An ArHi Fairy Tale: Completed - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago
A very different story .. interesting 😳

Awesomely written .. Continue soon 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ok i am in love this fairy tale.. Already!!
i love fairy tales... prince, princess, evil step mom, devil, magic, love, romance and happy endings!! awww...😃😳

pleeejjj update soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely start sweetie !! Waiting for more 😃 Do update soon hun ! 😳 Thank you so much for the PM hun 🤗 Sorry for the late reply dear,been having Internet probs !😳
Edited by -sweetgal19- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Removed.

No, I do not have a blog.

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I was looking for things to criticize

I seriously was as you asked me to

I couldn't find anything😭

I swear I didn't

the critic in me is crying in pain

great work Saiyu

ummmah

this update was perfect

Loved khushi and also Arnav😃

You rock👏

hugs
Edited by SamiyaIPKKND - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was so cute

Fierce in the night and awkward in the morning ? I thought what? I missed a chapter 😆
He he 😛

He's being so sweet with her...He doesn't even know her...
She cooked for him, he spent all the money he had for her dress and the last part...

Loved everything in this update...Honest opinion...No dragging at all ...It was truly lovely :)

Well, he called her a princess sarcastically..Waiting to see what happens when he'll really know she's one and vice versa..I'm sure he's a prince too...This is a fairy tale after all :D 😃


Aww...You dedicated the chapter to me 😃
Thank you so much Saiyu...
Love you so much 🤗


Edited by asrcraze - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res.


*EDIT*

i am actually blank😕 samajh nahi arahi ke kia likhun abt the update😕

honestly it was really nice, showed that ARNAV cares for her deeply, about her safety and she finds him attractive 😳 lekin describing in one simple word is difficult i found it sweet, nyc and and and waqayee i dont how to put it in words. hope u forgive me for my speechless-ness

take care and update soOn😊
Edited by smarty94 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
So beautiful...pretty and adorable..i can very well picturise both as barun nd sanaya...
Prince nd princess...loved it..keep updating...
Edited by tanvia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res.. glad I came on time.. aha

...

Saiyu, I can totally picturize this scene.. it is truly a fairytale..
Khushi is lucky to have bumped into him and made her comfortable..
I would love this guy if he was real, who hardly knows me but protects and worry about me..
And admits I'm beautiful..*sigh*

Err not fair .. I wish This was real.. its better to live in a world of dreams..<3 aha..

Love it!!
Edited by .._sonii_.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Its a very new story... Really like a
fairy tale
i just read this n love to read more for this i want u to pm me...
buddy me plzzz
thank u...

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