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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vanadhi

just read in one go nice attempt 👍🏼


thanks but really?whole story in one attempt.😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
Uff caught up with the updates n pics...

superb! The story is getting intense, and oh I'm not a fan of vilence dear.. sorry about that! I avoid movies that have more action especially violent/bloody sequences.. cuz they just make me feel sad n sick..

So I hope u wont include too many violent scenes...

btw.. I love that maha chapter song..hehe, u have brought up a maha chapter akin to maha episode..lol, waiting for the next update!

Sorry for the delay in commenting.. reason as usual, College n ghar mein kuch health problems the... so yeah.. thanks for the pm..

cheers!

Priya~
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for coolfizzy and hema's comments.😆 and piya.
Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Priyamvada

Uff caught up with the updates n pics...

superb! The story is getting intense, and oh I'm not a fan of vilence dear.. sorry about that! I avoid movies that have more action especially violent/bloody sequences.. cuz they just make me feel sad n sick..

So I hope u wont include too many violent scenes...

btw.. I love that maha chapter song..hehe, u have brought up a maha chapter akin to maha episode..lol, waiting for the next update!

Sorry for the delay in commenting.. reason as usual, College n ghar mein kuch health problems the... so yeah.. thanks for the pm..

cheers!

Priya~


omg take care yaar and thanks for your time.i love readers like you.thank you so much.

about violence,i completely understand.mahachapter will include every emotion.about violence well...its about valkyrie so sorry about that.valkyrie is nothing without violence.and about your family,i have my all wishes with you and your family.god bless you and every person who loves you and whom you love.😃
Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
MAHACHAPTER part 1-note-contains violence
chapter-10-the place where they cry
dedicated to this chapter by javyenk...

and this is the song...
song-flower of hell...(my ff theme song)

Come, let us forget that the future ahead
Is soon to be smeared with blood everywhere
If a warm wind curls into a spiral around you
that is surely a sign

Escape with your life, escape with your life
From your sorrowful fate
You are not a flower from Hell, like they say
In a place like that
Do not bloom, do not bloom
Don't let them ensnare you. In their trap

The silently fluttering shards of time pass by

Who is holding my hand? Why won't you come out?
Who is holding my hair? I cannot see you
A flower. In a crying state
It can feel a sign, it reaches up

Fly beyond, fly higher
From your sorrowful Destiny
You are not a flower from Hell, Like they say
In a place like that
Don't scatter, don't scatter
Don't leave any seeds behind

Ever changing Karma spreads its seeds once more

Run away, Run away
From this sorrowful fate
You are not a flower from Hell, Like they say
In a place like that
Do not bloom, do not bloom
Don't let them ensnare you In their trap

The silently fluttering shards of time pass by



all these red lines are related to valkyrie.



here is the song...


