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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 11

Maan was back home and as usual he was lost in his room. This room though belonged to him but it had the aroma of Geet and her memories. He never did change his room after their 15th birthday as he wanted to hate her and being in tat room would make him stronger and his hatred for her would increase with each passing second and it did. He opened his cupboard and took something out from the locker, the bracelet that was adored with diamonds. He looked at it and with any delay fisted it in his hands making it to bleed with the sharp ends of the bracelet. His hand was bleeding with blood dripping but there was no pain nor any sign of him flinching. He raised his hand and smirked saying.

"You know wat Ms. Handa, this was the most precious gift I was supposed to give you after apologizing but see now it's the most painful gift for me. See Geet, its hurting me but sadly, there is no pain in me. I like when it hurt me dripping my blood away from my bloody. It makes me calm and makes me to hate you more and more. I hate you Geet Handa I hate you."

His eyes were spitting fire which could burn any person live but the person whom he wanted to kill was not there nor he could kill her with his own hands as he wanted to see her die in pain each second, die for wat she did, die for taking away his own parents from him, to die for away his own siblings. He closed his eyes and the moment he did he remembered the most dreadful day, their 15th birthday..

Maan was happy, happy tat today was their birthday. It had been almost a month now after their fight and their first kiss. Though it was a kiss of anger and frustration, he did kiss her for the first time. He felt shy thinking about how her lips tasted. He always wanted their first kiss to be special but it was in anger. He knew tat his Mishti was hell angry as she had always said tat she wants a fairytale kiss from him. he was also angry on himself tat he was rude and doubted his Mishti but today he would say sorry to her and would give her the most precious gift which he had purchased, a diamond bracelet for her. It was the same diamond when they had been for shopping and she wanted to buy it but Maan had said tat it was not good and today he had asked his Dad, Raj to purchase so tat he could gift it to her after the party when they spend sometime together. Being a weekday they had school so Maan first thought tat he himself will go to her and say sorry than apologize to Armaan and Abhay for being to rude. Though being in the same class, right now he did not know where Geet was, since their fight Geet always maintained a distance fearing him and here now he was searching her which was not unnoticed by Sameera. She informed him tat she had seen her going towards the garden of the college along with Armaan and Abhay and she too accompanied him to go. Here Armaan and Abhay were sad as today being their friends they could even wish them. They could feel how Geet was trying to control her tears while Armaan hugged from trying to soothe her pain unknown tat a pair of eyes were fuming in anger seeing them.

Armaan: Please Geet.. See if you don't want to go than fine don't.

Abhay: Haan Geet.. its even your birthday and if you don't want to celebrate it with him than fine na.. you can tell your parents..

Geet: I hate him Armaan.. I hate Maan.. he does not deserve me nor my friendship nor my love. I hate him. I will always hate him for he did.

These words from her mouth were enough to burn him with anger, rage and all hatred and the sight of Armaan hugging her close was making it worse. He moved a bit to go and slap her again but Sameera holds his hands pulling him away. He jerked her hand and tried to go when she said.

Sameera: Maan, I understand wat you feel right now but don't you understand wat you saw. She never loved you Maan, she never as she is more close to Armaan. I don't know Maan tat should I say this or not but more than you she is closer to Armaan. They both share a special bond Maan. Maan its time tat you let her go Maan, let her go away. She never loved you Maan but just used you all these years.

Here on the other side Geet realized wat she said and mentally slapped herself to say tat.

Geet: oyye.. ullu ke patte.. cant you see me in anger and instead of making me realize you both are saying tat I should not celebrate my birthday with him. you idiots morons how dare you say tat. he is my Maan and I cant stay angry with him. so wat if he hates me but I know tat he will wait for me on my birthday and we will have a grand celebrations. Opps me now going.. have to rush warna Maan Singh Khuranna gusse se pagal hojayega aur meri bandh baja denga.
Geet said goodbye to them while Armaan and Abhay smiled at their jhalli friend. They knew tat if they agree with her she will get annoyed and say wats in her heart and it did happened,. They simply could not stop laughing and too went away for getting ready after all they had to attend their two best friends birthday.

Maan stormed inside his room and his anger roused to a new level seeing the birthday gifts and the photos of Geet hanging inside his room. He could not think anything else as the words said by Geet were creating a storm of anger within him. He threw the gifts with fury and pulled down the photo frames shattering them into million pieces the way Geet shattered his heart and the love that resided in his heart and soul. He kicked the shattered pieces of the frames stepping them with his shoes as if destroying every ounce of her in his life. His furious eyes fell on the musical couple that Geet had gifted him just few days back as a token of her love but now it was the most painful gift for him. He reached near it picks it up with anger and hatred for Geet.

