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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
Wow super part Gisellu👍🏼 , oru pakkam Love FF (gisel FF) and mathe pakkam Horror FF (Shamz FF), it is so nice to read, you are all great⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Gisel!!!!!

This was fabtanstic!!!

Lol...Prabha jumping up and down kinda reminded me of myself, when I eat really spicy food I go jumping up and down saying "Chee Haa"

Deepa and Prabha scene reminded me of the scene from Something Something.

Good save from Tamil and Tulasi was hilarious today.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Praba is still not out of the shock. Deepa, "Vanga poi highwayla ethavuthu vandi varuthanu pakalam👏." Praba nods his head, still in dismay😆.

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Both of them shunder. Thulasi opens her eyes.
Both of them are startled. Sensing that Thulasi might scream. Tamil puts a hand on her mouth telling her through his eyes to be calm. With no light in the room, they tiptoe out. The moon casting an eerie glow on everything around them.
Thulasi, "Ippo enaga panurathu?"
Tamil, "Phone a kuda." He tries again. Still no network. "Cha. Enum network illa. Enga irukirom?Modha la ooruku oda na service provider a mathanum." and sits on the stairs leading to the porch.
Thulasi follows and sits next to him and lies on his shoulders, "Ena ga satham athu?"
Tamil, "En amma va irrukum!😲"
Thulasi, "Ena ga sollureinga?"
Tamil, "Ama, pei kathu nathu mathiriya illa?🤣" winks into the screen😉.(Wait a minute! Pei ya? Shammz Bangalore idea va nee thena kudutha?)
Just then they hear a loud cry😲.
Thulasi, "Yaaro abathila irukanga."
Tamil, "Nama la vida abathila yaaru iruppa?😆" getting up, "Poi pakalanum vaa."
Thulasi also gets up. By now the hail had stopped.
Both of them hold hands😳. Tamil switches on the torch on his phone and they start walking towards the sound. They can hear the sound of running water. They can see a silhouette. Tamil switches off the light from his mobile. They stop dead, not even daring to breath ( Ada Deepa vum Praba vum than, go meet them). The silhouette comes near them. Under the moonlight they can see, it is a wolf😲 !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
Thanks Gisel... very nice. Oru Vazhiya the hail stopped... But ippo Wolf aa😲?? lol
Hope TA/T and P/D meet soon😉.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg a wolf!!!!!! Cool imagination Gisel. Tamil's dialogues were funny!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb Gisel 👏👏👏👏 oottu motta romatic scenesum intha FFla than irrkkum pola.
Coke illa Thumbs up comedy super and Praba fainting also super TA and T mall scene sollikuta pogallam
they should include scene in the serial but not all the scenes 😆
nadathunga nadathunga
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
Gisel very well explained... good one.. Very interesting.. Hope TT/PD meet soon... Poor TT meeting wolf ippo.. 😕 Hope when they run from there they land up together with PD... 😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The wolf looks at them and snarls. They tighten their hold.
Thulasi whispers,"I love you, Tamil.😕" (Tamil a, ithu eppola irunthu?)
Tamil more shocked at Thulasi's statement than the wolf😆 whispers back, "Athu theriyum ma. Ippo ithu ta irunthu eppidi thappikirathu?"
Thulasi whispers, "Enaku nambikai illa." and turns to look at Tamil and without a warning pulls his collar and kisses him. (Really? Now?😕) . Tamil as shocked as he is, kisses back and hooks his arm around her waist bringing her closer to him. Thulasi wraps her arms around his neck😳.
The wolf looks at them, as baffled as we are and walks away🤣.

Praba and Deepa are holding hands and walking slowly😳. The night was eerie and the only sound coming from the dried leaves they are stamping on.
(Deepa! watch your step!)
Deepa tumbles over a tree branch over the ground and is about to fall forward, but Praba holds her in time, cuffing his arm around her waist. A moment passes in awkward silence. They hear a snarl😲. Deepa regains posture. Praba clears his throat, "Anga yaro irukanga" pointing to a silhoutte. (Not the wolf again please!) They move further. They see a couple kissing. They move even futher. Under the moonlight they see Tamil and Thulasi(Yikes! That is awkward). Deepa and Praba look at eachother and let go of their hands (Ada pavigala! Ithu ongalukai too much a illa?😆).
Praba takes his phone and plays a song, "Venam machan venam intha ponuga kadhalu..." Deepa looks at Praba in disbelief. Praba smiles sheepishly, "..Machan, athan..."😆 Deepa looks away and smiles (finally!😳). Tamil and Thulasi are taken aback and look towards the sound. When they see Praba and Deepa, they heave a sign of relief😕.
Tamil, "Inga iruntha oonai enga?" Praba, "Super a samalikireinga boss. Inga ena panureinga?" Tamil, "Yen antha kelviya nanga keka matam a? Nen ga rendu perum ena pannureinga?" and hits Praba's stomach playfully😛. Praba, "Oru chinna accident." Thulasi, "Ena achu?" as she holds Deepa😊. Praba, "Etho oru manga maandein naadu😆 roodutula vandiya neiruthi irukan." Tamil smiles sheepishly, "Athu nanthan. Car breakdown😆" Praba, "Oh! Sorry machan." and shakes hands with him. Tamil, "Seri vaanga elarum poi ethavuthu vaandi varruthanu pakkalam." 😊
It is dawning. They head towards the highway. Their good luck they see a car coming with tinted black windows👏. They try stopping it. The car crosses them and goes😡. Tamil and Praba are frustrated and look out for other cars. The car that crossed them comes in reverse😲😕. The butterfly doors open😎. Praba, Deepa and Thulasi climb in the back.(Wait! Shouldn't you see the driver first?😕) Tamil climbs in the front and puts on the seatbelt and says, "Thank you!" The driver says, "Ungaluku help pannama vera yaaru ku pannuvein?😕" The driver turns to look at Thulasi, winks, puts back her sunglasses and continues her conversation on her phone, "Suchi ma! Chennai airport ku than vanthutu irukein." Everyone looks baffled as Charu drives towards Chennai😲!

Happy Halloween😛!!!
FYI-Wolves don't attack humans if they don't run away😉!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
OMGGG CHARU VAAA??? 😲🤣🤣 Does it mean she hasnt changed a bit or??
WOW very nice Gisel.. Loved your FF a lot. It was a mix Thendral breeze. We could see anything, like romance, horror, comedy just everythingg.. 👏👏⭐️ Very goooddd... We will more of your FFss... Thanks for the lovely FF 👍🏼⭐️ Hope we can see part 2 of this FF... Hail Storm in Thendral 2 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

It was Superb Gisel! 🤗

Well written and ended beautifully with Charu in the climax🤣

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