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Posted: 13 years ago

People pls unres within three days of ur reserving…. It actually at time annoy me a lot.. to see like this… I m sorry im talking like tht yet it do

MY is kinda on hold… I donot know wht to do with it… just trying to get it back.. will try tht I cum up with an update within 2-3 days..

Updates maybe now will not cum as smoothly as they were n that is for all three of my ongoing works,… a little caught up with sumthing

Haven't rply to u guys.. thanks a lot for ur love n support

And Diviya… wala… Welcome back… loved it to see ur comment after so many days…

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter: 32

Past:

Nothing was good at Ahmed mansion… she was getting sick of hearing his mother's bad mouthing about mayank, all the hatred she has for him was cuming on surface… she was saying as much bad as she can.. to bad luck she even didn't spare Shilpa in all that.. and sumwhere she has to face the consequences of Mayank's undone sin…

For nupur it was getting worse to hear all this just two days n so much… she has locked herself in room as this was only place she can have peace and .. on off text of mayank where her only strengthen .. it was evening and she was desperately waiting for mayank's call.. and she received it in half bell…

He was feeling so helpless, the person he guarded lifetime was now left alone in the battle field… but evry time he is talking to her the strange strengthen she has got now was making him feel proud of there love

Mayank: tu janab lagta hai phone k hath mein lay ker bhaiti thi…

Nupur: han tu meray shaor k phone jo any wala tha…

Mayank: he smiled… in all the hell of situation they can still build there own world away from all misery

Hmm so tu hai.. tum thik ho nah…wasy tumhara shoro kitna intezar kerta hai nah

Nupur: oye hello khabardar jo us k baray mein kuch kaha… han mein thik hoon… tum ny sab rekh liya hai nah… koi problem tu nhi hai nah

Mayank: koi problem nhi hai baba.. sab rekh liya hai… ek bar check bhi ker liya hai

Nupur: medicine bhi aur jacket bhi ..

Maynak: han baba sab .. sab rekh liya hai.. nhi ghomo k sardi mein zayada, apna kayal rekho ga… bahar k nhi kahao ga… musbiat khud bana paray ga.. aur kuch

Nupur: aur mjhy khub sara miss kero ga…

Mayank: sigh.. woh tu mein abhi se ker raha hoon… he said seriously… yes he was feeling very alone, very very alone…

Nupur: kyun miss ker rahy ho… mein sath tu hoon..

Mayank: tum janti ho aj mjhy tumahin asay dekhker kitna acha lag raha hai.. I always wanted to see u like this strong fighter… aur aj tum lar rahi ho tu acha lag raha hai

Nupur: u have given me that strengthen mayank…

Sumwhere It was easier to make him believe that she is perfect and things are more than perfect all here…. As he cant see her… she has to that.. already he is in hell and she cant tell him how his mother is being curse and all…

Mayank: acha wah sab thik hai nah… koi tumahin tang tu nhi ker raha hai

Nupur: nhi.. sab thik hai… ami ko tu jasay eid hogi hai…. Poray ghar mein tum ko mashoor ker rahi hain… jo kuch woh khabi nhi bol pai sab bol rahi hain..

He chukled …

Nupur: tum hass rahy hoo

Mayank: sirf ek baat socho nupur… jab un ko pata chaly ga.. k woh aj bhi humain alag nhi ker pai… tu un ki shakal kasi hogi…

She can't hold her smile to spread on her face true it will be moment to watch…

Mayank: aur jab hum sab thik kerlay ga… tu kitna maza aay ga…. Tu mjhy hasi arahi hai un k is choti se khamiyabi per… jo bht jald bht jald na kami mein badl jay gi..

Nupur: bus woh waqt jaldi se ajay

Mayank: thora sabar rekho… thik hai.. meri flight k waqt horaha hai… nupur states mein kam call kero ga u know tht

Nupur: janti hoon… bus tum kayal rekhna aur sab thik ho ga… jasay hi tumahri company k owner se baat ho mjhy zaroor batana

Mayank: han bulkily batao ga.. asa hosakta hai k na batao… tum bhi apna kayal rekhna…

Nupur: hmm

Mayank: Allah hafiz…

Nupur: AH

Mayank proceed to check in with a prayer that lord will protect her.. she looked at his ended call praying that may he achieve what he has too…

……….

