OS naksh:' our relation survived even this phase'

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Guys was feeling like to write something
so here im with naksh OS
sitaution is same what is going in show
All maheshwaris including akshara was in hospital and was broken from inside but she was standing like a pillar for whole house
g3 missing lalla call up akshara to ask when is she coming back .whole of singhanias in hall sitting on sofa
akshara:hello
g3:bahu kaab aarahai ho tum aur lalla tum dono ka bina ghar may maan nahi laagraha hai
akshara:maa
g3:sensing wrong with aksharas voice ask her kya hua
akshara:in broken voice say maa may abhi hospital may hu
g3:hospital...!! she speak out at bit loudly ..everyone is hall gets paniced
akshara:hah maa woh bauji ko heartattack aaya
g3:kya vishambar bhai sahab ko heart attack aaya ..everyone around listens to it per kaab bahu ..tum na bataya kyu nahi
akshara:maa ..woh sab itni jaaldi may hogaya .ghar phone kaarna ka mauka nahi mila
naitik:listning to this was cmplitly in shock
to him self:bauji ko heart attack .god akshara ki kya halat horahi hogi.mujhe abhi akshara ka pass jaana chahiya
g3:ask for hospital and say .bahu tum chinta maat kaaro hum sab abhi aarha hai
dadaji chalo hum sab ko hospital jaana chahiya chalo
g3 and bm:hah kuch zaruri saman laa leta hai ..hospital ka liya
dadaji theek hai jaaldi kaaro
naitik:rush to room to take his car keys and say aaplog shamashar ka saat aajayi may abhi nikkal ta hu
antra:got o naksh room and try to play a tactic saying naitik itni baadi baat hogai aur akshara na tumha phone nahi kiya..?
naitik:oh god antara .bhagwan ka liya chup hojao .bauji ko heartattack aaya akshara waha sab ko samal na ka jagah mujhe phone kaarti behti rehgi kya .saying this naitik leave and at door say ,aur hah antara tum hospitla maat aana akshara already bahut pareshan hai ..may nahi chahta ki tumha waha dekkar unha aur pareshani ho
antara:was burnt cmplitly hearing to it
HOSPITAL
duggu starts crying toh akshara take duggu away in to a other place
naitik comes to ICU meet up whole family and will be searcing for akshara around
naitik:akshara kaha hai .?
varsha:woh chikku roah raha toh .woh usha yahi kahi aas pass legai hogi.
naitik go around insearch of akshara .naitik finds akshara in balcony making duggu sleep
naitik go to akshara who was turned other side ..and keep his hand on akshara's shoulder
akshara who was standing like a pillar broke out at naitiks touch .and turn towards naitik with tear full eyes
naitik:seeing akshara's postion just hugg her and say akshara sab theek hojayega ..bauji ko kuch nahi hoga aap filkkar maat kijeya
soon akshara come in her senses and move away from naitik and walk away from thr and naitik get speechless
naksh along with whole maheshwaris stanidng near ICU ..singhanaiya's and kk antara come thr
thy meet up and naitik gets pissed up .seeing antara and was able to see ki akshara was geting double upset seeing her around
akshara:brings up tea for everyone and will be serving them .and reach naitik with a glass for him
naksh see each other naitik found something unusal in akshara's eye and her look
naksh:standing to the opposite walls
😳 khamoshi ki bhasha😳
without any lip moment naksh start talking language of eyes
naitik:akshara aapki aankha mujhe yuh ajnaabi ki tarha kyu dekhrahi hai
akshara:kyunki may yeh naitik sa anjaan hu .aap ho kaun..?
naitik:akshara..!! "give a what are u saying walla expression"
akshara:hah naitik ..may is naitik ko nahi jaanti .peechla two din may joh may na saab dekha .jisha maina dekha woh mera naitik hai hi nahi.aapko koi andaaza bhi hai ki aapna mera say kya kya kaha ..
naitik:aapse toh baat kaarna bekkar hai and move away

