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..Jessie..

@..Jessie..

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Amazing update sweetu, loved it to core!!!!!!!

what a sweet convo between behna and chaudry family !!!!

my fav line is

M- look beeji, main di se pyar karti hoon, di mujhse thoda zyada pyar karti hain. Meri khushi unki khushi me hai or unki khushi meri khushi me. Ab ap sab ki khushi ham dono ki khushi me hai. Toh is tarah ham sab ki khushi interlinked aur directly related hai. But keeping in mind ki meri khushi b ap sab aur di ki khushi me hai, aur main ye man leti hun ki ap sab ki khushi b meri khushi me hai, toh is group khushi ka starting point di hui. Ab di ki khushi…………………..

u simplz amazed by ur wordings , cant read more from you !!!!!!!!!

lovely update !!!!!

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NEHA KASHYAP

@Neha.K.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Priyaaa...
OUTSTANDINGGG... I just loveddd it...

it seemed to her that those eyes could scan her heart... TRUEEE

M- look beeji, main di se pyar karti hoon, di mujhse thoda zyada pyar karti hain. 😊
:):):):) how real u have shown their chracters...Wonderfulll... LOVE YOUUU FOR THIS

"dabbu, tujhe pata hai na agar di maan jati hain toh kya karna hai", manvi screamed to dabbu. KYA KARNA HAI???? jaldi next part pleaseee...😲

waise ek baat hai hai..we Jeeman fans thinks alike... :) waiting for ur next update.. mwaaah

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Priya

@nobo

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Thanks di, was waiting for ur review. Thanks , it means a lot to me !!! Yep the line was nice

To be honest , Khushi is my best friend's name & that's why I included that para

@neha, thanks dude. Yep we think alike. Behne Hain ham , kya hua agar khoon ka rishta nahi hai, Itna adjustment toh chalta hai na

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ita_04

@ita_04

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

the compactness n the originality of ur work priya is amazing...

u are seriously good....

n that khushi part was an example of exemplary sense of humour...

loved it..