Suhana and Nihal romantic fiction part-4

hi guys,

nothing much romantic is happenig at present in babhi after the tinch of romantic touch that was shown a few days ago.....

so, i thought why not we write our own romantic stories....i would appreciate if you could contribute some and i am starting with some..

so, lets think that nihal and shuhana have had their marriage and now they are in canada with guddu....

lets start it from here..

so, they have reached cannada and reached nihal home... then there they are put tilak and sent in and guddu being a good saas takes her and shows her the whole house and then takes her to nihal room.... where nihal has his computer..his basket ball and his pictures as laminations around the room and then his bed....

so, guud says suhana that "now this will be your and nihals room..you need to take care of this whole house and nihal in particular ..." suhana is all shy and she lowers her eyes...

then in the mean time nihal has come to his room...and guddu sees him come and says so...you talk to nihal i will just come... we can talk tomorrow morning .... you both take rest now..... and she goes...

nihal and suhana are left in their room for the first time free without anyone... and since the marriage was in a hurry and then coming to canada... everything was busy...but now they are in their room for the first time... both in the same room...😳...so this makes it their first night together after marriage.....

nihal says... good night mama... and sends his mom out of the room and closes the door behind him.... he turns to find suhana turned the other side...very scared and all shy... to even look at nihal...

nihal understands it and come and says... "Bhow..." from behind for which suhana.... get shocked for a moment and then cools and starts to hit nihal with hand....saying..."nihal.... you always make me afraid..... " and nihal starts to laugh..... and he then just starts to run here and there... and finally he goes and touches a wall of the room and suhana who was running behind him... comes and collide to his chest..... and she stops and looks up.... to see nihal looking at her with his romantic look in his eyes....

he then holds her tightly with his hands near her..."kammar" and pulls her towards him and says..." once more hit me with your body.... " 😳 😳

suhana listening to this keeps her eyes downcast... and all shy with her cheeks glowing with shyness.... nihal pulls her more close... and then slowly removes his hand from the kammar and then catches her hand and then lifts her pam .... and then kisses her..pam then goes a little up and kisses again then he kisses a little further...and then slowly lifts his head to come and kiss her lips..... and looks at suhana who has closed her eyes .... and waiting for him to kiss her.....

he lifts her face with his pams on her cheeks and looks at it and then slowly kisses on her right cheek then the left cheek and then lifts her head further .... to kiss her lips when suhana is not able to control her shyness and she just runs and sits on the bed... then nihal smiles to himself... and goes to a table and brings a gift wraped in a box to her and says that...i wanted to give you this as a gift after our marriage.... and goes near her and keeps his hand forward with the gift in the hand... she moves her hand forward.... to take it...just then he pulls his hand back and says that.." ayise nahi.... phle tum mujhe .... 50 kisses dogi .... tub meyin yeh gift tume dunga....".

she says.... "nihal ..." in a very shy way and he says.." no way... aaj mayin koi aur bath nahi sunuga ...meyin aaj tume mehasus karna chahatahu.... "

suhana is not able to speak....so she keeps just staring at him with a romantic look on her face and innocence..... he comes near her again and says... "aaj meyin tum se jud jana chahatahu..." he comes forward and suhana walks back and he keeps saying.." aaj mujhe who chahiye joo mera haq hai...." ... and suhana moves back and falls on the bed....and nihal ...says.." suhana...tum gir javogi..." and he runs forward to fall on her..

so, now both are on the bed and nihal is on suhana.... and nihal is staring at suhana n suhana is staring back...

nihal lowers his head and kisses her on her neck... then on cheek... and waits to look at her... she has closed her yes again.. he looks at her and is about to get up.... when suhana pulls him back by holding his shirt.... and turns him and now she is on top of him and she kisses him on the fore head.... and then is shy and gets up and is about to move from there when nihal catches her hand and pulls her towards him.... and when she comes and hugs him because of the pull he holds her tightly and says.... " tumne mujhe bus ek kiss diya hai..abhi... 49 baki hai... aur jab tak tum mujhe who dogi nahi..meyin tume jane nahi donga...."

suhana...holds him and he lifts her in his arms and takes her to the bed and rolls her on the bed and then moves near her... and suhana is looking at him and he..... holds her by her waist...and pulls her near and says... " ab do.. mujhe 49 chahiye...". and then suhana lifts her head up and comes very near to him and gives a continuous set of kisses on his face on his cheeks and then neck and back on cheeks.... then hugs him and nihal holds her tight... and then after some kisses she stops and stares at him... he comes over her... and starts to kiss her...slowly... removes her chunni... and trows it aside then opens his shirt.. buttons and then closes on her.... and starts kissing her and then hugging her... tightly.... and then is the consumation....

then next day morning with sun rise... both are in the bed... with a blanket on... and suhana is sleeping on nihals chest and nihal is sleeping with a happyness in his face...

suhana is about to get up and take her dress with her hand when nihal pulls her other hand and she falls over him... and looks at him... he says.... "kaha jarahi ho..." ... and suhana says.." ab subha hogayi hai.... aur mujhe niche mummyji ko help karne keliye jana hai..." and then nihal says.." abhi mujhe aur chahiye...." and suhana says..." nihal... chodiyena .... jane dijiyena...".

hi friends.... i think you have read this i will try to post some more if you all like this one... please give your comments and also post some other romantic ones here....

from

akshata_ranveer.

Part-2 ----- pg. 2

Part-3 ----- pg. 3

Part-4 ----- pg. 5

Part-5 ----- pg.

wow that was great.

