Maneet SS- Kaafilaa. PART 10/ Pg 88/ JUN 13 PM L8R - Page 36

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wait karte karte meri gardan dookhane lagi
Kab update karogi dear
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Hi sweeties!!

Finally me here with the update!! Its not a long update, just the regular size of around 1400 words!!!

Sholly me didn't get more time to type!!

UPDATING!!
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A very Happy Belated Diwali to all my awesome friends!! Hope you had awesome fun and got lots of gifts!! he he!!😆

Everyone out with swords jutis and chappals aiming at me for the delay, please direct them towards my internet provider and the University of Rajasthan... These two are entirely responsible for it!! Me innocent bachcha at no fault!!😳

A super big thank you to everyone who left me such awesome comments and so many likes!! Thank you so much dears!! You all truly make me feel pampered!!😳

Without any further delay, here's the next part for you!! Hope you like it!!😳


PART - 8


The scene that greeted Maan in the kitchen was hilarious!! Poor servants were standing with their heads bowed down while Geet was taking their class!!!

Yeh chhini ka dabba khula kyun hai, kya aaj aap sab ne cheetiyon (ants) ko daawat par bulaya hai??? Aur yeh gas stove itni gandi kyun hai… Chhi… Aur yeh Kitchen cloth last kab badla tha??? Dekh kar toh lag raha hai, ki world war I ke time ka hai… Chhi… Itna unhygienic hai…"

Nakul saw Maan and requested him with his eyes to save them all from Geet's Hitler Avatar but Maan just gave a lopsided smile as if mocking them… "Mera mazaak uda rahey thhey na abb bhugto…" But after a few minutes Maan finally had a pity on the poor servants who were just about to cry!!!

He wordlessly crept behind Geet and slipped his arms on her waist!!! Geet gasped and before she could respond, Maan scooped her in his arms and took her to their bedroom!!

"MAAAN!! Yeh aaap kya kar rahey hain… Utariye mujhe… ABHIII!!" Geet shouted while struggling to get out of Maan's hold… Kicking her legs in the air… but Maan paid no heed to her and carried her all the way to their bedroom!!!

He gently dropped her on the bed and Geet tried to run away as soon as Maan left her but before that Maan locked her in the cage formed between his arms and the bed and warned her…

"Sochna bhi mat yahi bethi raho warna…"

"Warna kya???" Geet asked getting agitated…

"Warna yeh…" Maan said and started tickling her!!!

"N.. nahi.. he he… ma.. Maan… ha ha ha.. chho… he ha… Chhodo…ha ha…"Geet cried amidst laughing!!

Maan enjoyed seeing Geet laughing so freely after such a long time but then left her as she was feeling out of breath… he got up and took out a capsule from the strips kept on the bedside table and offered it to Geet with a glass of water…

Geet made a baby face and looked at Maan pleadingly…

"Chup Chaap khaao nahi toh…" Maan didn't have to complete his sentence as Geet quickly snatched the capsule and gulped it down before Maan started tickling her once again!!

She made a yucky face and Maan offered her a dairy milk chocolate that he had bought for her… Geet happily took it and started relishing it while Maan relished her cute expression that she made while eating the chocolate!!

"Hmm… Chalo abb thodi der rest karlo meri Jhansi Ki Rani… My baby is cribbing that her mom is not letting her rest and she is missing out on her beauty sleep…" Maan said while tucking Geet in the blanket!!!

"Oyeee… Kya kaha aapne mujhe??? Jhansi ki Rani??? Toh phir aap bhi na… ummm… Haan… Lord Voldemort ho!!! Aur yeh kya she-she laga rakha hai… Mera betey ko she kehna band karo…" Geet complained!!

"Lord voldemort… Huh… Theek hai abb main kitna Lord Voldemort hoon yeh toh baad mein bataaoonga… Par haan yeh baat samajh lo ki this is my sweet angel… my baby girl in here…" Maan said while gently touching and patting Geet's tummy…

"… Bilkul meri Geet jaisi.. And don't worry about your beta… We will have one but NEXT TIME!!!" Maan said the last bit a little loudly making Geet blush!!

Maan lowered Geet and caressed her hair till the medicine took effect and Geet slipped into deep slumber!! Maan then checked his watch and thought…

"Hmm abhi toh time baaki hai… Koi baat nahi let me start a bit early… The spa is almost at city outskirts and I need to be back in time!!!" He dropped a kiss on Geet's forehead and left for the spa!!

