MY FIRST RAJI FF(part 4 updt) page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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HI Guys this my first ff. hope you like it...

rashi is waiting for bus on a bus stand. she is very tensed because it's already late and bus is not coming.This time urmila her mom definitely kill her' she thought herself.
urmila iis a hitler mom but her husband Jitu is so nice but he also afraid with urmila. she is evil woman. Jitu is so worried about rashi.

rashi is still waiting. but after a long time when it's 12 o'clock she starts walking. suddenly a car stop behind her. a smart guy open the window. oh he is my boss ahem's younger brother and and her childhood friend jigar.

jigar: hi rashi. come i'll drop u.
rashi: no thanks jigar i'll manage.
jigar: come on rashi, enter the car.
rashi enter into the car and say thanks.

actually jigar loves rashi from his college days but he didn't tell this to rashi and he is very happy that rashi is sitting behind him.

suddenly rashi say. it's great that i meet u tonight. i want to give u a news or invitation.
invitation??? asked jigar
yes i'm going to marry very soon...

to be contineu
do comment guys
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Posted: 12 years ago
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šŸ‘šŸ¼ please give a long update and soon...

awesome starting...
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aww nice start oishi...and a great twist at the end of this part...want to see further continue ...update next part soon😊
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very nice start
plz update long n soon
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thanx guys to appreciated me. i'll update ssoon.
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Really sweet :) oh waiting for the next part:)
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Originally posted by: vibz88

Really sweet :) oh waiting for the next part:)



thanx vibz .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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gr88 start...plzz update soon😃
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sorry for late update...


part 2

jigar is shock but h somehow control himself. jigar:really?? congratulation!!

rashi: thanx.
but rucha looks little low. jigar notice it .
jigar ask rucha. is any problem. are u unhappy .

rashi: no, actually i don't know Armaan...

jigar: armaan??

rashi: yah armaan. my fiance. i think he don't like me or love anyone

jigar: u r confused rashi. u have to clear everything before marriage

rashi; sure I will. we reach. thank u jigar. see u

jigar: bye.

jigar is standing in front of window. hetal enter his room.

hetal: u r still awake? it's already 2 am dikra

jigar: yah mom, i am not sleepy so...

hetal: what happened dikra???

jigar: nothing ..

hetal; i know dikra what hapened ? rashi's marriage

jigar: how do u know mom?

hetal: her imitation card urmila gave to us. don't worry dikra everything will be fine.

jigar: i kknow mom...

at rashi's home
rashi is thinking about jigar. 'how caring he is. but armaan???then gopi enter rashi's room..


pls guys give your opinion and comment.😃😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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First to comment 😃! Post chapter num in the title aswell pl..it will be easy šŸ˜›
superb start! do continue and Pm me 😊
Edited by scarlet167 - 12 years ago

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