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see its 101 page... now toh u update sweetie...

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pallavi ek problem e.rhu90 z nt tellng her nick name or real name!! :(
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Originally posted by: tinatartari

pallavi ek problem e.rhu90 z nt tellng her nick name or real name!! :(


hey tina ...check ur scrap... rithu...kkk nw...
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hey tina ...check ur scrap... rithu...kkk nw...


nick name met pochu kar... woh 20-25 se jyada haoga...
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ok rhu90 10 more mins plx..
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arrey tina bechari ne bata toh diya uska name rithu hai ab nickname toh buhat embarassing hote hai woh mat puchna...

now update gal...
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koi baat nahi tina take ur time...
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Originally posted by: pallavi.14

arrey tina bechari ne bata toh diya uska name rithu hai ab nickname toh buhat embarassing hote hai woh mat puchna...

now update gal...


pallavi.kya tum mere tang kheech rahe ho...
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CHAPTER 41 (A)

RECAP:

Karan kriya s marriage.all her frnds meow,poppy,rithu,asma,candy,amy,tehmina,shonuu n others were present 2 grace the occasion.

Aftr the kanyadaan,both stood up 4 the pheras.

1st phera:karan pledged he ll always be on kriya s side n never leave her alone

2nd phera he pledged he ll make her happy n try 2 remove all her bad memories of past

3rd phera he pledged 2 never 2 c any tear in her eyes n 2 make her follow her dream n b a best frnd as well as a husband

Then kriya moved 2 take the lead

4th phera kriya pledged 2 b a gud wife n never argue or fight wid karan

5th phera she pledged never 2 deceive him'

6th phera she ll 4get her past n karan ll b her present n future.she ll never allow her past 2 overtake her future

7th phera if karan z endangeredshe ll protect him like a faithful wife risking her own life

Aftr the pheras were over,karan put sindoor(vermillion) in her maang n tied mangalsutra around her neck!she ws now officially mrs karan singh grover.they took the blessings ov the elders.then kriya s bidaai came n she was supposed 2 go 2 karan s home bt as he dint hav any home thr so they went 2 the IAF resthouse suite in dehradhun especially arranged n decorated 4 them.then they had 2 fly 2 simla 4 their honeymoon.

Thr rey ws v sad n angry tat aftr all tat he did 2 kriya,karan still accepted her n tat 2 widout any trouble n on top ov tat his own real brother ws supporting her.he thot tat his revenge hasn't completed yet.he left a permanent scar on kriya s life bt it dint affect her much as karan ws thr 2 cover it up 4 her.he broke the glass ov wine in hand on the mirror in anger.

R:goddamn!!WTH!!i did all I cud 2 ruin her n 2 make her suffer n here she z startng a new life wid karan!!i hate u kriya!!i ll make ur life like hell.ll never let u rest in peace!!i promise!!

SUHAAGRAAT

Thr wen they reached karan entered 1st 2 make arrangements wich were already done 2 sme extend.kriya waited 4 him at the door.he came wid an aarti ki thaali wid sindhoor,kum kum,coconut,haldi n flower petals n a diya!he placed a pot full ov uncooked rice n a plate full ov wet kum kum on her way in her footsteps,did her aarti n asked her 2 entered.she kicked the rice pot n came inside aftr putting her feet in kum kum n marked her footprints in his home n his heart.he ws really v v happy 2 hav got her.he felt on top ov the wrld n on the other hand rey ws cursing himself 4 hav lost his love life in a jitt second.he ws remembering their gr8 nite n all the moments he spent wid her bt hw cud he 4get tat she ws his sis's enemy n wot she did wid her.

He went 2 the punching bag,punched it harder n harder,broke all the glasses n wine bottles n hurt his hand.his hands bled badly n he started dancing on the song

TUJHE BHULA DIYA

He ws constantly crying..

