This fanfiction starts when Prem realizes that his true family is the Bajaj family. He is living with happily with everyone now. Mukti has not yet entered into his life. This is a story of Prem and Mukti and how she makes a difference in his life.
Mukti is a Bajaj family's drivers daughter but she has been with the Bajaj family since her father passed away. She has been studying in hostel and now back at home. She lives life to the fullest. She is very naughty and loves to bother guys.LOL
MUKTI'S ENTRY
ITS RANING OUTSIDE AND YOU CAN SEE A GIRL HAVING FUN AND DANCING IN THE RAIN.
The Bajaj family is having dinner and Prerna doesn't allow anyone at the dinner when they are late. Everyone is ready at the table.
Prerna: Mukti kaha hai?
Sneha: aathi hi hogi.
Prem: yey Mukti kaun hai?
Sneha: don't worry patha chal jayega.
Prerna walks into the kitchen when Mukti sneeks in from under the table and sits next to Sneha
Prem: who are you?
Mukti: sssssssshhhhhhhhhhh
Sneha: yey Mukti hai
Mukti: oh god, mujhe bahut bhhok lagi hai
Prerna: Mukti
Mukti: Ji chotima..
Prerna: get up
Mukti: chotimaa Bhook lagi hai
Prerna: tho pehle aana tha
Mukti gets up with a plate in her hand and goes towards sneha
Mukti: aaj ke liye
Sneha puts some rotis in her plate
Prem is staring at this…..
Mukti: chotimaa mere mom aur dad nahi hai, agar mein bhookey pet soungi tho bhoot ke sapney aayenge.
Mukti walks next to Tushaar and tushaar sneeks some curry on to the plate.
Prerna: upar jao
Mukti: ek maa ki apne beti ko bhook bejrahi hai…
Prerna: ek din nahi khayegi tho kuch nahi hoga
Mukti: chotimaa bahut bhook lagi hai. Ahar mein nahi khungi tho mein mar jaungi.
Mr. Bajaj: prerna, khane do na
Prerna: mr.bajaj plz
Mukti slowly walks towards the living room and suddenly there is noise of the plate dropping.
Everyone runs to the living room. They see the plate with the food fallen all over the floor
Mukti: meine dhokey se laya than a isliye
Prerna goes to Mukti and hugs her.
They all have dinner.
Sneha: oh by the way yeh prem hai
Mukti: tho yeh prem hai
Prem: yea??
Mukti: okay geez mujhe sona hai bye.
Prem: she is weird
Sneha: who dil ki bahut achi hai.
Prem: whatever!!!
Evening
Prerna: Mukti kaha hai
Sneha: apne friends ke saath bahar khel rahi hai
Prem: wow some more girls…lets go
Sneha smiles
Prem goes outside to see Mukti playing with all kids.
Prem: god she is weird
Mukti: ee hello wooh ball dena
Prem: mein tumhara naukar nahi hoon
Mukti: well meine kab kaha tum ho.
Prem: u r so….
Mukti: I know cute sweet smart..sab mujse kehtey hai nothing new.
Prem: what? U r irritating
Mukti: thanks same to u
Sneha: uske mooh mat lagna, pagal kar degi.
There is music playing in Prem room. Mukti goes and sees whats it all about. When she enters she sees that Prem is in front of the mirror dancing. She is standing there and watching him. She is laughing.
She runs downstairs.
Mukti: chotimaa, sir everyone come here
Prerna: kya hua?
Mukti: patha hai maine kya dekha?
Sneha: what what?
Mukti: abhi batha thi hoon
Mukti turns on the same long and is imitating Prem
Prem hears the song downstairs and comes to see whats it about. He sees that Mukti is imitating him.
Prem walks downstairs walks towards Mukti and gives her a 100 bill.
Mukti is shocked
Mukti: uski yeh Himmat ki mujhe paise detha hai. Ab mein bathaungi.
Next day morning Prem is getting ready for work.
Mukti goes runs and goes into Prem's room
Prem: hey you, can't u knock?
Mukti is breathing heavily
Mukti: I LOVE YOU….CHALLO BHAG CHALTHEY HAI
Prem is shocked
Mukti: Aaj shaam 7pm mein tumhari Intezaar karungi St.Xaviers Church. Zarror aana. Warna mein aat bhar tumhari itezaar karungi.
Prem has no words. In his head he is thinking: yeh ladki pagal hai
Prem goes to the church and sees that behind the church is the cemetery.
Prem walks in a bit confused and sees no one there.
Just then he hears a cat sound. Then comes weird noises. Prem understands that Mukti is trying to scare him. He decides to get scared at first.
