FF: Brutal Love Thread II Chp 15 pg 103 NEW!! 5/4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank You to all of those who helped me reach Thread II...😳
Prologue:

Khushi father Sashi has not been well for a long time. Her mother passed away when Khushi was born. Inorder to save her father life Khushi started to look to a job because Sashi pension money was not enough for them anymore. ASR is returning from Sydney today after 10 years. He told Aman he needed a personal sectary for him. When Arnav Sigh Raizada saw Khushi his eyes was on her with full of l*st.

Note about the chracters.

Khushi is the daughter of Shashi and Garima

Bua ji not part of this story.

Payal and Khushi are best friends.

Dadi,Shyam,Nani,Mami are not part of this story. It mostly of ARNAV & KHUSHI.

Index
Thread II
Chapter 8 teaser scroll down
Chapter 8 pg 12
Chapter 9 pg 30
Chapter 10 pg 46
Chapter 11 pg 60
Chapter 12 pg 81
Chapter 13 pg 87
Chapter 14 pg 95
Chapter 15 pg 103
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Important Note: I just wanted to tell you all that I am really disappointed and hurt after the response I got from my readers on my OS " Stranger In Her Apartment or?" Seriously guys a lot of people emailed me/PM me asking me to write something like that and I did' Then what happen? Some of my readers started pm, emailed and wrote on my blog bad comments!!!! I was so hurt that I had to delete your guys comment from my blog!!!! Honestly I have no more reason to write for those who are so rude' I am going to give this teaser today and tomorrow will be the last part'.. THOSE OF YOU WHO WERE RUDE NOW DON'T PM/EMAIL/WRITE ON MY BLOG TO CONTINUE MY STORY!!! I CAN CARE LESS!!!! I EVEN GOT A WARNING BECAUSE OF YOU!!! IF YOU GUYS HAVEN'T SAID ANYTHING BAD THEN I WASN'T GOING TO BE UPSET THAT I GOT WARNING BUT NOW I AM... I EVEN SKIPPED MY FRIENDS ENGAGMENT SHOPPING JUST TO GIVE TO SOMETHING BEFORE I GO TO BREAK BUT WHAT DID I GOT FROM YOU!!!!!

Chapter 8 Teaser

Arnav: Where is Di?

Without looking Khushi answered him "She went to see the doctor"

Arnav ignored Khushi when he saw the baby girl crying' He walked toward her to take her from Khushi'

Arnav: May I?

Khushi gave the baby to Arnav...

Khushi: Arnav ji your hand under her head'

Khushi said looking at Arnav and he was lost when he saw Khushi acting like a wife to him'

He got up with the baby in her hands and suddenly the baby stopped crying'

Arnav: You're going to stay in RM'

Khushi looked at Arnav shockingly'.

Khushi: what did you say?

Arnav: I know you heard me so I don't think I need to repeat what I said to you again'

Khushi: If you are thinking'

Before khushi could say anything further Arnav spoke again'

Arnav: I am only doing this for my Di and my daughter'

This is a last Chapter teaser... Chapter 14 will be the last one and it will be posted by the end of this week...
Edited by ArShi_Addiction - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome teaser
update soon
waiting for the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey update soon its too long u hvent updated ur FF
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Waiting for the update. Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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waiting for you to update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing teaser...Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome teaser! Interesting!

Like I said, please don't discontinue! This FF is so interesting! Its like all of my favorite writers are discontinuing their FFs because of plagarism and bashing! Please don't discontinue! I love your FFs they're so different! Please!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I have not understood whose baby was khushi feeding hers or dis.. Because in the first chapter u said not hers..the story is well thought of..just keep on editing it after u finish it... U will be proud of it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome teaser.. Now by this teaser the reason behind Khuhsi being in RM is clear bt what abt Anjali?? And how come Anjana was there with Khuhsi bt there was no sign of this baby girl?? Waiting for ut nxt update.. And just wanted to say u plz dnt end this ff so soon just for the sake of those bad commenters.. I knw it feels really bad when we dedicate all our hardship for sth and get sth bad in return bt plzz if u r ending this soon just bcoz of those bad commenters dont do that.. U knw u have a lots of well commenters too appreciate ur wrk.. And thanks for the pm!!😊

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