VirMan & TaaRey ff Ishq Wala Love UPDATED - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
Update soon or else I will die of curiosity !!
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#82
AMAZING update!!!
loooved the taarey scene
and virman fight ðŸ¤£
pls update soon!
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Bhaj update NW... Quick 😆
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Update... Update... Update...
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awesome:)))))
cont. soon:)
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CHAPTER 4

Taani ran into her room with a smile on her face. Maanvi who was sitting on the bed, noticed her

M- hey, tujhe kya hua?? Aise sharma kyun rahi ho??

Taani snapped out and stopped smiling

T- kuch nahi

She said and sat on the bed

T- btw thori der mein viren jeeju ke liye party hai, toh humein ready hona chahiye

M- yeah lets go
...

After a while, it was time for the party. Virman and Taarey were ready. All four went down stairs.

Jeevika took Viren down stairs. The lights were off

VI- Jeevika, itna andhera kyun hai??

Jeevika smirked

J- abhi pata chal jaye ga

Then all of a sudden, the lights came on

Everyone- SURPRISE!!

Viren was shocked and surprised

Everyone sang Happy birthday to him
Viren was touched and appreciated the effort that everyone had put in for the party

VI- thank u so much guyz!!

After a while it was time for gifts!!

M- jeeju!! Mera gift pehle!!

She ran to viren. Virat scoffed as he thought what was the gift. Rey walked up to virat

R- virat y r u laughing??

V- tujhe abhi pata chal jaye ga jab tu uska gift dekhe ga

Rey was Confused

Viren opened maanvi's gift and was stunned to see what it was
It was a PUMA ferrari leather jacket

VI- oh my god maanvi! I just love this jacket! Thank you so much!!
He hugged maanvi

Vrat got confused. Rey whispered to virat

R- virat where's the funny part?? I dnt understand

V- me neither. How can a lame blazer turn into a leather jacket??

R- what?? Wat r u saying??

V- rey, when I met this girl toh usne kaha ke woh blazer le rahi hai n nw where did the jacket appear from??

Rey rolled his eyes and sighed

R- kya yaar virat! I thought it was something serious. Tu bhi na virat

He went over to viren while virat dragged maanvi in the garden

M- choro mujhe!

He let go of her

M- kya hai!? Y did u drag me here?

V- tumne woh jacket kahan se li??

Maanvi looked at him with eyes widened and then smirked

M- oh so yeh puchne ke liye bulaya hai tumne??

V- just tell me

Maanvi folded her arms and smirked

M- what did u think?? Ke main jeeju ke liye woh lame blazer leti?? No way! Aur mera fashion sense itna bhi bura nahi hai!

Saying that she walked inside to join the rest in the party

V to himself- not bad miss maanvi, ur quite interesting
He smiled and went inside

Taani was standing alone drinking juice while maanvi was chatting with jeevika. Rey saw taani and went to her

R- hii
Taani looked at him and smiled

T- hii

R- taani can i ask u something??

T to herself- omg what is he going to ask?? Maybe on a date?? No no taani sochna band kar!

R- er..taani??

T- yeah er...yeah u can ask me anything

R- thanks woh actually i wanted to ask ke tum thori der pehle virat ke kambre mein se achaanak kyun chali gayi?? Is everything ok??

Taani was frozen, how was she supposed to tell him that she was crazy about him??

T- er...yeah sab teek hai woh bas...er...han woh m...maanvi ko kuch kaam tha toh iss liye i...had to go

R- oh ok.

Both smiled at each other...

...

The party was over and all guests had gone. Jeevika, maanvi and taani were in the kitchen cleaning the mess which was made during the party while viren and rey were sitting on the couch chatting.

M- di main yeh kheer jeeju ko de kar aati hoon
Maanvi got a plate full of kheer and went to the living room to give viren the kheer

M- yeh lo jeeju aapki kheer

VI- thanks maanvi

Maanvi turned to rey
M- rey tumhe bhi kuch chahiye??

R- no thanks maanvi i'm good

He smiled at her
Then maanvi realised that virat was not there

M- erm...virat kahan hai??

Rey and viren looked at each other and started laughing

VI- Maanvi tumhe virat abhi nahi dikhe ga

M- kyun??

R- kyunki iss waqt virat busy hai...larkio ke saath!!

Viren and rey started laughing again

Maanvi got shocked and asked concerned

M- kya!? Woh larkio ke saath...matlab??

VI- arre nahi not the way ur thinking. Woh actually uske fans aaye hain and he's chatting with them in the garden

Maanvi sighed in releif

R- btw maanvi, tum kyun puch rahi ho??

M- erm...just

Maanvi peeked in the garden and saw virat laughing around with some girls. She saw a girl kiss virat on the cheek and virat was enjoying it
Maanvi's eyes widened and she gave him a disgusted look

M to herself- omg! He's so disgusting! Larkio ke beech mein he's enjoying?? Jerk!

Without a second thought, maanvi stormed in the garden

M- excuse me its very late u shud all go!

Before the girls could say anything, maanvi dragged them out of the garden

Virat turned to maanvi frustrated

V- what the hell maanvi!

M- kyun?? Tumhe unki company bohot zada hi achi lag rahi thi kya??

She answered with irritation

Virat rolled his eyes and sighed

V- maanvi! Main jo bhi karu its my business. Whats ur problem??

Maanvi didnt know what to say, she actually didnt know why she did that

Virat folded his arms

V- oh maybe i know the answer

Maanvi looked at him curiously

V- u got jealous

Maanvi's eyes widened

M- what!? U think i was jealous?? Please.

V- then y did u send them away??

M- woh...er...time! Haan time dekho! Bohot late ho gaya hai so thats y

V- maanvi tum...

