OS: Wreck of the Day

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lazyleaves

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Posted: 12 years ago

Re-reading

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Kudos to you for looking so deeply in to that scene. He had come to that terrace running to stop her from jumping off the roof, the star in his hand.

She didn't touch those clothes because she would be reminded of him as if she has even forgotten him!

She had slumped down on the floor after he had told her why did he marry her. That was painful to watch and this is painful to read :'(

She left him after the Sheetal incident? Has she become a star for him?

She is again standing where she stood three months ago. She was saved by Arnav then. Will she be saved now? Does she want to be saved?

Do you know how good it feels when I read something by you?

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RasgullaSP

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Authors who describe the mundane with elan are the ones that impress me the most. And the way you described any normal terrace of any random neighborhood like Laxmi Nagar with clothes hanging on the line was very tastefully done.

Now to the update:

If this OS was in response to the current track than I won't put it past Khushi to contemplate suicide again to secure for Arnav his happiness.

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BlueMystique

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Posted: 12 years ago

That's not very nice of you Shu!

First of all, it is so very short! >.< And you say you are not going to write much, can't you make what you write looonggg? :P

And second of all, you made it a OS! Nahiii! What are you thinking? Writing this and not continuing? Hmpf!

I loved it! I am not watching the show, so I don't know what the hell everyone is going on about, but if you feel like Khushi is feeling this way, what the fadak are the Cvs doing? She's a newly wed, she should be happy and peaceful and shy and just happy!

Continue! Or I will strangle you!!! :P

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Vee

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Posted: 12 years ago

I respect authors who breathe life into mundanity with ease, as you do. What Khushi and Arnav could have done together... the sun has indeed set. Lost oppurtunity shone out crystal clear. It shone out, when one stops to ponder upon what Arnav and Khushi could have been, had Khushi stopped from taking such a drastic step. The picture you draw is very fuzzy, like a distant memory I want to call upon, but can't, and that increases the power of this OS ten fold. I am not watching the show so twitter and IF is my only connect to IPK, so I cannot comment upon the dynamics of the relationships. If the forum posts are to be believed, people are warming up to Arnav-Sheetal. Honestly, Khushi seems like the type who would willingly die for her loved ones, so if Arnav and Sheetal are an item, well then, nothing could have described Khushi's predicament better than this OS.This was an absolute treat to read, and I am still hoping you continue to quench our thirst with an OS here or there. Love you!

-V

Edited by V323 - 12 years ago