Maan: Your smiles are as fake as your love and promises Ms. Geet Handa and a fake person like you don't deserve me, Maan Singh Khuranna. You played with me and my true love and now I will show you the real Maan Singh Khuranna, be ready Ms. Handa for the best birthday gift.
Maan saw himself in the mirror coming out from his thoughts when he saw her image laughing at him. the eyes which once had love for her were now laughing at him.

Geet: See Maan Singh Khuranna, I still affect you. I will never leave your mind, heart nor your soul and you will be burning with anger and I will enjoy it.

Maan : you can never Geet, you can never and soon I will prove tat you don't have any place in my life.
Maan shattered the mirror into pieces to get rid of her shadow. He could not deny tat she still had the effect on him.

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Geet was torn and broken from all sides. The very time she spoke to Raj, her Dad tat she wanted Maan to get married to Sameera something broke in her.She felt her soul leave her body and now she was not less than a mere dead body. She did not cry nor she was happy but still there was tat restlessness that she always feels when she thinks about the day, their 15 birthday where her whole world was crashed. These seven years were not less than hell for her but she was not weak. She very well knew tat Maan always created hurdles for in her life, they were the topmost enemies after tat. She knew tat Maan being close to Sameera was also to hurt her but she did not mind it. she had long forgotten the love which she used o harbour for him in her heart and now there was no Love nor any feelings for him but ya she always made sure tat he was safe. She never did understand why she used to reach for him and this was the biggest question in her life. Today she had taken the biggest decision in her life without the realization tat this decision of hers would turn her whole life since now. She closed her eyes drifting into the most dreadful past of hers where at one moment she was happy and the very next second her whole life changed changing her from Mishti to Geet to Geet Handa.

Geet was finally happy and at peace as today, she would be with Maan after around a month of their fight. This day, their birthday was very special for them. She very well knew tat Maan was short-tempered and very possessive for her but hell angry on him for ruining their first kiss. She always wanted it to be special but his anger had made him to do wrong. She shrugged off all tat and finally made her way towards the KM dressing in her birthday suit that was white his favorite color. He always liked her to be in white dresses as it reflected her pure angelic beauty. She blushed to herself and the moment she reached near the entrance of the KM she was met with the most dreadful sight. Her Maan, was burning with anger and the looks which he was giving her made her to shiver for a second. For once she felt tat she should return but she knew tat he wont celebrate his birthday if she dos not celebrate hers. She slowly made her way to him and the moment she reached near him his voice filled with anger halted her steps.

Maan: Ms. Geet Handa…. nice to see you here.

Geet: Maan..
Maan: Don't…. you have lost the rights Ms. Handa.
Geet neared him and tried to touch his face but before she could do, she was pushed back on the hard floor hurting her right elbow. She cried with pain while Maan did not bother to see it instead pulled her harshly making her cry.

Maan: You know wat… I was a fool to think tat My Mishti… Sorry Geet Handa stills loves me and would forgive me for my mistake but nope you are the biggest cheater in the world but m happy tat today I got to see your true face.

Geet: Maan plz….. u r hurting……. Me..

Maan: ohh come on stop the bloody drama. It does not affect me any more. Your so called this fake tears.. I don't care for them…

Geet cried while struggling to get out of his grip.

Maan: You have taken away my parents from me… they love you more than me and me idiot never ever realized tat you have taken them away from me. My own family fulfills my wish after yours. My Dad who should see wat his sons needs he says No Maan.. you are not supposed to have tat but Geet wat he says Doll she can have anything. When Geet is upset or crying Maan is blamed by his own mother and Dadima. My own brother and sister they need you first. Why Geet why did you do all this..

He pushes her but hold her protecting her from the fall but twists her hand with force.

Maan: you fake your love and friendship for me when in reality you hate me. You feel tat Maan is unworthy for you than trust me Geet you just seen one side of Maan and the real Maan Singh Khuranna is yet to be seen.

Geet: Maan.. please leave me na… its hurting……

Maan: Its hurts Geet.. it hurts when the person whom you love cheats you behind your back. I now understand why you always favored Armaan and Abhay to be with us so tat you can chiii.. wat type of a girl you are Geet.

Geet tried all her force and came out of his grip and slapped him hard for using such words. She was angry not on him but herself now more tat her Maan was thinking so low about her.

