ArHi FF: Love for Hire (Pt13 Pg146, upd 12th Oct) - Page 103

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: newmoon2011

Great update
Thanks for the pm



and thanks for commenting..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: prerna31s

I can only say '' WAT THE '' !!!

Everything was so fast !! Okay shyam cheated on khushi n anjali ! Arnav misunderstood n tld khushi to maary him !! yes, i know.. ur head must be spinning with all the leaps and jumps this story took..😆 shyam did cheat both the women, and arnav misunderstood khushi coz of what shyam said to him.. 😡but just note, arnav is not at fault here.. and why and how i will reveal later on..
Suddenly khushi is preganant wid arnav's child widout having SEX ?? Maybe he was drunk or something n doesn't remember ! no, they did make love.. but arnav was drunk.. however, he was not tt drunk tt he couldnt remember a single thing tt happened the night before.. then again, this is another mystery to be revealed later on..
N is dat baby boy khushi's ? Which anjali has nw ? no no.. khushi's boy was stillborn... anjali's boy is hers, and unfortunately the father is evilwa blackwa snakewa🤢😡
Plsss update soon !! Its killing me !!
WILL SEE THE NEXT UpDATE ON A NEW THREAD !!! :D i will update real soon, and there will be a short part before i continue this story on a new thread..

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dumas

poor khushi her life has taken a series of twist and turns asr talking to snake instead of her and believing him wonder if her baby died or one was switch loved the update thanks for the pm well, its not asr's fault either.. he loves khushi deeply, but first she rejected him.. then he thought she rejected him for shyam who is actually his jiju.. the root of all these problems is shyam though, poor asr, khushi, and the rest are the ones caught in the middle... as for the babies... no, khushi's baby boy really was stillborn, so only her baby girl is alive.. as for anjali's boy, he is really her biological child, whose father is unfortunately blackwa snakewa🤢😡

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nareshSV

But thats disgusting😡 hwo could he beleive that the baby is shyam's...how much he hate her...I can ask...how could he blindly beleive that the baby is shyam's I can never ever forgive him for that he beleived the lies told by shyam...its utterly disgudting and a bull shit...I am truly disappopinted with this...😡 hey naresh.. its actually not arnav's fault for believing shyam.. coz firstly, arnav was deeply heartbroken at khushi's rejection after kissing him.. then, she saw him get close to his brother-in-law.. yes, arnav believed the lies shyam told him abt khushi, but then, he was so hurt in love that he couldnt see tt what shyam told was the actual lie.. plus, arnav was actually starting to get believe in khushi and fall in love with her all over again, when he found out khushi was pregnant.. and because of some reason, he doesnt remember making love with khushi... so, he gets hurt again and thinks khushi cheated on him.. the bottom line is, khushi is completely innocent, but arnav is not at fault either - its all a part of shyam's careful and cunning ploy..


How come he dont when they consummated their marraige and whats more worse is he doubted her character...thats really worse...you must make an intense update on arnav showing how sorry he is for making khushi to go through all those pain unnecessarily...where in the first instance he would have avoided all this mess by talking to khushi... u see, the one shot i did titled all by myself, actually shows arnav contemplating his actions.. he made some huge mistakes and hurt khushi, but he is not completely at fault either.. part of the intensity of arnav's regret is shown in tt one shot.. his talks, and more on what happened in the past 6 months will slowly be revealed..

Its a baby yaar...khushi lost her baby here...not something that she can buy...its a huge for a woman...and the worsrt thing is that khushi husband didnt beleived that the baby was theirs...hmmm...enough of my rant...I hope u wont diappoint us again making khushi forgive arnav so easily of course it will be that way...but please dont make it easy and shoe us some intense udpate of pain from arnav...thats much needed... yes, i know its her baby which khushi lost.. and even arnav regrets it.. but like i said, what happened between arnav and khushi for the past 6 months is neither of theirs' fault.. the real culprit is someone else altogether.. and its ok, i understand ur ranting on.. its natural to complain when the character who has been good so far and who u like suddenly commits this huge mistake or sin or whatever.. like we all felt at arnav in the real ipkknd show..arnav's pain, hurt, intensity will all be shown in due time.. don't worry.. and i assure u, i (will try my best not to, or..).. wont disappoint u.. yet, if u have any complaints or suggestions, do say so in ur comments here.. my pm-inbox is like 99% full and i hav many pms to delete so will take a very long time to get to urs..lol

