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Posted: 12 years ago
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Poem on VirMan'.

Virat-

Pahaadon ki

Sinduri shaam

Dekhi hai'

Uss shaam

Ka aasmaan

Dekha hai..

Zindagi ke

Canvas par

Satrangi rang

Daala ho

jaise

Kisi ne'

Wo aur

Koi nahi..

Meri Maanvi

Hai'

Rangon se

Zindagi se bhari'

Ek behti surili

Nadi'

Jo Shararati

Natkhat

Hai'.

Mere har

Gaane ki

Taal lay

Sur'

Meetas'

Usse shuru..

Uspe khatam..

Aaj..

Hum dono

Ek hain..

Zindagi

Itni haseen

Hogi

Socha

Na tha'..❤️

Maanvi-

Registan mein

Tanha ped

Dekha hai..

Tehaniyo par

Aakhri pattiyaan

Dekhi hai'

Tez hawa ka

Jhonkha

Unhe ukhaad

Fenkta..

Main wahi thi..

Akhri pattiyaan

Apne haathon

Se sadev

Bachanewala

Mera virat hai..

Virat

Ek baandh hai

Jo mere andar

Udwelit(excited)

Jal dharaon ko

Rok leta hai..

Bhatakne nahi deta..

Aaj hum dono

Ek hai..

Zindagi itni

Haseen hogi

Socha na tha..❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful to the core Divya..

and what a way you have with hindi words .. Amazing 👏

Virat's peom,

- Maanvi, diffused his lonliness, filled his life with the colors of rainbow.. she sweetened his life with her sweetness. she became his inspiration and the sur and taal for his music ..and together they are today .. which he never imagine.. wow i am speechless, what a beautiful composition

hope i got the essence of it right Divya- sorry if I misunderstood it

Maanvi's poem,

this is even more amazing and heart touching .. you were describing the confession scene,.. where Virat was trying to save the lone leaf.. while she just kept standing there..Virat is the one who is her strength and her hope..

I don't know but it is just so beautiful for words.. i mean it has so much depth .. which my brain is not processing rightly ..

but lovely poems Divya ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely dovely yaarr...
u r just a awesum writer
keep writing more poems
and do post for all of us⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely yaar..u pen down the emotions too well..👏
i wish i cud write poems...it just helps us to express our deep emotions in a subtle way...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: munnihyderabad

Beautiful to the core Divya..


and what a way you have with hindi words .. Amazing 👏

Virat's peom,

- Maanvi, diffused his lonliness, filled his life with the colors of rainbow.. she sweetened his life with her sweetness. she became his inspiration and the sur and taal for his music ..and together they are today .. which he never imagine.. wow i am speechless, what a beautiful composition

hope i got the essence of it right Divya- sorry if I misunderstood it

Maanvi's poem,

this is even more amazing and heart touching .. you were describing the confession scene,.. where Virat was trying to save the lone leaf.. while she just kept standing there..Virat is the one who is her strength and her hope..

I don't know but it is just so beautiful for words.. i mean it has so much depth .. which my brain is not processing rightly ..

but lovely poems Divya ⭐️


Awww Munni you understood it very correctly...Thanks for getting it right..
I am overwhelmed to see your comment...Yup for me this is how i see VirMan love...


I thought nobdy will comment...but to get ur comment n that too so lovely..yayy i m dancing dhinka chika...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: manashu123

lovely dovely yaarr...

u r just a awesum writer
keep writing more poems
and do post for all of us⭐️


Really Manashu..i will write more poems..so happy u liked it..yayy..🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: niksidfan

lovely yaar..u pen down the emotions too well..👏

i wish i cud write poems...it just helps us to express our deep emotions in a subtle way...


Priya my sweetheart..No thanks to you..tujhe to comment karna hi tha..but u liked it so super happy my Jaanu..❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rabzonedge


Priya my sweetheart..No thanks to you..tujhe to comment karna hi tha..but u liked it so super happy my Jaanu..❤️

yes sweetie🤗..gud u learnt it at last..😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: niksidfan

yes sweetie🤗..gud u learnt it at last..😉



Hmmm i have to...Sorry i said u so many 'Thanks'..😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWWW😳😳❤️❤️❤️LOVELY POST👏👏👏

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