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Posted: 12 years ago
poor geet...
suffering so much...
amazing update...

precap seems scary...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update!!!!!!!!!
Amazing Part!!!!!!!!!😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
I dont know Shoba what destiny they have...thy cant stay together they cant live together...

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Posted: 12 years ago
dev is a jerk...jitna dadr usne geet ko diya he usse kahi jyada maan usko dadrd de k maare...mindblowing update ..really shobha u did a great job ..this is a outstanding ff 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 14

Maan entered his so-called room but today it was not all alone like it was to be. There he saw his Mother and Annie sitting next to his so-called wife who was lost looking somewhere else. it pained him for seeing her like this like it was not the same Geet whom he knew but next second her betrayal flashed inside his mind and he averted his gaze and without a word went away but he was unknown tat she was the one who was dying to see him like tat. It was just a day and she had come to know many things tat was happening in this Mansion. It was as if her whole life turned again after seven long years. she had got back everything yet her hands were empty. She looked up at her MIL and SIL who were just looking at the close door of the washroom when they heard Geet.

Geet: I need to stay alone.. can you please..

Shikha: geet beta… tum yeh..

Geet: please I need to stay alone..

Shikha could never ever think in her life tat the girl, their sweet Geet would ever turn like this. Geet, who never felt tired for calling her Mom and Mom today she did not even see her once. She stood and ran crying away from there while Annie ran behind her mother.

Maan who had seen his mother crying and running was hell angry on her and next he pulled her out of the bed holding her arm digging his nails shouting at her.

Maan: you know wat Ms. Handa.. or.. sorry. Mrs. MSK.. you will never change.. You will never ever change coz you are a blood sucking leach in our lives. Just a bloody leach.

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A month had passed by and there was no improvement on any sides but ya Geet was all getting to know wat happened in this all years. Each day she could get to know more and more and this led to her into further depression while her health started affecting. Everyone was tensed as nothing was going according to them and the other side Maan was getting wild with anger but his anger was limited to himself. Since the day of his marriage he did not speak to Geet nor did he bother about her and his nights were out of Mansion staying away from her in bars drinking and losing him in her hatred. This whole month he tried to search Sameera and Arjun but there was no clue about them. He tried searching her with the help of all her friends but there was not a single clue about them nor he knew anything about her family as he was always told tat her father traveled a lot due to overseas business and this frustrated him to the core and it took a further toll when he had the biggest fight with his family which resulted further problem for Geet.

Maan: Mom…your husband told me to marry her I did but anything more than this than its over.

Shikha: Maan.. don't you dare say a word more now. do you even realize tat she is your wife now and its your responsibility to see after her happiness and well being.

Maan: Correc it Mom.. not just wife.. a force full wife and wat did Dad think tat I would never know why he did this.

Raj: Its better you know Maan.. as wat you wanted it would have never happened and now its final tat you are taking her with you for the trip.

Maan: Ohh really and who are you to say so..

Dadima: Maan..

Maan: Bas kijiye Dadima. Its enough.. I had enough in this one month. You forced me for a relation which I never wanted, you forced me to stay in this house with her I stayed but not anymore.

Dadima: Relation.. is it just a relation for you Maan. She is your Geet, Maan…. your Geet..

Maan: My Geet.. she was never mine Dadima… she is tat person who took away everything from my life. My own Dad stopped talking with me, my own mother never cared about my pain., my own sister she hates me as she thinks I hurt her so called Geet Di… and my brother Vicky… just ask him Dadima when did he ever approach me as a brother but it was always as her best friend Geet Handa's best friend.

Raj: You deserved it Maan.. you deserve tat hatred from all of us.

Maan: I do Dad… I do deserve it and for tat reason you faked your heart attack and tied with with tat B****..

Before anyone could react Maan was slapped hard by Raj for the first time in his life.

Maan: Kyu Dad.. m I not right. Did not you fake a heart attack so tat you could get her in this house. Is it not tat you love tat girl more than your own son. Sach hain na Dad..

Raj: Yaa.. its true.. I love her more than you.. just not more than you but more than Vicky and Annie also. She is my daughter and she will get her love back. Do you get it.

Maan: Love.. ohh come on dad… why don't you say tat your never cared wat your son wants.. it was always her and her.

Raj: Ya… she is and will always be my priority Maan… and as far as you are concerned wat did you think tat I would ever let you to marry tat Sameera. Never Maan I would never give you tat permission.

Maan: so you think tat by tying me in this forced relation I will accept HER as my wife.. than m sorry Mr. Raj Singh Khuranna it will never be.. I hate her and will always hate her. she will pay Dad.. she will pay for wat she did.

Dadima: Than why don't you tell us Maan wat she did. Why don't you say wat she did so tat even we can know tat you were right.

Maan: Chodiye Dadima.. itna tho main jaan juka hoon ki… being a Khuranna blood none of you trust me. Being the son of Mr. Raj Singh Khuranna he never considers me as his priority than why will you ever believe my words. But I swear Dad.. she will not stay long here.