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

well that sure was a big shock to us all am sure
but love the twist nonetheless
uff so he found out who the fiance was and married her forcefully]
but when did they consummate their marriage then
confusing much but intriguing
lets see what else we get to see or read



i know u must hav gotten a big shock.. but kya karein?? i love such twists and suspense tt keeps my readers interested😆

and yes, u hav gotten the gist of arnav's and khushi's marriage.. it was a contract marriage like in the show..

but they did consummate their marriage.. and when - will be revealed in the next part..

all the leaps and jumps must be confusing, but ur not the only confused one😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: seeta_naips

thanks for the PM


awesome update

How come Arnav doesn't know if the baby is his?

Why doesn't he remember sleeping with Khushi?

What the hell did snake do?



snake did some very big ploy.. he trapped arnav, khushi, anjali, and everyone else.. khushi is completely innocent, but arnav is also not at fault here - even if he doesnt remember sleeping with khushi..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aquagal

I have read it all just now in a single go. Loved it totally, specially the madness of Khushi.

I don't mind the monthly leaps but I'm confused about the baby as Arnav doesn't remember sleeping anytime with Khushi.



hey aquagal, r u on my pm-list?? if ur not then i'll add u..
well, arnav did sleep with khushi but he doesnt remember.. he was partly drunk, but nt tt drunk enuf tt he cant remember a single thing.. another big twist behind tt, but i assure u, arnav is not at fault, except for the fact tt he didnt believe khushi - bt tt was because he was too hurt in love by her to do so..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rashgirl000

i'm also confused with the leaps.

what happened in between.
any ways loved the chap.
update soon.



what happened in between will be revealed in the upcoming parts.. but just note tt arnav is not completely at fault.. shyam is the real villian here..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Nici0306

wow.. you took us on a roller coaster ride.. from them getting married, Shyam's lies, Khushi being pregnant, Anji delivering a baby boy, khushi loosing one of her twin child, Arnav after 5 months giving a second thoughts on Khushi's involvement..

so much happening.. can't wait for your next update.. please update soon..



hope u were not too confused.. the roller coaster ride is actually the gist of what happened the past 6-7 months.. i didnt elaborate too much, as i wanna show a couple of flashbacks when i continue this story in a new thread.. since it has reached nearly 150 pgs..

and, i will update soon.. hopefully tonight😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Warning: Mature audiences only. This part may contain material not meant for the younger members. NC16 rating advised for this part.😆


Part 13


When Khushi falls asleep, Arnav quickly goes to see her. He just keeps on looking at her, and thinking all that he has done with her. As he sits and looks at her, thinking of their new baby girl, who so obviously looks like him, he wonders why he can't even remember making love with Khushi.

Arnav wonders why after all that he did with Khushi, whether she is the guilty one or not, she still stuck by him and continued to love him. On the other hand, Khushi is also thinking of what happened with her in the past year or so in her dreams ' especially the 6 months or so she spent married with Arnav.

* Flashback *

It is Arnav and Khushi's wedding night, about 2 weeks after Akash's wedding with Payal. Khushi, in a bridal dress, is sitting on Arnav's ' and now hers as well ' bed. She feels nervous, is breathing hard, and hugging her knees close to herself. Khushi rests her head on her knees. She lifts it up slowly and cautiously, with the ghoonghat still covering her face, when she hears Arnav entering the room and approaching her.

Arnav reaches his hand out to touch Khushi's face. Khushi freezes, then slowly begins to respond. She turns her head and kisses the inside of Arnav's palms. He comes closer and closer to her, making her heart beat faster.

Feeling shy, Khushi lowers her eyelids and just breathes in Arnav's scent. Arnav comes closer and gives her a short and sweet peck on the lips. As he moves away, he comes to his senses.