Geet: you know wat MSK.. I was wrong to believe tat you are repenting your mistake and would be happy to see me come back to you but nope m wrong to think such. You…..

Maan: ohh really.. you think so Geet Handa.. why don't you accept it tat you are a leach who sucks blood for her welfare. You know wat Ms. Handa, you are such a leach tat only knows to suck blood from one's body. Even a devil would leave his prey but you only know to break relations close to me. You know wat I have never seen a selfish girl like you who only wants to prove tat you are an angel but in real you are a b**** and a two timer who only wants me to get away from his loved ones. Who wants to see me crying and begging in front of you, who wants to see me dancing on your fingertips and for tat reason you did wat you did to Sameera. You know wat now I know tat wat I had seen between you and Armaan I was right tat you are a bloody player playing with me and my feelings and I hate you Ms. Handa I hate myself for loving you once.

Geet was shocked to hear wat he said. She could not believe tat her Maan would ever say such things. She just kept looking at him with tears.

Maan: wat… you feel tat I would never come to know wat you did to Sameera. Come on Geet don't forget tat I have more friends than you. You and your so called BF Armaan Malik and so called friend Abhay Raichand blamed Sameera for spoiling your name. you slapped her saying tat she was the one who spread rumors about you and Armaan kissing. You really suck Geet tat you blame others for your sins. You really…

It was more than enough for Geet to hear and she could not take it and without any delay she raised her hands once again Maan making him mad with anger and hatred. He did not knew wat he was doing and the next second she was found fallen on the floor while her head bleeding as she had hurt herself by hitting to the near by flowerpot and the very next second Maan was slapped hard by an angry Raj. The Khuranna's who were busy inside the mansion were informed by Nakul tat Maan was fighting with Geet had rushed outside only to see Maan pushing Geet and she hurt herself. They were unknown to wat the matter was but were only the witness to Maan's anger and had only seen Maan pushing Geet. Shikha Dadima ran to Geet and was shocked to see her bleeding while Raj who was angrier now slapped Maan once again. Vicky and Annie were crying seeing their Geet bleeding and before Raj could shout at Maan he was gone inside damaging and throwing all the decorations done or their birthday.

Geet jerked herself out from her dream that sadly wasn't a dream but the harsh reality. She had tears in her eyes that she always felt like her weakness. Since tat day she was changed, her every relation changed. Nor Maan nor Geet said anything t their family about their fight, the accusations which were put on Geet by Maan. They shielded themselves from each other along and from their family. The Khuranna's and Handa's did try to a lot to ask them about tat day but none of the two opened their mouth. Only the mere mention of each other's name would make them angry and fill them with hatred and for the welfare of their children, they kept quite though each second they were dying to see their own Maan and Geet filling themselves with hatred and anger but they were helpless. They were helpless tat they could not do anything to get them back. However, today Geet was free, or she felt like she was free was she really.

Maan and Geet finally happy tat they would move away from each. Maan thinking tat finally Raj agreed with him for Sameera as today only Raj had informed him tat as soon as he finish his studies he will get him married but poor Maan did not know wat Raj was planning while Geet happy tat Raj would listen to her and let Maan and Sameera marry unknown tat her tow families will tie them up into a relation a sacred relation which might destroy them or will they get through their harsh destiny and be together.
Precap: The Trap

Hope you like and comment for the update…

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow me first again ...👏
luck day...
fab update...
maan is angry on her 4 this...
their small misunderstanding cashed nicely by sameera😡...
waiting 4 next...

Edited by lg001 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice story...just read in one go...but pls jaldise maan and geet ke bich ki MU clere krdo...
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it dear but so much pain...so much...why did he just believe her words spoken in anger...dost they yaar...hota hai but he took her words literally and then Sameera...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg
this was a m/u n Sameera made it big but she hardly knows that Maan n Geet r destined to be one
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Posted: 12 years ago
because of that sameera chudail maan misunderstood geet. precap is interestig
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice part so all done by sameera hope koi ek to jane ga uski asliat
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
all mus due to sameera
aab kya hoga continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
getting the plot now
goo job shobha di

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Posted: 12 years ago
that sam i hate that b****
she is the reason of all mu between my maaneet
n maanu maanu u control ur self
dont abbuse my geet so much ki baad ,mai pachtana pde..😡😡😡
maaneet marriage
mza aayega
two enemies, two friend or two lover babaji 😕😕

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