Shikha: Maan…. aisi koi galti mat karna ki tum zindagi bar regret karoge.. Don't do anything Maan.. it will destroy everything.. everything Maan.. sab kuch barbaad hoga.

Maan: Barbaad tho hoga Mom..

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Geet had heard everything from upstairs but she did not say a word but she was hell angry on Maan for speaking like tat with his parents. She never knew tat their fight would create such big wall between them. She wanted to clear everything and with this determination she though tat she will talk to Maan for the very first time after marriage. she saw Maan entering their room and quickly followed him and before he could go out from the room she locked it.

Geet: Maan.. I need to talk to you.

Maan ignored her and tried to move out of the room but she held his hand that he jerked very badly making her fall on the floor but Geet was quick to stable herself.

Geet: So you are scared of me Mr. Khuranna..

Tat made Maan to stop in his track.

Maan: scared.. come on Ms. Handa.. do you even know with whom you are talking.

Geet: Ohhh so you think tat I don't know who you are.. than fine.. you are just a cheat who forces yourself on girls. You know wat.. you say you love Sameera but than why do you get affected with my presence.

Maan: your presence …. Don't have high hopes Handa.. you very well know tat I hate you.

Geet: tats wat.. you hate me na.. than why don't you tell your family wat I did. Why don't you tell them tat I had relation with Armaan at the age of 15, why don't you tell them tat I do two timings and sleep with random boys..

Tat ignited Maan's anger and he slapped hard on her face. He pulled her by her hair and said.

Maan: Sleep… tats wat you do Geet. tats wat you know.. just to cheat people with your innocence but not anymore Geet not anymore. You know wat….this family is mine and don't even think tat you will be able to get them all for you.

Geet: family…. They hate you Maan they hate.. they don't even believe you as they will do wat I say.

Maan: you say.. its just tat they don't know your real face.. the moment they know tat you cheated me they will hate you. they will hate you to such an extent tat no one will want to see your face…

Geet: than why don't you tell. Go tell them Maan. tell them wat I did with you. just tell them.

Maan: I will Geet.. don't worry the day is very near.. and trust me tat day will be your last day here in my house… Khuranna Mansion..

Geet: why don't you say tat you fear tat none will believe you.

Maan: Believe.. I have enough proof to show them your real face Geet. Enough for them. You remember, college feast.. The day when you were drunk and next day, you were found in a hotel room with none other than Armaan.

Geet was shocked to hear it from him. how did he know tat I was drunk when he was not even there.

Maan: shocked Geet. don't underestimate me Geet, do you think tat I would leave such a great opportunity.

Geet: Maan.. listen to me.. aisa.. kuch nahi tha.. it was just tat I was drunk…

Maan: ohh really.. so it was just tat you both were in the room together na.. come on Geet you can fool Ridhima and others not me who has seen your real face.

Geet: enough Maan.. I had enough of you. everytime you blamed me.. seven years back you did the same thing and now too.. I swear Maan.. aapki Kasam.. aapki Mishti.. kabhi galat nahi thi..

Maan: don't… don't take Mishti's name.. you are not my Mishti.. meri Mishti.. mar juki.. she is dead.. she is dead the very same day when she betrayed me… do you get it..

Geet: nahi Maan.. aise nahi.. hain.. I never…

Maan: shut up.. just shut up.. yor b****.. you will pay for this.. you played with my feelings and now.. Dad ke saath milkar mujhe is shadi mein bandh liya.. but not any more Geet Handa.. not anymore.. its time for you to be out for my life.. and get ready for Divorce Mrs. GMSK… DIVORCE..

Geet: Maann…..

Maan: remember one thing if anyone of my family members come to know wat happened here than I swear.. I swear geet inhi haatho se tumhe zinda maar dunga…

Geet: tho maar dijiye… maar daliye hume Maan.. par itni nafrat.. I cant take this pain anymore maan… I cant…

Maan: 6 months and you are free from this pain Geet.. just 6 months more.

Precap: The cruel Destiny…… destroyed everything…….

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Now I want you all to finish the thread as will start the next phase of the story in new thread. So finish this off

Don't forget next update a big real surprise for you alll.

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Posted: 12 years ago
emotional, heart wrenching part
feel sad for geet
don't know when maan will know and understand her
I guess sameera is behind all mus
continue soon
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fabulous maan hatred is going to a greater extent
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Posted: 12 years ago




wow lovely painful update..oh god why tis destinty is playing with my maaneet like tis ahh, i hate u destinty i hate u..maan psl dont take dicession in angry and later u will regret , in sins pls maan, pls maan.. pls see ur misty with ur heart,... te way maan's family hating maan which push him to hate his geet to te core..who played with they life but i swear u my maan wont leave them..i love te update so much..
Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
i dont know what to say
di u have made maan a very brainless creature in thsi FF
he never thought anything just blamed everything on geet
that means he has never loved geet coz if u love anyoen u need to trust her but he didnt
now di if in future u make geet forgive him then i wont like it \
infact even if geet does forgive him i want maan nevr ever to coem in her life

contineu soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb part
wen maan knows truth
hating geet in peak now

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