EVENING

Maan had just come back and made his way towards the room thinking that Geet must have woken up by now but he was greeted by a very cute sight!!! Geet was cuddling up with his pillow and was still sleeping with a sweet smile adorning her face!! He knew Geet must be very tired as her body was still very weak… That's why it was almost 9 PM still she hadn't woken up!! He was happy, as his work was now easier!!! He didn't disturb her and left for the washroom silently with the packet in his hand!!

While Maan was busy working on his surprise, Geet finally woke up from her deep slumber… She was stretching her muscles while yawning when her eyes fell on the clock kept on the side table…

"Hey babaji… Main itni der se so rahi hoon??? Maan ne mujhe uthaya kyun nahi??? Aur yeh Maan hai kaha???" She thought to herself while getting off the bed…

She was thinking of going down to check on Maan when she heard some noise from the washroom….

"Hmmm lagta hai Maan washroom main hai… Main yahi beth kar unka wait karti hoon…"

Geet sat back on the bed waiting for Maan… After a few minutes Maan came out of the washroom and found Geet leaning on the bed post while slightly dozing off… She was really very weak and her body was trying to retain the little energy by resting…

"Arrey Geet… Tum uth gayi…" Maan exclaimed… Though he wanted Geet to rest as much as possible but right now he wanted to give her the surprise and for that he needed her to be awake!!!

"Maan!!!" Geet spoke drowsily while slowly getting off the bed and leaning on her best comfort pillow… Her Maan's comforting arms… The world's safest place on earth!!!

Maan chuckled seeing her getting so drowsy, he wordlessly lifted her from the ground while carrying her to the washroom!! Geet immediately opened her eyes wide when she felt she was in air…

"Maaan!! Yeh aap kya kar rahey hain????" Geet shouted mortified noticing where Maan was carrying her off to…

Maan didn't bother to reply… He just kept Geet back on her feet after entering the washroom… Geet was about to shout more but then when she had a glimpse of the surroundings, she lost her voice!!!

The whole washroom was transformed into something…. Heavenly!! The bathtub was filled with rose petals and the water had something mixed in it, which resembled a combination of milk and turmeric… There were scented candles lit all over which spread a soothing yet sensuous aroma around!! There were small rose scented candles lit around the circular bathtub at regular intervals… Even the white carpet had been replaced with a small rangoli sought of a thing made by colorful candles and rose petals… The overall ambience of the room was just out of the world!!

"M…m…Maaan????" Geet barely whispered still under shock!!!

"Shh Jaan!!!" Maan shut her up by placing his finger on her lips… He understood her unsaid words!! He never needed words to know about what she felt!! Just her eyes were enough!! There was a time when he had actually misread her eyes and he was still guilty for that!! He shook his head to get rid of those thoughts!! Today, he just wanted to pamper his Jaan, and such wayward thoughts had no place in it!!!

"Geet!!! STRIP!!!!!" Maan suddenly spoke!!

"WHATTT!!!" Geet shrieked truly mortified!!

"Uff Geet!! I meant you can't have a bath na with clothes on!!! Tum bhi na pata nahi what dirty thoughts you get in mind!!! You have a nice bath and I will come in a few minutes!!" Maan spoke with as much seriousness and innocence as he could though there was a hidden mirth beneath his eyes, which our dear Geet failed to see!!

A confused Geet just stood there wondering what just happened and finally shrugged it off!!! She was quite excited with the whole surprise Maan had set up for her and decided to just enjoy that!! Little did she know that this was just the beginning of her surprise!!

PRECAP

Surprise continued…😳

&

Glimpse of villain… or maybe villains!!!

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PREV- PART 7 NEXT- PART 9

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Me really sorry since me owed you a long update after so much delay, but cant help it dears!!😭

BTW Kaafilaa is soon coming to an end in maximum 2-3 parts!! Me a li'l sad about it!!!😭

Am sure many of my supe intelligent buddies have guessed what's gonaa happen next!! And yup me wants to warn in advance, no X-rated thoughts about the next update, me an innocent bachcha with innocent updates!! he he!!😆

Ritzy Di, me hoping me doing justice to your idea till now!! Very scared!!

Pweez pay me a visit on my Blog too dears- Ruchi's DEN!!!!

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Love…

Ruchi...😳


Edited by ruchs - 12 years ago
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DEAR YOU R THE OE
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SEEMS LIKE
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OMG is it really my Nishu???

Awww a super big Hi dear!! me toh all well!!

How are you dear?
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Poor servants😆😆...great that Maan saved them😆
Awesome
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Thou Geet is not well, yet looking at the kitchen sight made her in full form.😆

Maan's surprise.. What is this..😉

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