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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rits.k

awesome part...

but piya ka reaction??????



thanks dear, u will get in next part
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Cherishh

Will b waiting dear...sry couldn't comment for the last one, but will do for that and the updating one together...chorrryyy...



it's ok dear but will be waiting for your comment, ,

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Posted: 12 years ago
ab aap ne green signal de diya hai humare late hone ke liye...so when r u updating the next one😳😳...see hum toh koi mauka nahi chodthe😆
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Posted: 12 years ago



I have started a new ff, , please have a look and let me know that should i continue this or not?


Winter Moonlight
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3284176/mg-ff-winter-moonlight-leaving-note-sorry-pg-31


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Wishing you a very very Happy and Prosperous Diwali, , enjoy fully but don't burn much crackers, , as it is unhealthy and polluted the environment... have a safe and joyful Diwali to you and your family😃














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Thank you so much for the likes and comments…. Love ya, ,

As you all know that geet took pills after her SR then how come she was pregnant and why she doesn't know about that? Well you'll get the answers in coming parts, till then have some patience….

Here is part-49, hope you'll like it, , as per your demand, , I'll give dhamakedar 50, , that is half century, , wow, I never thought that , this FF will reach to part-50, , but here we are, ,

Well, I am thinking that I'll give you part-50 in 2 sections means, , part-50(A) , (B), , in two sub-parts, , so that I will be able to give you dhamaka, ,

Now, , I need your help, , what do you want in next part? I know you want past and a kiss, , but how? Frankly speaking now, I am short of ideas, , can you please suggest me some scenes that you would like to see here, , I mean how will maan get to know the connecction of her eyes with him and a following kiss, , how that will happen? After all that will their first lip-lock ;)

Suggest me some ideas,,,, I'll be waiting and yeah next part will update may be in 15 or 16 Nov.

Thanks a lot

Love ya

Neha

Part-49


A smile crept on maan's lips regaining that night but soon it vanish from his face when his sight fell on her face and regain the words of doctor….

Please come back in my life,

i have forgotten to live it without you.

Come and hold my hand my beloved,

as i am dying to meet you and love you.

I was gazing at her angelic face which was glowing till yesterday but today it is so pale, , dark circles under her eyes seems there is no blood in her body, , still she is not coming back in her conscious state…. I was so in my thoughts and lying beside her on her bed…. Though there is not much space here but I have managed….

Just then my thoughts took a halt when the door opened and I saw the nurse coming inside with some equipments and and medicines… she looked at me and passed a smile… I thought why she passed smile to me then I take a look over at our positions, , I was lying beside her, , ohh that's why she was smiling that means, , even in her bad state I can't sleep without her, , well, , it was true, , it seems I got a habit sleeping with her, , without her I can't sleep….

I got up and went in washroom for getting fresh…. When I come back, , she has already given the injection to her… I couldn't control over myself to ask from her, ,

Maan- umm, , wo sister, , I was hesitating little bit, , doesn't know what to do? How to ask?

Nurse-what happened mr. khurana? She asked to me politely , ,

Maan-wo, , are you going to give her sponge bath? Gosh, what I asked to her… I wanted to ask something else but doesn't know why I had blurted those words…. I gave a fake smile to her… she smiled at me back….

Nurse-yes mr. khurana…. Umm, , do you want to give her? She smiled naughtily, , I was uncomfortable with that smile of hers…. Ok I knew that geet is my wife but that doesn't mean that other people give me nuaghty smiles…. I had not any option beside of nodding, , so I nodded in yes and she told me how to do…

I took the water bowl and sponge from her hand and placed it on the side table… no one has arrived still, , so I am alone here that means I can ask to her what I wanted…. I tried again, , I know that these kind of talks with other people is really odd but there is no escape for me, , I can't ask infront of anyone….. finally I breath out and called her once again….

Maan-aah sister, , wo I wanted to ask you something, , finally I got a courage, , after all I am maan singh khurana…. Gosh, , maan you have again started with your praise, , don't forget geet is still unconscious and there is no use of being maan singh khurana, , you can't wake geet, , you can't bring her in her conscious state then why are you maan singh khurana?

