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Risha

@LivingInPajamas

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Posted: 13 years ago

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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

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Posted: 13 years ago

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I'm firsttt !!! 😲

Risha, this was just beautiful.

Made me cry, literally

Never really looked at their marriage from this perspective before.

Hated the fact that she couldn't listen to his plea.

Sad yet touching.

Amazing work! :)

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sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

I am crying, dammit!

I so wish Khushi had time to live, had a chance to see her Laad Governor beyond limits. I wish Arnav had a chance to repent, to shower Khushi with all the love and happiness she deserved...

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Sugi

@Arshi.Sugi.IPK

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Posted: 13 years ago

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nice but sad 😭

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

man that was brutal what she suffered
you made is cry reading what poor khushi went through
perhaps death was the best thing but why did she commit suicide
wel this is his punishment
he got another chance at love life and he once again blew it
so emotional very annoyed that my tears arent stopping after reading this peice

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aishwarya_rox

@aishwarya_rox

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Posted: 13 years ago

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This made me cry...I'm not a person who cries during movies or whole reading books...
Bt yeah hats off to u!! For writing such a touching piece of work
I really hope Arnav had a better way to regret his actions in the show! Maybe the cvs cud hv gt some inspiration fm the writers in the forum...
Very very very very well written..hats off!

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tashi26

@tashi26

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

this was amazing...superb..i couldnt stop crying while reading it...

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Flame.

@Flame.

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

Oh no! This is so sad. I wasn't expecting such an ending. I thought she would somehow survive. This is so heartbreaking. Oh my Khushi. What have you done Arnav? :( I seriously wish they had got the chance to start their life again. Afresh.

It was beautifully written. All the emotions Arnav felt whilst he was returning from the hospital were so beautifully written. Loved it Risha.

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Cheryth

@Cheryth

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Posted: 13 years ago

painfully, utterly and heart-breakingly beautiful🥺

You've written maturely, realistically

and I cried and cried

the poor soul

she would be much happier amongst the stars though

and frankly if this would have been the outcome in the show

I mean if Arnav surely would have let the pest win over their love in the show

he would have been personally dead by now man🤢

and I wouldn't care if their meant to be

I would never want her to be with Arnav if this was the decision he took

Because then, he would never deserve her - our gem of a woman!!!

dat badir😡

sigh* coming back to the story

It was agonizing

Khushi, dint commit suicide right? she was sick innit?

Our Khushi's a fighter man, dat pagli

she wouldn't commit suicide

To even think of her 'dead' ? broke my heart, but the way she suffered and the fact that she had a small smile on her lips justified her death and I made my piece with it

This is stuff that happens in real life

we're granted one life with less time

You did a remarkable Job with it Risha👏

Written skilfully⭐️

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207shikha

@207shikha

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Posted: 13 years ago

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aww it was so painful.!

it literally shattered ma heart into

thousands of pieces.! OMG it was really sad.!

but maan gaye bhai.! you wrote it just mighty well.!