Days started to pass and things at Ahmed mansion for shilpa turns hell… she wasn't not even allowed to look after nupur to much.. if by chance tai jaan see her, she will humiliate her saying her son has broke nupur and now mother is shading crocodile tears and pretending to be good…

Samrat was out of everything, he was hating mayank, did know wht the hell his sister still don't want to hear any bad thing for his mouth.. and towards shilpa he has no emotions.. he just was sumwhere feeling like losing the trust on everyone..evryone..

It was almost 20 days and nupur cant take this all any more…. Shilpa has to leave else things will be so much to bear that nupur will start to speak…

Nupur: choti ami ap America chali jay please

Shilpa: as kyun bol rahi ho beta… mein hoon tumahray pass.. kya tum bhi mhjy mayank k kerny ki saza do gi

Nupur: nhi choti ami ap asa kasay soch sakti hoon…. Ami ny apk jeena muskil kerdiya hai… mjhy tu ab asay hi rehna hai ap kab tak meray sath rehao gi

Shilpa: meri beti bari hogi hai… us mein himat agai hai buhat sari

Nupur: bus tu ap is beti per behorrsa rekhy woh itni asni se nhi tootay gi… ap jay yaha se is se pehly k ami paagl hojay.. please choti ami ap ko meri kasam ap yaha se jay

Shilpa: Nupur..beta asay kasay mein tumahin…

Nupur: pls choti ami…

Shilpa: sigh thik hai mein salman se kahti hoon… per mera dil nhi hai

………

Here in new York mayank has tried to talk to his father yet the guards didn't let him in saying that he has said not to… tired to call, email text everything and now he is done… he has decided he will not talk to anyone now… to hell with all .. they think what they wnt to he just donot give a dam.. yet the feeling of hurt is not going away ..how cum it not ..it was matter of his parents..

On the other hand mayank was using everything to have a meeting fixed with the CEO… it hs been so long he has tired and tried yet his assistant are not transferring his words to the head..

And this has to be done..else there will be no way… so today after trying to much, he got info that the CEO is going to his out hose for vacations .. so mayank already reached there and waited on the gate of his house to talk to him

Strange it was he was almost siting on the foot park to beg the CEO to take the collection…God …itni azmiash kyun ..itna imtehan kyun

He saw the car cuming and rushed to stand infornt of the door… the car stoped with a hault..and he moved to the window and knocked it

Mayank: sir please I just seek ur 5 mins please sir..

CEO: Mr Ahmed .. am I right..

Mayank: yes sir please… I m trying to get to u from past a month ..please sir just listen to me for few mins…

CEO: u cheated

Mayank: I dint sir.. I just need time to explain it to u… please sir just give me one chance please.. just listen to me ..

CEO: oky .. cum to my office on monday.. right now I want to spend sumtime with my family on weekend …

Mayank: sir ur people are not letting me in to ur office

CEO: okay show them this they will I asure u

Mayank: thanku

The CEO passed a card of his with his signature and time and he took it and look at it.. 2 more days wasted dam it… he was feeling losing his patience now.. it is getting on his nerves..

He was going towards his flat waking on the road lost in his world.. and was planning to call nupur.. it has been 2-3 days he hasn't talk to her.. and now alteast he has sutmhing positive to tell her ..

Just than he was about to enter his flat he saw Shilpa moving in her car… he cant believe this… this means nupur is … freak.. how can shilpa leave her alone..god dam…

He rush to his home and dialed her number

Mayank: tum ny nmjhy bataya kyun nhi ami waps agai hai new York..tum ny anay kyun diya rukha kyun nhi unko

Nupur: aram se mayank.. baat tu suno

Mayank: ami asa kasay kersakti ho

Nupur: mein ny kaha hai unko…

Mayank: magar kyun nupur

Nupur: ami ny choti ami k jeena haram ker rekha tha mayank…. Poray ek mahina se woh un k har waqt zalil ker rahi thi… kab tak bardasht kerti woh..sirf meray liyan ker rahi thi.. magar ab buhat hoagay tha mayank

Mayank: tum ny mjh bataya kyun nhi… yahin waha aur buaht kuch horaha hai

Nupur: kuch nhi horaha hai yaha.. ami pora din shoor kerti rehti hain… samrat ny baat hi band ker di hai… sab se.. gunjan behcari sab ko sambhalty sambhalty thak gai hai… aur tu aur woh log bahar ghomny finally jarahy thy woh bhi cancel kerdiya

Mayank: zahir se baat hai mein ny diya tha woh gift .. ab kasay lay ga..