He sees all the kids who Mukti was playing with….dresses like ghosts and haunting him around.
Prem shouts…….aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh and runs
Mukti and the Kids: yeyyeyeyeye Dar gay dar gaya
Just then they all hear even more creepy and weird noises.
Mukti: oh god, yeh noises
Kid: didi yeh tho sach ke bhoot hai
Suddenly they see a shadow following them.
Mukti and kids screem
The shadow and coming near and near. When Mukti turns around she sees prem with some weird face.
Mukti screamsssssssssss
Prem: mujse panga math lena ok.
Mukti is really mad at Prem now.
Mukti: mujhe kuch karna hoga. Just then she gets an idea.
Sneha: chod na yaar. Wooh prem hai. Kyu usse panga lethi hai
Mukti: wooh prem hai tho kya hua? Ab mein batha thi hu. Es prem ka band bajega.
Mukti goes into Prem room
Prem: tum?
Mukti goes to him
Mukti: Kahi bhag challe?
Prem: what?? Are you mad?
Mukti: Chotima, patha hai kal kya hua?
Prerna: Kya?
Mukti: Aap mujpe vishwas nahi karengi
Prerna: tu meri beti hai.. Tumpe nahi karungi tho kispe karungi. Tu batha bath kya hai.
Mukti: kal prem ne
Prerna: prem ne kya
Mukti: kal prem ne muje st.xaviers church pe bulaya aur kaha ki hum dono bhag chalthey hai.
Prerna: what? Maine socha ki wooh sudhar gaya hai… Ane do usse
Prem walks in
Prerna: rukh ja wahi pe
Prem: yes mother India?
Prerna: maine socha kit u sudhar gaya hai.
Prem: ab maine kya kiya
Mr.Bajaj: kya hua Prerna?
Prerna: esne Mukti ko church bulaye kaha ki bhag chalthey hai.
Prem: what? Maine? Wooh jhoot bol rahi hai
Prerna: wooh meri beti hai. Tu sorry bol usse
Prem: main sorry kyu bolu. Meine tho asia kaha hi nahi hai.
Prem realizes all this is done by Mukti.
Prem: sorry
Mukti: ITS OK
Prem gives her an evil look.
Next day Mukti is in her room, when prem comes in
Prem: tumne khaa than a…hum bhag challe…lets go
Mukti: chodo Mujhe
Sneha: kya ho raha hai
Prem: hum bhag rahe hai
Sneha: wow this is so exciting. Just like movies
Mukti: shut up idiot. Kuch kar
Sneha: bye bye bye
Prem holds Mukti's hand carries her. Takes her downstirs, puts her into his car and drives.
Mukti is shocked
Mukti: sorry, meine mazak kiya tha. Agar chotimaa ko patha chall tho mujhe maar dale gi. Please mujhe le jao…plzzz
Prem is angry quite and driving in full speed
Prem stops the car at the most beautiful view
Mukti gets out : yaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy……….and her voice echos back
Mukti is jumping and running around and enjoying the place.
Mukti: Mujhe yeh jagha bahu acha laga….
Prem: good kyuki tum yehi par rehne wali ho.
Mukti: kya???
Prem: tumne kaha tha na bhag challe. Hum aa gaye hai. Tum yehi rehna mein jar aha hoon
Mukti: please mujhe chod mat jana
Prem: 42 miles…walk
Prem drives away…
Mukti is running after the car..: please don't leave me….prem please…….kaash tumhara tire puncture ho…heey bhagwan ab mein kya karu?
Prem is in his room when Sneha comes in
Sneha: Mukti abhi thak ghar nahi aayi. Bhar bahut tand hai. Mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai
Prem: good for her
Sneha: prem please jao…for me..
Prem feels bad and runs and drives away.
Prem goes to the place looks for Mukti everywhere.
Prem: MUKTIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
Just then he sees some smoke smoking from a near by place. He runs there and sees a old man sitting
Prem: kya aapne ek ladki ko dekha hai?
Old man: who ladki jot and mein aayi thi? Andar hai. Usse tho bahut tand lag raha hai. Patha nahi kal thak bachegi ya nahi
Prem: what?
Prem runs in and sees mukti shivering
Prem goes to her and hugs her
Prem: mukti, you ok?
Prem takes out his coat and puts over her.
Mukti slowly opens her eyes and sees prem caring for her and does some more acting.
Prem: kuch nahi hoga…sleep..
