rakhongi😃
Edited by 786muskaan - 12 years ago
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ha mujhy phir se nazar lag gayi
I am singing right now
Buray Naseeb meray

No no no nothing happened

But I think jab se devil start huva hy I m not in form yaar

Mean 2nd time in a row I am 2nd or 3rd to comment

Ha missing CTL

But I am loving this devil but missing CTL

Ok ok enough Rona dhona

Now me back to myself

Mean back to comment

Ooye hooey Geet and her imaginations

She is thinking abt Devil and fairy tale

Woha yes gal he is a devil indeed

Oops He really kidnapped her just for a dinner???

No I knw he did but how can a person b so devil that he kidnapped a bride on her wedding day just for a Dinner [:O] I mean a dinner

Ah ha here comes my ruthless devil and his talks

Man man I was missing devil and his taunts a lot

I mean I am in love with his philosophy of life

Ahah mean it was her mistake that she decided to marry the same date he selected for the dinner

Oops Geet I think u are daring the devil and here he comes

Oops A devil is always a devil.

Loved the update

I want to knw what she will do now

Edited by PariNain - 12 years ago
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tussi chaa gayee Aniee .. šŸ‘

loved it a lot ...

again i loved this part more than the 2nd one...

hmm so devil said himself a Devil


Then I am afraid that you can't even trust the angels. Don't you know that the devil was also an angel once?"

these words are the highlight of the part .. these aren't just the words but i think there is something more to it ... like he was also an angel once ... šŸ˜‰

"Are you disappointed that so much effort was made only for the dinner? You want more?"

aww such pricking words šŸ˜†

"And let me make it clear. I didn't kidnap you. I just picked you for the dinner. You are lucky that Maan Singh Khurana gave you the honor. Do you know how many girls die just to spend some time with me?"

oyee ye tou arrogant bhi hai ... šŸ˜†šŸ˜³

"It was my wedding day. You ruined my wedding for your dinner? I can't believe.."

even i wanted to ask him that


I am too mean to drop my plans for others."

thudd on this sentence 🤢


"What do you think of yourself? You want to have dinner with me? Forget about dinner, no sane person can breathe in the air you have breathed. Girls may die to be with you but I would die rather than spending a minute with you."


ops wrong move geet

well he knew she was tired...


"You didn't want to breathe in the air I have breathed. Now I have breathed all over you. What would you do now?"
šŸ‘ šŸ‘

am actually speechless so am quoting your update in b/w

loved it

Edited by drrose31 - 12 years ago
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OMG again an awesome update. I'm totally speechless.


He kidnapped her to have dinner with her and poor thing,she became his.prey.


Please di,don't forget me when u update next time.I beg u.Bcoz, I may not be in here.have to get back to studies.
Edited by Ravz333 - 12 years ago

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