An ArHi Fairy Tale: Completed

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arnavbarun

@arnavbarun

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#171

LOVED IT!!!!

I thought I was over my childhood fascination and addiction of fairy tales!!! It was long since I read a fairy tale and when I read it I realized that the little girl in me was still not over it...

Its beautifully written!!! I could actually visualize it like a Disney Animation!!! It has a glimpse of everything from Cinderella to Aladdin( Imagine arnav as alladin in the market place)

Thanks for reviving my interest in fairy tales because it gives us hope...Even i used to dream of Prince Charming after reading those tales but what I loved most was the feel that no matter how many problems we face we will surely reacg our"happily ever after...'

plz update soon

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ipkknd_hazel

@ipkknd_hazel

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#172

im lost for words...reaally! 😳

the last bit showed how much he cared for her... i love such sudden outburst dialogues!! 😳

lovedd it! <3 <3

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Jalebi Jane

@JalebiJane

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#173

A delight to read.

Mind you---Any story which contains an Arnav speaking the below line is going to make me read further. Yup, I'm easy that way!

"Thora dard hoga" Saying that, he twisted her ankle which made her grip his shoulder in pain.

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Flame.

@Flame.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#174

Oh God! This is so damn cute. Dammit! I love this.

The last part was the best. Him yelling at her madly and Khushi suddenly hugging him. 'Take me home'. Aww my Khushi darling.

Its amazing and I want you to continue super soon. Pleaseee

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NothingLasts

@NothingLasts

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#175

I was reliving Jasmine and Aladdin, but I like your version better! 😉

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gangsu

@gangsu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#176

u knw ven ever i read ur name RASGULLA i alwaz feel lik eatin it yummy

nw cumin 2 d story arnav is already possesive abt khushi even dough he met her only yesterda dat 2 at ni8

1 qst is arnav just a common man of khushi's kingdom den vhy did u say prince??????????????😕

i luv fary tale stories till nw n ven ever i get tym i alwaz try to read fary tal stories

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Achu

@arshy4ever

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#177

Sweety...You have done an excellent job dear...👏👏👏

I was not that much interested when you came with the first pat...But the 2nd part totally dragged me into your fairy world....

Not only the concept ,but your writing style also beautiful... I would like to quote these from your update...

"He moved a little and blinking a few times he sat up." Yup this is the typical way of wake up from sleep...I'm happy that you were even able to catch such a tiny thing to make your creation sparkle brilliantly...

"By the time they were in market again, it was crowded. She was getting uncomfortable by all the pushing. Soon he wrapped his arm around her waist, pulled her close and walked with her. She liked this, the feel of his body pressed close to hers. They continued walking thus." I felt this was the most beautiful scene in this update...

"She ran first with a confidence that she will find him, then she ran hoping that she would find him, then she ran panicking what if she didn't find him and finally she ran praying that he would find her." You literally made me cry...😭

Awesome 👏👏...Keep up this work darling... I know you are a very much talented writer⭐️...

Edited by arshy4ever - 12 years ago