M- virat di mera wait kar rahi hain, i shud go inside
Before virat could say anything maanvi went inside. Virat smirked

After a while, virika, virman and taarey were all sitting on the couch.

Rey gave viren his gift

R- viren bhai ur gonna love it

Viren opened rey's gift, it was a dominic mechanical watch, just what viren loved

VI- rey this is awesome! Thank u yaar!

Virat looked at the watch and thought how simple his gift is

Rey looked at virat

R- virat, tu bhi de na

V- er...woh...

Rey saw the gift behind taani, he picked it up and gave it to viren

R- yeh lo viren bhai, virat ki taraf se

Viren opened it,

V to himself- yaar ab toh bhai upset honge that everyone else gave so good branded gifts and what do i give? Pair of jeans and a shirt

VI- virat yeh hai tumhara gift??

V- er...bhai woh...actually...

V- i absolutely love it!

V- erm...really??

VI- ofcourse, mere bhai ne mujhe gift diya hai and won't i love it?? Its the best one ever!!

The v bros hugged...

T- viren jeeju, aaj apka birthday hai. Humne party toh karli lekin i think most beautiful part would be spending time with di right??

Taani teased as jeevika blushed

VI- er...haan ofcourse...

Taarey virmaan- oye hoye!!

R- kya baat hai bhai! Agar aap kahein toh hum upper chale jaate hain

Rey teased viren

V- no, in fact aapko bahar jaana chahiye

Everyone agreed except virika who were just being shy

J- nahi woh...

R- no excuses bhabhi

Everyone insisted them to go out on a date and they finally agreed...

...

Virika were out on their date while taarey and virman were at home.

Rey was in virat's room when taani came there with food tray in her hands

Rey looked up

R- arre taani tum kyun takleef kar rahi ho?? Give it here,

He took the tray from taani and put it on the bedside drawer...

Maanvi was outside in the garden looking up at the stars when virat came

V- hii

Maanvi looked at him

M- hii

V- waise tumne abhi tak mujhe bataya nahi

Maanvi looked confused

M- kya??

V- why did u send those girls away??

Maanvi sighed

M- virat please, agar tum yahan mujhe sawal karne aaye ho then main hi yahan se chali jaati hoon

She was about to go when virat grabbed her wrist

V- arre nahi

He realised what he was doing

V- sorry. He let go

V- maanvi tum...

Suddenly it started raining

V- what the freak yaar!

Virat said agitatedly as drops of rain fell on his face

But maanvi was enjoying it. Virat ran inside

V- maanvi andar aa jao!

He called from inside. Maanvi turned around with a smile

M- virat tum bhi ao na! Bohot maza aaye ga!

V- pagal ho kya!? Maanvi tum bimaar par jao gi! Chalo ao na!

But maanvi did not listen, she spread her arms out and enjoyed every drop that fell on her face.

Virat gave up and just watched her from inside. Maanvi was really enjoying the rain as if it was the first time

A smile appeared on virat's face

V to himself- she's really different.

Virat kept staring at her, then slowly he stepped out in the rain

Maanvi could feel his presence, she felt him come closer to her. Virat was now just behind her. Maanvi was about to go when virat slowly slid his hand on her thin stomach and pulled her close to him. Now maanvi's back was touching virat's chest.
Virat slowly turned maanvi to face him. He had completely lost his senses now.

Virat moved strands of hair that was on maanvi's face and began to caress her cheeks. Maanvi closed her eyes and breathed heavily. Virat wrapped his arms around her waist tightly which made maanvi's heart skip a beat. He kissed her on her forehead, then both eyes, her cheeks. Maanvi held on to virat's shirt really tight. Virat caressed her lips and was about to kiss her...

...

In virat's room...
Suddenly the light went off and taani got scared
She didnt think and hugged rey.
Rey didnt know what to do, but he could see that she was scared

R- taani relax...dnt worry...main hoon na

T- rey mujhe andhere se bohot dar lagta hai, please kuch karo

Rey noticed that her voice was shaking, he caressed her hair to calm her down

R- taani...please calm down

Taani started sobbing. Rey moved her to face him. He wiped her tears with his thumb and cupped her face

R- taani nothing will happen to u. Trust me. Main tumhare saath hoon. Daro mat. I promise tumhe kuch nahi ho ga
Taani looked into his eyes. Rey reflected the same. The room was light enough for them to see each other's eyes. Now rey began to lose his senses. He kissed her on her forehead, taani closed her eyes and held his arm tightly. Rey then moved her hair on one side and passionately kissed her on her neck. Now taani was breathing heavily and she closed her eyes even tight. Rey left a love bite. Slowly he move towards her face and he was about to kiss her when the light suddenly came back on. Rey looked at taani and was hell shocked when he realised what he was doing. He stepped back and turned his back to taani near the window.

R to himself- o god! Yeh main kya kar raha tha?? Maine taani mein usko dekha?? Aisa kaise ho sakta hai!? No way! Aaj ek baar phir uska chehra mere saamne aa gaya! But now i'm not gonna give in...

so guys thts chapter 4. btw virman's part is left on cliffhanger...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
lovely update
thanks for pm me
plz cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Sof wow this was beautifully done love the surprise bday party for Viren. Love Manvi jealousy even if she denied it. OMG Virat and Rey are sooo fast lol wow but I love it. Rey losing control wow I'm loving it and the cliffhanger now fair lol, plzzz continue soon
Edited by Natasha. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
firstly thanx 4 d pm
Update it was awesome
But didn't recognize manvi's behaviour, suddenly she fee jealous, but enjoyed it alot
Loved the virman n taarey scene
Waiting 4 ur next part... Update Soon
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#90
Wow...lovely update...love both taarey and virman...thanks for the pm...