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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweta...

Well well well what can I say...

FIRSTLY this wills be a shorter essay since it was a short update :P but never the less...
The update was to DiE for I mean seriously... I wasn't actually expecting arnav to come back in this update, I mean I knew he had to,,, but I didn't know how you would've have incorporated it... But you did it because ur Mushfika and u did it damn well:D! I mean the way dadi called her... I had a monobrow again... And I'm thinking what the hell... Can u see shes hurt and the way she said anjalis wounds aren't healing so how will I let yours, and I'm like your such a ****** Urgh so annoying how can u torture another woman, I mean aren't ashrams meant to mean ur very calm, helpful... But no this woman, should be reported against domestic violence yet we all know our khushi wouldn't do or say a thing against her... I be she won't even say a thing to arnav... Which leads me to when I realised arnav REtURNeD!!,!,!, I mean yeahhh baby I was like go on hit her, go on hit her... Let me see how her arnavs gunner let u hit her! The joy on my face and its morning and nooner up so I had to cover my mouth since I nearly shouted YESSS!!!! I was sooo happy... Like yesss finally someon Will put a stop to this! And blesss khushi she just ran upto him hugging him, and you can tell he's just shocked... It's be awesome,e if either he finished early and returned... OR the doctor called and told him... And he questions her and she's like I fell but obvs he's seen what actually happened! Just loved the way she hugged him, gripping on his shirt not letting go... She must have felt so glad to be in his arms... So sweet

At first when you said it's a shirt update I thought oh dear... What's going to happen, maybe more dadi torutre and arnav will be back in the next update BUT nope Mushfika had other plans for us :) he returned... At he right time :) and do I know what it was a good idea to have a short uodate... Because her was no speech in the middle between arnav and dadi and khushi and I liked that... I could picture in my head the sequence of events... And the no dialogue was. A goood choice really effective :) my days going to go welli just read your update :) and his dialogue at the end in caps on dear dadis not in a very too place is she hahahahahahahahah karma what goes around comes back around hahahaa! Can't wait for the next part seriously I hope part b comes soon :P thanks for the pm!

OMG I just realised the essays still long... It's just the effect of ur updates on me hahahahaha! Update soon:P




hahahahaha well sweta, i clearly can see how short your comment is...dear...it's REALLY SHORT...šŸ˜›

LOL awww @you did it cuz you're ,ushfika, and you did uit damn well...LOL LOVE YOU FOR THIS COMPLEMENT !

areh!!! is dadi is EXTRA RUDE+extra HITLER-ness is in her...so it's normal to torture another woman for her you know 🤣 no offence by the way

hahahahah seems like you were in action than arnav was 🤣 ROFL @go on hit her, go on hit her šŸ˜†

oh FINALLY SOMEBODY NOTICED AND ACTUALLY PUT INTHEIR COMMENT ABOUT THE HUGGING AND CLUTICHING HIS SHIRT PART!!!! ...thank youuu!!! lol i'm glad you liked that part!

aww! good that you liked the silent anger and love+caring part šŸ˜‰

lol sooo true @what goes around come around šŸ˜†šŸ˜†

lol yes yes it was a very short comment sweat 🤣


thanks a lottt yaar! LOVE YOUR COMMENT!





Edited by Mushfika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

BREAKING NEWS: I AM GOING TO HAVE DIABETES SOON😲😲

guess why 😭😭...areh!!! BECAUSE OF YOUR EXTRA SWEET COMMENTs!!! 🤣 i love each and EVERY person who commented...i can't thank you guys enough...and i can't write the names whose comments i liked the BEST BECAUSE ALL OF THEM WERE JUST made me overwhelmed...thanks a lot guys!

and AS I PROMISED, this is the LONGES UPDATE SOOO FAR!!! SO BE CAREFUL! DON"T FALL ASLEEP PLEASE...

THOSE OF YOU WHO WANT PM, PLEASE BUDDY ME!

HERE YOU GO!

PART 21: B

Seeing her husband, she ran into his arms and clutched his shirt so tightly that it seemed like she would never ever leave it. She ran in his arms as if she's a five years old kid and was being scolded or beaten up. khushi just hid her face in his chest.

Arnav enclosed her in his protective arms and kept giving subhandra a dangerous look. He enclosed her with his arms in the way as if she is the MOST PRECIOUS thing to him and in HIS WORLD. His looks and expressions were so dangerous that even the most brave person in the world would run away after seeing him. And Subhandra''..

She was just stunned and shocked at what she was watching. She was speechless watching Arnav at this very moment when he was supposed to be in Delhi!

Arnav still giving her a killing, dangerous look as if he would kill her right away.

