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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
nice part
too villies are joining together ah?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Gisel, nice start for the comback of Charu👏. Can't wait... Got a shock when she said that the baby eyes looks like TA... lol😆.
CV's please atleast keep one scene like this for TA/T😛.
Waiting for next part😉.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Ohhh Charu is backk ah??? 😲 Happyyy 😆
I also got shocked for a secondd, but hope she really changed 😉
Sounds good and its interesting Gisel
Thank You 😃

Waiting for next one 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Wow nice start Gisel!! Charu's back also..waiting for part 2.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
One small correction Gisel... Charu will not say kannu appidiye 'Tamil' pola iruku illa :) She will say kannu appidiye 'avaru' kannu mathiriye iruku. She has never called him Tamil. Eppavume 'avaru' than.

But... on second thought are you hinting that she really changed by calling him
Tamil' and not 'avar'...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
TT's house

Shamz, "Ena Thulasi ippidi pannura? Ithu nama kadasi varusham in college. Ellarum poram. Nee um va. Please! Please!😳"
Thulasi, "Illa di. Nama therumbi vantha odana semester iruku. Padikanum. Vendamai."
Just then Tamil comes in.
Shamz, "Thulasi..Please..."
Tamil, "Ena achu Shammz? Ethuku Thulasi no solluru?😕"
Shammz turns to face Tamil.
Shamz, "Sir nengalai sollunga sir. Ithu enga college last year. College la elarum tour porum. Thulasi varamateingira."
Tamil, "Ena Thulasi ithu? Poitu vara vendiyathu thena?👍🏼"
Thulasi looks at him and nods no angrily.
Tamil continues, "Shammz kavala padathe, ava varuva. Evalo ketanum fees?" and smiles mockingly at Thulasi 😆.
Shamz, "Aiyaram rupa!"😲.
Tamil, "Aiyaram a ? Apdi enga porenga? Evalo nalaiku?"
Shamz, "Bangalore 😲, Mysore. 3 days tour."
Tamil, "Oh! Ok! Thulasi kandipa varuva😕"
Shamz, "Thanks sir!", hugs Thulasi and leaves.(Shamz, close the door behind you!😆)
Thulasi, "Ena ga nenaichitu irunthein ga? Nan than vendam vendam nu thalai aturein la."
Tamil, "Athunala ena pondatti? Ne kasukaga than ippidi sonnanu theriyum. Kavala padathe, kasu elam iruku. Nee poitu va.😃"
Thulasi, "Haem..Ivalo than en purushanuku arivu.😕"
Tamil, "Ai nilu. En salichikira?"
Thulasi, "Illa 3 nallu college kadai yathu. Enum 2 masathilla college kuda mudiya poguthu.😆"*sigh*"Seri nan Banglore poitu varein😛."
Tamil, "Kuttima!😆" shocked goes near her.
Thulasi, "Pack pana num. Thondaravu pannathein ga."
Tamil, "Ena kuttima ithu? Unaku pidikilana poga vendamai." He goes more near. She takes steps backward 😆.
Thulasi, "Cha cha. Last year tour. Poi than aganum. Unga peichathata mudiyuma!" By now Thulasi hits the wall.
Tamil puts his hands on either side of her jailing her, *sighs* admires her from head to toe😳. She is wearing a normal sky blue saree , "Hm. Athan! Nan sollurein tour poga vendam!"
He caresses her rosy lips with his forefinger and leans forward😳. Thulasi looks at him and then pushes him and runs into the bedroom 😳.
Tamil, "Hey!" laughs and chases her😳. He finally gets hold of her wrist. She stops. He pulls her towards him in a flash from behind❤️. Their reflection in their full foot bedroom mirror . He slowly moves his hands over her arms to her shoulder. Thulasi closes her eyes slowly controlling her breathlessness, as Tamil gently kisses her shoulders heading to the nape of her neck . His hands slowly moves from her shoulder to her hips and she opens her eyes in shock and then smiles😉. Tamil notices this on the mirror and smiles😉Thulasi changes her expression and untangles herself from his grip and faces him . Tamil lets go of her with a smirk on his smiling face, a "chewing gum" mouth and surrendering his hands on a "hands up" style😉. Thulasi controls her smile😳. Then, she turns to go outside. She feels a tug . Tamil has got hold of her saree's pallu. She smiles again. Of all days, today she had forgotten to pin her saree in place 😆. She changes her expression and turns only to find her pallu tangled to his shirt's button😛. She raises her eyebrows😉. He nods no indicating that he didn't do anything😆. She crosses her hands😳. He gives a mocking 'taken aback' look and starts untangling her pallu only to get it entangled on his watch😆. Thulasi looks at him with mocking anger . He mocks frustration and goes and sits in the bed, pulling Thulasi along and trying to take the pallu out of his watch😳. Thulasi stops him and untangles it herself😛. She can sense Tamil looking at her. She feels a tingling feeling down her spine 😳. She shivers as Tamil holds her hand. He takes of the pallu and gives it to her. He smiles and tells her to go in his expression (Ivalo thana?😛). She leaves. He shakes his head 'out of the fantasy' and lies down on his bed smiling😳. Thulasi goes to the kitchen and breathes out. She still has the tingling feeling down her neck . She smiles and looks at herself in a handheld mirror and kisses herself😉.

Thodarum!

Edited by Gisel - 12 years ago
vjayam thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
gisel what can i say about part 2...for a moment i was wondering whether the part was written by u or esther...the distinct touch is surely both yr signatures..
too good...in fact it is sure to take all to a diff land...more coments after the return!!(to normalcy i mean!)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: vjayam

gisel what can i say about part 2...for a moment i was wondering whether the part was written by u or esther...the distinct touch is surely both yr signatures..

too good...in fact it is sure to take all to a diff land...more coments after the return!!(to normalcy i mean!)


Haha! Always I go for comedy and concentrate more on dialogue and story...this time I tried to go for romance more...well, it is halloween so be careful😉!

I can guarantee that it will be 😉 romantic!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aiaiyo Gisel enneku vekkam a iruku😆, well done Gisel, amezing episode👏, I also asked me like Jeya akka, ana ungaluku kanne styles varum pole, good👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Beautiful narration, Gisel. I really enjoyed reading these parts. You have captured the moods of tenderness and gentleness very nicely.

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