g3:may lalla koh ghar leejati hu .yaha khud taang hoga aur tumha bhi
dadi:hah ..aur abhi koi vishambhar sa mil bhi nahi sakta toh .aap loog ghar hi chale jaaya
g3:hah bahu tum yahi rehjao
akhsra:ji maa ..
g3:tum khana aur saman ki fikkar maat kaaro may ghar sa bhija dungi
naitik:aaya maa
akshara:dint want to but her heart was shouting shouting saying ki ":naitik aap please rukkh jaaiya mujhe aapki sabsa zyada zarurat hai "
akshara turn around for taking water and serve rajshree.by the time she faced front she found naitik standing infront him
akshara :unknowingly got a gentle smile on face ,which broke in seconds
it was geting night
akshara:varsaha tum maa ko lekkar ghar jau may yaha rukh thi hu
all make many refuses
varsha:theek hai per tu yaha akkili kaisa rukha gi
before akshara uttering a word naitik say out ki akshara akkali kyu may yaha rukh tha hu unka saat
night was passing ..naksh were together but not uttering a word.akshara was sitting over a chair and naitik was standing infront of akshara
seeing seeing akshara fell a sleep and her head was going to fall apart to which naitik came and sat beside akshara and gave her his shoulder
leading to a bit cold akshara cuddeled around naitiks hand titly and go for unbrakeable sleep
night was passing and naitik to fell a sleep ..
akshara was sleeping with head on naitik's shoulder and hands cuddeled around naitiks hand .and naitik was leaning over akshara's head and caught her hand and fell a sleep
quite early morning akshara woke up and without sense moved her head which lead naitik to rest over akshara's shoulder
akshara wanted to move away but seeing naitik in deep sleep she dint feel to wake him up .and soon she fell in a sleep again
MORNING...!!
dadi and varsha come to hospital seeing naksh in deep sleep cheerish follwoed by antara
antara:seeing them such away could take it go to them and shout of guys its morning
naksh wake up with jerk .seeing her morning morning both get upset akshara just get up and walk away
seeing naksh reaction dadi was able to sense that things are not well with them
dadi:jaamisa aap ghar chalajaya ..aapko office bhi jaana hoga na
naitik:nahi ,dadi ..woh
antara:interrupt and say naitik tum bol raha thai na tumhari aaj important meeting hai
dadi:jaamisa aap chala jaaiya ..may hu varsha hai .shaurya bhi abhi aata hoga
saying some work kk move out with naitik
naitik:was seeing around for akshara .
dadi:kya hua jamisa akshara ko dhud rahai ho
naitik:hah dadi .unhai bolke chala jaata hu
dadi:aap fikkar maat ki jiya may usha bata dungi
akshara standing other side of wall drentchout whch she see naitik moving out with antara
dadi observes this and talk with akshara make her understand