Arnav still enclosing his wife with his one hand started heading towards their room. When they were at the door of subhandra 's room arnav stopped.

Arnav looked over his shoulder to dadi: DON'T.YOU.DARE.THINK.THAt.WE.ARE.DONE WITH IT!

And started heading to their room.


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They finally entered their room and Arnav was about to pull khushi back to lock the door. But she didn't seem like she would EVER let him go. She was hiding her head in Arnav's chest the same way she did in subhandra's room TILL NOW. Arnav locked the door and headed towards their bed.

He sat and made khushi sit on his lap as she didn't at all letting her hold of his shirt go.

Arnav still enclosing her the way before: khushi?

There was no answer, no response.

Arnav: khushi! ''.khushi please'.?

But she just seemed to hold him tighter and tighter

Arnav: sh! Khushi!

But all in vain

Arnav : khushi'.sweetheart! please look at me. We need to talk.

Arnav was finally abled to pull her back just to see her red face, swollen eyes and a trembling khushi who was sobbing like hell.

Seeing his WIFE IN SUCH A CONDITION Arnav felt like the old animal in him grew again. He started wiping her tears.

Arnav: shhh'.i am here now. You don't need to be scared. of ANY ONE!

Khushi finally controlled to blurt something out: Arnav i''.

Arnav: sshhh''.

He was about to get up when khushi held his hand and nodded to tell him not to go anywhere.

Arnav: relax! I'm right here. I wion't leave you alone.

Khushi let go of his hand and arnav went to the side desk of the bed to pour water from a jug into a glass.

He came and gave it to khushi. Khushi refused to have anything but arnav made her drink it after all he was ASR.

Arnav: feeling better?

Khushi nodded.

Khushii: Arnav wo'.da''i''.you..a..

Arnav wanted to know RIGHT AWAY what khushi wanted to say. he knew she was talking about dadi. but seeing her in such a condition, the first thing that came to his mind was that she needs REST!"

Arnav: shh! No more talks. You need rest. We'll talk about it tomorrow.

He took her into his arms,carried her to their bed and made her lie on it. He placed his hands on her forehead and'

Arnav: khushi'..sleep now.

Khushi: arn'.arnav I w'.was'.*sobbing* wo'.

Arnav felt like he would burst in anger. That lady did THIS to HIS WIFE?

Arnav: shhh'.not even a word. You need to sleep''I said we'll talk tomorrow. Please? For me?

Khushi nodded. Arnav got up to change and go to dadi's room to talk but was pulled by her hand to ask her sleep with her.

Arnav: I'm coming'.i will just change and will be right back. Okay?

But khushi was so scared and her condition was so terrible that he didn't even let her hold of Arnav's hand go.

Arnav just removed hisovercoat and went into the cover . He pulled her in his arms to his chest. Khushi held him tightly and gave him a warm hug closing her eyes. Arnav enclosed her with his protective arms..

Arnav: I'm right here. don't worry. i won't let you happen any DAMN thing to you from now!

so?? should i stop here?? no?? ok ok then continue reading šŸ˜†

Flashback~~~~~~

As she reached her room, her phone started to ring. She picked up the phone.

Khushi closing her eyes in pain: h'''.hello

Arnav: hi sweetheart

Khushi jerked open her eyes: ARNAV!

Arnav worried: What happened khushi? U ok?

Khushi: ARnav wo''.

Bu he remembered what dadi say''' ". IF YOU EVER DARE TO TELL ARNAV ANYTHING that HAPPENED YOU AND ME, THE CONSEQUENCE WON'T BE GOOD, I PROMISE"

Arnav had started to get worried more and more: khushi? Khushi what happened?? Are YOU ALRIGHT??

Khushi started to laugh with tears in her eyes to avoid his questions: oh arnav! You get worried so much! Of course I'm okay. What'.ah! *she cried out in pain*

Arnav: khushi?

Khushi: what would happen to me?

Arnav: DON"T YOU EVER, EVER try to do this kind of FUN with me! Do you get that?

Khush with tears: ohkay ! sorry! Why did you call?

Arnav: do I need a reason to call my wife now?

Khushi: no it'..it's not like that. I was'..actua'..actually WORKING.

Arnav: so now you don't have time for you husband ha?

Khushi: uh'.an''arna''.i'..no'..it's

Arnav laughed: khushi! Why do you get so nervous? I was kidding! Ok I'll hang up'..will talk to you at night hm?

Khushi: okay

As she hanged up the phne, arnav started to get worried more and more thinking that something IS WRONG. And he knew it!.

Arnav thought: I need to go back RIGHT NOW! I know if I ask khushi, she would never EVER tell me by herself if it comes to MY HAPPINESS! She never lies and if she does there MUST BE A REASON BEHIND IT. I know something is wrong. I need to know what it is.

