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Posted: 12 years ago
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holaa guyz...😊

kaise ho sab

ache ho hoge ryt...😳

ye main nhi Aroma pooch rhi hai...

ab samajh toh gye hi hoge...ye OS bhi humari AROMA madam ka hi hai...

kabse ye ladki keh rhi hai ye mera last work last work...

par iska kabhi last aata hi nhi hai...

haina




challo chado...

main bhi kya gappe ladane baith gyi...


chaloo OS read karlo...

warna aru mujhe maregi...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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boys in RH ... discussing about some thing very serious ...
sw : but we have to do something but how ...
rey : right per hum kuj nahi kar saktey ... as u know ki taani us k pass hey ...
viky : to hum haat pey haat rakh k b nahi beth saktey na ...
bharat : viky thik bol rha hey ...
swayam : lekin kya krey hum log ... kuj samaz nahi a rha hum logo ko ...
rey : right i think hum logo ko uska pisha karna chahiye sayad kuj clue mil jaye ki tanni ko kha rkha hey ...
nil : right rey
swyam : ok then lets go ...

other hand some one listening them ...
that person call some one ...
person 1 : wo log nikal chukey hey ...
person 2 ; mujey pta tha wo esa hi kuj kareygey .. follow them ...

person 1 : ok but aappp ...
person 2 : meri tension mat lo tum just follow them ...
person 1 : ok i'll inform u ..
person 2 : ok ...
call end ...

girl pvo
doctor advised me to take rest because my this sickness ... so i have to take rest but no time for rest its important ... because i have to help them .. at any cost but ... hope ki kuj garbar na ho but last time god is baar help kar do or kuj nahi mangney wali next ... only this time meri sansey tab tak mat rokna jab tak sab thik na ho jaye ... as iterest hi kuj or pal dey do bas or kuj nahi ... bas is baar meri side ley lena ... aj ka din phir sab khatam ho jayega ... help me .. kyu ki main jo karney ja rhi hoo wo sirf apno k liye kar rhi hoo ... to is baar dhokha mat dena ... meri jindagi agar mujey baad main dhokha dey dey to koi shikva nahi kyu ki mujey pta hey ki yahi hoga ...

girl2 pvo
waqt rait ki trha haath sey nikal rha hey ... kis taraf jau ... wo mujey meri jindagi sey b pyaari hey ... use roku to doosri taraf wo log hey jin ko main kabhi nahi bula sakti they also special for me esa nahi ho sakta ki main dono ko save kar loo ... ek t o doctar na already rest k liye bola usey per uski jid . god please help na kisi ko kuj na hoo ... and a lone tear escape from her eyes ...


other hand boys following that person nd they reach in a old place .. no one around there ...this place is completely empty ...
they walking from last 30 min ... but there no end of this street .. they r now really very tired
swayam : kitna or chalna hoga ...
rey ; right azeeb place hey koi b nahi hey jha ...
viky ; main or nahi chal sakta ...
nil : dude hamey chalna hoga ... we have to walk ...
swayam : ha hamey taani ko bchana hey un logo sey ...
bharat : ha lekin un logo ney us ko pakra kyu mujey samaz nahi a rha ..
rey : yahi to pta lgana hey ...

nd they again start walking ...
then they at last enter in old factory ...
rey : wo admi kha gya ... khi dikh nahi rha ...
swayam : ha sahi bol rha ...
bharat : yahi khai hoga doondtey hey ...
nd they start searching that person ...
at last they hear some noises ...
rey ; y awa to sharon ki hey ..
swayam : ha but wo yha kesey ...
viky : kahi un logo ney baki girls ko b kidnap to nahi kar liya ...
voice ; right mr viky ... itney bewkoof nahi ho tum ha ... mujey pta tha tum log pisha to jroor karogey mera ... nd see tum logo ney wahi kiya jo maney scoha tha tum logo ko yha lana kitna easy tha ab usey to yha ana hi hoga ... muj sey koi nahi jeet sakta (angrey face evil wala ...)... that girl bola tha panga mat lo nahi to bohat mehnga parega ... use but meri baat nahi mani usney ab pta chalega usey meri power ka ...


person1 all again person 2
person 1 ; where r u ...
person 2 : coming ...
person 1 ; fast
person 2 : yes
call end ...