Prem and Mukti come home
Everyone are waiting for them
Sneha comes running and hugs Mukti
Prerna: kya tum ek insaan ho? Ek bachi ko tumne raat bhar tang mein chod kea a gaye. Kya tumhe ek dil hai?
Prem: meri bath suno please
Prerna: mazzak mein tumhare bare mein usne jhoot kaha . Mein manthi hoon. Sneha hai Mujhe bathaya. Sachayi janne ke bageir maine tumpe chillaya. Isliye tumne intha bada galthi kiya?
Mukti saying slowly to Sneha: iska tho band bajega….
Sneha: chup
Prerna : Agar usse kuch ho gaya tho? Bechari Wooh tho zindagi aur mauth ke beech lad rahi hai.
Prem is shocked : what??
Prerna: Usse marne se pehle lagtha hai tumhi usse maar dallo gey.
Prem looks at Mukti
Prem: aap yeh kya keh rahe hai?
Prerna: bachpan se Mukti ka heart problem hai. Humne bahut koshish ki par kuch nahi kar pa rahe hai.
Prem: what? Yeehhhh
Prerna: Wooh andar hi andar mar rahi hai rooz…Tumhe yakeen ahi hai tho sab se pooch ke dekhlo. Bahar ke liye hi uski hassi aur mazak…andar wooh….and prerna starts crying
Everyone has tears in their eyes.
Prerna: tumne aisi ladki ko le kar intha laba kaam kiya…agar usse kuch ho jatha?
Prem walks up to Mukti
Prem: kya yeh sach hai? Tell me…kya yeh sach hai??
Sneha: haan yeh sach hai
Mukti looks at Prem gives him a wink and goes to her room.
Morning Breakfast table
Prerna: Mukti kaha hai
Sneha: wooh tho morning ni bahar gayi hai
Prerna : ok
Prem goes to Prerna after breakfast
Prem: mein mukti ke doctor se milna chahta hoon.
Prerna gives him the address.
Prem: doctor, Mukti ka problem kya hai?
Doctor: Congenital Heart Disease.
Prem: uske liye jaan ka khatra hai?
Doc: kabhi kabhi
Prem: Mukti….
Doc: yes
Prem: aap kuch nahi kar sakthey? US kahi bhi le jake
Doc: Agar aisa kar sakthey tho Mr.Bajaj ab tak kar chuke hotey. They have detected it when she was small. Tab operation bhi kiya tha. Kuch saal pehle bhi ek operation kiya tha. But andar ek block develop hua hai. Mukti ab thak zinda rehna, uska kismat hai. Patha nahi uska kismet kab thak uska saath degi.
Prem is sad and he walks out of the hospital all depressed. Prem goes home and sees Sneha Mukti and everyone sitting outside in the garden.
Sneha: wow prem, aao baito..
Prerna: Kuch khaoge?
Prem: Do u know what Congetinal Heart disease?
Mukti: yea….Heart mein valves defective. Pulmonary stenosis. Steptam mein hole. Pure Blood aur Impure blood mil jathey hai. Iske wajah se heart blood pump nahi kar patha. Thab heart enlarge ho jatha hai. Phir aisa hone ke bath kuch din baadh khatam.
Prem: yeh jaanne ke badh bhi tum aise??
Mukti: haan.
Prem: kaise?
Mukti: dekho….tum mar jaoge… Sneha mar jayegi, yeh ped mar jayenge aur mein bhi mar jaungi. Pharkh ithna hai ki main thoda jaldi mar jaungi. Mujhe kal ki phikar nahi hai. Men aaj mein jithi hoon. Mein aise hi rahungi. Ahar tumhe problem hai tho. Main kuch nahi kar sakthi. Ok
Mukti gets up and leaves
Prerna and everyone has tears in their eyes.
Next day everyone are playing in the garden.
Prem is sitting and staring at Mukti. Mukti gets irritated.
Mukti goes up to Prem
Mukti: mein 10 min se dekh rahi hoon. Muje hi dekh rahe ho tum. Baath kya hai? Line maar rahe ho mujpe? Dekho, agar tumhe kuch kehna hai tho kehdo ok.
Prem: kya hum dono bhag challe?
Mukti: what? Games khel rahe ho mujse?
Prem: Tomorrow 5 pm park mein.
Mukti: mein nahi aungi
Prem:5 pm…main tumhara intezaar karunga
Mukti: main nahi aungi
Prem: byeeeee
Mukti is sleeping her room
Just then Sneha and Kasak come in
Mukti is trying not to look at the clock.