That day he came back and when he was coming back home, he passed by the same hospital where khushi went for her check up.

He saw her and called her to give her a surprise.

Arnav: hi sweetheart!

Khushi: oh ar'arnav.

Arnav: where are you khushi?

Khushi: ih I'm'.uh../.i'm just lying on my bed.

Now Arnav was SURE! He was sure that there IS SOMETHING for which khushi is lying and it's NOT A MINOR ISSUE. He followed her to RM but hid in behind the doors so that she doesn't see him.

And finally when subhandra called her in her room, he followed her and when he reached the room he saw dadi rising her hand to slap !

End of Flashback~~~~~~~

umm...are you asleep??🄱🄱 not yet?? 😲ok good!😃 continue reading! šŸ˜›šŸ˜ƒ

Arnav thought: but why was khushi in the hospital? She's hiding something that I need to know. I still don't know the full story. Why was daio behaving with her in such a way? Thank god I came in the right time and save khushi! HOW DARE SHE EVEN THINK OF SLAPPING HER! I would''.

Suddenly he felt his wife stiring in his arms.

Dadi calling her in her room.

Khushi: nahi

Dadi pulling her hair and tilting her down

Khushi started this tossing.

Dadi slapping her.

Dadi pushing her on the ground and beating her up.

Khushi finally woke up and got up with a jerk: NAHIII!

Arnav got up: khushi ? khushi''..what'

He couldn't finish his sentence when she threw herself in his chest and enclosed him tightly.

Khushi: Arnav. Arnav pls don't leave me ever again. She'lll''.nahi!!...she'.

Arnav: shhh! Shhh''calm down. Khushi''..she'll what?

Khushi: dadiji will bea''

But she remembered what subhandra said " if you EVEr dare to tell Arnav about all this, the consequence won't be good and I PROMISE YOU THAT"

Khushi: a'.Arnav'..i will be back from the washroom.

Arnav desperately wanted to know what dadi would do but her health comes first ABOVE ALL!

As she came back from the washroom Arnav held her by her shoulder and made her seat.

wake uppp!!!! i'm not done yettt!!! continue READING PLEASE šŸ˜†šŸ˜›

Arnav: ok khushi. You NEED TO ANSWER SOME QUESTIONS of mine, that too RIGHT NOW! And I want to hear ONLY the TRUTH. Don't worry, it won't be long

khushi knew what he wants to talk about and she knew this time NONE if her excuses will do to get rid of his questions. But there's no harm to try once right?

Khushi: uhh'.arnav. can we talk la''

She couldn't even finish her sentence as arnav interrupted

Arnav: What.Part.OF "RIGH NOW" Do. You.Not understand. Khushi?

Arnav gave her such a look that she just got scared and looked down having no choice

Arnav: so, when did it start?

Khushi: uhhh'..

Arnav: khushi you don't need to be scared. I just want the answer.

Khushi: since she came into RM.

Arnav went into deep thought for 20 seconds. "since she came into RM"?? means one and a half week ago? And she was torturing MY KHUSHI ALL THIS DAMN TIME??

Arnav: so you lied to me about the first day that slamming the door in your fingers was just an ACCIDENT?

Khushi didn't want arnav to know about all this as she knew it will just break the family. Break the bond of arnav and Anjali. Break the bond of dadi and arnav. If he gets to know about all these, his husband would NEVER EVER stay back. Subhandra's words were just screaming in her ear "if you EVER dare to tell arnav abou all this, the consequence qouln't be good"

Khushi: well'..

Arnav sternly: YES? OR NO?

Khushi nervously: y'..yes!

Arnav: she told you to make tea for her on purspose on the second day regardless of knowing about your health, YES? OR NO?

Khushi: well''she'

Arnav: yes or NO?

Khushi: Yes.

Arnav: because of all these you were so scared throughout the whole damn time of coming back to RM from the hotel, in the dining table, in the room, yes or no?

Khushi: yes.

Arnav: before I went to delhi, you were so scared scared and lied to me because of dadi, yes or NO?

Khushi: yes.

Arnav: when I called you on ur phone last night, you weren't cooking and weren't busy at all; yes or no?

Khushi thought sometimes before answering as she knew if she tells him the truth, arnav will surely want to know what happened and'

Arnav: khushi you don't need to think! Just say yes or no.

Khushi: arnav'I 'wa'

Arnav starly: yes or no khushi?

Khushi shut her eyes: yes.

And she knew the next question of him.

Arnav: What happened?

Khushi stayed quite.

Arnav: khushi''.i;m asking you something.