rey : see tum bohat galat kar rhey ho ha ...
voice : tum logo ko to pta hi nahi hey ki maney kya kiya hey ... jab tum logo ko scah pta chalega to tum logo ki kya halat hogi ... tum log scoh b nahi saktey ...after all tum logo k samaz k bahar hey sab kuj ...
swayam : hum logo ko kyu pareshan kar rhey ho hamney kiya kya hey ha ...
men : maney kab bola tum logo ney kuj kiya ... lekin us ney to kiya hey na ... ...she thinks ki mujey kuj pta nahi chalega ...
rey : kon ? kis ki baat kar rhey ho tum ... bolo gey kuj tum ha ...
rey about to hit that man ...
men : hey hey don't u dare warna tumhari pyarei friends ki jaan chali jayegi see there
all boys look in that direction which indicated by that person ... what boys saws its give them big shock ...all girls r there ... there hands r tied very badely ... girls crying ...
viky : how dare u ...u basterd ...
men : i know i know lekin ek or gift hey wo tum logo k us k aney k baad milega so wait nd watch ...
pakar lo in logo ko b ab ayega mzza ...

swayam : kis ki baat kar rha hey yeee or kon aney wala hey ...
rey : kuj samaz nahi a rha ...


afetr that a person enter in that place men smile at this
men ; kha they tum shivam m waiting for u ...
shivam : wo main bas ...
rey : ye iski baat kar rha tha kya isey kya pta hey ...
shaivam : wo chahu main wo bas thora kaam tha ...
samaz gye na its vp ...
vp : its k ... see ye log b a gye jha bas ab uska intzaar hey ...but wo abhi tak ayi kyu nahi ...

after 10 min they hear some sound but no one enter in ...
vp : i know its u ... samney ao jaldi merey pass time nahi hey ... is mouse cat game k liye so jaldi samney ao ...
but no responce
vp : see i told u jaldi bahar a jao warna main in logo ko ek ek kar k maar dalooga ...
shivam : main dekhta hoo ...
vp : ha ...or tum jaldi samney a jao nahi to rey or swayam to gye kaam sey ...
but again no responce
vp : to his men ... boys pta hey na kya karna hey ...
goons start betting swayam nd rey badely at last some one enter in that place
vp : oh to ap a gyi finally ... agar pehley a jati to inko itni maar nahi parti bicharey ... leave them boys
rey nd swayam fell on the ground ... they r completely covered with blood ...but they r in hosh (lol)...

everyone watching toward door there they saw her
she standing with attitude
(sorry kab sey finding perfect dress nahi mili )

everyone together : SHARON!!!!!!
vp : see bishrey dost mil gye hey aj phir ...see or koi b hey saath thenlagta hey ajj friends special day ha ek doosrey ko bchaney k liye sab kood parey hey ha jha per how sweet na sab ek doosrey ko itna pyaar kartey hey i like it dil to karta hey schor do but kya kroo main itna acha b nahi hoo ki tum logo ko schor do ha vesey agar miss sharon nd vishakha ap dono mujey wo proof dey dede to in ko main schor sakta hoo ...


sharon : tum scah main bohat girey huye ho vp malhotra ...
vp : i know but tum nahi janti ki main kitna gira hua hoo ... dekhti jao ab jaldi kro ... mujey wo proof chahiyey ...
vishu : itni b kya jaldi hey ha ...
vp : tum logo ka to pta nahi but mujey bohat jaldi hey ...
sharon : agar na dey to ...
vp : to abhi tum logo ney jo dekha vo to trailer tha ... picture baki hey ...
vishu : really to humney kab kha picture khatam ho gyi ...
sharon : nd u don't u dare to touch them other vise apka shiva mar jayga ...
vp : what ?
vishu : wait
vishu leave from there after some time she come with shive placing gun on his head ...
vp : girl khilona nahi hey claney k liye himmat chahiye ...
sharon : u think hum natk kar rhey hey ...
sharon fire from her gun ...
vp : ok ok fine ... don't do anything to him ... m gonna leave them boys leave them ...
as soon as all got free
sharon : now u r dead mr vp malhotra ...
nd fight start b/w louians nd goons ...
after lot of struggle all goons are laying on floor ... like dead bodies ...
sharon : where is he ??//
vishu : do no ...
swayam : ye sab ho kya rha hey ha ... sharon tum kha chali gyi thi ha ... or kya ho rha hey yha ...
sharon : time nahi hey hamrey pass i'll tell u later ...
vish : lets find them ...
sharon : i think police ko call kar deni chahiye ...
vp : wait galti sey b call mat karna maney bola tha na tum logo ko nahi pta ki main kitna kamina ho ...now see main kitna bra kamina hoo ...
all followed vp nd at last they all r in a room where a girl lying like life less body ...
tears making there way ... from everyone's eyes ...
there she is lying on bed ... in very bad condition ...all about to more toward her ...
vp : no no maar do ga isey nahi to ...
sharon : don't please kuj mat karna usey ...
vp : bola tha na maney ... tumhey ha koshish b mat karna ...u r thinking ki kesey hua ye sab ha ... kriya to dehradune main thi ha ... or sharon tum scoh rhi hogi ki kriya to mar chuki thi to ye sab ... btata hoo
FLASH BACK ...

