ARSHI SS:RAAZ |UPDATE| pg23 27/5/13 *now*

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Posted: 13 years ago
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SS:RAAZANKAHE ANJANE SE... PAR FIR BHI HAI PEHCHANE SE...

{PROLOGUE}
AT DOCTOR'S CLINIC
DOCTER-DR. MRS.RAIZADA
CONGRATULATIONS ONCE AGAIN
KHUSHI-CONGRATULATIONS FOR WHAT DOCTOR???
DOCTER-U R PREGNENT...
KHUSHI-REALLYY
DOCTER-YES...
KHUSHI-OHH THANKYOU DOCTOR...
DOCTER-APKO TOH PATA HONA CHAHIYE IT'S UR SECOND TIME...
KHUSHI-WAT R U SAYING ITS MY FIRST TIME
DOCTOE-WAT. BUT ACC. TO ME ITS UR SECOND TIME
KHUSHI-DOCTOR APKO KOI GALAT FAMI HUI HOGI THIS IS MY FIRST TIME
DOCTER-OK... MRS.RAIZAA I HAVE DONE A MISTAKE .. WAISE U HAVE TO TAKE REST NO NEED TO PICK UP HEAVY THINGS AND PLSSS REST NO WORK FOR ATLEST FIRST 3 MONTHSSS B'COZ THIS PERIOD IS VERY CRUCIAL...
KHUSHI-OK DOCTER I WILLL
DOCTER-WHY R U TENSED MRS.RAIZADA
KHUSHI-WOH DOCTER ITS MY FIRST TIME AND I AM REALLY VERY NARVOUS...
DOCTER-NO NEED TO WORRY I KNOW MR.RAIZADA.. HE WILL TAKE CARE OF U.. THESE ARE SOME MEDECINES TAKE THEM REGULARLY AND CAME TO ME AFTER 15 DAYS...
KHUSHI-OK.. THANK YOU DOCTOR...

AT HOME
KHUSHI TO HERSELF-HEY DEVI MAAIYYA HUM KAISE KARENGE EK BADA BACHA PEHLE HI SAMBHAL RAHE HAI DUSRA CHOTA BACHA KAISE SAMBHALENGE...

ANJALI NOTICES SOME TENSION ON KHUSHI'S FACE AND COMES TO ARNAV ALSO COMES...
EVERYBODY ELSE WAS IN LIVING AREA
ANJALI-WAT HAPPENED KHUSHIJI WHY R U SOO TENSED
KHUSHI-WOH DI DODO KAISA HAME TOH ABHI SE DAAR LAG RAHA HAI...
ARNAV-DODO WHAT??
KHUSHI-DODO HO GAYE TOH MATLAB TEEN TEEN EK BADA DO CHOTE HAY DEVI MAIYYA SHAKTI DENA
ARNAV-R U MAD KHUSHI KYA BOLE JAA RAHI HOOO...
ANJALI-HUA KYA KHUSHIJI
KHUSHI-HUA TOH KUCH NAHI DI HONA WALA HAI.. HAME TOH BAHUT DAAR LAG RAHA.. DOCTER NE KAHA HAI ARRAM KARNA HAI AUR HUM MAI TOH SPRING LAGE EK JAGAH TIK KAR BAITH NAHI SKTE
EVERY GIGGLES ON KHUSHI'S TALK
ARNAV-HUA KYA IS EVERYTHING ALRIGHT AUR WHY DOCTER TUMHE KYA HUA...
KHUSHI-ARRE BUDHU HUA NAHI HONE WALA HAI
EVERYDODY-KYA??????
KHUSHI-BACHA...
ARNAV-WAT R U???
KHUSHI-HAAANJI...
ARNAV-HUGS HER AND SAYS I AM VERY HAPPY KHUSHI
KHUSHI-HAPPY TOH HUM BHI BUT DARR LAG RAHA HAI
ANJALI-DARNE KI KYA BAAT HAIHUM SAAB HAI NA AAPKA KHAYAL RAKHENGE
KHUSHI-WOH TOH THIK HAI DI PARR
ARNAV-PAR VAR KUCH NAHI TUM CHALO AARAM KARO..
AUR TUM YEH KYA BOL RAHI THI KI DODO KAISE SAMBHALENGE EK BADA EK CHOTA DODO HO GAYE TOH TEEN TEEN
KHUSHI-WOH APP BHI BACHE SE KAM THODI HAI... BADE CHOTTE...
ARNAV-WAT...
KHUSHI-JI HAAN...
ARNAV-OK BUT CHALO UPPAR CHALO