Nupur: woh choro waha kya hua…

Mayank: aj CEO se baat ki us ny Monday ko bolaya

Nupur: aray yeah tu bht achi baat hai finally … woh mily tu

Mayank: han per phir 2 din waste

Nupur: koi baat nhi sab thik hoga

Mayank: ab mjhy sahi se batao k waha kya kya horah hai…..

Nupur: uff mayank kuch bhi nhi… acha thik hai sab batati hoon….

……….

Tai jaan was no at the cloud nine.. shilpa out.. that is absolutely what she want and now she will do what she wanted to… a month has gone.. only 2. 5 months left to get mayank completely out of nupur's life …. Now she has to start doing the other things..

In all this her thought of wining her porudness.. her thoughts diverted form mayank..and that sumwhere helped him to get grip on the business..

Talking with CEO was the biggest achievement for him…

CEO: mr Ahmed u know how much I loved ur work and ur working style but the news of ur cheating on the fince was big thing

Mayank: sir u can call the company…. Actually there was slight mis understanding in my family.. my wife had all the shares of mine as I gave her.. yet she transferred it to her mom that I didn't knew… so that's why finically commonly didn't got the shares and thought I cheated.. but than my mother in law gave it back to me so I gave them….

It was just about the family thing.. it has always been such yet I didn't payed to attention on that… so it big so big

CEO: oh.. so Ahmed's has family bussinee..

Mayank: yes we have.. we share all … live together do business… yet I wanted to sumthing different so family has to oppose

CEO: aha .. I see… still Mr ahmed I have to confirm it from the financial compny..

Mayank: sure u can do it… but sir just give my collection a time

CEO: I will if finically company clear ur rapo… I will love to have ur work in my stores..

The first thing mayank did cuming out of the office was to call Afaq sehba asking him to pay the frst installment of the loan so tht it will perfectly clear his rapo.. he did ASAP…. And so when the CEO asked them they said he has clear all the doubts… but still shares problem is there…

In all that one that mayank didn't knew was Nupur's health that she has hided perfectly from him.. she wasn't in the worse of situation yet evry day everyone' s word were making things worse n worse for her… it was hell to tolerate all that… it was hell… she cant stop herself not to think about all this knowing pretty well this is all temporary yet still she cant be indifferent being what she is… but to her biggest shock her mother had throw another card on the table.. just with one n half month of her daughter's divorce here cums the biggest shock for nupur..

Tai jaan: bus kya kahao Mrs waris meri itni pyari bachi k sath asa hi hona tha… apko kya batao kab se woh yeah sab baradsht ker rahi thi yeah soch ker k mayank khabi tu us se pyar kerny lagay ga.. magar nhi… us ny tu us ko koi haq hi nhi diya

Mrs. Waris: Mrs faraz mein ny tu ap se pehly hi kaha tha mayank jasa akro larka nupur k liyan nhi hai… bechari bachi… no wonder kis kism k insaan hai mayank… kya kya kerdiya

Tai jaan: meri tu samhj nhi araha hai k Nupur ko kasay sambhalo… us ny tu apny ap ko kamray mein band ker k rekh liya hai… us ki ziandagi tu kahtam hogi nah

Mrs. Waris: kis zamany ki baat ker rahi hain ap… acha hai bachay k tu koi chakkar hai nhi… simple kero… us ko zara bhar nikalo parties mein lao… she will feel better… us ki dosri shadi kerado

Tai jaan: han mera bhi yeahi irada hai… bus ap tu koi acha larak milay mjhy bus … tu mein tu ofran yeah kero…

Mrs. Waris chalo donot worry mein ghar ati hoon Nupur se milny…

Tai jaan smile fully ..very well…. That's exactly what she want mrs Waris taking interest in Nupur….

Present:

Mayank: chalein janab…ghar nhi chalna hai… common get up..

She was ready to go home and was dressed up and was siting on her bed.. frowning

Nupur: shukar hai… warna mjhy lagay tha k tum mjhy yahin rekho gay….

He chukled ..and make her stand and showed her way to the door.. just than gunjan and shilpa enter with smile…

Gunjan: chalo bhi ghar chalo… im so loving it… finally tum dono ghar aao gay…

Shilpa: aao beta aram se… mayank hum nupur ko lay jay ga.. tum saman rekh wao

Mayank: woh mein rekh diya hai… mein handle kerlo ga

Gunjan: choti ami ko pata nhi hai … woh nupur ko kisi ko hath bhi nhi lagny day ga.. han bhi han… hum per kaha aetibar hai….

