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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
lovely update.
so they are gonna work together gr8.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Maan is such a despo

awesome

pls try to give a longer update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

Part 5

"maine kaha na I don't like such places" maan cribbed as he got down the car. Well I forgot to say…maan and yash bot a car together with the money they saved from their work every month.

"stop cribbing maan…u will definetly love this place soon" yash said as he got down from the driving seat and walked to back to open door for pari.

"I dunno why u don't like this place maan…see its fun all around…loud music and dance" geet said as she got down the car and walked to maan.

"exactly….loud music" maan said making face.

"maaan" both yash and geet said.

"ok fine….lets go in" maan said and all the four walked in.

The four made their way towards a table and sat.

"why are u ppl sitting?" pari asked.

"then what should we do?" maan asked.

"bring us drinks" pari smiled.

"ok" maan said and both got up to bring drinks while geet and pari enjoyed music watching the people on dance floor.

"pari" geet called pari who is looking at dance floor.

Pari turned to geet "haan geet?"

"I have an idea" geet said.

"what?" pari asked.

Geet explained her idea and pari chirped excitedly. They turned and saw maan and yash holding the drinks and coming back.

"lets go" geet said and both stood and left from there.

Maan and yash came to the table and saw they both were missed.

"now where did they go?" maan said.

"there" yash poined towards the dance floor looking shocked and maan turned and was equally shocked.

The music started and lights became dull….a spot light was on a girl who's back is facing them and she started swinging her hips and hands for the music….

Gopiyon sang ghoome Kanhaiya
Raas rachaiya Ragha na jaaye re
Abb saanwra na bhaaye


She turned around and maan literally dropped his jaws seeing geets steps.

She started walking frond in a rhythm and dancing to the tune….

Radha on the dance floor
Radha likes to party
Radha likes to move that sexy Radha body (x2)

Panghat pe aake saiyyan marode baiyaan
And everybody crazy on Radha
Chhedde hai humka daiyaan bairi Kanhaiya
And everybody crazy on Radha
Hoga woh lakhon dil ka chor
Humka toh laage woh
Hua hai aise baawla jo kehta jaaye:



Geet came towards yash and pulled him to the dance floor while maan looked at them wide eyes….

Yash smiled too started to dance with her….

"O Radha teri Chunri
O Radha tera Jhalla
O Radha teri natkhat najariya
O Radha tera jhumka
O Radha tera thumka
O peechhe peechhe saari nagariya" (x2)



Yash pulled geet along with him while pari came from behind and pushed yash playfully and yash tuned to her and danced with her while geet again came down and danced around maan….

Radha on the dance floor
Radha likes to party
Radha likes to move that sexy Radha body (x2)

O o...
Maathe pe pankh more
Kehte hain makhan-chor
Bajaye bansuri
Bada aaya chitt-chor
(But Radha wants more)
Dhoondungi charon aur milega koi aur
Dungi main haathon me mere dil ki ye dor
(Cuz Radha wants more)


She held maan's hand and pulled him from her right to left and then left to write while maan smiled at her…..maan caught geet's hand and turned her aroung and pulled her into his arms and sang…

O Radha Radha bholi deewani hai
O Radha Radha do pal jawani hai
O Radha ko sambhalo koi isey bata do
Ki milega na koi Sanwariya

Maan smiled and dance with her while yash came and pulled geet to him and both danced with her on her ether side…

O Radha teri Chunri
O Radha tera Jhalla
O Radha teri natkhat najariya
O Radha tera jhumka
O Radha tera thumka
O peechhe peechhe saari nagariya


Pari soon joined then and all the 4 danced to the beats….

Radha on the dance floor
Radha likes to party
Radha likes to move that sexy Radha body (x2)


Even after the song stopped and also the next song started and the next and the next all the four danced and danced till they were out of breath.

After a long time they finally came out of the dance floor all laughing and sat with their drinks.

"that was awesome isn't it" geet said.

"yes….u r an awesome dancer" maan said.

"I enjoyed a lot…I loved it yash" pari said excitedly.

"me too" yash said.

"I think we should leave now" maan said.

"ya….i should join office 2mmorrow…" geet said.

"lets go then….we will drop u home pari" yash sid.

All the four got up and left in their car. Maan is in the driving seat and geet beside him while yash and pari in the back seat.

They reached pari's house and pari and yash got down.

They both walked a few steps and yash hugged pari.

Maan and geet looked at them and maan switched off the engine to give them sometime.

As maan turned to geet he saw her staring at him. Again her eyes…they are speaking a lot. If he is not wrong he is seeing love in her eyes.

He started at her and felt an unknown pull towards her…..they both stared and stared and maan moved towards her. she looked at him smiling.

Maan raised his hand and tuck the hair falling on her face behind her ear and she smiled even more. He came more close to her that he can feel her breath. He thought o close the distance but stopped looking at her.

As if geet understood she smiled at him and came close and pecked his lips he instantly pulled geet by holding her face and kissed her on her lips while geet held his hair and pulled him close.

Maan deepened the kiss and they both kissed until their lost their breath.

Yash after bidding goodbye to pari came back and saw maan and geet kissing he just turned aroung giving them space but they dint stop for long time so yash knocked on the window and maan and geet came back to senses.