EVERYBODY HUGS HER AND CONGRATULATES HER

LATER AT DINNER TABLE DINNER WAS SERVED EVERYBODY WAS SEATED AND EATING THEN KHUSHI SAYS
KHUSHI-DI NANIJI MAMI JI EK SAWAL PUCHHE??
ANJALI-JI KHUSHI JI...
KHUSHI-AISA HOO SKTA HAI DI KI KOI AUART MAA BANE AUR USSE PATA HI NA HO KI WOH MAAA BAN CHOKI HAI????
NANIJI-AISA KASEN HO SAKT HAI... HAR MAA JANAT HAI KI WOH MAAA BAN CHUKI HAI...
ANJALI-WAISE APNE YEH SAWAL KYU KIYA
KHUSHI-WOH HAMARI DOCTER KEH RAHI THI KI YEH APPKA SECOND TIME
AND HEARING THIS PAYAL CHOKED HER FOOD AND STARTING COUGHING
ANJALI-KYA HUA PAYALJI YE LIJIYE DRINK WATER...
PAYAL-I AM FINE DI.. WOH BAS
AAKASH-R U SURE...
PAYAL-HAAN AAKASH HUM THIK HAI...

LATER AT NIGHT PAYAL CALLS GARIMA
PAYAL-HELLO AMMA
AMMA-HAAN BOLO BITIYA
PAYAL-AMMA WOH KHUSHI NA MAA BANENE WALI HAI
AMMA-SACHI BETA YEH TH BAHUR KHUSHI KI BAAT HAI
PAYAL-PAR AMMA WOH DOCTOR NE USSE KAHA KI YH USKA SECOND TIME HAI.
AMMA-MATLAB
PAYAL-NAHI AMMA ISSE KUCH PATA NAHI CHALA PAR HUM KAAL ARNAVJI KO BATADENGE..
AMMA-YEH HI THIK HAI HUME YAKEEN HAI KI WOH ZAROOR SAMJHENGE
PAYAL-THIK HAI AMMA...

{PROLOGUE}


TO KNOW MORE STAY TUNNED TO THIS STORY

{SNEAK PEAK OF NEXT CHAPTER}
PAYAL CALLED ANJALI , NANI,ARNAV,MAMI EVERYBODY IN HER ROOM KHUSHI WAS NOT AT HOME SHE WAS GNE TO HER PARENTS HOUSE WITH NK..
ARNAV-WAT HAPPENED PAYAL U CALLED US...
ANJALI-HAAN BOLIYE PAYALJI
PAYAL-WOH ARNAVJI DOCTER SACH BOL RAHI THI
ARNAV-DOCTER SACH WAT R U TALKING ABOUT..
PAYAL-ARNAVJI KHUSHI PEHLE MAAA BAN CHUKI HAI... USKA EK BETA HAI...
ARNAV -WAT??????????
PAYAL-HAAN ARNAVJI
ARNAV-AUR TUM MUJHE YEH AB BATA RAHI HOO AUR KHUSHI SHE NEVER TOLD ME
PAYAL-USSE KUCH YAAD NAHI HAI SHE DOSENT EVEN KNOW TAT SHE HAS A SON SUBH...
ARNAV-HOW WEN...
{SNEAK PEAK OF THE NEXT CHAPTER}

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Posted: 13 years ago
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~*~INDEX~*~
PROLOGUE-SCROOL UP
chapter 1 pg7
chapter 2pg14
precape pg23
Edited by ..hrideyy.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start.. please pm me when u update..😊
and please dont use capital letters.. it is difficult to read..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh wow awsuuum start dear...very mysterious hun...loved it very much n thnx 4da pm dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow nice start
plsss continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: goldengirl.0123

nice start.. please pm me when u update..😊
and please dont use capital letters.. it is difficult to read..


thank you
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hrideyy superb story !!!
pls update soon !!!!
khushi has memory loss...OMG !!!!

update soon !!!
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awesome prologue dear...
loved it very much...
khushi is has son and no one knows...
very interesting...
continue soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow awesome prologue.
Waiting for this one
Update sooon
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Nice start...
Thanx for d pm..

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