after kriya leave ... six month later vishu got a call from ... samriti ...
vishu : kya hua anti where is kriya ...
samriti : while sobing ... vishu please tum jha a jao na please ...
vishu : but auntie hua kya ...ok ok main ati hoo
after that vishu leave them all
in dehradune ...
vishu enter in kriya's house
there she found samriti sitting with kriya's pic ...
vishu : kriya kha hey auntie ...
samriti : she is no more ... then samriti narrate whole story to vishu about her promises ...
vishu : but kriya dead kesey ...
samriti : she is really mad at me that time ... nd she left from house in her car ...nd she drive so fast ... she lost balance nd her car fell from clifff ...nd she start crying ...
vishu : what kab hua ye sab apney btaya kyu nahi hamey app esa kesey kar sakti hey ...
samriti : dehradune wapis aney k baaad ... kriya ki death ki news sunney k baad i was shocked after all wo merey jiney ka sahara thi ... to mujey samaj nahi a rha tha kya kroo ... today whil cleaning her room i got her dairy nd a note she want ki ye dairy tumhey doo ... is liye maney call ki ...
vishu cry very hard ...
after that vishu read kriya's dairy ... nd she found a secret ... bout drug dealing in colleges ...
kriya's dairy ...
aj sab ...goa ja chukey hey or main dehradune wapis ja rhi hoo lekin main janey sey pehley ek baar us insaan ko milna chahti hoo jis ney mom ko je sab btaya nd finally mujey pta chal gya ki wo koi or nahi ... shivam hey is liye main us k ghar gyi jha maney jo dekha usey dekh kar mujey samaj nahi a rha tha ki main kya kroo... wo log college students ko drugs ka adi bnaney ki planning kar rhey they or wo apna mission start kar chukey they ... or mujey un logo ko rokna tha ... is liye maney un logo ki video bna li ... wait mujey wha kisi ney dekh liya tha is liye main wha sey baag gyi ... but they got to know ki main thi wha ab wo kuj b kar saktey hey ... nd mujey ye b pta chla ki sharon is my own sis ... nd vishu i know ki ye tumhey milegi to i want ki tum sharon ka khayal rakho yeahi schona ki tum uska nahi mera khayal rakh rhi hoo nd wo proof ... tumhey merey locker main mil jayegey i want ki tum un ko sahi jga pohncha do gi ...
kriya ...
other hand ...
sharon when she fell ill got chance to spend time with her dad nd that time her dad tell her about her mother samriti ... nd kriya ... sharon at that moment leve for dehradune where she got to know about kriya then vishu told her what she read in kriya's dairy ...
other hand vp also got to know about this all so she follow sharon nd vishu ...so sharon decide to no to go back mumbai
but they really don't know that kriya is alive ...
nd agey tum logo ney dekh liye jab kuj nahi hua to vp ney kidnapping kar li
ns ja sharon is not ok because ... last time one bullet hit sharon on above her heart nd her treatment is going on so that's why doctor advise her to take rest other wise uski jaan b ja sakti hey ok (don't b confused ...)... gar tum log scoh rhey ho ki wo policek pass ja saktey hey to bhool jao because vp unhey chance hi nahi deta .. chuhey billi ka khel chal rha hey na after alll ...