Khushi: nothing much'..she just asked me to bring tea for her and I dro'.

Arnav: DID.I.NOT.SAY.not.TO.LIE.TO.ME?

Khushi didn't want to tell him the physical abusing part of dadi as she knew arnav that he won't EVER tolerate a SINGLE TEAR of his loved ones . And she knew that he loves her like CRAZY and if she tells how dadi beat her up, he'll he will NEVER EVER SPARE HER.

Khushi: she''she just'..actually she scolded me badly. You know how she's all in rage all the time, so yah. I made a mistake and she scolded me and I got scared and lied to you as I didn't wanna tell you about all these. You would be tensed for NO REASON

Although arnav doubted her, he didn't have any choice without believing khushi as she AT LEAST said something AGAINST her

Arnav: you are not lying are you?

Khushi: no'.no not at all!

Arnav: ok leave that for a second. Let's get back to our YES/NOT questions. You lied to me that you were lying on the bed when I called you this morning, YES OR NO?

Khushi was shocked for a moment to know the fact that he knew she was lying: no I was'I was ly'..

Arnav: the TRUTH KHUSHI

Khushi: yes.

Arnav: and why were you in the hospital khushi?

Khushi: oh it was just some headaches. I often have headaches you know. Uhh arnav, can we resume this a bit later.

Arnav looked at her for a moment and then: sure!

Khushi went to the bed

Khushi: I'll sleep for sometimes.

Arnav nodded

Suddenly khushi's phone rang. Arnav looked at the screen and it read "Mrs. Seerat, DOCTOR".

Arnav picked up the phone but stayed quite

Doctor: MRs Raizada, you forgot your prescription. How did you buy the medicines and the anticeptic cream then? Anyways, I had to call you anyhow. I forgot to mention that you MUST wear bear back outfits or any outfits that are at LEAST half opened in the back as your wounds MUST Need to get air. And your condition seemed really bad to me. You must come for check up every week. And don' forget to come tomorrow for your test okay? And you said yo told about your wounds to Mr. Raizada. So since h knows all about these, please let him put the antiseptic cream in your back. Don't try to put it by yourselves as it needs to be applied in EVERY place where you got hurt. And'. Hello? Mrs raizada?

Arnav was speechless and shocked. He didn't know hwo to react after what the doctor said.

KhUSHI WAS HURT?? The wounds? Won't heal? Needs air? The tests??? Bad conditions? SHIT@ ! that means dadi ACTUALLY! SHIT!


hmmm...what can i say? WAS IT LONG?????? hahahah I KNOW IT WAS!!!

And I BELIEVE THAT the wait was worth it...RIGHT????😳

šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜† i guess yesss😳😳😳


please please please, DO COMMENT and PRESS THE LIKE BUTTON...it means a lot to me...and after such a long update i guess more than 115 likes to banta hi hai na?? hm? šŸ˜‰i seriously can't wait to see your comments!!! took a lot of time to write it, please don't let it go waste...😭

THANK YOU! šŸ¤—

PART 22: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/68117569

Edited by Mushfika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMGGG just realized that i m the first person to comment !! 🄳

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AWESOME, AMAZING, MINDBLOWING, FANTASTIC, SUPERB, OUTSTANDING, OUT OF THE WORLD, ONE OF YOUR BESTEST part šŸ˜ƒšŸ‘

Arnav found out almost everything???
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poor khushi 😭 PLEASE dont hide anything

Arnieee please do something veryyy BAD to that budiya 😔😔

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Edited by MashiatMimosa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliant update. Thank God Arnav knows now what Dadi did to Khushi and he will be able to take care of Khushi and also reassure her.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow..long update
wen ever i saw d red colour font..only 2 words come from my mouth

WHAT THE!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it!!!!!!
i m sure nw dadi z a goner nw! :P
continue soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

OMG Mushfika it was like a dream come true .such a long update bt mera man kabhi nahi bharta .I luvd it .IT WAS AWESOME šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘.

Ab maza aayega dadi ki band bajegi and as kuch romantic to serila mein ab hota nahi hai yumhare updates mujhe bht zyada khush kar dete hai.I was totally imagining all the scenes .Instead of predicting now mein apna dimag unhe imagine karne mein lagati hun.AND last part was it GM guess it was šŸ˜› .And ab dadi ka kya hoga lolz šŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing part loved it long update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow AMAZING is the only word that came to my mind right now!!šŸ‘
Loved it!!
It was a very long update I had a good time reading it
Can't wait for Arnav to take an action against dadi
continue soon!!!šŸ˜ŠšŸ‘šŸ¼
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the questioning part..and him listening to doc..nicely written...lovely. :-)

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