hrithvik,neera,karthik were ready to leave with nandini.
nupur-oh we will miss you.
neera-hain?😕
nupur-smile😆
hrithvik-oh master,he hugged her.everyone hugged hrithvik and neera.
yuuvi to neera-hey sis,you know i really love you.hey,here is the gift.
neera-what is it?
yuuvi-open it.
neera-she opened,she saw neera's child photo with yuuvi.she became so overwhelmed.
oh my brother,she hugged him tightly.
kitty-i know neera,you hate to go but hrithvik is very naive.
hrithvik-hey...
mohit-dude again,don't go yaar.
hrithvik-you guys are taking situations so lightly.
mohit-oh ho,tension dene ka,lene ka nahe mister.
hrithvik-accha,he punched friendly on his face.accha bacchu,ab tu itna bada ho gaya.
jhanvi-anu,ye kyun kar rahe ho?mere saath chalo..
shekhar-koi zarurat nahe hain.😡
jhanvi-shekhar ye kya keh rahe ho,wo hamari bete hain.
shekhar-i am sick of it,sick of this manipulation.you jerk...
neera-🥱
hrithvik-how can a father hate his own daughter and for what?
shekhar-mein abhe bhe keh raha hun yahe hain sab killings ke peeche.
yuuvi-bas,bahut bardasht kar raha hun,i know you are her father but remember bachpan se wo hamare saath rahe hain,we won't hear anything against her.
nandini started crying.
neera took her in her arms.
driver-sir car ready hain.
neera and hrithvik went in the car.they left.
as they left nupur quickly said...
nupur-all you hags,follow me.
shekhar-yes follow her,she is gonna reveal some things.
virat-what things?
shekhar-about a place where they cry.
maanvi-who?
shekhar-no idea.
in car...
neera reminding...
rathod-jaa rahe ho.
neera-haan.
rathod-i will miss you.
neera-really.
rathod-you always knew that i can never hate you even if i pretend to be.after all i am reincarnation of the king you married nephitiri.(oh feel the shock guys)
neera-you are my husband,no one knows it.but...in my heart,it will always be vikrant.last night i told you everything just to make you sure that i never loved you.
rathod-you killed my son in my previous birth.
neera-i am sry,that is what i can say.
rathod hugged her-you showed me your every single memory.why?why you had to suffer so much sadness nephi.
neera-😭 i love you.
rathod-i love you.he started kissing her.
neera-rathod,stop it.please don't do this.
rathod-do what?
neera-this.and she left.
rathod says in his mind-you don't have to suffer sadness my love.go,go away with your true love,to a person where you laugh and not cry.

after two hours...
everyone was shocked,their souls were shaked to their death.
yuuvi was dumbstruck.kitty and mohit had no words to say.jhanvi was almost dead.she was in shock,complete shock.tears were flowing from shekhar and amrit's eyes.
yuuvi-yy...you are joking right.😭you gotta be joking.
jhanvi-mere bacchi,wo...wo...she started crying like hell.
flashback...
nupur and everyone in a room.
nupur told all that nephitiri and rumasha's story and then.
yuuvi-kya hua then?
nupur-that rumasha,she never left nephitiri.she hated her from the core.she wanted to eat her soul so that she could possess cosmic energy of god amun.
jhanvi-us ladki suhani ka kya hua.
nupur-ek din...
rumasha-nupur...go and catch her.
a girl was standing who was protecting a human.
suhani-what the hell you want?
suhani was covered in blood.
rumasha-ha ha ha,nephitiri,my love,why?why you never remember me?the nightmare of your dreams.ha ha ha...nupur attack.
nupur attacked suhani.
yuuvi-so rumasha is alive?
nupur-yes she was and is alive.
everyone shocked.
shekhar-what is you to rumasha?
nupur-HER DAUGHTER
everyone shocked...
jhanvi gets up-what?you are direct descendant of god amun?
nupur-yes i am,i am not an indian,i am an egyptian.my true name,remnasan.
maanvi-then...
suhani fell on the floor.
suddenly suhani became highly angry.her body started flaming.
rumasha-haan...😕huh...
one soldier was about to shoot her,he shot the bullet at her.she suddenly stopped the bullet with her power.and tore apart that idiotic soldier.
rumasha-now i have to..suddenly that human child came in front of her.
human girl got torn apart.
suhani shocked...she shouted-aaa...she caught her.
suhani-no no...no ...no...rumasha,sis save her,i beg you,i beg you...
rumasha-ha ha ha ha ...say sry,say sry...ha ha ha...
suhani-sry sry sry sry sry...😭
nupur-go and try to save her.
rumasha-arnab...
anandi-what?daddy?
nupur-just listen.
rumasha-arnab took her to valkyrie,ha ha ha ha...
kitty-what is valkyrie?
nupur-a place where they cry?
shekhar-now tell.please.
nupur-mutants,they cry there.that place is like hell for humans.specially kids.valkyrie is a mansion is on an unknown island.rumasha kidnaps human kids and took them to that hell.ii...i...😭 i was also involved in this sin.i used to kidnap human kids and send them to that horrible place.
she reminding.
a building in which valkyrie is written.in it there is a particular room where rumasha puts every human child,just like hitler used to kill jews in steam rooms.
nupur-there,she torchers them in every possible way.she drugs them with her blood and make their lives hell.she beats them with hot iron rod,sharp knife and creates bloodshed till they are insane killing monsters.
everyone else souls were shaken.they did not wanted to listen but they had to.
anandi-and dad?
nupur-that creepy man,he was most involved in that sin.he was the person who torchered suhani there.
suhani,poor girl,everyday i used to go and torcher her,torcher her with my these sinful hands.i hate my these pathetic hands.i hate myself.
yuuvi-then how you came out of that hell?
nupur-one day...
suhani was grown up now..
suhani-ha ha ha...again,come torcher me,how much will you do?
nupur-i am sry.
suhani-ha ha ha..why?some new thing,wasn't my nail ripping enough for you?
arnab came.
arnab-today again...(he used to ah...i m sry readers for this..but he used to rape her.)
nupur-arnab...go..
arnab-but my enjoyment time is ...
nupur-shut up.
arnab left.
nupur came to her.
nupur-i know everything about nephitiri.you are my mother's sister.i am so sry.
suhani-accha,but..what about other people?whom those she torchers?huh don't you feel sry for them?
nupur-i wanna escape,i don't want to bloom here.please,please...
suhani-make me out of here.
nupur did some trick and she came out.but rumasha and other caught them on a cliff.
suhani was just in white strips.
rumasha-nupur you,you did this with me.
nupur-i hate you ,you pathetic hag.
suhani-one day i will come and kill you with all the pain..(to arnab and rumasha)
arnab-are jaa jaa...
rumasha-haa...baby i wanna eat your soul,jab tak teri puri cosmic powers nahe aa jati i can't kill you.awww..ha ha ha ha...
suhani fell in the river.
rumasha-haan...rumasha used her powers but nupur started fighting against her.
yuuvi-ah...who is this suhani?is she alive now?
nupur-you sister neera she is suhani.and this suhani is anu/neeranjana.
shekhar and everybody shocked.