FLASHBACK end
vp : tum logo ney scoha b nahi hoga j sab ... sab thik chal rha tha ... kuj garbar nahi thi but is kriya ko beech main koodna tha ha ... sab ki blai karni hoti hey isey ... to maney b ek planning bnayi us din jab kriya ghar sey nikli y=to we kid nape her but bta nahi rhi thi ki akhir kha hey wo proofs ...
that time kriya open her eyes due to this loud voice but she unable to recognize any one ... vp place gun on kriya's head nd take her with her ...
in hall
rey : leave her ... m gonna kill u ...
other hand police also arrive ...
police cover the area ...nd inspector move toward vp ...
vp : main ise maar doo ga
then bullet fired ...
kriya fell on ground
vp : bola tha na m gonna kil her
but after some time vp also fell on ground ...
yes its shivam who shoot him but he is late because vp alread shoot kriya
all rush toward kriya ...
shivam is arrested because he is also involved in this all ... but now he is ready to tell everything about that drug dealing
other hand ...they all take kriya to hospital ...
sharon ... don't want to lose her sis now ...
samriti nd gautam directley reached to hospital
everyone out side operation theater ...
but rey was not there so swayam try to find him then he find rey sitting in fire exit (hospital main b hoti hey na i don't know)...
swayam : kya hua baki sab wha hey or tu yha ...
rey : swayam ek baat bolu main to bolta tha ki main kriya ki chupi ko b samazta hoo but main kuj nahi samazta ... main uski ankho main kesey nahi par paya ki ... kitni takleef main hey usney jo bola maney maan liye ... lekin mian kyu nahi samaz paya main to bohat pyaar karta tha na usey ... lekin usey itna b nahi samaz pya ki ... or main uskey pyaar k kabil b nahi hoo kyu ... ki main usey kitni asani sey bhool gya ... mujey ek baar b ehsas nahi hua ki wo khi jindgi or mout k beech pari hey main to mast tha apni life jiney main ... main usey deserve hi nahi karta ...
swayam : esa nahi hey jahi kismat thi rey ...
rey : nahi main uskey layak nahi ho bas
swayam : ok do one thing close ur eyes tujey jiska chehra dikhayi dey wahi tera pyaar hey (kya kroo aj kal jha chal rha hey ... akey band kar k jis ka chehra nazar aya ..lalal/...)nd swayam leave
other hand doctor ... come out after operation ...
doctor : see humney goli to nikal di hey lekin she is to weak ... kisi ko pehchaney gi ki nahi keh nahi saktey ... nd take care of her (baki to pta hey na doc kya boltey hey always bla bla ... bas wahi )...
gautam : ok
all watch kriya from outside as she is sleeping because of ... medicine
everyone leave kyu ki hospital main do log hi ruk saktey hey so ...
sharon nd swayam are sitting in icu...
swayam : tumney mujey btaya kyu nahi ha ...akeli tina kuj sehti rhi ...
sharon : kya btati tumhey swayam ... kuj samaj nahi a rha tha ...sharon placed her head in his lap
us waqt to bas jahi tha ki mujey is drug dealing k barey main sab pta karna hey or us vp k khel kahatam karna hey ...
swayam : tumhey kuj ho jata to main kya karta hey kesey g pata main tumney kabhi scoha hey kya ...
sharon : i know agar main tumhey bta deti to tum or b tension main a jatey isis liye nahi btaya sorry na ...
swayam : its ok lekin next time kuj esa mat karna ...
sharon : vesey swayam i think ko main police officer ban jati ho ...
swayam : how funny abhi b koi kami hey kya ...
sharon : i know but kriya thik ho jaye bas mujey bohat batey karni hey us k saath ...
swayam : ha ...
sharon : I LOVE U
swayam : I LOVE U TO ...ab so jao u need rest ...
sh : ya
nd shron drift into sleep other hand rey struggling ... with old memories then some one placed hand on his shoulder (kob hey of course it tanniii)...
tanni : rey ...
rey : m sorry ...
ta : sorry kyu ...
rey : because i love kriya ... jo main samazna nahi chahta tha ... but ab main samaz gya ho that i only love one girl in my life or wo hey KRIYA ...
after 10 min silence ...
tanni : so in this case i have to go now ...mera jha ab kya kamm u find ur lady so mujey jana chahiye nd tanni leave fron there nd them every one decide do not tell anything about taani to kriya ...
afetr 3 days kriya wake up so recognize everyone ...
k riya apoloze to all ...
at last kriya at home ... (mil gyi chutti ...)
kriyaansh nd swarons marriage fixwd one night earlier from engagment kriyannsh at shat
(kya kroo sab chila rhey hey to words ki shortage hey cholly ha mange )
rey : kriya mujey kuj bolna hey ... matlab btana hey ...
kriya : ha boliye ...
rey : wo here rey tell everything about taani
kriya after a silence look into rey's eye
rey : kya hua
k : but u love me na nd i know that
rey ; yes i love u ...
k : u love me i love u baat khatam so why worry smile ..
rey : kriya tum scah main antic piece ho
k : i know that ...
rey kiss her on her cheek nd pull her in tight hug ...
nd next day both swaron nd kriyaansh engaged

ho gya
ab like nd comment please
jooto ka most wel come
nd ha agar u want ki
shaadi k upar b os likhoo to m ready
love u all
Edited by aromakriyaansh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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huh...
ye kya ho rha hai
taani kidnapped...
acha hi hai bala tali...😆

rey ko badi padi hai use dhundne ki...😡

hmmm I think the girl 1 is kriya...😕

it means
kriya is going to dead...😲

agar tune aisa kiya toh dekh liyo

chodungi nhi tujhe...😡

girl 2 is sharon

haina...

