Series : Unconditional Love TS : pt 2/pg 64 (1/4) - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello Hi 😊 well this is the first time am writing an OS for a series.Shilpa gave me an idea for this OS and here you go !!This is for u shilpa 😃
OS ' Can u do it Mr.Raizada?
The Raizada mansion was decorated beautifully with all the fairy lights and flowers everywere resembling a palace.Its the day of Aakhash and Payal's engagement and both the families decided it will be held in Raizada Mansion.
Khushi was dressed in a beautiful red and green lehenga looking gorgeous.Its the day of her jiji and Akhashji's engagement.She was so excited and happy for her jiji.All through the excitement her eyes kept searching for one handsome man.
She pouted and muttered "Laad governor ! Apne bhai ki saagai pe bhi dhikhayi nahi dhera.Pakka kaam kar rahe honge apne laptop ko gur gur ke"(Laad governor is not to be seen even on his own brother's engagement.Am sure he must be working staring at his laptop)
At that exact moment,her heart started beating faster and she stopped walking and turned to see Arnav walking down the stairs with a phone in his hand.But the moment his eyes met hers he stopped and stared admiring her from head to toe.
Khushi felt uncomfortable and began figeting with her duppatta but couldn't seem to take her eyes away from him either.Arnav gave her his signature smirk and proceeded downstairs.Khushi came back to her senses and walked off ignoring him.
Arnav looked at her amused and kept admiring her.She looked absolutely gorgeous and he loved seeing her in red as its his favourite color.
Soon its time for the engagement.And a blushing Payal and a shy Aakhash exchanged rings and commited to each other.They both looked adorable together and Khushi thanked her Devi Maiyaa for bringing Aakhashji into her sister's life.
They had organized for music and everyone soon joined in the fun and began dancing.Khushi pulled Aakhash and Payal and began dancing around them.Due to her insistence the newly engaged couple started dancing in each other's arms.
The entire Raizada's and Buaji joined in the dance enjoying to their hearts.Arnav was the only Raizada who stood aside looking uninterested.Although his eyes never left Khushi's and he tracked her everymove.
Khushi could feel Arnav's eyes on her.She suddenly felt shy and awkward dancing when he was staring at her like he is ready to devour her any minute.She pulled NK aside and asked him to make Arnav dance.
NK nodded cheerfully and went across Arnav "Hey nannav mera bhai.Come on join us.Tum yahaan akhele sab ko chur kyun rahe ho " (Hey Nannav you are u staring at everyone standing alone?)Arnav glared at him and Anjali who just came beside them laughed "NK bhai chur nahi gur "(NK its not chur its gur)
NK smiled sheepishly "wahi wahi gur " Anjali shook her head at him and turned to Arnav "Chotte,chalo tum bhi humare saath dance karo na "
Arnav rolled his eyes" di mujhe yeh sab mein interest nahi hai "(Di i dont have interest in all these things)
Khushi got annoyed and came puffing "Anjaliji,Nanehji chodiye inhe.Inhe kaam aur Amanji ke alawa kuch aatha hi nahi.Aap sab kyun apna waqt barbaad kar rahe ho chaliye "(Di nanehji leave him.He cant do anything other than work.Why are you wasting ur time on his). She shot a glare at him and pulled off Anjali and NK.
"What the !!!" he went towards her and pulled her arms "Khushi how dare you talk about me like that " Khushi calmly turned and moved off his arm aside "Hum daring kyun nahi karange? Humne sach kaha.Aapko naachna nahi aatha " (I told the truth u cant dance) with that she moved off and joined the others in dancing.
Suddenly the music changed and there much to the disbelief and happiness of Khushi,Arnav stood in the centre and began singing and dancing.She cant believe her own eyes and stood staring open mouthed.
Arnav smirked and pulled her along to the dance.As everyone began dancing along,Arnav quickly took hold of Khushi's hand and pulled her with him when unnoticed.
He reached near the pool side "Arnavji chodiye,aap yeh kya kar rahe hain " Khushi asked Arnav while he was dragging her with him.
He pulled her and pinned her to the wall.Khushi's eyes widened and gasped "Arnavji hume jaane dheejiye koi aajayega"
Arnav smirked "So what aajane dho mujhe koi faraq nahi padtha " he moved his head closer to hers and Khushi began squirming in his hold.
His hands held her bare waist and pulled her more close to him Khushi trembled affected by his closeness "Arnavji hume chodiye aap humare saath aisa nahi kar sakthe "
Arnav quirked his eyebrows "Really ? Thodi dher pehele kya kaha tumne?mujhe kaam ke alawa kuch nahi aatha right.I'l show you now mujhe aur kya kya aatha hai " he bent his head and caught her lips in a sizzling kiss.Khushi's eyes opened in shock and she tried pulling away.
Arnav held her tighter and not leaving her out of his hold and continued kissing.When Khushi gasped out,he plunged his tongue inside not missing the opportunity.After kissing her thoroughly he slowly lifted his head and gazed at her with passion.
Khushi's lips were swollen and she looked well kissed.Both of them were breathing heavily and Khushi looked at him in disbelief "Arnavji aaap----" she stopped unable to continue.
Arnav smirked "So what do you say now Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada? "
Khushi blushed shyly and hugged him.Arnav smiled hugging her back it amazed him that even after being married to him for nearly 2 years Khushi still blushed like a young lover.But he loved this about her.
Well do let me know how it is 😊 comments and criticisms are welcome as always !!If you like this OS and would like to read my other OS's and ff's check out my writing index below for more 😃
Edited by crazyyfan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Note for silent readers


you guys are so smart, I must say! We announced to pm those who will like the PM post on first page. You guys liked it and we pmed you. But you never reply on the posts!😲😡
So, there will be new rule from now onwards.
Those who will comment on the posts, will get pms of the next posts 😉

I hope you enjoyed reading 😊
Edited by ii..Shilpa..ii - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aarti Di i dont think i need to tell u how much i love ur works !!!
and this one is spot on as usual !!!!!
simply love Arshi in this !!!!
loved their kiss 😉

love it totally !!!
love and hugs 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Jyo.Arshi.IPK

Aarti Di i dont think i need to tell u how much i love ur works !!!

and this one is spot on as usual !!!!!
simply love Arshi in this !!!!
loved their kiss 😉

love it totally !!!
love and hugs 🤗

🤗Thanks jo and i love ur works and You 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

aarti i think u hav done ur masters in writing Romantic stories.!!!😛

sucha a lovely OS dear.. loved it !!! 🤗


Edited by cutiewink - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice OS crazyfan...it is nice that you kept the secret that they were married until the last part of the story!
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Posted: 12 years ago
bravo update dear.
nice an lovely sooo romanticly 😳.
thank u😛.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww they are married
brilliant OS
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update like always!
arshi make us fall in love with them more day by day!
well thanks for pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awwe they are already married .it was really cute

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