my continuation of adhoori kahani-FF

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hi frends

actually i was thinking what to write in leena's update post but when i thought about it a whole story came up to me but i will write that in parts that too if i don bore u all

ok here i start

critics warning: highly imaginary n romantic pls bear with me 😳

after the marriage soham n anju go to bauji to take his blessings he takes his feet back sohu n anju get shocked bauji says i wont give u ashirwaad sohu gets tensed n asks wht happen bauji says that unless n until soham doesnt accept us as his own family n stay with us sohu says but hows this possible i cant take kavya's place in ur family bauji says no one take kavya's place but u can take all his responsibility n u have ur special place anju smiles n blinks her eyes slowly after which sohu agrees bauji smiles n hugs him give both ashirwaad

all the ring games n money games are goin on after wards when all are leaving sohu calls his parents (whom ekta forgot reva once told that sohu's dad is his dad's frend ) he narrates them everythin they decide to come india the next week its almost 10 n evrybody are in garden sohun anju sitting on the swing at one corner anju asks sohu "sab kuch itni jaldi ho gaya pata nahin kavya is sab se khush hai ya nahin "sohu says : anjali kavya ki khushi tum me thi kya tum khush ho "

anju :haan

sohu :to bas i am sure kavya tumhe khush dekh kar kavya bhi bohot khush hoga every body is out having a barbque n stuff at the other end

sohu: anjali kya tum phir bhi kavya khush hai ya nahin yeh janna chahti ho

anju :haan

sohu :to bas apni aankhien band karo aur kavya ko yaad karo i am sure tumhe tumhara jawab zaroor milega

bauji calls sohu

sohu :main abhi aaya

anjali closes her eyes facing the sky when she feels somebody near her its kavya kavya says anjali

kavya:anjali aaj main bohot khush ki tumne sahi faisla liya anjali says kavya tum ..tum sach much khush ho soham ne aise humari zindagi mein aakar tumhari jagah leli

kavya: han anjali he points next to sohu playing with ved n the whole family laughing n admiring the 2 dekho anjali mera beta mera saara parivaar aur tum, kitne khush ho .soham tumhare chehre par voh hasi phir le aaya jo main shayad apne saath le gaya tha par soham use tumhare chehre par vapas le aaya hai yaad hai anjali maine tumse kya kaha tha ab tak main mukt nahin ho saka tha lekin ab main bina kisi fikr ke jaa sakta hun aaj mujhe sab kuch mil gaya aaj main mera parivaar mera beta aur meri anjali khush hai soham ki anjali khush hai anjali aaj ke baad main phir kabhi nahin aaunga aur tum bhi mujhe yaad mat karna soham tumhe bohot chahta hai voh bauji dida aur baki sabko bhi bohot chahta hai voh tum sab ko bohot khush rakhega main janta ki voh tum sabki dilon mein meri jagah nahin le sakta par main yehi dua karunga ki ek din voh is ghar mein meri jagah lele anjali mujhse vaada karo tum soham ko hamesha khush rakho gi

anju bearly not able to speak coz of tears

says:kavya tumhari jagah koi nahin le sakta soham ne is ghar mein apni ek alag jagah banayi hai na voh kabhi tumhari jagah le sakta na voh kabhi aisa karneki soch sakta hai

kavya:haan yeh baat to sahi hai ki soham ki apni ek alag jagah hai aur ab tum kavya ko nahin soham ko chahne lagi ho aur main bhi hamesha yehi dua karunga ki tum hamesha use hi chaho aur voh tumhe itna pyar de ki tum mujhe bhulado tum chahe dusro se chupao par main janta hun ki tum bhi soham se bohot pyar karti ho

anjali nods to says no crying

kavya : anjali ab yeh rona band karo arey main yehi to chahta tha ki tum apni zindagi mein aage bado aur ab main bhi jaa rahaa hun

anjali : nahin kavya tum... with her hand trying to stop him

kavya:anjali mujhe jaana hoga main jaane se pehle tum se aakhri baar milna chahta tha , ab main thak chuka hun anjali mujhe ab aaram karna hai aur mama bhi to mera intezaar kar rahi hai hmm sab ka khayal rakhna aur apna bhi

kavya is smiling n gets up n is goin backwards facing anjali anjali gets up n tries to stop him he smiles n dissapears soham who was coming to anjali now is standing behind anjali n asks her

sohu:anjali kya hua

anj:turns n looks at him with moist eyes

anjali:vohh..... suddenly silent

soham: kavya aaya tha

anjali:haan .. lekin tum ..

soham:anjali mujhe tum par pura yakin hai -smiles-main janta hun tumhara aur kavya ke pyar mein kitni shakti hai main dusro ki tarah nahin mata ki kavya tumhara vehem hai -smiles-

anjali runs to him n hugs him crying n telling kavya khush hai soham voh bohot khush-2mins later- ved shouts from behind papa soham picks him all three hug together anjali looks at the sky with searching eyes she sees kavya n nithya smiling seeing her happy sweet family she smiles n closes her eyes shourya n reva who were busy having fun with other see n soham anjali n ved smile at eachother reva suddenly goes in n shourya calls her reva reva n follows her anjali sees this romilla chachi comes to them to ask for dinner anjali gives ved to chachi n soham n anjali both follow them too

in guest room rewa is crying shourya comes

shourya: reva kya hua tum roo kyun rahi ho

reva:kuch nahin voh aise hi aankh mein

shourya inturrupts :mujhse to atleast jhoot bolne ki zarurat nahin hai reva main jaanta hu ki neeche jo hua use dekh kar

