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Posted: 12 years ago
Just loved the update finally the wait ended and got an update
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Posted: 12 years ago
thnx for d update dear...
it was tooo gud i just loved d confession
now waiting for d precap i hope maan will tell d truth soon...
pls pls update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
hello friends updating next part😃
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Posted: 12 years ago




PART-21



Thanks to jyothi di for the date scene..love u darling🤗


@abi darling-thanku u for making ur kiddo realize that she is moving in tortoise speed with the story..😳o kya hai na I wanted to give some happy wala moments after continous rona dona updates..isliye..😆😛

Ok k now jokes a part..from now on story move li'l fast n I wont stretch more like bubble gum..😃

@all-many asked me whether dev knows about maan's cancer n answer is yes!!!i mentioned it when maan goes to London leaving geet after knowing about his cancer.




Maan smiled at her and kissed her corner of her lips. Geet snaked her hands around his neck. Maan took her lips into his and kissed her as if there is no tomorrow. Geet too kissed him with same passion. Geet digged her nails into his scalp feeling like heaven. They both lost in their passion. They broke the kiss due to lack of breath. Geet blushed and hid her face in his chest. Maan smiled and hugged her dearly.



Maan arranged all the food, and asked geet to have food. Geet nodded and they both ate happily feeding each other.



After having food, maan asked geet for dance. Geet nodded happily and gave her hand in his. Maan brought her close and placed his hand on her waist. Geet placed her hands on his chest and looked into his eyes. A soft music played in the background. They both are swaying to the music. Suddenly the music stopped but geet heard maan's singing s smiled..

link to the song :

https:// www.youtube.com/watch?v=bgBD3EboJNc&feature=player_embedded



Meri aankhon mein

Meri saanson mein
Tera chehra
[Tera chehra]
Mere dil ki har ik deewar pe
Tera chehra
[Tera chehra]

Meri aankhon mein
Meri saanson mein
Tera chehra
[Tera chehra]
Mere dil ki har ik deewar pe
Tera chehra
[Tera chehra]

Tu hi hai tu hi mera jahan
Tu hi rab tu hi dua
Tu hi lab tu hi zubaan
Tu hi raah tu hi makaam
Tu rehnumaa

Tu hi rab tu hi dua
Tu hi lab tu hi zubaan
Tu hi raah tu hi makaam
Tu rehnumaa

Geet is lost in his eyes. The care and love for her in his eyes, she want to drown in his eyes, how can someone love her so dearly.she sang looking in to his eyes as if saying him that she loves him n what he means to her..

Tu hi rab tu hi dua
Tu hi lab tu hi zubaan
Tu hi raah tu hi makaam
Tu rehnumaa

Maan twirled her around n hugged her from back n sung again holding her in his embarace tightly..

Meri aankhon mein
Meri saanson mein
Tera chehra
[Tera chehra]
Mere dil ki har ik deewar pe
Tera chehra
[Tera chehra]

Tu hi hai tu hi mera jahan
Tu hi rab tu hi dua
Tu hi lab tu hi zubaan
Tu hi raah tu hi makaam
Tu rehnumaa

Geet turned to him encircling her hands round his neck n sung..

Tu hi rab tu hi dua
Tu hi lab tu hi zubaan
Tu hi raah tu hi makaam
Tu rehnumaa

Maan smiled n kissed on her forehead,then on eyes n was about to kiss on her lips but she ran from there in shy..maan smiled n followed her..

Geet stood at window taking freshair..she remember how their life was totally messed up n how they were separated..how hard was it for her to live without maan..how she got her maan back..tears welled up in her eyes n a tear slipped down finally..maan hugged her sideways n wiped her tears..he turned her to face him.there was still pain in her eyes the pain which she suffered staying away from him..she was scared to loose him n his love again n he could see that in his jaan's eyes..he want to assure her that he is always there for her..he took her hand n placed it on her own heart n sung…




Apne dil mein
Jhaank ke dekho
Aayega nazar tumhe
Pyaar humara
Apne dil mein
Jhaank ke dekho
Aayega nazar tumhe
Pyaar humara

He kissed her hands taking them in to his one by one.he cupped her face lovingly n sung again..

Aalam na poocho
Meri tadap ka
Ik pal na hoga ab
Tum bin guzaara
Aalam na poocho
Meri tadap ka
Ik pal na hoga ab
Tum bin guzaara


geet hugged maan tight letting out the tears of joy for having him in her life.


Geet is thinking about all their times from the day they met each other. How she came to know that pinky is maan's sister. The day when maan proposed her but how geet refused his confession. The pain in his eyes. And how she broke down completely seeing maan in pain. And her talk with pinky, her confession to pinky that she loves maan. She had tears in her eyes thinking all those. She loved maan more than anyone but destiny played it's cruel game to separate them but still their love remained same n it brought them together today.



Geet is thinking of the day when she went to college and came to know about vicky's death. The day When she was searching for maan to confess her love. How tensed she was when she didn't find maan anywhere.. And their happy days they spent with each other.


tere ishq mein,mashoor ho gaye

Teri baazunon mein hum choor ho gaye

Maan looked at geet lovingly …He is thinking of geet, the day of engagement ,how happy she was when she saw him there as her groom. After that the day pinky told her about his disease, how heart broke he was even in that state too he kept thinking of his geet but not himself. The day she confessed her feeling to him and how scared she was when she didn't find maan for few minutes. He smiled remembering all those things.


