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smiley13

@smiley13

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

awww god...i was not feeling to read this after hearing that she was cheating him...but still with so much of guts i read it...& what i get toblerone... i was like what the...😲
u know to scare ppl...but the OS was gud...

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Diksha

@Dt_goodgirl

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Amazing Amazing OS

Loved it to the core

Every line i read and i was getting depressed and depressed and depressed and voila,

TOBLERONE

OMG

how the heck did you come up with that

i had to reread your description of *cough*☺️*cough* and all i could do was laugh out

with all the hardness and stuff

Just brilliant writing. Real Smart way of penning it down.

Loved it to the core.

Until the next one,

Bye,

Diksha😳

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Diksha

@Dt_goodgirl

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

read this OS again

I hope you dont mind, i copied it to Word so i can put these along with my other stories collection.

One of my most fav OS.

Thanks for the amazing piece.

Your awesome 👏

🤗

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Kasu4lyfe

@Kasu4lyfe

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

That waz really ood and i kinda gussed that it must have been food and why she waz craving it! Good one

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Ishrafan11

@Ishrafan11

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Wow that was awesome and funny loved it thanks for the pm.

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Vee

@reflorated

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Ahahahaa xD

Chocolates! <3 me likey ;)

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Fuj

@-ElmoFuj-

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

I was literally going all 'stop reading, its not going to be an easy read! She's cheating'! But i kept reading, kept challenging myself and MAN was that worth it! It was super amazing! 😆

it was toblerone! She is such a doll hhahaahha! Loved it! 😃

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Oh my!

This was so naughty!

Thank you!

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Manal

@...manal...

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

OK...let me get over the awesomeness of this OS. Well, I can't. This was FANTASTIC!

Chocolates! Of course it had to be chocolates! It's all about Zo after all. Chocolates have a significant part to play.

Poor Arnav. He was scared out of his wits. I don't blame him though. Hehehehehe...

And she is pregnant? Awww...

I always end up awww-ing after reading your OSs. And you say you are not a cutie. Pfffttt...of course you are. Why else would you come up with such cute, adorable, sweet, sugary, gushy mushy stuff?

OK...OK...back to the OS. I tend to deviate too quickly, don't I? *sigh*

This OS was Zo's definition. The chocolates were there of course but it was also the way you built Khushi's character. Sweet, caring, loving. That is what Zo is all about. Zo is a very caring and loving girl. And you write this OS with perfection. I loved it!

Thanks for the link to this one. Wouldn't want to miss out on it.

Manal <3

Edited by -Manal.A- - 12 years ago