SwaRon FF:Will love You..Forever Ch-9..pg-115

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Neeraj

@nature2

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

res

dips vvv nycly written very gud n awosm part

n cural game😭

Edited by nature2 - 12 years ago

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Neeraj

@nature2

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Na dard hai na malal hai, mera sirfitna sawal hai
mujhe chahna, phir chhorna, kya sabhi ko iss mein kamal hai..

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Aruba

@sweetcherry95

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

itna suspense kyun hai bhyee

nicely penned..bechare donu sad sad...waise i knw when a person get divorced how does it feel...true emotions are being conveyed

waiting for next

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sky_fighter

@sky_fighter

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

sitting in front of the pc reading ur ff and a tear dropped from my eye just at the last word ( i am getting filmy hahahahaha)
but seriously
A.W.E.S.O.M.E
u are a GREAT writer yaar and i love ur work
this one seems special now only
but there is one request
plz try to post a bit soon as i couldn't remember the previous part so read it again

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_bellaSwan_

@_bellaSwan_

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

It was awesome yaar iam excited for dis FF

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Marium

@pehlanasha.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Yes, you better be regular...i was 3/4 death...was waiting for the update for this FF..😡

Okay now come to the update...

OMG,OMG, n OMG!

i loved it a lot.

Wait was worth it! ( doesn't allow you to make me wait like hell again)😛

Getting really curious to know what happened between them..

Line i can die for..but won't be able to write by myself in my wildest dreams!

"That was their first meeting'the beginning of their story'today they are going to give a conclusion to their story...a conclusion ..which they never imagined ...in their worst nightmare...😭

Your case is next'.she couldn't know when they became a CASE '.from the perfect couple'.💔😭

opposition party'Sharon'....When did she become opposition party for him'they were always on the same side'with each other'holding each others hand...may be its time to leave that hand..."😭

These lines were heart wrenching...i literally cried on these lines..i love love love love love it DEEPS!!!!!!!!!!!😃😃😃 You are a beautiful at heart because only that(beautiful at heart) person can write such stuff!🤗🤗

Please deeps time pe updat kardia kar..you don't know meri halat kya hoti hai yahan wait karke..

And yes..i though u,me..back to hum is the most beautiful FF by you..but i can say now it's a tie...😃

AND.WHEN.ARE.YOU.UPDATING.u,me..back to hum!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😡😡😡(this,i have written with red(sign of danger and anger..so better be careful & update soon)🤢

Edited by SwaRon_Dreams - 12 years ago

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swa-ron

@swa-ron

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

awesome
r u trying to kill us???

Update sooon

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

// Reserved // Will edit after 4-5 days. Sorry for the delay.
Till then Happy Diwali 😊

Wow this was just heart touching. The way you penned their thoughts on listening the words like Case and opposition part was simply over whelming. But this update left me more confused. As I am still unable to think of any reason why the hell two persons so much in love are sepearting. Any way beautifully written chapter. And the both flashback were interesting. Especially the one which said they married against their parents wishes. I don't know why but I think this point is gonna be important ahead. Can't wait to read further.

Edited by marauder - 12 years ago

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Riya

@rockstarriya_26

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#99

you again left me crying...how can you make this already beautiful couple and their divine love be more beautiful and heavenly ? ugh..whatever...love you :)

update soon... and tell the reason too..m dying to find out !

Riya❤️