He slapped her head playfully at her dramatically speaking of words…while nupur smiled…

Gunjan: tu hato mein lay ker jao gi…

Nupur: mein khud jasakti hoon

Mayank: dekha … is ki yeah haraktein hain…

Gunjan: tum tension maat lo… mein is ko handle kerti hoon… chup ker tu.. chalo sharafat se meray sath….

Shilpa: chalo…mayank tum car lay aao

Mayank: ji thik hai… aram se jet engine ki tarah maat chalna samjhi tum…

She showed him his tongue getting irritated with his instruction…

Nupur: tum tu ghar chalo mayank ahmed..achy se batati hoon

Gunjan: Sharm nhi ati sari adult bateing humaray hi samny..

Giggling mayank left to get the car..while nupur slapped gunjan.. who laughed more…

………

It was weird feeling, the moment the door of Ahmed mansion open mayank flet strange feeling engulfing inside him… he felt his hand in soft hold and he didn't need to look at her face… that is congratulating him for now entering this place again.. and that so hand in hand as winners …

He can feel evry word of evry one eching in his ears, can see the police van that dragged him out of the house and took him with them… he can se smarat hiting him.. shilpa cursing him…nupur dying to hold him…. And the worse tai jaan's smiling face that he deliberately looked when he was going out.. that gave him the anger to fight….

And now when he is entering back as the winner… aah he can die to look at tai jaan's face.. the thought grace his face with a smile…

Samrat was standing nervously at the door, with a subtle smile.. mayank can see the guilt and pain on his face and shocked his head……

Stoping the car in front of the door gunjan and shilpa came out .. and asked the servant to take the things.. samrat run forward to opend nupur's door and take her carefully out.. and mayank stod beside letting her brother have her…

Samrat move a bit away looking at mayank and came forward reluctantly not knowing excalty wht to do n what not to do..he was just to much in the guilt of saying and doing all that… mayank shocked his head and move forward to hug him… samrat close his eyes and hugged him back.. whispering sorry again n again… he was completely broken and mayank can feel his tears….. he rub his back assuring him its oky..

He broke away and claps his hand bowing his hand he said sorry gain

Mayank: kay ker raha hai pagal hogaya hai kya….. he cuped his face and made him look at him… bhool ja sab… jatna hoo halat asay thy…. Han per punch k badla lo ga mein… he said with a smile

Samrat: tu jitna chahy maar layna …

Mayank slaped his cheel playful… asking him to stop now…

Mayank: kya ap sab k aj bhi haumin ghar k bhar hi rekhny k irada hai…

Samrat: nhi na aao nah…. Per nupur ko tum khud ghar k andar lao…

He took nupur's hand and placed it back in mayank's hand… and went away to open the door… for them…the moved together on the door of the house… and it was dcor fully for there welcm.. the floor was filled with petals saying welcum back…

Gunjan: welcum back…

Mayank looked at nupur who was clutching his hand tight…he smiled and single her as chalein… and she closed her eyes saying yes..

She step inside the same house.. he step inside this house again wch has given them all, and has tired to take all away too… yet today the feeling is pure pleasure proud.. nobody nobody got successful in making them apart …

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i was going to sleep and saw this thread on first page..i guessed you've given update..:)
it was beautiful part
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Maria.

i was going to sleep and saw this thread on first page..i guessed you've given update..:)

it was beautiful part
loved it



goo nite dear
😊

thnkuu


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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful part Fiza.. can't wait to read about Tai Jaan's expressions 😆 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
mayank and nupur suffered a lot. tai zan ko maar dalo
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update Fiza :)
cant wait to read the next part...eagerly waiting to read Tai Jaan's reaction...
very very sad past...and the present makes you smile
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Posted: 13 years ago
/GOOD PART ..


Waiting For Some Excitement...Tai jaan ki Chatni banani chaiye ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it ...
i feel so bad for mayank n nupur ...how much dey had tolerate .gosh .

mayank is so sweet .he fotgave samrat .realy adore d bonding of awsom 4 ...

cont soon
Edited by kheya-mayur - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome part Fiza di.. Mayank and Nupur had really faced a lot to come out from the trap build up by tai jaan they had faced the emotional problems more... And for Mayank he has only Nupur as his only supporter... I am happy that everything is fine now

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