Ok, , I come out from my talks with my mind when sister asked me, ,

Nurse-what do you want to ask mr. khurana? She asked to me politely again…

Maan-w-when a girl is pregnant then what type of changes she felt? I mean physical changes and something else?

She look at me with a smile… she said nothing then come over with a reply…

Nurse-well mr. khurana, , please tell me clearly what do you want to ask? I wanted to know that why geet didn't tell me that she is pregnant? Ok, that was difficult for me, , I am feeling shy with those words, , then how will I ask to her…. I wanted to ask in pregnancy a girl got her, I mean every month….. god please help me, , she smiled again, , I think she understood….

Nurse knew that when the gents hesitated the most, , there is only one topic otherwise they can talk properly….

Nurse- mr. khurana, , when a girl is pregnant then she doesn't get her periods, , she get her periods after baby's delivery…. I nodded and then she went away, , as soon as she leaved , , everyone come, , dadi, papa, tej, alka, Vicky, annie, arjun even Vedanta too…..

Vedanta ran and showed his arms to me, , he is saying that he wants to come in my arms… I took him in my arms and kissed him….

Vedanta-papa, , mama ko kya hua? Why she is lying like that? Kal raat mai unke sath soya bhi nahi…. He made baby face….

Maan-beta, , mama so rahi hai….

Vedanta-abhi tak, ,it's morning na.. mama ko bolo morning ho gayi hai abhi uth jaaye…, , everyone smiled at his cute talks,,,, finally someone is there who can bring smile at everyone face…. I kissed him again….

Maan-beta mama is tired na, , aap mama ke paas baitho tab tak papa thoda kaam karke aate hai… Vedanta nodded like a obedient child….

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(narration by Piya)

It was 9 a.m. , , I was at my flat, , today was holiday between the exams so I was watching television, , just then I heard door bel ring, , I thought it should be misha because I couldn't expect Abhay at this time, , because whenever he could get time, he runs to his dad's office and help his dad in business, , how boring but why I am saying it boring, , I am also studying business…. God, , only you can save me, , I stood up and went to open the door, ,

For my utter shock, , it was Abhay, , omg! I was at cloud 9, , I jumped in his arms and he securely held me closely, , very close, , seems he'll crush my bones in his arms…. I placed a kiss in his neck and he placed a kiss over my head, , well, , this little romance we often do… it's romantic….


I invited him inside and closed the door…. He sat down on the couch and I went in kitchen for taking the juice, , just then I saw from the kitchen that the channel has been changed from songs to business news channel, , gosh this man is really insane behind the business, , sometimes I really think who is more insane, , maan singh khurana or this abhay, , I shook my head, , this happened usually with me so I didn't put my leg in his matter but sometimes his business news channel eat my head…..

I served him juice and sat beside him looking at him intentionally…. oh god! This man is really insane, , means he is holding juice glass in his hand and his mouth slightly open, , he was supposed to take a sip of juice but nah…. How can he? After all business news are going on TV, , anger took over me and I snatched juice glass from his hand and sat on his lap blocking his view from tv……….

I was trying to get little intimate with him, , I blushed a little , obviously I'll blush at this thought…. I caressed his forehead to jaw with my index finger awakening desires inside him, , arousing him little bit so that I could get a kiss from him, , his rough breath was on my throat, I felt jitters , , currents running , , the pours of my skin awaken and I start breathing heavily, , he buried his face in my thick curly hairs and inhale the smell, , I was giving him space so that he could get little bit more access over me, ,

I was about to kiss him on his lips but suddenly a voice fell down in my ears, , the voice was saying that mrs. Geet maan singh khurana, , geet, , is that our friend geet, , might be, , because a week ago we had all seen her with maan, , no, , it can't be true…. I glanced at abhay's face who was engrossed in me, , I slightly turned my face and glanced at tv screen and my eyes popped seeing the face over there….., ,

