ARSHIFF:IS HE REALLY MY ROMEAO? TESER PG-17 11/1

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Posted: 12 years ago
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IS HE REALLY MY ROMEO??

NOTE-THIS FF IS A JOINT VENTURE OF ME AND diva KNOWN AS babydevil

WE BOTH WILL BE WRITING THIS IN CALLOBORATION...

SOOO HERE U GOOO


{PROLOGUE}

~~~~~LONDON~~~~~

Khushi-hum hai rahi pyaar ke fir milenge chalet chalet'. Chalo bhaiya chalet hai'''''

She sat in her car and started driving towards her home''..

Then she saw a man stanting on the edge of the brigde with a bottle in his hand

And trying to jump she got out of her car and started towards him shouting

Khushi-ooo''' bhaiya'suno marna hai kya abe gadhe ke bache'. Sun ooo bhaisahab''.

Khushi got hold of his hand and then pushed him down from the bridge then she asked him

Khushi-oye who r u and y r y suisiding''????

Boy-b'coz I wanna die'.. saying tat he fainted due to acess hangover'

Khushi-abe mote kitna bhari hai'

She somehow managed to put him in the car and drove to her bunglow..


then she took hi to her room and settled him on the bed and then changed and then slept'..

on her side b'coz she wants a sleep on her bed only''.

~~~MORNING~~~~

Boy wakes up and shouts

boy-ahhh''..

khushi wakes up she rubs her eyes

khushi-wat happened to u '''.

Boy-wat I am doing here

Khushi-I raped you'..

Boy-wat'''

Khushi-how can I rape u budhu who toh I saved u' u were suiciding''..

Boy-ohh r u mad'''..

Khushi-koi shak'

Boy-yes u must be mad''

Khushi-waise wats ur name

Boy-arnav.. arnav singh raizada'.

KHUSHI-OK ARNAV... THE BUISNESSMEN

ARNAV-RITE...

KHUSHI-OK...

Khushi-u goo and get freshanup then I'll see wat to do wid u

Arnav-soryy.. wat u said..

Khushi-gooo

Arnav was going to enter washroom khushi stopped him and said

Khushi-oye not this one this is mine I'lll show u other wasroom '.actually dis is my personal bathroom

Arnav-ok'..

Khushi goes to the cupboard'''..

Khushi-take these clothes and get changed

Arnav-boys clothes in ur wordrobe

Khushi-yaaa they were my husbands..

Arnav-husband????

Khushi-will tell u later''''

After 1 hour they met at breakfast table'

Khushi-coffe''

Arnav-ok'''..

She made coffe and some toast

Arnav-u said ur husband'. Where is he'''..

Khushi-he is wid his girlfrnd.. in her house

Arnav-and u don't have any prob'

Khushi-why would I have''. Its his life waise bhi our marriage was a deal'

Arnav-deal????

Khushi-first u tell why u were trying to do suicide'..

Arnav-nothing my grlfrnd,work and dad

Khushi-elobarate'

Arnav-just fed up with life

Khushi-like me

Arnav-I don't know

Khushi-let us be frnds as our condition is same

Arnav-ok'''

Arnav-challo bye'''' I'lll calll u

Khushi-number toh le le arnav'

Arnav-oh ya'..

Then they exchanged numbers''.


{PROLOGUE}

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FromTheAshes thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
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{index}
chapter 1 pg-9
teaser pg-17
Edited by hrideyy - 12 years ago
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intresting con soon thanks for pm
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itz lovely yaar 😛
Edited by crizal - 12 years ago
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wow hrideyy . .after long i came to your post!
and as usual,a fresh and eye catching concept by you..
Diva,thanks for the pm ya. .
good luck to both,am i waiting. .
pm me ha. .i have both you on my buddy list!😊
Edited by trivedishraddha - 12 years ago
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very different and interesting cont soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting concept..
Khushi is married and Arnav tried to suicide??
Waiting for the next part...XD
Thanks for the PM...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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*un(.)*😉

😆 i just read the pr0louge and
@diva...i read ur quote too... 😃 😆
hmmm so the c0ver name is "IS HE REALLY MY ROMEO?"
hmmm...i like this topic... :)
u know a different c0ncept... :)
I w0nder how you c0me up with such unique ideas... :) 👏

okie now back to the st0ry...!
the st0ry is quite unique... :) u know i alwayz wanted to read a FF like this one and i have f0und 1... :)
u know with khushi's character being like this...its fun to read it... :)
every word seems to have such a chill, like butter slipping down a hot slice of bread... :)
A.M.A.Z.I.N.G!!!! :)
and I must say that the banglow is jus beautiful...
and Arnav wanted to die...hmmm... :)
now thats interesting...and moreover he has a gf..now thats even more interesting...eeeksss... =)
i'm shooo excited... :)
and khushi, too, fed up with her life...that's nice...!
and khushi married... :O :O :O
but phewww that's only a 'deal'...!
that means NO LOVE b/w 'em... :) hehe 😈
and yaaayyy they exchanged their numbers...WOW
WOW
WOW
WOW
thats sooo interesting... :)
hats off to both of you...!! =)
update the other part s0on or else...😈! (or else u wont get a nice wala comment other time! :P)
I have never read such type of story so actually i will rate this 5-stars... ***** :))
Marvelous j0b is d0ne by u both...!! :)
keep updating even m0re interesting parts... :)
will be waiting for ur next update... :)
and keep r0cking gurlz... :))

P.S: you elaborate each and everything very well... :) jus amazing...! :) hats off to u both... :)

Bye bye...c ya later...!
xoxo
Edited by cutelittleangel - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I guess I going to get a quiet nice comment !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey nice start👏
its interesting😃
continue soon😳

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