whole of mahashwaris come over to hospital .
akshara was send to house to freshup and change .
IT was afternoon
naitik comes to hospital to see vish
doctors say he is recovering with a great speed
naitik ask around for akshara .to whcih dadi say she has gone to house to rest .naitik gets sad
varsha:may toh ananya ka saman ghar hi bhul gaayi abhi jaakar laana hoga
dadi:tum kiska saat jaogi
naitik:bhabhi may jaakar la aata hu na
varsha:okay
KITCHEN
akshara was cooking and catching over her head bcozz of pain,seeing this naitik go near akshara and offer her a tablet
akshara:gets shocked seeing naitik all of sudden .but refuses to take tablet ..
naitik:la lijiya na akshara aapka saar itna dukh raha hai .
akshara:mujhe nahi leni koi bhi tablet
naitik:akshara aapna saat saat mujhe bhi taaklif pohancha rahi hai
akshara:may aaapko taaklif de rahi hu
naitik:akshara dard aapko hota hai aur taaklif mujhe hothi hai
akshara:acha.?? saying this akshara walk over the kitchen
akshara was going outside suddenly she hears AKSHARA..!! in tearful and painfull voice .when she turn around she finds naitik on knee's with tear full eyes
akshara:gets drenched seeing naitik like this..akshara take steps back ,hit a wall and start crying.
naksh crying over for each other ..crazyly ..yet seeing naitik getting in more tears .akshara run to him ,get on knee and hugg naitik
naksh hugged eachother to the titest and started crying for eachother .
naitik:im sorry akshara very very sorry .
akshara:im sorry naitik .
both come out of each other
naitik:im sorry akshara ..pata nahi mujhe kya hogaya tha ..may aapka ka saat aapka saat aisa kaisa behave kaarsakta tha..i hate myself for that
akshara na chata hua bhi may na aapki zindagi ki saab sa baadi dho gaaltiya wapis dohraya
pehli sneha ki tarha antara ki baat nahi baataya aur dussri .wapis mera ahem mera ego humara pyaar ka aadahai aagaya
im sorry akshara may jaanta hu .ek sorry say kuch nahi go ..meri gaalti maafi ka laayak nahi hai .phir bhi mujhe maaf kaardijiya mujhe aapna lijiya
akshara:im sorry naitik .mujhe us din aapa bewajah nahi chilana chahiya tha..mujhe aapki puri baat acha sa sunna chahiya tha im sorry
naitik:nahi akshara aapko pura right hai ..mujper chilla na ka ..mujhe sawal kaarna ka ..aapki koi koi gaalti nahi im sorry..akshara aapka bina mera jeewan ka koi aarth nahi hai ..please akshara mujhe maaf kaardijiya
akshara:hugg niatik and say bas naitik bas ..rona band kijiya ..may aapsa aur naraz nahi hu
naitik:thank u akshara i loveee u ..
akshara: i love u too
naitik:akshara abhi humha hospital chalna hoga ..per hum is baara may zarur baat kaarenga kaafi baata abhi hona baaki hai
akshara:kiss naitik and with wet eyes say hah naitik hum zarur baat kaarenga...!!!

Edited by bebo. - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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ufff...!!! finally done with it quite a big one na hope i was able to take u guys to the naksh land
must be hell tired with discussion on forum na ..hope OS gave u a sort of relief
guys i know we are not going to get such sort of patch up in show but as in now all are quite chilled after spoilers lets drool over this OS
imagin kaarna may kya jaa raha hai ..zyada sa zyada kya hoga ek aur popat ..aur hum naksh fans ko popat kaarwana ki aadat si hogai hai ..
anyways guys i wnt naksh patch up to be in such away hope u all liked it
do share ur view 😊😃
Edited by bebo. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yayy me 1st 🥳

your OS was ❤️

either i read your os or threads , i always feel good bec dey r always full of postivity 🤗

subah se statistics padh padh ke i was very bored , but your OS made me live again 😃

in short u r 🤗 ❤️

i had a suggestion 4 u
it would b grt if u write even d next part of d os

i mean dat in d next part u can portray d way dat how aksh came to know abt antatra's nautanki and how naksh together taught kk a lesson 😉

p.s : i read your OS for thrice 😳

three cheers 4 u 🤗
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Edited by shyamal_hina.di - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aweasome Sonali...hope hope...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome OS:)
kash simliar to ur OS could be shown anyways i loved ur OS ..
thanx for the pm:)
Edited by Naksh_charming - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome sonali...🤗...i know it's not possible...but still i hope we get such scenes in the show😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i hope its cpy pasted in the show :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Maha_Naksh4ever

aweasome Sonali...hope hope...😆

it is the only thing we can do 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shruthi.sweety

awesome sonali...🤗...i know it's not possible...but still i hope we get such scenes in the show😃

i would wish isha bhi aur too much walla patch up ho 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its awesome...loved reading it...!!

I really wish we get something like this in show too...!!

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