The Ultimate Confession (SS)updated PT3 pg8 23nov.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys, I am Priya. Its my First Independent post in this forum. I was initially a hard core MaanEet fan which i am now too. But this show has captured my special attention due to its beautiful track n DD's lovely charm n Vivian's love that i harbored from the PKYEK days.

Hope u'll except me here as a friend.

Here is an FF to mark my entry officially in this forum.

now without much ado heres the FF...

the FF is dedicated to my three I-F mates as well as hard core Vivian lovers: Radt, Mariam and Charu. Hope u'll like it. *Fingers-crossed*😆


TheUltimate Confession


Sometimes all the mortal riches of the world seems like a sham in comparison to the immortal relations. It's a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in possession of good fortune must be in a want of partner, a person who he can love, with whom he can share his feelings, his sorrows his joys. The one who understands him, cares for him. But sometimes all such a man gets is fraud in relationships and then he closes all doors of his heart, not because he starts hating everybody but so because he starts suspecting his fate and such a man soon becomes prone to all the rudeness and hatred which he gets in life. Can he be blamed for returning it to the world?

Rishabh Kundra, RK for public who was well privileged, universally admired and ultimately desired, was among such men.

Someone desired him for his money and fame; somebody admired him for his handsome looks.

Did anyone knew the real RK? Not even Bittu ji even after being with him for so many years he still didn't know the real RK.


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Though the world seems heavenly, sometimes it lies in the arms of the one you love. But sometimes Love is madness especially for the one who loves someone who is drastically out of reach.

Madhu was a girl of bizarre inclination towards such a man. But she was also well versed with reality and thus her feet always remained on ground, but her love for the forbidden star of the sky never seemed to diminish.


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Love is a miracle that not only happens to those who believe but also to those who have lost all hopes.

This is a story of a simple girl and a mega superstar, and their extraordinary life.


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This was just a short Intro, Will b up with the opening part tomorrow!

Till then sleep well.

Do press the LIKE button and Do comment.

Love.P




Index

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Part 1

Part 2

Part 3






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Posted: 12 years ago
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I would have been sleeping by now had you not been this posti and come earlier!
*complains, complains*
But how could I without reading one of my bestest friend'sâ˜ș FF on my favourite-most couple!???
And, not in vain!đŸ„ł
Knowing how awesomely awesome you put the simplest of thoughts an always knowing how to express..
it was beautiful Priyu!👏
Update tomorrow itself! SOONISH! Do you get it!??😳
RK Style mein: Tumhare paas do options hain.. Update karo.. Ya Update Karo!😆
Cannot wait!!😳
And.. Do make an Index for all the chapters that you're gonna add..😉 it'll make it easier for me n evryone else to read and re-read!😉
The title... it makes my expectations soar further HIGHER!!!!!!!!
*squeals*
*happy baby claps*

Edited by radt - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved the intro ⭐ đŸ‘đŸŒ
Edited by .Priya2000. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW!! Awesome start!!
Pls add me to the pm list :)
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Aray wah casper .. Tussi to cha gaye ho ...
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Awsm start.Update soon nd add me to the pm list
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it
Plij continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Replies.


Thank-you everyone for the overwhelming response. I am so happy that you'll liked the intro so much.


Radz : Can I Thank-You enough for supporting me in all thick n thins of life. Thankyou so much for backing me always and encouraging me with beautiful comments.

U don't know How much they help me. they act as my fuel. Always be my best critic. and tell me where i should improve. Love you.


Priya2000: Thnkyou so muchh dearo...<3


Todayzstar: Thnkyou =)


TheDarkKnight: Will add you asap! =)


crazyforDD: Thnkyou soo much =))


DANGG: ohh... that's so sweet of you.


Sanu3108: my MaanEet pankha. Love you... sachh bata.. theek hai na?


Monami_50: thankyou so much.. will add you ASAP


Snehamaanvirmaan: aww thankyou. updated!


Richa13: done!



Love.Priya

Edited by PriU - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The Ultimate Confession

Hello guys, here is the opening part as promised. Hope you'll like it.

Part One.

"Do the actors really have a very desirable life? Do they really get what they desire? Do the materialistic things happen to reduce the value and need for the emotional support? Ask an actor about it. There is much more to see than just this fame around him." Once RK said when his 5th movie was being promoted. Or rather the truth escaped from his mouth and ultimately caught by some random journalist.

She for nth time read it, feeling miserable, like she could understand what he meant. She lazily laid on bed and then again tossed and looked at the picture and smiled.

"Are you going to come down for heavens sake? Its already too late. Come on you'll be late for breakfast. Only half an hour is left. Mess will be closed." Said Radz as she herself hurriedly got dressed and left for her class just then.

Madhu being in her final year of BA English hons. Had her class from 10. 'its just 8:30' she thought. She turned to her other side and again fixed her concentration on his mysterious smile. As she was head over heels in love with RK so she used to choose RK's movies to write her movie reviews.

She never liked to flaunt what she liked, or how she felt nor even liked to disclose what she hated. It wasn't that she had fear of being laughed at, she gave a damn to it. But it was just that no body was as close to her as her self and RK of her thoughts. She didn't want to make her thoughts and likes a common topic of discussions among friends.

Meanwhile Radz re-entered. 'hell! I forgot my file..' she then for one last time looked at Madhu , who laid on her back all relaxed and said softly,

'Get up lazy bones. Its really late.' And then seeing Madhu started to descend from her top deck of bed, left for class smiling.

Madhu finally came down and took her toiletries and went to the bathroom closing the door behind.

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Madhu was a girl who rarely looked at any other guy, or talked to them without any reason, for she was always preoccupied by his thoughts. And if anyone would ask her about her dream man, all she could describe were

the qualities of RK, unconsciously. And then she would feel satisfied with her description and look at her friends all smiling.

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It was one of the days in may when her college was to host a national event. Many schools were to participate. And as per Madhu's college was concerned- every one was to take part.

Madhu wanted to take part in creative writing, but at last moment her friends asked her to join them in dance. She agreed.

After someday's of practice their dean announced one day that one of there guest of honor would be the film star RK. And just after the announcement all one could hear were the screams of happiness and excitement.

RK was visiting their college. Everyone's heart especially of girls bloomed with warm excitement.. they just couldn't believe there luck. They would be seeing him in person, when no body else is allowed to walk in 10 meters of range from him. And as for madhu, it was a dream come true for her. She wanted her dance to be perfect.

Though she loved him, but also knew that he was a famous superstar, and that all she feels about him is just a fantasy, she knew how to control her thoughts and heart and how and when to let them loose.

But as for her real feelings now, she felt ticklish feeling in her heart. She felt like she was on top of the world. And no body could take away her happiness now.

The practice started on serious note.

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Okay so Part one ends.

Next part will be up soon.

I know it was a disappointment as NO RK at all in this part.. but trust me the story is refreshing ahead


L.P


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting start and well written. Please PM me from next chapter if you don't mind. Thanks!
xxx

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