'A Damsel In Distress' (MG)~~ Part 24 (pg 100) - Page 16

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PART 5

Where Geet and Dadima had a great day, here Maan was totally out of his control. 'How can someone be so careless? How can Yash go to J&K without police protection with him? Let him come I will teach him who is the real boss here. Shayad voh 2 hafte pehle ki Dose bhul gya h.' maan thought clenching his jaw with anger.

YASH MALHOTRA was the sub inspector of Delhi police department but because of his capabilities and willingness to serve the nation Maan has chosen him for his team.

He is best in the best shooter and have won many medals in shooting. Always ready to fight and prove Maan that he is the best. So in total it's just a show off.

ADITYA KASHYAP, one of the best in I should say every field just like his boss. Can do anything to protect Maan and always tried to keep him away from danger. And yeah his laughter that is what irritates Maan the most, so he thinks its better not to laugh in front of him. He is very obedient and treats Maan as his big brother.

TARUNA GHERA, young, beautiful, talented and short-tempered, but best in acrobats and gymnastics. Shock the criminals with her perfect moves. Thinks that his boss is the best in this world and there is no case that he cannot solve.

Maan works with the police team mostly on small kidnapping, extortion and abduction cases, and solve the high profile and big cases with his team. His KHOTEY SIKKAY J (if u guys remember this show).

Officer came and told Maan that Yash came back from Jammu, Maan replied he is coming in a minute.

Yash was waiting for Maan in his cabin with a silly smile on his face.

As the time Maan entered Yash started his ram katha, "what a mission sir, itna maza aaya u know sir. There firing from everywhere and I, yash malhotra was the only soul their fighting for my own life, with those terrorists. Uff so tiring." Saying this he was going to sit when pushed the back and Yash went flat on the floor.

"yeah I know very dangerous, no! Taruna told me the incident before you but her narration was little different from you and you know that. She said that that there was firing from everywhere and She and you were alone in the whole forest. But the turning point, you got shot and luckily the bullet just touch your arm and you got minor injury and survived.Aur tumhari iss bewakufi ki vajah se usse itni pareshaani uthani padi. U idiot kya zarurat thi mujhe bina bataye jammu jaane ki voh bhi without police protection. Voh toh acha hua ki mene Taruna ko tumhare pass bhej dia vrna abhi hospital mein pade hote."

He scolded Yash for his careless behavior.

Taruna entered, Maan asked she is okay? She replied with a smile, "I am totally fine sir haan bus backache hai heavy weight uthaya tha na." Yash understood that heavy part she said that for him and he got up from the floor and marched towards Taruna when Maan asked him to stop right there.

HE asked them both, " kitne terrorists the?"

Yash was about to laugh when he controlled his laughter by coughing in his fist, he thought about the scene when Gabbar Singh asked, "kitne aadmi the?"

Yash replied, "do sardar, uhhh, I mean do sir."

"And sir I think ki unhe pata chal gya h ki hum police ke liye kaam krte hen isliye voh hume marna chahte the." Taruna said.

"Shit, now cancels the plan of entering in their gang and we will directly attack them. One by one we will finish them all." Maan said it with rage.

Yash said," But sir uske liye toh hume dubara naya full proof plan banana padega. It will take a lot of time."

"I know. But we cant sit like this and let all this happen aur vaise bhi jitni information humare pass h usse lagta h ki yeh log diwali ka wait kr rhe hen bomb blast krne ke liye." Maan said it with detestation.

He sighed and said, "call adi we need to make a new plan before they get inside the city."

Same day Khurana mansion, 9: 30pm

Maan was working on his laptop when he heard a knock on the door, he turned and saw Dadi standing on the door.

"Dadima aap vahan kyun khade ho ander aayi na." He said

"Maan mujhe aapse kuch baat krni h." Dadi said sitting on his bed and maan sat on his knees in front of her holding her hands.

"boliye kya baat krni h."

"Maan beta subah humne Unse Doctor ke pass jaane ki baat ki thi but she refused, she said'." Dadi told him the conversation between her and Geet that took place in the morning how she refused to go to a doctor,

"aapko kya lgta h?" Dadi asked Maan his view.

"Dadi ho sakta h ki voh darr rhi ho? She is not ready for all this right now u know doctor and all that stuff!!" Maan tried to motive behind her refusing to go.

Dadi nodded her head but still something was still bothering her.

Maan saw the worry on her face, he said, "acha I will talk to her okay?" he tried to cheer her up.

Location: Geet's room

She was listening songs on her ipod and humming and singing in between with her eyes closed, (okay Geet only have his small satchel bag, which only had her ipod and her passport size photograph few chewing gums and sweets, her comb, her lip-gloss, her little sketch book and few pencil colors and crayons as she loves to draw and sketch in her free time and just a little amount of money).

Maan knocked 3-4 times but when no reply came from inside, opened the door and peeped inside he saw the angel laying on the corner the bed listening music.

He walked inside, her eyes were closed and she was humming so didn't saw him coming inside. He cleared his throat to catch her attention, but no reply from her side.

He again cleared his throat a little louder this time, but again she was not paying any attention. He started to think how to get attention of a girl when you don't know her name.

He was going to go out of her room when Geet opened her eyes and saw him and said, " Maan?" She unplugged her ipod and sat on her bed and he turned around.

"HI!" Maan said.

She replied his 'HI' with a smile and said, "kuch kaam tha?"

"Voh actually I was to say that.." he hesitated a bit then said, "I think we should at least inform police at any rate. They may very well prove to be the connecting link between you and your folks."

She smiled, shortly and enigmatically, and said, " No, we better not." She paused, leaving Maan confused then again started, "no I mean you know what I have a theory that you call police to get rid of troubles but they only give you more troubles." She said it with a dim smile and Maan perceived her with an angry glare at which Geet timidly sat on her bed like a scared kitten like saying 'what did I do?'

"Miss I am a police officer so it is better if you don't say anything bad about my department and that too in front of me." He said that with red eyes which again scared Geet.

"Okay." She replied nervously.

He calmed down a bit by seeing her in such frightening state and then said a hearable Good night and returned to his bedroom.

Geet sighed in relief but then the reality struck sooo harddd that she was on the verge of shouting but covered her mouth with her hand. "MAAN IS A POLICE OFFICER!!!!!!!"

She fall down from the bed and hurt herself. Instead of standing up she sat on the floor with her legs crossed and started thinking, 'Maan is a cop, agar unhe pata chal gya ki mein kaun ho toh fir mujhe kacha chaba jayengey. Hey Babaji!! Help me and save me from this dusht danav.'

She made a baby face.

She rested her hands on the bed and started thinking about the consequences that she have to face once her identity will be revealed to everyone.


PRECAP~~ Oopss, Maan angry!!

You know wat guys me being the writer of this ff, me 2 waiting for the next part to come soon. Geet bichari ki halat kharab... 😆


PART 6

Edited by Harshitabedi - 12 years ago
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Awesome update
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ha ha...police officer ko bewakoof banane chali thi...

but I am sure wo ban jaayega...

Maan ki aakhir Geet ke samne chalegi nahin...

awesome update...

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it geet shoked to know maan cop



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