OS-LIFE AND DEATH EPILOGUE PAGE 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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HI GUYS I M TRYING TO WRITE AN OTHER OS
HOPE U LIKE IT
IT WILL BE OF 2 PARTS
Still image of Maan and Geet in Geet Hui Sabse Parayi
PART 1
Maan married geet by offering her 40 lakhs for the treatment of her
father mohinder handa...after taking her home.he started mistreating her by
forcing her to eat non veg as she is pure veg...nd always behaves rudely
in home as well as infront of everyone in the office...bt in presnece
of media(as he is a big buisness man) he will behave lyk lovely hubby...he even didnot allow her to
meet her paa...nd if she tried he will threat her bt stopping by the
medication...she cried nd request him..bt he doesnt effect him.ONE DAY maan decided to host a party...nd give all the work to geet...nd asked her
to show her presnece in the party...when she declined to join the party..he treated her badly...soo no option left she attended the party bt maan behaves rudely wid her nd he even tried to kiss her nd insulted her in front of his friends ..because of the insult geet left the housend maan doesnt know abt it...his secretary bittuji informed dat geet is not at home nd even told dat he behaves ruely wid her nd wht he did its truely wrong...nd thinks yes he rudely behaved wid her...on the
other side geet goes to the farmhouse as she needs some
time alone...nd security guard informed maan after geet...he left to get her
back...nd when he reached the farmhouse he found her in the garden and he says sorry about his behaviour..nd told the reason wht
changed him sooo much...nd he treats her wound as she gets injured in
the farmhouse nd takes proper care of her...geet start feeling posiitve abt
him...bt maan always have some feeling for her as she is the only girl he
met in his life...who always prefer relationship more den money...bt his
ego always comes front...he mis treats her bt care for her lyk
anything...bt doesnt show up..nd bandage her wound everyday..

AFTER
ONE WEEK...bittuji received call from bhaii asking 25 crores in order
for safe life of maan..nd agar nai diya dey will see the result...bittuji
told dis matter to maan nd he doesnt take dis matter seriously...nd dis
is the biggest mistake he committed...
After 2,3 days geet going
to doc..nd maan told geet to take his car nd asked bittuji to follow
her...bt its his goodluck or geet badluck...mssn ki car ke brakes fail kiye
gye the only by bhai gang members...maan left to his office...nd on the
other side bittuji ws following geet car nd he gets informed by police as maan ws not picking up the call...ki maan ki car ki brakes failed hai..nd
asked him not to go out of the house...nd goons may shoot him...nd kept
the call nd started calling maan...ki ab kya kare as geet took his car...nd
den he hears the sound of car banging nd simultaneously...gun shot nd
saw geet lyking unconsiuosly out of the car nd her shoulder is bleeding
because of the gun shoot nd her forehood also blleding...as its major
accident.
On the other side maan checks his
fone...he saw missed calls from bittuji as well as polics...nd a msg dat
his life is in danger nd specially not to take his car...he gets into
panicking mode nd called bittuji to get biggest shock of the life...

wht will happen next..
will geet be able to survive dis accident ???
wht will maan do?????
STAY TUNE FOR THE NEXT PART..
PLZZZ PRESS LIKE BUTTON ND COMMENT
UR COMMENTS MOTIVATES ME...
WAIITNG FOR UR RESPONSE...
plzzz😭
nd sorry for the spelling mistake

INDEX
PART 1 (ABOVE)
LAST PART PAGE 3
EPILOGUE PAGE 6
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ana1411 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely OS

Waiting for Part 2
amrinderdhami thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorry dear but d like button is not working,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
loved d ff soo much felt like slaping maan for his rude behaviour
loved d ff too good continue soo will b waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nothing will happen to geet...as maan is with her...

beautiful os...

loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely os...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting update next part soon dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi guys
will update next part either today of tomorrow evening
meettu thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks alot guys for the likes nd comments
will be more happy if i get more response in the last part...

