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Rachana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#571

Originally posted by: shaili_Mg
Wooo superb part... Propose bhi ho gaya...kissi bhi hi gayi loved it maaneet romence nd nok jhok waiting 4 next

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Pooja Verma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#572

awesome update

finally propose krdiya nd kiss bhi...😆

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swetha10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#573

Awesome update..

luved maneet romance..

continue soon

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maaneet0887

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Posted: 13 years ago

#574

aaye haaye their romance in the air..lovely yeh gadha uday kahan se aa tapka...😡

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Tamalika Basu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#575

ur update...😳

keep ing dear...😃

lov,❤️

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NOTE: SORRY FOR THIS TOO SHORT COMMENT AS MY NET IS IT"S CRTICAL CONDITIONAM

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Rachana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#576

As U all knw i were in small town from 3 months 😭 bt nw i m back to my home for 10 days 😃 so nw i can give an update on elternate days 😊
nd i m really very sorryyy 😒 for delaying this much but i couldn't help my self as there were netwrk prob nd there IF was not opening 🤢😭

Nxt part tomorrow evening 😳

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Rachana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#577

i know now sorry is not enough now .., as i broke my promise .., as first i was in village where no net-work.., and than my lappy was not working 😭

Shart : Rang Gaye Tere Rang Me part 19

Maan : tum itne gusse me kyu ho ??
Geet : wo pata nahi !
Maan hugged her from back

Maan : Mirchi..,
Geet : hmm...
Maan : i have one surprise for u ,
Geet jumped out of joy...,
Geet : SURPRISEEE wowoww , sachhi ...??
Maan kissed on her nose tip ..,
Maan : muchhi...
Geet hugged him tightly .., he hugged her back..,but suddenly she rememind some thing and brock the hug
Maan : what happened ...???
Geet :kahi us din k jesa surprise to nahi hoga ...??
Maan with a with joint eye-brow : Which day..??
Geet : that day u have brought a dog for me na..!!! so is ur surprise like that ..??
Maan laughed ..
Maan : are pagli...,esa koi surprise nahi he ,it's diffrent one
Maan took out a cloth from pocket and started to fold it on her eyes..
Geet : Maan stop ...what are u doing...???
Maan : shhh...chup chap ye bandh lo phir hi surprise milega ..ok..??
Geet twisted her lips
(Maan fold the belt around her eyes and both started walking )
Geet(murmered) : huh..,jab dekho tab shart rakhta rehta he .., ye karo to ye mileaga ..,ye karo varna ye nahi karunga .DUST DANAV kahika
Maan : Geet i can hear u ..
Geet (with laugh) : ha ..ha..wo..wo i didn't call u dust-danav wo to awehi muh se nikal gaya me to tumhe DD bulana cahhti thi ,...means DHAK DHAK bt galti se Dust danav nikal gaya ..ha esa hi kuch tha
( they started walking to the car)
Maan : sorry Geet
Geet : it's ok Maan .., bt why did u say sorry ..??
Maan : wo actully muje tumhari aakho par patti nahi fold karni chahiye thi ..( with little fake anger ) muje na tumhare muh par patti bandhni chahiye thi taki tumhara muh band rah sake
Geet hit playfully on Maan's arm..
Geet : how mean u r ..,.Maan !!!
Maan :shhh..ab chup chap chalo varna sab jag jayenge aur mere plan ki chopsi ho jayegi ..so just keep quite
Geet : ok ok ..i m sorry

both sat in the car and Maan drove off..
they reached at place ..., Maan help her to came out and held her from soulder..!
Geet : Maan ab to khol do
Maan(naughtily ) : abhi kholni he ya ander jakar huh...??
Maan can notice a red blush on her milky white cheek
Geet : Maan kya tum bhi..!! me aakho ki patti kholne ki baat kar rahi thi..!
Maan( play fully ) : Oo dirty mind , mera matlab tha ki hum ander jate he phir me tumhare AANKHO KI PATTI khol dunga.,
kyu tumne kuch aur socha tah ..!!?
Geet : unhu..,let's go inside
both go inside and slowly Maan goes from there
Geet : Maan now can i remove this ..??
bt she didn't get any respond so she remove the cloth from her eyes
Geet : Maan ..Maan ...Maan where are you...??
she cant see anything due to sheer darkness in the lounge
after a while...room lighting up with candles...so she saw Maan

she walked through the passage and goes to Maan with a smile ...,and just hugged him

he hugged her back and kissed on her fore head
after some time both brock the hug
and Geet saw whole room dacorated with white candle and white rose pattels , white lightning ,white heart shape ballons
She finds the room very romantically set...