part 1 is just sneak peek...
Edited by lucykaede - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
lUCY LOVing it dear.. did u listen to the music i sent?? I know it is not dark and deep.. but it was haunting i felt
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jayvenk

lUCY LOVing it dear.. did u listen to the music i sent?? I know it is not dark and deep.. but it was haunting i felt


yes yaar tabhe to include kiya chapter ne.ye chapter mahachapter zarur hain par sirf sneak peek ke tarah,real things to abhe aana baaki hain.😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh boy!
i luved it!!!
i mean... i m totally speechless...
Rumasha... o god...hw cn sum1 b so cruel...acchi khasi Nephriti khush thi faltu mein uske peeche par gyi...
Rathod s d king...dts y...dono ki acchi chemistry thi...nw i got it...
O god Valkyrie ws such a cruel place...
well jst ovr wid my exams n studied bput Hitler so cn imagine d gas chambers etc etc...
o god... i msuper excited bout it!!!
UPDATE SOOON!
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am totally shocked😲. Nupur is direct decendent of God Amun Ra and daughter of Rumesha. Now I am seriously feeling sorry for Suhani aka Neeranjana too.Poor Neera aka Anushka😭😭😭. Can she ever be able to lead a normal life?
Now I admit that I was wrong. Neera was genuinely trying to save Surya and Karthik😭.But why? And that pathetic black widow Rumasha😡 did that killing may be. But is there any way to end this violence? And I still can't get Surya and Neera's relationship?
Anyway keep going👍🏼.
Edited by mrmrfrevr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Can you believe ?? I read all chapters in one go ! 😆 😆

ok so now on your updates. I was glued from the starting ! How you do it ? 😲 creating so much suspense !! This is thriller at its best ! Some revealations are so shocking ! Esp about Nupur ! I was like 😲 😆

Really i loved all the chapters ! You are an amazing writer dear 👏 👏 Keep up the fantastic work 😳

Thx for such fab thrilling ride 🤗

P.S. Sorry for commenting late. Was just a little busy. I have my CAT exam tomorrow

Hope you wont mind 😳

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