Esti aunty

hi friends,

please post your comments...i would like to know even the extreme of impression created about the topic...please write what you feel about the fiction i wrote...

waiting for your comments..

thankyou,
akshata_ranveer.

wow
awesomeeee 😛
plz continue 😊

What a nice fanfiction. Beats the serial any day. Please continue... 👏

gr8 👏 👏 ....continue plz

gr8 tht is just mind blowing... ur too gud

thts sumthing similar happened to me and from reading ur comment its just all the yaddein are refreshed...so thank u

woah!! im sure i speak 4 evryone when i say plz plz plz post sum more...that was really great. btw... wat was the present?..hehe...ur a gud romance writer...ooohh mayb u can b writer!! sry im talkin 2 mch thnk uuuu 😳

hi guys,

thank you all for your wonderful comments...i love the romantic sense in life...i love to have my life filled with love and i understood today that many people are ready to read my fanfictions with romantic nodes...toned in it......i will surely write many more...keep posting your comments when you read it... i love reading your comments.....

if there is anything that i can change... please tell me... i will follow some of your instructions...

[:D] [:D] [:D]

😉the first part of the fan fiction is here:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/bhabhi/408417/suhana-and-nihal-romantic-fiction-part-4

click on it for the first part the second part is written below check this one...

so, lets start from where we have stopped....

nihal says " kahan jarahi ho".... so suhana says.." mujhe mummyji ko help karna hai....subha hogayi hai....". nihal says "mujhe... aur chahiye...."

to which suhana says..." nihal chodiyena....mujhe jane dijiyena...."

nihal just looks at smiling and cute suhana and just pulls her and rolls her on the bed and hugs her and kisses her on the neck... suhana is blusshing with shyness.... and she pushes nihal and rushes into the bathroom with her clothes and changes her dress from night dress to saree.... and comes out.....

nihal is looking at suhana from the bed when suhana is combing her hair... and suhana first does not notice him then...after a while she sees that nihal is staring at her from the mirror..... so she turns and asks him ..." kya dek rahe ho....." to which nihal says... "tume dekh raha hooo.... jo mera kabh tha who aj haqikat banke mere pass hai...maiyen duniyaka subse kismat wala insan hu....".

suhana says..." ab bus iske aage kuch mat kehna.... "

nihal says... " ache .... to ab jaoo ...kya dekh rahiho.... mujhe bhi kapade badal ne hai..." so suhana says..." badal lo na....meyin badal dooo..."

nihal says..." ache to pehle tum kapde badal lo .....phir meyin badal longa..." 😳 ...... suhana innocently says.." meiyn ne thokapde badal leyin hai...." nihal says..."par tumne mere sam ne nahi badalena....isleya phir se badal lo yehi pe...."😳 😳 😳

suhana says..."nihal..... " and hits him with the pillow and says.... " tum intne besharam kabse hogaye......"😆😆

then she says..." achha ...meyin jaa rahihu.... tum bhi tayar ho kar niche aajana.... " and comes forward and gives a kiss to nihal on his cheek and immediatly runs from there....

and nihal is shouting there..."suhana ....rukotho... ruko.... suhana...." then laughs to himself and goes to the bath room to change his dress.... he sees.... in the mirror.... that the sindoor is on his chest... at small areas.... he looks curiously at it in the mirror...and blushes to him self.... (how cute...).

then he comes to the bed and sits on it to see the news.... when he sits on it... he gets pinched by the bed...he gets up and checks to see some bangle pieces there.... he lifts the blanket they were sleeping under and finds many bangle pieces.... and again blushes to himself... and thinks of the last night thing and thinks of suhana... and then calls for her...." suhana .... " and walks towards the door... to see suhana setting the break fast at the table...she.... looks at him and says..." kya hai...nihal aa rahi hu..." .... and he signals her to come fast....

so, suhana says... mummyji meyin abhi ati hu.... suhana reaches the room and goes in 2 steps and nihal holds her from behind kisses her on her neck and holds her tightly from behind ....suhana gets a shock and then relaxes and says..."the door is open koi aa jayega... chodona nihal....mummji neche hamareliye intezar kar rahi hongi.... tume bhi ab neche chal na chahiye..."

nihal holds her to the wall..... and puts her hands on the sides catching them tightly with his by lifting them up and then goes near her.... and kisses her on the cheek and then on neck and then on the other cheek and then suddenly... leaves suhana.... and says...in a steady voice..." kya karahi ho suhana... kyun mujhe ..tempt kar rahiho.... jao... " 😳 😳and suhana is thinking what have i done...??. and goes from there... after suhana goes... nihal smiles to himself... and walks out.. to the break fast table....

nihal asks his mother while having his breakfast..." when is dady coming home from business trip... ?" so guddu says..." it is going to take another week for him to come home...there is lot of work going on and he has many meeting with clients..."

then, so now suhana is standing beside nihal and serving him breakfast while he is having it... so, he looks at her "kammar" ... where as suhana is innocently seriving nihal with full happyness.. so nihal... slowly puts his hand on the kammar and pinches it..... and removes his hand quitely.... and makes and innocent face and has his break fast.... where as.... suhana immediatly shouts..."ooch!!!".. and guddu asks..." what happened..??" and nihal also says...." what ...happened...suhana???😉" and suhana has no answer and she is all shy.... and says to guddu..."nothing... i think something is perking in the saree... now its fine..." and nihal asks..." mujhe ek aur toast do...with mali and jam... and looks at her and smiles and 😉... "ankh marthahai...." and suhana .... looks and downs her eyes... and blushes...

hi ....one and all...please leave a comment on how did you feel...before leaving the page...it would be wonderful to know your opnion ....

looking forward to reading your views.... i would love to write the remaing part...if you want me to.... so, please ....do give your comments... please....

thank you...

akshata..