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Pearl

@Pearl.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Thanks Gisel for Part 13 and 14... Beautifully written... 🤗

P/D romance is so beautifully build upon... So sweet to read this.. As Jeya said... CV's please read..😛

TAku irunthaalum lollu thaangala... Why is he talking about Charu?? Is he assuming or did he saw her😲😕??

Waiting for next part😃

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Shammu

@Shemmo

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Hahaha Charu vaa? 🤣 Superb TA, how I wish to see this scene on TV TA needs many beats, hope Thulasi gives him nicely 😆 Why vera veetla drinks eduthu drinking?? What if there is poison? 😕

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Gisel

@Gisel

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Poison a? 😲
It is alcohol! 😛

Edited by Gisel - 12 years ago

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JAYASHREE

@vjayam

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

oh gisel, what is this.. nitish's ideal..alcohol in coke bottle..rofl..

and of all the things to carefully talk, TA says this...looks like he is really worried abt the blr trip and abt T spotting the wrong person...

waiting...

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Smiles-20

@Smiles-20

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Lol oh wow just caught up with the parts I missed and wow its super!! What did Tulasi intake?

Ahem ahem Gisel, you write a romantic scene for Deepa and Prabha but not TT...lol...me waiting for something for TT.

I like the way you switch between sides.

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Gisel

@Gisel

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Deepa goes and sits on a rock, tired at the day's happenings. The josiyar's words echoes to her.

Praba, "Ena achu Deepa?"

Deepa, "Huh?..onum illanga"

Praba, "Hm..pasikitha?"

Deepa, "Huh? Illa. Ungaluku pasikutha? Dikeyla sapadu iruku."

Praba opens the dickey, "Ena koduvanthiruka?"

Deepa gets up, "Biryani" as she takes a lunch box.

Praba, "Wow! Super! Romba pasikithu. Thanks Deepa."

Deepa opens the lunch box and gives him a spoon.

Praba, "Ena Deepa ithu? Palaya sathaum?😕"

Deepa, "Illa ga. Ithu Ice biryani😛. Palaya sathathila vengayam, mulavaka elam potu. Solumbothei naku urala?😆"

Praba, "Ena Deepa ithu? Ippidi eimathitiya..." disappointed takes a bite.

Deepa, "Epdi iruku?" Praba keeps the lunch box on the car slowly savoring the taste, "Ah! Ah!"

Deepa, "Ena achu? Katha thinga Ena mirgam lan varapothunu theriyala😆."

Praba, "Thani...Thani...Mulaha...ah..." stamping his foot like a toddler😆.

Deepa, "Katha thinga!" Praba keeps on shouting, "Uh?" Deepa kisses him on his lips. Her eyes closed. His eyes open in shock😉. (Pakathila than river. Caru kula coke kudu irunthithu😛)

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Tamil, "Paru un vikal niniduchu.🥱"Thulasi, "Oh! Seri manchitein. Oru super dress.." siting on the bed and drinking from the coke bottle again😲, "Itho ithondu. Romba alaga irunthichu theriyuma."Tamil takes the bottle from her and keeps it aside, "Appo atha vangirkalam la.🥱"Thulasi, "Yaruku? Ungaluka😆?"Tamil trying to keep her steady, "Lavanya kolantheiku kuduthirkalam🤢." sits next to her.Thulasi looks at him angrily, "Po ya..ne elam...Po poi TV paru."Tamil, "Ena ma muniyama lan velile vara?😛"Thulasi again looks at him angrily and leans towards him looking at his lips. Tamil a little frightened leans back still sitting, "Vendam thulasi..." looks here and there for help😛.*Thunder*(Sorry pa! Athuka approm ena nadanthichunu theriyala😛. Camera shows the moon and the eerie forest. The bats pause while flying. The lightening stays still...😛)Both of them are lying on the bed. Thulasi is sleeping on his hands😳. Tamil, "Thulasi!" Thulasi, "Hm?"Tamil, "Nee kudichathu coke illa..." Thulasi, "Theriyum"Tamil, "Ana thums up.😲" Thulasi, "Theriyum😲" Tamil, "Huh?😆"Thulasi laughs, still eyes closed😆. Just then they hear a loud shriek😲.

Thodarum!

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JAYASHREE

@vjayam

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

wow...good..TA using terror-like trick to cure T's hiccups..he is aware of the halloween week i guess...

great downpour..glad it is only thumps up switched for cola or is it something i missed?

waiting for next...

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Shammu

@Shemmo

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Hahaha super Ice Briyani and TA plan for vikkal 🤣 Waitinggg 😛

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Gisel

@Gisel

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

hehe...when the drink smells different and Thulasi acts intoxicated, Tamil would have thought that Thulasi has thought that she is having alcohol and behaving like this but it is Thulasi's play all along...that is why Tamil is shocked when Thulasi says she knew it was thums up and not alcohol...romba confuse pannureina?

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Shammu

@Shemmo

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: Gisel
hehe...when the drink smells different and Thulasi acts intoxicated, Tamil would have thought that Thulasi has thought that she is having alcohol and behaving like this but it is Thulasi's play all along...that is why Tamil is shocked when Thulasi says she knew it was thums up and not alcohol...romba confuse pannureina?

Now its confirmed that im confused nu 😆

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