just beside you: taarey FF(important note on pg25)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi guyz...plzzz i am nt a good writer so read it at your own risk.

so here goes
and note this : taani and rey have finished their college life and just months they have started working.
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taanis's pov:

i came running towards the road not believing what i had just heard.how could rey do this?how could he say me to opt for abortion?i felt a lump in my throat even by the thought of it.i thought he really loved me.,but the truth was something else..if he had really loved me then he would have purely accepted our child.

**flash back**

taani: i am pregnant rey ( she said silently)

(rey was shocked because as per the INDIAN society getting pregnant before the marriage was still not so acceptable even though they were living in a modern society with modern thoughts and he was not ready to become a father to a child and take his responsibility so soon in such a young age.he wanted to achieve more...)

taani: why are you not saying anything rey?

rey :taani...

taani: kya hua rey??? we are after all going to get married next year .we can keep the marriage this year then.

rey: par taani the society will not accept us.

taani: aap kya bol rahe hai rey?this is our child..i don't care about what the society think.i just want to know what you think.

rey did not say anything.he did not want to hurt taani...his life...his everything even dance comes after her .but still he was not ready for a baby.he tried to calm himself but could not.he was still not ready for such a big responsibility.

taani: rey aap itna kya soch rahe hai?? this is our child...

rey; bas taani..

taani: kya hua rey aapko?

rey : taani i am not ready for this.

taani: ready for what ??

rey : to become a father...

taani; rey ye hamara bacha hai...

rey ; abortion can also be a option rey.

taani; rey have you lost your senses?? its like murdering someone...how can you even talk like this...

rey : taani i want to achieve more in my life...i am not ready for such a big responsibility...

taani; rey a baby is not a burden for god's sake...

rey : taani i don't want to argue ...let's just opt for abortion . (holding taani's hand firmly)

taani takes her hand from rey.

taani: i am such an idiot to believe that you were going to marry me rey...i feel so foolish..

rey ; don't blabber taani...you know how much i love you.

taani; bas rey...bahut hogaya...i am really a fool to believe your going to marry me..

rey; taani...(taani interupts)

taani: this is last time i am seeing you ever ..me or my child will never ever disturb you...

rey gets totally shocked hearing what taani says...taani gets up avoiding and also not hearing what rey is saying because her mind was now full with many thoughts going through her mind.

**flash back ends**

i just can't come over the lines rey said.i really could not believe it that rey said it.i saw the number of missed calls from rey but i did'nt hesitate to take on the call.i loved rey that was a past.now i have to give a life to the child that is inside me and must move on in my life.
________________________________________________-chapter 1 over

heheh i know it seems so down boring but anyways here is the story line.

after 9 years:

story line:taani moves to america and gives birth to a handsome and cuteboy rahul.she did not inform anyone about her living here except her brother swayam and takes a promise from him that he will not inform anyone that she is staying here.she works as a assistant to a popular singer.rey becomes a famous choreographer of bollywood . taani had a very important reason to land in mumbai even though she didn't want to .she bumps into rey.and then see how the story folds...

worked very hard for writing this so plz do comment .chappals ,eggs and tomatoes are always welcome.

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part 6: pg 17

important note on pg 25...do see




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aksha2812 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice concept
keep writing dear
and pm me after u update the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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first of all hi🤗 this was amazing..,,very interesting😛 biting my nails to know whats going to happen next😆 rey shouldnt have done this😡 and he dint even search for her in these nine years😭 luvd taani .,.she has taken a bigg step update soon🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: blue_cherub

first of all hi🤗 this was amazing..,,very interesting😛 biting my nails to know whats going to happen next😆 rey shouldnt have done this😡 and he dint even search for her in these nine years😭 luvd taani .,.she has taken a bigg step update soon🤗

thanx 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it is really a nice concept . . . . plz continue and do pm me when u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow prema first this is not at all boring infact it's something totally different and I love it. Your writing is amazing. I feel so sad for Taani 😊 how can Rey be so cruel anyway I love that Taani give birth and is happy with her child. Can't wait to see what happen when they meet again. Hope Taani give Rey a hard time for his foolish mistake lol. Plz continue soon.
I will throw tomato on u only if u dont continue lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its gr8 dear...continue it...update it soon nd plz pm me😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow yar nice story plz do continue.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hat ke from original track.
so pls. cont.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i really liked it...very interesting...wanna know what happens next...update soon

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