~JAANE TU KAHAN HAIN~2(MG)(Part 34-Pg79)) - Page 19

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chavvi16 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
woohoo another update from you of this ff#
sorry to be partial but this one is my absolute favourite dear
see ya soon then
cheers for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting babes...!

for my xm i will be less active...but that doesn't mean that i don't support u yaar.
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART-29

maan reached a hotel, it was beautiful, one of the best hotel of shimla

he went to reception

maan- excuse me miss

a young lady came in uniform which was skirt and top

rec- yes sir, how can i help you??

maan- you can help me many way but for now just a room please

and smiled

the receptionist was on cloud 9

rec- yes sir, here is the room key, hope you enjoy here

maan- vaise senorita i must say you are beautiful

and left with the key with girl blushing

here geet entered the hotel with yash

geet- yash ye kya natak hain??

yash- geet tum bahut bolti ho, can't you be quit

geet- mein bahut bolti huin ki tum

yash- shut up miss

rano- hehehe, mummy ko datt pari

rano was jumping in excitement

yash high fived with her

geet- maa apko bahut aza araha hain

rano nodded

then entered yash mother on wheel chair

yash mother- yash why are you teasing my dear geet

geet- hain, dekhiya nah maa

and made a baby face

yash mother- enta bare ho gaye ho par bachpana nahi gaya

yash made baby face and gave an angry glare to geet

while geet teasing smiled

they reached the receptionist, who was lost in maan's dream

yash- excuse me miss

receptionist was still lost

yash- excuse me

little louder

reception came out of her dream land

and saw yash and a big smile came to her face

rec(thought)- kya kismat hain meri, tw two handsome boys calling me..hayee

rec- yes sir

yash- voh voh

rec- yes sir you want to say something

yash- come near, i want to wishper something

rec- he is calling me near, thank you baba ji for this job

yash- voh party hall kahan hain

rec dream broke

rec- right side second hall

yash- thank you

geet- what were you saying to her

yash- why jealous ho??

geet- shut up and tell me

yash- zip your mouth miss handa and come with me

and dragged her to the party hall

geet- why are we here, its all black here yash

geet turned around and found no one

geet- yash, maa...see i hate these type of joke

and turned around to leave

when spot light came to her

and voice spoke all

yash- today is my best friend's birthday, my non stop chatter box, a very happy birthday miss handa/ geet,

and then another spot light came, where yash, rano and yash mother was standing

all- we love you geet

tears escaped geet eye, happiness was having no bound

and light came in the hall, all were standing there

some business people and some friends

geet was dragged towards cake and geet happily cut the cake...

and fed each one..

now its time for gifts.

everyone gave gifts, now it was yash turn

geet- eski koi zarurat nahi hain yash, i got my best gift in the morning only, thank you for that

yash was all confused but shrugged the thought

yash- here is your gift

and there was the photo of geet and rano and her father

geet tears again flooded

yash- abbe ansu tho ase baha rahi hain jaise panni ki kami ho yahan

geet hit him

geet- thanks yash, its wonderful, but kahan se mila

yash- from your bag

geet hugged yash

maan was taking a tour of the hotel when he stoped at party hall and saw geet and yash hugging

though he was no able to see geet's face

he smiled at them and left

geet came out the hug, and the party started

geet was going to yash mother to ask her something when she heard

man- etna paise bekar mein waste kiya, voh bhi ek care taker ke liya

man- aur nahi tho kya, yash ko kaun samjhe that they are not worth it

geet had tears in her eye, she was deeply hurt, this thinking was the reason of prince and her sepration

yash also heard it

and came near geet

yash- people like you don't deserve anything, and she is not any girl she is my best friend, do you get it

he turned to find geet, but geet was nowhere

yash mother- she ran that way

geet ran after hearing the humilation and went inside a black room..this was her habit whenever she was sad, she find a dark corner

here maan was moving towards the pool side when his ring slipped inside the room, he went inside to pick it up when the door got struck

geet was scared with noise when the lights were gone..

he find someone and hugged him

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next- socho ab kya hoga??

hope you like it

i will not say to comment or like it..

i am really disappointed...

thanks for like and comments...

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Edited by angelwords - 12 years ago
chavvi16 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
now i get it how they were embracing each other
normally i would be cursing these type of ppl but thanks to those ppl maneet got to hug and kinda meet
wow so it was well it is her birthday huh cool how old is she now and maan how old is he
man that sure was fun minus those ppl but they had their use as well i guess
god that receptionist was cute and funny kuch jyada hi uchal rahi thi with maan and yash talking to her
so maan saw yash and geet hug but he didnt see her facenot that would have made too much difference since he doesnt know what his sweetu looks like right
so what now that they are in each others arm haiyye kya scene tha
yash had a surprise party for geet who he calls his best friend when she is more than that to him but he wont say right
cheers for pm
hope to see ya again dear

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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update..
yash s so caring..
but whom she hugged?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Just only finished reading all at one shot. amazing yar... I dont know about others but i am hopeless in hindi. So couldnt understand few parts. Hope you can make an english translation next time... thank you😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi dear, love the update.😊
Don't be sad. You are a beautiful writer.😛
Please keep on writing.😊
Loved this part Can't wait for next part. Waiting for your update and PM.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update Dear..Loved it
aww Yash Is so loving and caring
Geet hug..but whom?
continue soon
Thankx for the pm


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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
hope prince apni sweetu ko pehchaan le
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Posted: 12 years ago
update yash surprise of geet birthday people humiliating her yash siding her geer ran



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