Meri baahon mein meri rahoon mein tera chehra

Tera chehra

Meri aahon mein meri panahon mein tera chehra

Tu hi hai tu hi mera jahaan

Tu hi rab tu hi dua tu hi lab

Tu hi zubaan

Tu hi raah tu hi makaam

Tu rehnumaa

Tu hi rab tu hi dua tu hi lab

Tu hi zubaan

Tu hi raah tu hi makaam

Tu rehnumaa



Hearing maan's each and every word, geet felt more guilty for leaving maan before and hurting saying she don't love him. She hated herself for doing this to maan. Maan the only person who loved her for what she is. She never got parents love in her life, but she cant afford to loose maan at any cost.

Tu hi rab tu hi dua tu hi lab

Tu hi zubaan

Tu hi raah tu hi makaam

Tu rehnumaa


Geet hugged maan tightly n spoke still hugging him..

I love you maan, I love you so much. I am very bad maan for leaving you once, but now I will be there for you always. You are very precious in my life maan. Aap ke bina main jee nahi sakti, you are my everything maan. Maan ki geet maan ko chodkar kabhi bhi kahi nahi jaa sakti told geet and kissed on his heart.

Later they both sat on the couch holding hand in hand.

Geet can I ask you some thing? Asked maan.

You can ask me anything maan told geet and smiled.

Geet, by any chance what if I hide something from you. Will you forgive me geet??Will you trust me that whatever I did is for a reason? Asked maan as his guilt is eating him after geet's confession.

Geet looked at maan and cupped his face and told maan what type of a question is this? I trust you more than me maan. If incase you hide anything from me, then I can understand there must be a reason behind it.. because I know you cant see me in pain. I know maan that you can never hide anything from me intentionally..

Maan smiled at geet and lost in his thoughts.

Maan (st): Geet thanku for understanding me but I cant let you live in this dark. I must tell you about my cancer and my suffering. After hearing this if you hate me also I will bear your hatred. I know geet its my mistake for hiding it from you. But before marriage I will tell you my truth, and I too need some time to tell you this.

Maan sighed and hugged her tight, while geet rested her head on his chest. After that maan dropped geet in her home and maan left to KM.

Maan took his medicines n tried to sleep but sleep is least interested to reach his eyes..his guilt for hiding such a big truth from his jaan is not letting him to stay in peace.he started pacing in his room lost in his thoughts.

Dev who came out from his room to have some water found that lights are still on in maan's room..he went n saw maan lost in his thoughts..he sat beside maan on bed n placed his hand on his shoulder.."bro..you are still awake?? have rest bro..dont stress urself so much"dev said..

"iam gonna tell everything to geet"maan said n this didn't shocked him but got tensed for geet thinking what will be her reaction when she comes to know about him but maan's decision was right..she is the one who deserves to know the truth than anyone else but she is only the one unware about it.."mein aapke saath hoon bro"dev assured with a smile..

Maan smiled n they shared a brotherly hug.."and dev u are awake till now??is everything ok??"maan asked with concern becoz he knows how dev is..he is kumbkaran types who loves to sleep if he is given time to do."ha bro everything is ok bas office mein thoda tension chal raha hai..but it's ok..i managed it..u don worry"dev said.."are u sure??"maan asked for which he nodded..

Next day maan again waited for geet at her college..geet wondered what maan has planned again.."maan aap bhi na..aapko ye ajeeb ideas kaha se aathe hai..aap phir se kaha le ja rahe ho muje??"geet went on asking him where they are going but maan who was lost in his thoughts didn't answer her.. how geet would react after the truth relevation is the only thing going in his mind..

He stopped at a deserted area when geet kept questioning him about his silence..his silence scared her..she became worried n almost on verge to cry to see maan like that..so maan decided to talk to her then n there.he asked geet to step down from the car n held her hands in his."geet I want to say something important to u I mean.."he is fumbling for words..

"maan kya huwa..kya kehna chahthe ho aap..is everything ok??"she asked worriedly..

"geet..i don't know how u'll react after listening to me but I want u to know this..mein ye baat tumse kabhi nahi chupana chahtha tha but I was scared of ur reaction"maan said..

"maan plz tell me what's the matter..u are scaring me"she said..maan closed his eyes n took a sigh gathering the courage to speak out finally.."geet..i…I have.."

Precap:

Geet gave a tight slap to dev n said"don't u dare say that again..maan ko kuch nahi hoga..samje tum..it wont be good if u say that again.."she said n her tears which were already not ready to stop joined fresh tears which slipped down from her eyes.




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Edited by MonaLovesMaan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanku thanku for d update,,,,,it was too gud superb so finally maan will tell d truth to geet,,,,,,eagarly waiting for d nxt update n geet's reaction aftr knowing d truth,,,,,god just can't wait plsss continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story's plz update soon
i'm really looking forward to your next part of your story
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
update geet love and understanding maan decided to tell everything do next soon



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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful update and scary precap..pls cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the double update Mona
Loved them...finally Maan is telling Geet about his illness..
Will be eagerly waitung for the next update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
thx for the double updates
now really waiting hw geet will take all the truth

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