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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG!tsr is so dangerous... Update fast...
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



main tho teaser pathne se pehle aaram karke wait kar rahi thi... but now when i read ur teaser... tell me HOW TO WAIT????



hehehe, , to abhi bhi aaram se wait karo...
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give me little time for the color code...
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First of all, thanks a lot for the lovely comments and likes….. love ya a lot….. *hugs*

Here this part is narrated by maan, , I'll give other character's side also one by one, , this time only maan…. And some of you wants Piya's reaction over the meeting with maan in college, , I'll give you surely but later…. Not now….

Part-46

She called maan and told him everything , , he said he will accompany her…. She said okay to him and the next minute maan was there in car, , geet get inside the car and both zoomed out…

"geet, , we'll buy from the mall which is not far.." said maan to her… she accepted and both went there in the mall which is not is not far from there….

They get inside and selected toys for Vedanta and buy pastries and ice creams for other members, , maan paid the bill and then they are coming out from the shop, , both were so lost in their talking and laughing ,,


(narration by maan)


I and geet were coming out from the toy shop and we are laughing , actually geet cracked a joke over a lady and a man who was with that lady, , I never laughed at any joke but this time I couldn't control on myself and laughed along with her…. Me too cracked a joke over another couple and some boys…. It was a great fun with her…. She is really an angel… I have already confessed to her that I like her, , I really enjoyed her company, , her small-2 sweet gestures , , I really like her….

We are were walking while hand in hand…. She didn't hold my hand, , I held her hand…. She looked at me and then smiled… I also smiled at her and rub her hand with my thumb… it was a great time…. Today it was a last meeting with the clients, , so today I am free now, , I am happy that I can give time to geet and Vedanta… both are craving for me, I knew that…. I was feeling little guilty for not giving her time , she never complained but I can see her eyes that she is craving for me, , I promised her that in our life, , there will be happiness all the time but seems I am failed this time….. ufff….. but now I'll make it up, ,

We are coming down, we have ordered toys and gave the address, , they will deliver the toys before we reach at home, , that's one thing I really liked about that shop…. They do their work on time even before the time and I really appreciate those person who are punctual in their work….

Me and geet came down now but suddenly we heard some sound of clicking….. geet turned towards me and asked to me….

"maan, what is media doing here?" she held my arm now feeling scared little because she never face media, , I held her hand which is over my arm…..

"geet, nothing will happen, ok.. there will be some meeting or something else" I assured her, , she nodded and looked towards media just then I heard a voice, , oh gosh… I am in a mess now…. Media saw me and that too with geet, , now I can't go away from here because all the media people ran towards me, and start clicking pictures…. I tried to hide geet's face by my hand but no use, they had already captured her face…. They were asking questions to me continuously, ,

Rep1- Mr. Khurana, who is she?


Rep2-what relation you have with this girl?


Rep3-what are you doing with her?


Rep4-is she your girlfriend or some kind of yours , , before he complete his sentence I closed his mouth with my answer….

"she is my wife… Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khurana, got it" I told, , there was deadly silence when I roared.., , even we can hear the sound of falling needle…. The pin drop silence convert into the huge applauds and the questions they started to ask me…. Geet got scared with my voice and she hid her face in my chest…. I held her tightly….

Rep1-when did you merry with her?


Rep2-why no one knew about that you are married now?


Rep3-is there any reason behind hiding the your marriage mr. khurana?

Before I reply them back, there was sudden hustle bustle, , I don't know what happened suddenly the crowd started running here and there for saving their life, , suddenly I felt a push and the grip I have over geet loosened , , she got separated from me, , the next moment I saw some goons , I think they did robbery, , I was having push by the people who are running for saving their life...

And the next moment, I felt like the land under my feet slipped away, , geet was bleeding from her back and she fell down on the ground…. The goons were passed from her, , the next moment I heard a gun shot, , I felt like the heart beat of my heart stopped at the very moment…..

I shouted her name "Geet", , she was far away from me, , i ran towards her but before I reached to her, , she was on the floor, , peoples were running , I saw some people ran over her, , police was also there, , beside of saving peoples , , they were firing in air…. I felt like snatch their gun and shoot them right now but I gave up the idea and took geet in my arms, , she was going unconscious state, , I shook her, , patted her cheeks..

"Geet, geet open your eyes…." Tears slipped from my eyes…. I never mind about those tears… I took geet in my arms and ran outside without wasting any second more….. I reached to the parking area and drove to the hospital… geet was badly bleeding, , I don't know what to do? I never felt so hopeless, so helpless before, , I felt like my life is slipping from my hand like sand slip from the fist…

While driving I took the water bottle from the dashboard and opened it with my one hand and tried to sprinkle water on her face…. I am trying that she will awake till we reach to the hospital…

"Geet, geet please, open your eyes, , please geet try to open your eyes…" I was trying continuously , , she slightly opened her eyes, I felt like relief of breath, I speed up the car and trying to reach the hospital asap….