Khushi watches Arnav's back, as he goes into the bathroom to change out of his wedding sherwani. She gets tears in her eyes, and moves to the attached terrace to gaze up at the moon hoping that the moonlight will soon bring brightness in her life.

"How do I convince you, Arnav, that I am innocent? It's not my fault, and I don't know exactly why and what made you so angry that you had to force me to marry you, but I have a pretty good feeling it concerns Anjali Di and Shyam. I don't know what lies Shyam told you, but I do know that he is playing a game ' with me, with Anjali Di, with you, and with your whole family. It was my mistake that I didn't see through Shyam earlier, but now that I know he's putting on a faade, I am determined to find out the truth. More so for you, because I know somewhere deep in your heart, you still love me Arnav. And I also love you' Yes, Arnav. Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada loves you with all her heart. And she promises to give you all the happiness you deserve.

Khushi is lost in her own world while gazing up at the moon. She blocks out all the surrounding sights and sounds, other than that of nature, and the beautiful-lit moon in the sky. So, when Arnav comes from behind and hugs her, she is so surprised that she nearly jumps out of her own skin.

Khushi turns around to see Arnav, and notices that his eyes are bloodshot red. She comes near to him, and smells alcohol reeking from off him. Khushi looks around, and notices and empty and bottle of alcohol lying on the floor - broken, probably from the force at which Arnav threw it.

Khushi gets really worried and starts questioning Arnav. He pushes her away at first, then brings her near to him and slowly but tightly hugs her. Arnav's hands start moving up Khushi's back, to the dori of her shaadi ka joda. He pulls it, completely untying it, and splays his hands on her bare back.

Khushi shivers at Arnav's touch and turns her head around, trying to move away from Arnav. But he pulls her back, and as she crashes into his hard six-pack chest, he brings his hands tightly around her to hug her once again.

Khushi shivers once again, and hugs Arnav tightly. Arnav pulls back a little and looks into Khushi's face. He brings his face only millimetres away from hers, gives her a quick peck on the lips and pulls back to smile at her, happy knowing that even that one second of minimal contact has left her wanting more.

Lightning strikes, with a clap of thunder, in the night sky. But neither Arnav nor Khushi see anything other than each other, nor hear anything other than their heartbeats. This time when they kiss, there is much more passion and heat. Khushi doesn't even seem to smell the alcohol from Arnav anymore ' she only smells his manly scent, and breathes that in.

Lips crash, and tongues clash as Arnav and Khushi open up to each other. Even the sky opens up, and lets the rain fall. Arnav picks up Khushi in his arms, and carries her slowly, back into their bedroom, as they both get wet.

He puts her on their bed, and she lies down. Removing his shirt, he descends upon her wet body. Slowly, they undress each other, and leave absolutely nothing between them, except maybe a few millimetres of space and air.

Suddenly, all unfortunate events are forgotten. All hate is turned into love, even for Arnav, albeit momentarily. Under the cool night, light only by the moon, and accompanied by the sounds of their beating hearts, Arnav and Khushi become two bodies, one soul, one heart.

* End of Flashback *

Khushi wakes up with a start, thinking back to the unfortunate morning after Arnav and Khushi made love. She had woken up with a huge smile on her face, and saw some of her sindoor smeered on Arnav's chest. She quickly got ready, then started to wake up Arnav with love.

To Khushi's shock, however, Arnav didn't remember a thing of the previous night. Her heart broke, as Arnav just ignored her and just walked into the bathroom. Back to present times, where Khushi is lying on the hospital bed, she looks to her side, and sees Arnav sleeping a little uncomfortably on a chair.

Khushi feels Arnav starting to stir a little, so she turns her face to the other side then pretends to be asleep. Arnav speaks out loud to himself, not knowing that Khushi can hear everything. Khushi starts thinking, knowing that Arnav has started to change, but still can't herself to trust him completely after all that he has put her through for the past 6 months or so.


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Edited by NehAditya8791 - 12 years ago

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