SnehaL koyi, bahut koshish kar raha hai ki wooh time nahi dekhey. Unke iye mein bhol rahi hoon time…..4pm hai
Kasak: movie tho 6pm ko hai
Mukti: mein nahi aa rahi hoon
Kasak: kyu?
Sneha: kyuki aaj kisi ko kahi jana hai
Mukti: shut up ok
Mukti goes to the park and is waiting for Prem
Mukti: kaha than a bhag challe, ab kya hua? Dar gaya hoga. Maine socha kya bath hai aaj kal prem ko bhi brain aa gaya. Ab dekho dar gaya. Maine ja rahi hoon. Mein kyu wait karu.
Prem is standing near a lake in the park
Prem: tumne kaha kit um nahi aoge. Ab kyu aa gayi? Huh?
Mukti walks up to Prem
Prem: kya hua? You like me that much? Pasand aa gaya hoon kya?
Mukti is seriously staring at Prem
Prem: show me show much u like me.
Mukti goes up to Prema nd pushes him into the lake and runs to the chapel near by.
Mukti sits in the chapel and join in with the prayer.
A kid in front of her asks her what happen
Mukti: Maine eek aadhmi ko water mein push karke aa gayi.
Kid: usse kya hua?
Mukti: hona kya hai….gone
Just then Mukti hears some water noises and someone walking towards her. She tries to hide but Prem comes and sits next to her.
Mukti: tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?
Prem: yeh scared place hai. Yaha jhoot nahi bola karthey. Ab sach bolo kit um muje pasand karthi ho,
Mukti: what if I don't
Prem: mein god se pooch manglunga
Mukti: fine
Just then Prem shouts: god
Mukti: what r u doing??
Prem: I am asking
Mukti: shut up
Prem: kya yeh right hai.
Mukti: everyone is looking plzzz
Prem: dekhne do
Mukti: please
Prem: so tell me to like me.
Mukti: no
Prem: kya yeh insaaf hai. Mera dil churake ab bolthi hai ki mein pasand nahi hoon.
Mukti: please stop…ok fine…I like you
Prem: good now tell me I love u
Mukti: tumhe dekhey? No way.
Prem: GODDDD
Mukti: ok fine I love u
Prem: oh god thank u, thanks father
Sneha: mom aapko patha hai kal kisi ne kissi se church mien I love u kaha
Prerna: what? Kisne?
Mukti runs to sneha and closes her mouth
Mukti: koyi nahi chotima…ek ladki ne
Prerna: oh k
Mukti is in her room with Prerna just then Prem sneeks in and hides behind the curtain
Prerna cell rings
Prerna: abhi aathi hoon
Prem comes out
Prem: hey
Mukti: tum? Yaha kya kar rahe ho?
Prem: mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai
Mukti: chotima aa jayegi, gooo
Prem, by the way, hum shaadi ab karre?
Mukti: kya?
Prem: shaadi kab karee
Mukti: chotima aa jayegi, go please
Prem: tell me u will marry me, then I will go
Mukti: nahi kaungi
Prem: tho mein bhi nahi jaunga
Mukti: please…oh god chotima aa rahi hai go plz
Prem: tell me yes I will go
Mukti: ok fine….i will go now plz
Just then prerna walks in
Prem: ok bye and prem hides behind the curtain.
Everyone is at the dinning table. Sneha is in the living room and Prem is in his room
Prem calls the land line and Sneha picks up
Prem: Mukti hai waha pe?
Sneha: mukti tumhara phone hai
Mukti: pooch kaun hai
Sneha: wooh kaun hai pooch rahi hai
Prem: well kuch nahi, usne kaha ki wooh mujse shaadi karegi. Kab aur kaha paaoch n eke liye phone kiya maine.
Sneha shouts: tumne kissi se shaadi ke liye haan kiya tho wooh pooch raha hai kab aur kaha?
Mukti: what??
Everyone is staring at her
Sneha: wooh pooch raha hai ki, sab se kehna ke karee ya bhag ke shaadi karee?
Mukti is so embarrassed
Sneha: bol raha hai ki sab ko dekhe darna math
Mukti runs into the living room and hangs up the phone.
Mukti is all scared and she knows its prem who had called. She goes into Prem's room
Mukti: tum samaj they kya ho apne aap ko? Yeh sab kyu kar rahe ho. Tumhe sorry chahiye na. Ok fine sorry. Yeh sab drama bandh karo ok.
Prem look goes close to Mukti holds her
Prem: I LOVE U
Mukti runs outside into the garden and sits on a bench.
After everyone sleeps at night Mukti goes into Prem's room
Mukti: tumne jo kaha kya wooh sach hai?