Geet blushed while maan looked embarssed.

Yash sat in and maan drove to the apartment.

Geet got down quickly and ran to her flat while maan and yash walked silently to their flat.

Yash closed the door and walked to maan.

"maan whe are u going to propose her?" yash asked.

"I don't know yash…I am scared" maan said.

"scared of what?" yash asked.

"what if she rejects me….what happens to our friendship. What if she thinks me wrong?" maan asked.

"nothing like that will happen maan" yash said.

"how can u say so yash" maan asked.

"today….by today….i mean the kiss" yash said.

"she is drunk yash" maan said.

"but you r not" yash said.

"yes…that's y I m feeling guilty" maan said.

"don't…..maan look at her once…..cant u see love in her eyes? " yash asked.

"u observed?" maan said excitedly.

"u observed her eyes yash? They r speaking na" maan said as a kid.

Yash smiled at him " I think even she likes u maan….look how she blushed today….how she ran away to her flat….just try maan….speak to her"

Maan smiled at him and nodded "soon…I will try to do something….something special"

Precap: love date

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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
part 5
nice part...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
awww bless he sure does sounds excited over the prospect that she too likes him well loves him
and they kissed even if she was drunk i think she wanted to kiss him
yash is right dude take chance and confess
you never know she might just say yes
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
awesome SS..

read all 5 parts in 1 go..

superb plot..

cont. soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Loved the update a lot...
maan kissed geet.. i hope she remembers their kiss...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
ohhh a hot kiss.. maan propose.. cont soon hun.. awesome part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59

Part 6

Files in one hand and camera in other hand….maan ran across in the hall taking his bag out and placing his camera and file in it and he ran back to the dinning table and took the sandwich and stuffing it in his mouth he ran back to his bed room. He picked up his id card from the table beside his bed and ran back to hall and collided with yash.

"oh man why are u running" yash said as he stumbled back and controlled himself from falling.

"sorry" maan said in hurry and ran to the door.

"hey wait….why are u in hurry? We still had and hour….geet will knock after an hour and we can go together as usual" yash said.

After the day geet joined maan's office the three started going to office together and also returning.

"no yash today I m not coming with u people….u carry on…." Maan said and again turned back "oy ya listen…I am not coming to office today"

"maan….whats going on…..u r leaving an hour before but saying u will come late to office?...wait" yash held maan by collar and pulled him inside as maan tried to sneak out of the flat.

"what?" maan asked.

"my answers…." Yash said

Before maan could speak anything yash said "u r planning something aren't you?" yash asked excitedly.

"plan? What plan and about what?" maan asked confused.

"what?" yash asked confused.

"yash I dunno what u r speaking about." Maan said.

"I m speaking about u and geet…..i thought today u r planning to propose her." yash said.

"oh…but yash I m going to Bandra to capture some photos of my new assignment" maan said.

"u never change man….ahh forget it….go…..go and take ur photos." Yash said irritatedly.

"yash understand na" maan said.

"what should I understand….its a month now u said u will plan "something special"…and u didi nothing till now" yash said.

"yash u know na I tried to say few times" maan said.

"ya ya…keeping a flower in her bag…..bringing coffee for her daily even before she ask….taking her pics…..pasting then to ur wall…..watching her 24x7….and when she caught u u just turn away giving ur stupid silly smile….." yash said.

"but.." maan tried to say but yash cut him and spoke "girls do these things maan….u r a man…..behave like a man"

"I will do something" maan said.

"that something will never happen" yash said.

"yash plz….i said I will…this is not the time…I had work…..see u in the evening bye" maan left before yash could speak further.

Yash sighed and went back to his room.

All the day went well for maan doing his assignment except the fact that he missed geet badly…..one complete day he dint even see her face…..not even in the morning while watering the plants….. its already 6.30 yash and geet would have left to flat…..maan's work had completed and he packed his cam and took a taxi. He left his car for yash and geet today.

Maan sat in the taxi and leaned back on the seat relaxing when his phone rang.

He looked at his phone and it displayed geet's name, an instant smile formed on his lips. He answered the call.

"maan" geet's voice made him forget all his tiredness and smile is constant.

"haan geet bolo" maan said softly.

"maan kaha ho tum?" geet's voice was filled with panic

Shiver ran down in maan "kya hua geet?" maan asked fearing what happen.

"maan pehle yeh batav kaha ho tum?" geet's voice was making maan so scaring.

"I m going back home….taxi mein hoon" maan said.

"maan turn back the taxi and come to juhu beach" geet said.

"but why geet….what happen?" maan asked confused.

"quickly maan its emergency come quick" geet replied panicking.

"ok ok don't panic I will be there in few minutes" maan said and geet hung the call.

Maan asked the diver to turn to juhu beach.



ok ok i know small update

but i promiss i will give a another one 2mmorrow...trust me.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Yuppie me first.

BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.

Amazing

Maan hell busy wid work.
Oh he is doing all girly stuff like chupke
Chupke seeing his luv n impressing her.
But that's cute.

Geet calling Maan urgently.
I think she planned to surprise him
N propose him.
Joh Geet ko karna chahiye woh Maan
Kar raha hai aur jo Maan ko karna chahiye
Woh Geet karti hai. Lol

Their relation is unique.

Continue soon.

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