Avita OS-'Not just a Crush' - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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its m again 🤗 this my hattrick post 😊 teen-teen post woh bi ek saath 😲 😆 its a miracle from me na 😆
For ma remarks hmm 😊 i will stick to wat i said earlier its a beautiful concept n u hv written it beautifully 👏 If u had completed it in a single post it must have been best.😃
Just comparing both the part i feel the second is much better than the first 😳 I commented earlier thinking that u will not continue and i still feel that the first part was complete and its sometimes nice to leave the end unknown let the reader keep guessing it
Thinking of a continuation I liked the 2nd part 😳 n also it was a happy ending... the two persons truly in love ends up together
But if i take the two parts separately means both are different write-up than m think 2nd part was perfectly presented by u 👏
Anyway i liked it as one OS with 2 parts or two different OS...😳 n hoping I will get to read more of such OS from U.
Lv u bye.🤗





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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dii...it is...mindblowing !!! Such an awsm end...! The way u hav described avita's inner emotions s fantastic !! Luv ya di :) :)

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