I knw sharon hi hogi...

main kabhi galat ho hi nhi sakti...

waha ye pics kaha se dhundi

manna padega...badi mehanat
karti hai tu...


hey ye the persn 1 shivam toh nhi...

ab main thoda confused hoon...😕

I hope mera guess ryt ho...

aile ye toh VP nikla...

shivam ne bhi entry maar hi li...

dono chacha bhateeja kitne ________ hai

ab toh aka e ladki kriya hai...

rey aur swayam o pitte hue thodi nadekh sakti hai...

dono itni maar khane k baad bhi hosh main hai😲

hatts off to them👏


urrrghhh😡...fir se guess galat...😭

ye madam to sharon nikli ...hmmm wo bhi toh rey swayam to pitte hue nhi dekh sakti

waah is tym bhi madam ka attitude nhi gaya

vp...__ ___ ___🤬

sab ko chos ya na chod...

apni harkatein chod de toh MEHARBANI hogi

what proof he's talking about

aile sharon ko aaj pata chala hai wo kitna gira hua hai...

vish baby trigger daba hi de...MAJA AA JAYEGa (tappu style)

waah itne sukdi haddi jaise louins main popye ki power kaise aa gyi...saare goons ko dho daala...

ye vp khud hi apni tareef karne main laga hai...

ab ye life less body kon hai...😕

kriya...ryt...❓

yes its kriya

yaar tu bohot confuse kar rhi hai...😕

ye sab ho kya rha hai😕

flashback

kriya met with accident dead...

drug dealing...😕

pehle surrogacy and ab drug dealing

itne khatarnaak idead tere mind main aate kaha se hai...

chalo chado...

hmm kaha thi main

so sharon got to know that kriya is her sis thru her dad...

urrrgghhh ye vp na...🤬

wo hospital wali girl 1 bhi sharon thi...

uaaaeee 😭...meri phuti kismat...saare guess galat nikal rhe hai...

OMG kriya ko goli lag gyi...

are VP ko bhi...aur maara bhi uske pyaare bhateeje ne...

kamini tu toh gyi...jhatke pe jhatke diye ja rhi hai...

end main saare villian sudhr jaate hai...toh shivam kya cheez hai...😆

jao beta...jail main dhand se rehna...

rey ko bhi apni galti realize ho hi gyi...

awww swaron scene was sooo cute...❤️

taani tata...ab aapka yahan koi kaam nhi hai...

aww finally kriyansh and swaron are together...

overall mindblowing OS

loved it...




dekh itna bada comment kiya...busy hone k bawajut bhi...

aur tu comment karne main faltu k nakhre dikhati hai...huh

chal bye
love u
urs kamini


Edited by Kriti_rox - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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waah kya mast OS tha..

loved it

oh god yeh vp itna gira huya hai

omg drug dealing...huh idiot kahin

oh gosh iss kamine ne kriya ka kya haal kar diya..huh

awww loved sharon and vishakha's care for kriya

finally kriyansh are engaged

loved it

and haa me ready to read shaadi wala OS...
Edited by lovely7010 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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unres

happy kriyansh aro

ah me third nevermind...

My punjabi kudi is back...m so happyy

ek aur naya work
pehle jo pending hai woh toh complete kar maate...

Ok cuming to the os

amazing amazing amazing...

Superb...sumthing different...

Loved the drugs ka concept

started very well

and dnd was also gr8

but i think beech me thoda strech hogaya

but i loved it totally...

First kidnap then flash back then all filmy type goli lagna
hero ka bacha na and then happy ending...awesomee

Thanx 4 d pm

-kinjal
Edited by --Kinjal-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wat d hell was dis os about aroma?
taani kidnap...fhir sab dhunding use..
bt sare girls bhi kidnap.. agar sari girls kidnap to sharon n vishakha kaha se ayi?
kriya death bed par..oh shit..!!
aro jaldi update kar nahi to me soch soch k pagal ho jaungi plzz..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wahi doing na wait kro sab btati hoo
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Posted: 12 years ago
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warna itna bada jo cmnt diy na use one word k comment main convert kar dungi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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see or post kiya he read kro main agey likhi hoo
time to lagega na doing na main
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@rhu90 doing sweet heart from last 2 hours
ab to my hands r paining very badly but 20 min more ok

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