Voice doesn't come out from my throat and I fell down from abhay's legs and abhay was startled with the sudden activity of mine, , he was shocked so was I, , but the reasons were different, , I was continuously staring at the television screen like a fool where abhay was staring at me just then his eyes looked up at the television screen and I saw his wide eyes, ,

"are you seeing the same which I am seeing?" I asked to him still in shock, ,

"are you thinking the same which I am thinking?"

he asked me question beside of giving me reply he was asking me question but he was right, , was I thinking the same, , seems I am getting insane, , god if this true then how will I face her, , ohh no…

"abhay tell na, are you seeing and thinking the same like me?" now I asked a question again….. but his reply was insane like him, ,

"yup, , that is how can sensex be so hight in just half an hour?" oohhh goooddd, , I grabbed my hairs in my fist and looked up at his face with my red angry eyes…. Maan and geet's photo was flashing on tv screen and he is asking about sensex, , can't he see their photo?

I shook him like a hell and shout in his ear, , I was here in utter shock and he is enjoying his sensex, , he is engossed in his sensex like it is s** not sensex, ,

"abhay, are you out of your mind, , please come back to your sensex world and tell me na it's not true, , they are showing thet geet is maan's wife and she was injured, , no one told us about her condition, , she is in hopsital now, " here I was in shock and abhay was searching his keys why? But next moment I got to knw why he was searching keys, ,

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It was 11 a. m. I come back from mansion, , while on my way I purchased geet's favourite flowers, , I knew she liked purple orchids, , and I grabbed bunch of roses also, , with a card saying that GET WELL SOON, , I wrote my name also in the card…. I reached to hospital and everyone was there surrounded geet, , she was still unconsciuos, ,

I told them that get back to mansion, because I am here now, , I told annie that to office and handle a meeting over there because she knew little bit business , she agreed and went there…. Everyone get back except tej, , he was there but waiting outside and he gave me little space , , I am now with my geet , , I held her hand and planted a kiss there, , I placed flowers and card near her face…..

I moved my face and planted again a kiss on her forehead, , then following I placed a kiss on her cheeks and moved my lips near her ears, , "GET WELL SOON SWEATHEART", , for my utter shock or happiness, , I heard her voice, , "hmmm" I glanced at her face, , there is wrinkles on her forehead like she is feeling pain, , I can see the movement of her eyes while the lashes were closed….

"geet" , , I called her, , "aahh" I heard her painful voice, , I caressed her face and hairs for soothing her pain and doesn't know when I have started kissing her face like a maniac, , she slightly open her eyes adjusting her eyes with the lights, , she was in pain but suddenly I can see a little smile formed on her lips seeing me near her…..




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Posted: 12 years ago
Finallyy geet ko hosh aaya...
Piya ko jhatka itni zorse laga...
ab geet ko sachai pata chalea toh kya hoga..
loved the update
n nxt update is ur half century means dhamaka..
diwali gift...heheh
waiting 4 nxt...
Edited by vanshi_maaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Cherishh

ab aap ne green signal de diya hai humare late hone ke liye...so when r u updating the next one😳😳...see hum toh koi mauka nahi chodthe😆



hehehe, next time don't be late...

updated dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ylaraib

OH GOD GEET WAS PREGI

ab kya ho ga jab geet ko pata chale ga that she lost her baby
there baby
she will be broken
maan kese sambhale ga
itna bara shock
wese mujhe laga geet coma me chali gai he
thank god esa kuch nai hova


LARAIB



thanks dear...
hehe, sabko yahi laga ki geet coma me chali jayegi...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Pujanaula

Ahhaaa yawr yeh miscrge wali info toh dhamaka thi...it was wndrful update yaaraaa...nw waiting for next update...nw i too want to knw eagrly why geet didnt realise her pregnancy..yeh kya mystry hai bhai...



tha na dhamaka... thanks dear... mystery jaldi hi reveal ho jayegi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
update piya abhay knowing about geet finally geet gained consciousness



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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update

but want t0 knw hw she was pregnant means maan ka hi tha na

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