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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey!! I read ur ff. Not whole bt yes, quite many parts of it and believe me, its awesome!! As I've already complimented, ur imagination is just ...out of this world.. I wish I cud read whole of it and d upcoming parts as well but m vry sorry to say, dat I won't be able to as there's a lot of burden of studies on me right now.. Huhh, I truly wish I cud read it.. Btw, its just awesome!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: RiniRocks

Hey!! I read ur ff. Not whole bt yes, quite many parts of it and believe me, its awesome!! As I've already complimented, ur imagination is just ...out of this world.. I wish I cud read whole of it and d upcoming parts as well but m vry sorry to say, dat I won't be able to as there's a lot of burden of studies on me right now.. Huhh, I truly wish I cud read it.. Btw, its just awesome!


don't worry rinne but i request you to read it from chapter one of the ff otherwise you will not be able to understand my story.
you can read one chapter in one month slowly but i again request you to not read it in parts.
thanks for the compliment.
ff is not going anywhere.you can read it whenever you get time.
thanks.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lucykaede


wait for next part to know this.😉



Okay...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh !! I'm Feeling Sooo Sooo Sad For Hritvik !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Your update is as usual superb👏👍🏼.
But I have too many doubts.
1.Who did leave Hrithvik and kids Anushka?Suhani?Neera?
2.Who is Hrithvik??
3.FOur Children are the key.Who are they?-Karthik,Nandini,Jhanvi and Rehan??
4.Most important what is the next plan of Neera and Nupur??
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update.
I just loved it.
Thanks a lot for ur pm.
My all confusions are cleared now.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh boy!!!
Amazing as usual!!!
i luved it!!!
y she wnts nly Jhanvi 2 posses dose energy???
o god...ur mystrey wl kill me!
i luv u 4 starting dis FF!
hhh...
cnnt wait 4 d nxt part!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Poor Hrithik. I Hope Neera Doesn't Leave Him.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mrmrfrevr

Your update is as usual superb👏👍🏼.
But I have too many doubts.
1.Who did leave Hrithvik and kids Anushka?Suhani?Neera?
2.Who is Hrithvik??
3.FOur Children are the key.Who are they?-Karthik,Nandini,Jhanvi and Rehan??
4.Most important what is the next plan of Neera and Nupur??



answers

1-neera left hrithvik and suhani and anushka are just names of neera.😕
2-ah,what do you mean by that?hrithvik is hrithvik,he is the only character that has no idea what is going on.😆
3-ah yes those four i guess.
4-read next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
got a time off so i am updating

chapter-6-a symbol of darkness or...?
after three days.
hrithvik and his children arrived back to nupur.
yuuvi came to the door with a very confused expression.
yuuvi-hey where is neera?
hrithvik had a very sad expression.
yuuvi saw three children with him.
yuuvi-hey karthik,he patted his head.tu to bahut bada ho gaya.
karthik saw hrithvik with confused expressions.
yuuvi-oh come on don't tell you don't recognize me.
karthik-huh...😕
nandini and jhanvi were confused.
they entered.
after 4 hrs.everyone was in living room.it was winters so fire was there in the room in that chimney type thing.(ah i am not able to explain it,imagine on your own.)
mohit and kitty were not there,they left them when they knew about neera's truth.they wanted to get separate from all this.
amrit-i can't believe it,where did neera go?
hrithvik-i don't understand,why would she go leaving me?
amrit saw nupur with confused expressions.
nupur-hrithvik don't worry,i knw where is neera.
everyone shocked.
jhanvi left as she did not wanted to heart it.she ran upstairs.
hrithvik-where?
nupur-to her parent's house.
virat,maanvi,shekhar and jhanvi were shocked to see her(2 days before)
jhanvi-ah..she couldn't say anything after knowing her truth.
shekhar-what do you want?😡
neera-can i come in?
shekhar-oh please(in a sarcastic way)
they all sat together.
neera- i am pregnant.
shekhar-oh good my grand...oops my sibling is gonna come.superb.😡
jhanvi-shekhar please.
virat-its too complicated.
maanvi-did your husband leave you?😕
neera-i just want birth of this child here and you guys to take care of him.please...
shekhar-so that when he grow up,he can kill us?
neera-thats what i don't want.please after this child's birth i will leave fore...suddenly anandi entered the room.
anandi was shocked to see neera there.
anandi was angry,very angry on her.😡 but she controlled herself and left to her room without saying anything.
jhanvi touches her head-don't worry,we will take care of you.
neera-thank you for the gesture.
shekhar left angrily.😡
hrithvik-why would she go to her parent's house leaving us?what we did?
nupur-hrithvik please come to my room.
he left with her.
yuuvi-is she gonna tell him the truth?
amrit-no idea.
jhanvi(her daughter)was roaming around in the mansion when she suddenly entered in library.
jhanvi-wow,i never knew dad's real home had such a huge library.oh well nandini and karthik are definitely gonna enjoy it when suddenly nandini and karthik came running.
karthik-jhanvi where were you?
nandini-we were looking all over for you.
karthik-woah...such a huge library.i forgot about it.i spent my first six years here still i can't remember it.
nandini-wow..this is surely my place.they started checking books.they were laughing and having fun(nandini and karthik are also sad but i don't wanna write their misery here.)
as jhanvi was checking a book suddenly a black book fell from top.
jhanvi-oops..
she took the book to a table.
jhanvi-guys come here.
karthik and nandini came running.
karthik-what is it?
nandini-wow,such a black book.
jhanvi-hmm..ANCESTORS.
karthik-maybe its a book about ancestors of this mansion.
nandini-maybe about ..
jhanvi-there is only one way to find.he he...
she opened the book.
karthik-we will read it in night yaar.lets go.
jhanvi-yes in night.nandini and karthik left.
jhanvi-hmm..okay black book,go with me.ah...let me see if there are any pictures in this book.she started searching for pictures but she found nothing.she finally came to the end of the page.she saw some egyptian scriptures.
jhanvi-huh...haan...she touched that scorpion symbol and got shocked.😲
imhontep was in his room tied on an ice slab.
his hand had a tatoo of that scorpion symbol.
rumasha-that ancestors book.i can not touch it.why is that?there is something in it.but what can it be?the only way is to make someone else open it.he he he..jhanvi..ha ha ha ha ha...welcome to VALKYRIE.ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha...😆

Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago

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