Prem holds her face
Prem: I love u
Mukti: why?
Prem: patha nahi, par ithna patha hai ki yeh sach hai
Mukti: kaise?
Prem takes her hands and puts in on his heart.
Prem: suno kitna zoor se dhadak raha hai.
Mukti: mujhe bhi
Prem: really?
Mukti hugs Prem tight. Prem takes Mukti's face and kisses her. They hug.
Next day at night Mukti calls Prem
Prem: hello
Mukti: kyat um mere room mein aa sakthey ho?
Prem: now?
Prem goes to Mukti's room
Prem: kya hua?
Mukti: kuch nahi
Prem: phir??
Mukti: dard ho raha hai?
Prem: kaha? Kissi bo bulao?
Mukti: no, yeh tho aathey rehtha hai. Aaj muje tumhare saath rehna hai. Tum mera ek kaam karoge?
Prem: kya?
Mukti: Kya mein tumhare ghod mein so sakthi hoon?
Prem hugs her
Mukti: mein tumhe ithni achi lagthi hoon
Prem: bahut
Mukti: kal agar mein mar gayi tho?
Prem: kal ja mujhe phikar nahi hai. Mein aaj ke liye jitha hoon. Ek ladkhi ne mujse kaha tha.
Prem and Mukti hug and Mukti sleeps in Prem's arms
In the morning Prem is sneaking out of Mukti's room when Prerna comes
Prerna: mukti, se mila hai tho living room mein milo. Bedroom mein janeki koyi zaroorat nahi hai.
Prem: mom
Prerna: mukti, kuch dinno se bahut kush hai. Mujhe samaj mein nahi aaya. Ab mein samji hoon. Tum uske haalat ko janthey ho na…
Prem: haan
Prerna: uske baadh bhi?
Prem: haan
Prerna: I am so proud of u
Prem is waiting for Mukti in the park
Mukti comes and hugs him
Just then Mukti is in pain….aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh
Prem: mukti kya hua? Are you ok? Oh god
Just the Mukti smiles
Mukti: dar gaye na?
Prem: what?
Mukti: dar gaye na.tumne socha ki mein mar jaungi? Dar gaye? .acept it
Prem: that was not funny ok
Prem hugs Mukti..aise games kabhi math kehlna
Mukti: hum marthey kyu hai? Muje marna nahi hai. Muje tumhare saath rehna hai. Agar mein tumhare saath hoon tho mujhe kuch nahi hoga.
Prem hugs Mukti tighly
Prem is in the office….
Sneha calls
Sneha: prem jaldi hospital aa jao Mukti..
Prem: kya hua Mukti ko?
Sneha: uska chest pain aaya tha aur humne usse hospital lekar aaye hai
Prem: main abhi aatha hoon
Prem runs into the hospital room
Mukti is suffering with pain
Mukti: chotima please kuch karo…mujhe bahut dard ho raha hai. Maein mar jaungi…plz kuch karo
Prem comes in and sees Mukti in pain…
Doctor comes in
Doc: aap sab baha jayiye. We will take care.
Everyone are waiting outside
Doc: we need to do an operation. Patha nahi ki wooh she payegi ya nahi. Aap mein se Prem kaun hai. Aap se milna chahthi hai
Prem goes in
Mukti: tum waha kyu khade ho
Prem sits next to her and holds her hand
Mukti: Prem, promise me. Agar mujhe kuch ho jatah hai tho…u won't cry. Tum hameesha kush raho ge.
Prem: nods
Prem hugs Mukti
Prerna comes
Mukti: chotima, please don't cry. Mein bhi ro dungi
Doc ab hume mukti ko operation ke liye le jana hoga
Everyone are waiting outside
The doctor come out
Prerna: doctor, kya meri meri beti mere paas phie wapas ayegi?
Doc: hune patha nahi mrs.bajaj. Aaap wait kijiye. Humne pacemaker insert kiya hai. Patha nahi ki Mukti ka heart kaisa react karega. Ab coma mein hai. Humne ventilator rakha hai. Utne ke baad patha challe ga.
After few hours Mukti opens her eyes.
Prerna: Mukti…
Mukti: chiotima prem…
Prerna: prem yehi hai
Prem: haan
Mukti smiles : kya hum bhag challe???
PREM BENDS DOWN AND KISSES MUKTI.
WELL THIS IS THE END GUYS….NO IDEA HOW LONG MUKTI WILL BE ALIVE BUT AS LONG AS SHE IS THEY WILL BE INSEPARABLE.
INSPIRED BY MANI RATNAM'S GEETANJALI
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