"m-ma-aan" she whispered my name, , she was moaning in pain continuously, I can't see her like this…. She was stabbed by the knife on her back and a gun shot on her arm, , there were another gun shot also and 2-3 people were also shot by the bullets….

"haan geet, , aankhein khuli rakho geet, hum jaldi hi hospital pahunch jayenge… please geet" I tried to assure you but who will assure me? She gave a faint smile to me, , slowly-2 she is slipping in deep sleep… I couldn't see that…. I speed up my car more and broke the signal, , traffic police ran behind me but I didn't bother… I speed up more and broke another signal…..

Please geet, , before some time ago, we met, sort out our differences now you please don't back out, , before some time I start liking you and now please you don't do this with me, please don't go away…


Abhi abhi toh mile ho
Abhi naa karo chhootne ki baat
Abhi abhi toh pasand aaye ho
Abhi abhi roothne ki baat

We reached to geet, , I took geet out and ran inside the hospital screaming doctor's name.


"doctor, doctor…. " 2 ward boy came running with the stretcher, , I made her lay down on the stretcher and we ran towards the ICU, doctor come running and saw me, , he knew me, , before we talk to each other, 2 traffic police come inside in the search of me , they knew that it was me….


I was not in a good condition for arguing with them, , they tried to charge on me but don't know what happened to me, I didn't utter any word…. I don't know what they were telling to me, , they told me to sign on some papers and I did it…. They charge and I paid, , nothing is matte right now than geet…..


just then nurse come to me and told me sign the papers, , I didn't asked why the sign? Because they told me that if I didn't sign the papers then they can't operate geet…. I signed the papers immediately…..


They went away leaving me alone behind….. I turned and saw that the bulb outside of ICU is on… means they are operating geet…. I felt weak and slid down on the floor, my back hit the wall… I put my arms on my knees and head on my arms…. I closed my eyes and the sight of geet haunting me…. Tears strike down on my cheeks, I cried, , I won't survive if something happen to geet, , I don't know what is happening to me?

A nurse come out from the ICU and I stopped her…

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"sister, , geet kaisi hai? Wo theek to hai na?" I asked to her….

"right now, we can't say anything… let's hope for the best.." she said to me….

Please geet, don't do this to me, , some time ago, , our life get lighten by your love, , and now you are backing out…. No, , you can't…


Abhi abhi toh roshni aayi
Abhi naa karo munh chhupane ki baat


A ward boy come out from the ICU and ran towards the blood bank… he told me that her blood group is very rare but they have the same blood in their blood bank….

I relief a bit, , and I looked up like I can see god… I was praying to god for her….


Abhi abhi zindagi shuru hai
Abhi abhi tham jaane ki baat
Hum toh haare mahiya re
Moonde naina, neendh tihaare
Hum toh haare mahiya re
Moonde naina, neendh tihaare, ,

I closed my eyes and the sight of geet messed in blood come in front of my eyes, I opened my eyes at once…. She was wearing the white shirt and now her white shirt turned in red by her blood….



it was 2 hours, , geet is inside the ICU, , I glanced upward
the saw that the bulb went off, , that means operation has been finished…. I got up from the ground and hoping for the best… I was having the fear inside me but I don't know that it will come true…. I don't know how many times I have prayed to god….

Doctor come out and glanced at me, , I was so worn out…. And the next set of words which was came out from doctor's mouth took away my breath….

I don't know, , I was freeze hearing the words….. " no, please doctor say it is not true?" I literally pleaded to the doctor but no use, , they shake their head in denial and I felt like ground slipped under my feet, , I felt weak by my legs and I fell down with a thud on the floor froze with the words which were uttered by doctor…. I looked up again to the sky like again I can see god, ,

Precap

Woh subah toh bewajah ho
Ke guzre bin tumhare jiski raat

Song is not over, , continue in next part also,,,







Cherishh thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Cool timing haa...me off to reading..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
doc ne kya kaha??!!
hope for best...
Edited by dona86 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part ...everything happens in a second. everything changed!!
wat did Doc say???
awesome update
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was a very shocking one

Reading first half I was like OMG..OMG...He has accepted her as his wife and the way u described their sweet moments was so wonderful.

What the hell happened to Geet...she should b fine soon...btw what did Doctors say that it just made Maan much more vulnerable and helpless

Erggghhh...u r such a devil to leave us at such a tense situation...plzzz update soon


Edited by Cherishh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
FAB, SIMPLY FAB UPDATE..
I LOVE YOUR WORK, YOU ARE AN ASUM WRITER, ...

DO CONTINUE SOON

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Posted: 12 years ago
abhi toh khushiyon ki shuruwat hui thi aur abhi itni problems

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