virman FF : woh pal : PART 31 updated pg 145 - Page 28

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey naina when u will be updating...
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Posted: 13 years ago
HERE IS THE NEXT PART... I KNOW ITS AFTER A LONG TIME BUT WHAT TO DO I WAS REALLY VERY BUSY... I KNOW THIS A SHORT UPDATE BUT PLS COOPERATE WITH IT...

PART 12


after some time
manvi : di there is a surprise for u...!!!
jeevika : what surprise mannu...???
manvi : di its a surprise... how can i reveal it to u...???
jeevika : mannu... tell me na... i am feeling very anxious...
manvi : di pls be patient and wait... the surprise is on its way...
jeevika : what do u mean by the surprise is on its way...???
manvi : because it coming all the way flying...
jeevika : surprise... flying... mannu are you okk...?? where is virat..?? virat...!!!
manvi : why are you calling him jethani ji...?? your devar is getting ready...
jeevika : because my devrani ji has gone mad...
then manvi hears virat calling her...
virat : manvi...
jeevika : go my dear devrani ji my dearest devaar is calling you...
manvi : when doesnt your devar doesnt call me... he calls out my name whole day long... actually keeps it repeating like a parrot u see...
viren : manvi just go... or else my kid brother will go mad...
manvi : jiju cum jeth ji... your brother is already mad and he is no longer a kid... anyways il just be back di...

scene shifts...

virat : manvi...
manvi : why are you shouting virat...??? i am here yaar...
virat : thank god manvi ji... i am very grateful to you for giving your poor lovestruck husband sometime...
manvi : you are so vry much welcum my dear chep... but why are you still not ready and look at the condition of my bedroom...
virat : oh hello... this is not only yours bedroom mrs virat vadera... this is my room as well, remember...??? anyways listen to me manvi...
manvi : bolo na... i am here only for you...
virat : manvi i couldnt find my favourite shirt... where is it...???
manvi : cmon how would i know virat...???
virat : cmon why wouldnt u know... u are my wife manvi...
manvi : are you talking about that black shirt of yours virat...???
virat : yes... yes... yes...
manvi : ohh i have given that shirt to tarun... he liked it...
virat : what...??? u gave my favourite shirt to tarun... u gifted it me on my birthday, remember...??? it was so special to me...

manvi : ohhh... yeah... but let it be virat... its okkk...
virat : okkk...???? oh really... u know what u have wrecked my mood manvi...
manvi : ohh hello stop your melodrama... open the closet and check it in the rightmost corner... it is there only...!!!!
virat : oh yeah... i found it... thank god u were joking...
manvi : else u would have cried like a small baby...
virat : haha... very funny...
manvi : it is true... what a sight it would be, i wonder...!!!
virat : no need to wonder impossible stuff...
manvi : oh really then i should really go and give this shirt to tarun...
virat : dont u dare mrs vadera... this is my shirt...
manvi : see you are cribbing like a child already...
virat : why are you talking again and again about a child...??? do u want one...???

manvi (blushing) : stop it...
virat : why are you behaving like a CHILD manvi...???
manvi : lets go down... karan must be about to reach...
virat : haan lets go and meet your motu...
manvi : only i can call him that patidev...
virat : oh really... as if i care...
before manvi could revert back, she heard the door bell ringing...
manvi : it must be karan... and his girlfriend...
saying this she ran downstairs without even having one look at virat...
virat was standing there trying to figure out why was karan that important to manvi...
virat brushed all those thoughts away and went downstairs... only to be treated by the sight in front of his eyes... he stood still... it felt as if his world has come to a standstill...
Edited by naina927 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Omg you updated lol was just remembering your OS awesome update loved it continue soon nd do pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
*RES* FOR NIKESHATHANA
SORRY CUDNT RES THE FIRST PLACE FOR U...

posted by nikeshathana

hey sorry for the late reply but have to say awesome!!

and now i will comment for part 13

woooa it was awesome someones burning...
😆

nice pics added but who is this guyz girlfriend? seems a mystery plz dont let virman suffer beause of his gf or something but loved it ear and thnx for RES luv ya!!😃😳
Edited by naina927 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update but short
i think virat knows karan or his gf
waiting 4 next part
thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nishal_fan

nice update but short

i think virat knows karan or his gf
waiting 4 next part
thnx 4 pm


I KNOW ITS SHORT...
LETS SEE WHAT IS IN STORE IN THE NEXT PART...
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG! Wonder what shocked him? Loved the update and pm me when you update next :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hahaha lool that was such a cute and funny convo between virman and how manvi was joking about giving his shirt to tarun :p lovely update as always :)
Thanx for the pm :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
It was nice!! The cute nok jhok!! Loved it!!

What is it about Karan?? Don't want any misunderstanding between VirMan 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank u for updating. .nice update

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