PART-2(LAST PART)
Maan starts his journey towards hospital driving at full speed crossing every signal doesnot caring abt nething...geet is more imp to him at dat moment...he realises his mistake nd repenting for it...how much he misbehaved wid her...he is crying during the journey..he covers the dist of 20km in hardly 10 mins...nd the view shocked him...geet lying on the stretcher nd doc r not ready to operate her...as its police case..bt dey dont know whts biggest mistake dey r doing by not treating her...
Maan anger rose 100 times...nd he just held his collar...nd going to slap him...bt bittuji controlled him...nd he says "how dare u not to treat my wife" docs ki halat buri..as dey didnt know dat she is GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA...docs order nurse to take geet to OT...nd maan gives threat to doc..if nething happens to her...the result u will see...
And after taking geet to OT ...maan orders his bodyguard to search bhai nd his members .nd kill them at dat moment..nd dey cant even deny deir boss by listening to his angery voice. After 3 hours doc come out...nd says rest upto GOD...nd her accident was too worse...Maan tears starts falling..as first he loves some person truely by heart.
Den he sees ganesh ji temple in the hospital..nd Maan knows how much geet believes in ganesh ji...nd he also had believe in the ganesh ji..but after some worse things in the past..he didnt believe in GOD...bt now he requires only god blesses...after 15 years...he goes to the temple...to pray to save his love...
On the other side docs informed bittuji dat geet heakth is declining...dey cant do nething..nd asked him to call maan...soo dat he can meet mb...Bituuji start searching for maan nd view just shocked him dat maan is praying nd sise by side tears r flowing..he just cant believe it..HE realised how much his boss loves geet..nd he too prayed to god.to save geet...as maan is totally changed man because of geet...nd bittuji den informed maan...but maan has 200% believe in god..dat nthing will happen to geet...den he take small idol of ganesh ji from the temple nd goes to ICU...nd keeps the ganesh ji near geet bed...nd starts praying to GOD...nd the machine starts curing nd her health is improving...nd docs get shocked as truely miracle happens...maan believe in god nd his love towards geet...safe her love of life...he is truely happy...nd bittuji tooo..fianlly love wins.
on the other side his bodyguard finds the bhai nd his members...nd maan ne kya kiya wid dem god knows...
After 5 days geet comes maan mansion truely lyk a bride...nd maan takes full care of geet...nd geet also starts noticing dat maan doesnot get angry..nd always remains happy nd always pray to ganesh ji in the morning...nd house is becoming lyk home...
One day geet asked from maan why he changed soo suddenly...nd already he ws frustrated because he ws not able to confess his love..nd in frustration he told he love her...nd shock laga geet ko...bt after seeing geet blushing...he asked from her do u love me...nd geet cheeks r lyk tomato...nd maan becomes happy..nd he kisses her cheek nd hugs her...nd geet wants to take deir relationship to next level...bt maan cares for her health more...
After 1 month.maan organises big party nd give geet a beautifull sari nd asked geet to wear dis in the party bt doesnt tell her abt the reason for the party..nd geet arrives in the party looking hot as usual nd the view just shocked nd surprised her..as in between mandap is set up beautifully...nd maan proposed her infront of everyone nd married her...nd he even calls mohinder and rano nd ...nd he also says sorry for his behaviour...but both r happy as geet get wht she deserves,,,nd offically its deir first night...nd room ws decroted beautifully nd both become one..
MAAN AND GEET BECOME MAANEET...IN TRUE SENSE
END
plzzz press like nd comment
it really motivates me
if u guys want epiolgue plz tell
sorry for any mistake
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Posted: 12 years ago
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HI GUYS
I M ALREADY DONE WID THE EPILOGUE
BT PLZZZ GIVE ME LIKES ND COMMENTS
PLZZZ.


ITS A REQUEST
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely update dear.
please give epilogue .
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
it want a big epilogue



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