reva intrrupts : nahin shourya pls aisa kuch nahin hai main to bas yehi soch rahi this ki kismat ke bhi khel kitne ajeeb hai soham ko anjali se milane ke liye kismat un dono ka rishta hum dono ke saath jod diya do dilon ke judne ke liye kismat ne do dilon ko tod diya -smiles

shourya-smiles :haan kismat ... na jane hum dono ki kismat mein kiska saath hain anyways ab tum yeh rona band karo n give me a friendship hug common

reva smiles they both hug anjali n soham watch this they smile they both turn n start goin downstairs n anjali says hum dono ki wajah se nachahte hue bhi reva aur shourya bohot hurt hue hai humme unke liye kuch karna chahiye

sohu's funky tone plays in bg that check it out one he smiles n says : kyun na hum un dono ko yeh ehsaas dilaye ki voh dono ek dusre ke liye ache jeevan saathi sabit ho sakte hai

anju: what 😕 lekin yeh sab.... i mean voh dono to dost hai

sohu:anjali .. voh dono ek dusre se pyar nahin karte par ek dusre ki parwa to karte hai they understand n support each other well

anjali says: hann par hum yeh sab karenge kaise

sohu: main bata ta hun

~~~~~~~~~~~~~interval~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

sorry if i bored u with this highly immaginative boring fanfic if u like it i will continue otherwise just leave it 😳 thanks for bearing me

love

anu

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anu_thegr8 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh my gosh it was so borin
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its okay 😊
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anu
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Posted: 18 years ago
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no no noo it was gr8 plz cont. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow anu... I really like..... well done... plz do continue.... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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this was great i liked the bit wen kaavya cums and says all dat stuff to anjali and den wen kaavya and nitya both look at soham anjali and ved and smile !!!!!!! 😊 it would have been nice if ekta did dis !!!!!!! to show how everyone iz happy wid the soham anjali weddin!!! 😉


this fan fic iz cool please carry on ..... really imaginative i cud actually picture it all in my mind!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thank u i will continue it tommorow as i am out of time
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anu
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Posted: 18 years ago
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after interval continued

soham says the plan in anjali's ears anjali says thats a fantastic plan morning every ones on the ddinning table in the meanwhile soham's dad arrives he is in n asks for soham to the servant bauji asks whos it he says kya main soha......
mr sameer saxena : bauji
bauji recognises n hugs him
bauji:oi sameer putar tu yaha
sameer:ha bauji main to yahan soham se
bauji:soham oi tu use kaise jaanta hai
sameer :bauji soham mera beta hai aap ko yaad hoga maine phone kya mayank ko jab soham paida hua

soham comes in the meanwhile n says: dad hi dad
takes ashirwaad n hugs
sameer :soham mere bache kaisa hai beta
soham :main thik hoon dad
bauji:oi ye to aur bhi aci baath ho gayi sameer ab to tu bhi yahin rahega
soham;bauji aap mere dad ko jaante hain
bauji :oye main to tere bauji ko tere janm se pehle se jaanta hun kyun sameer
sameer nods
bauji :ab chalo baaki batien andar karte hain
sameer comes in dida recognises him he takes ashirwaad n romilla 's husband also meets him anjali takes aashirwaad he is really impressed
bauji tells them to have breakfast n on the table tells
bauji:sameer na mayank ka dost hai london mein mayank jab business ke silsile mein gaya tha tab uski mulakat sameer se hui thi lekin mayank ke jaane ke baad se na is khote ka koi phone na khabar aayi hai
sameer:sorry bauji mujhe lagta tha ki agar main phone karunga to kahin aap sab ko taklif na ho aur soham ne bataya ki kavya bhi
everyone gets upset n shourya who was listenin this comes
shouru:arey aap sab ne mere bagair khana bhi shuru kar liya bauji yeh kya hai everyone smiles n romila chachi serves him n sameer says that mere bete ne zindagi mein ek hi acha kaam kiya hai anjali se shaadi karke everyone laughs after break fast bauji says chhalo ab mere paas ek surprise hai yeh rahe anjali aur soham ke "london ke tickets
reva gets a letter from a servant bauji asks her kiska letter hain
reva opens n says: bauji voh london mein psycology n psychatric care n treatment par ek seminar hain london mein usika invitation hai
soham's funky tone plays n anjali smiles n soham says:gr8 reva par tum akele vaha kya karogi main toh anjali london dikhane busy rahunga to tum
anjali adds": i think shourya tumhe reva ke saath jaana chahiye u know reva o bhi company mil jayegi aur tumhara office ka kaam voh nipat jayega
shourya:aaaa actually mujhe koi problem nahin hai par
soham :kya par var laga rakha hai bauji kahiye na aap kuch
bauji:reva putar tumhe koi aitraz hai
reva:nahin bauji mere liye to acha hi hoga mujhe company mil jayegi
bauji:toh bas shourya putar tu jayega nirmala tujhe is baat se koi aitraaz
nimz:nahin bauji shourya ke liye bhi change ho jayega
bauji :bas main tum dono ki bhi ticket mangva deta hun
shorya says :theek hai bauji
everyone leaves the dining table bauji takes sameer tto his room soham tells anjali that he will just go to the hospital n see n come soon n that u have to execute rest of the plan
anjali:tum phikr mat karo soham main sab sambhal lungi
soham kises her forhead n leaves anjali waves n smiles to soham
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~interval~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~
i hope u liked it
love
anu

Edited by anu_thegr8 - 18 years ago
gujigal thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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agen it was gr8 👏
plz cont. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Its gr8 Anu 👏 👏 ...awesome 😃 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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🤗 thank u all i will write continuation tommorow
love
anu

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