she goes further there were their (MaanEet's) pictures ...,

her eyes got wet .., it prick Maan's heart

he immdeatly goes to her
Maan : hey hey ...stop .., why are u crying..? i did this thinking that u will gave your charm-ful smile after seeing whole this but u are crying it means u didn't like whole this ...??
Geet smiled through her tears
Geet encircled her arm around his neck .,

Geet : pata he Maan ..,ded hamesa kehti he ki tum ladkiya na bilkul pagal hoti ho jab dil khusiyo se bhar jata he tab bhi aakho me aashu hota he nd jab ye dil gum se bahr jata he tab bhi aakho me aashu hote he...!!!!
par tab pata nahi tha ki khusi k bhi aashu hote he aaj pata chala ...!!
Maan pulled him near and kissed on her tears than kissed on her eyes one by one , than kissed on her cheek one by one..
Maan : ha aur muje bhi aaj hi pata chala ki u r a girl...!!
Geet (in babyish voice ): what do u mean...??
maan : matlab ki muje ye lagta tha that u r
maan slowly make a distance from her and make his Position for run than said...
maan : that u r looking BOY
he sawed her his tongh
geet : maan k bachhe ..., ruk abhi batati hoon me tuje ki me boy hu ya girl ..,
geet run after him..., maan aage aur geet picche
they were running through the whole hall .., than after some time maan caught her from back and held her hand with his ones ...

Geet : maan chod muje ..,idiot..,gadhhe..,ullu de padhhe chhod
maan : bhaga bhaga k thaka dia muje ab nahi chhodunga uper se itni sari galiya
he back hugged her ..,and kissed on her cheek☺️
maan : aren't you hungry..??
geet : maan tumne uska bhi intzam kia hua he..??
maan : koi shak..??
geet nodded with no no with smile
maan : and that too with your fav dishesh
geet jumpped out of joy
geet : sachhi
she kissed on his cheek

maan : hmm... chale..?
both headed toward dining area

geet : wow maan u are sooo sweet...,
maan ( naughtily ) : that i know sweety
he winked at her
geet was about to eat when maan stopped her ..
geet looked at him with question eyes
maan being little bit emotional : may i feed u ..?
geet smiled looking at her lover boy who was looking like ever cute like a kid ☺️
geet : you don't need permission for that .., u have all right on me.., maan 😳
maan started to feed her .., she was feeding him back , at once she cut maan's finger but both were having great time with each other forgetting that fate has their another plan to ruin their life
geet : maan u know what .., i can never expect such a romantic surprise from u
maan : achha..!!! bt now you have to belive that your champu is also romantic..rit..??
geet : but i think it can't be your idea so tell me who is behind this idea..??😲
maan : Mishty it's mine ..belive me
geet : sachhi..?
maan : achha chhodo idea kisika bhi ho..,but did u like it or not...?
geet : bahooot bahooot bahooot
maan : achha ..!!
geet : hmm ..,

Geet : but i have also one surprise for u
Maan : for me ...?? kya jaldi batao na .., now i can't wait plz
Geet : first of all .., close your eyes
Maan : ohh hhoo Geet tu bhi
Geet : Maan close your eyes
Maan : ok baba
Maan closed his eyes and geet goes to desk slowly where she put her purse
she saw him opening his one eye
geet : no cheating okay
maan (by twisting her lips ) : hmm..
Geet sat on her knees and held Maan's hand
he opened his eyes slowly
Maan : what are you doing Geet..??
Geet : i know Maan ..,it's very unusual being a girl i m doing all this .., i m not a perfect person.., u made my this time special with you . ..i did't know what is love before i meet u.., but now for me love is to see a smile on your face ..,to see you happy foreever , i wanted to be your shadow of u..me and my life is nothing without u and i m empty inside if u r not around me .., i can't live without u
Geet takes out a dimond ring from purse and extended toward him

(she bought a dimond ring for man )😆
Geet : maan will u be mine fore-ever...,ever till my last breath
Maan just sat on his knees as geet was kneeled down
he pressed his palm on her lips
Maan's eyes got wet
Maan: khabar dar agar ab kabhi yu last breath ya esi kuch baat ki to...
she hugged him tight and cries holding him
Geet : I LOVE U maan
Maan : I LOVE U TOO geet
he kissed on her neck and captured her lips with his ones .both kissed each other with so much passion
both brock the kiss after some time and he slipped aa ring in her finger
than both again hugged each other 👏
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precap :

something hot *wink*😉

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