R:I lost u!lost u 4evr nw mano!i thot mayb by dng this u ll feel hurt,lonely n ll realize ur mistake n apologise n beg 2 come bck 2 me bt wot u did?u married him n left me?hw cn u do this 2 me mano?bt dnt wrry I wont let u b his 4evr.nw he ll leave u who married n trusted u so badly n u ll b alone again n then u ll come bck 2 me!!n I ll force u 2 come 2 me again!!u r mine 4evr n u cnt be any1 else's.then wot if u gonna spend few nights wid him?u spent ur 1st night wid me n u ll always b mine'.u hear tat??MINEEE(rey shouted freakily)

Vick ws listening it 4m the door.he ws hell shocked..

V(thnkng) man!wots tat?y z bro torturing himself n kriya 4 pinky?why she acts like a constant source ov trouble 4 both ov them?wot kinda love is this?god!wot ll b the end ov all this??kriya z married nw bt bro wont let her in peace..plx god save them..

Ok nw bck 2 karan n kriya

Karan took him in his arms 2 their bed room.thou kriya's heart always belonged 2 rey bt aftr his torments on her,she decided 2 4get him.she compromised wid karan cx she felt tat 2 get a man who loves u z lucky than getting a man whom u love!!bt instead ov sleeping wid her,karan went 2 the couch 2 sleep 2 giv her some spae 4 cmng outta rey's trauma.hw understanding person he ws!!

(nw cutting the crap)

Thngs were gng gud between karan n kriya thou they shared no physical relationship yet.

1 month later

Kriya ws in the kitchen preparing breakfast 4 karan wen she felt dizzy.she fell unconscious on the floor.karan ws getting ready 4 duty in his room.he cudnt find his batches n calld out 4 kriya..

Ka:I cant find my batches princess!!cn u do it 4 me??Princess come fast..

Bt thr ws no reply.he waited 4 smtym bt no getting no reply,he went 2 the kitchen 2 c wot she z dng n saw her on the floor.he ws worried nw.he carried her 2 bed,put water splashes on her face till she got up!

Karan ws concerned

Ka:r u ok princess?let me call the doctor!

K:no em ok honey!lemme get u breakfast.

Ka:no.i ll take it myself.em callng the doc.

K:no dear!its ok!!u go 2 duty.

Ka:r u sure?

K:ya!cmon get ready

He got ready n went 2 duty.kriya ws all alone at home.she being a final year student knew thr z definitely smthng wrong n she ws worried wot if her doubts become true?

She quickly got ready 4 school n decided 2 confirm it

Wen she came bck home,she quickly went in 2 check n aftr few moments.her face ws pale wid horror.all her doubts proved 2 b reality.she thot mayb she tested it wrong so she tried again bt the result ov the test ws still positive.she ws PREGNANT!!pregnant wid rey's child,the thot ws hitting her head like a bomb.NO!!hw ll it affect my married life wid karan?i cant giv him more pain cx ov me.i cant keep rey's child,the result ov his deceit.he will always remind me ov him n his lie.he ll always stand as a barrier between me n karan!!no I cant let him do tat 2 me n my future.he ruined my past n present bt I cant bear him in my future.bt wot shud I do?wot cn I do??

She ws thnkng whether or nt 2 tell it 2 karan?

Karan discovers it 4m the pregnancy test strip placed in the washroom wen he comes home n learns 4m servants kriya has gone 2 hospital wen she has actually gone 4 abortion.karan accepts the child n asks kriya nt 2 kill the innocent soul cx ov rey s mistake.

Kriya feels v happy n thnks universe jee 4 giving her an angel in her lyf..karan gets attached 2 the child in kriya s womb n talks 2 it everyday aftr kriya goes 2 sleep.he sleeps on the sofa everyday n kriya on bed.however kriya convinces him 2 share the bed wid her tjou they dnt get physical due 2 the child.kriya starts 2 feel 4 karan.

Aftr 2 months ie wen kriya z 3 mnths pregnant karan gets a mission 2 sme far flung area.he z assigned rey as his assistant 4 the job.karan doesn't wanna go bt job z job aftrall.so they set 2 go thr.they complete the mission in the war zone n wen they r abt 2 return karan gets a firearm wound in the chest saving rey 4m getting it into his head straight n z critically wounded.he z taken bck by rey n z in the hospital wid kriya by his side all the time.rey watches this secretly 4m a distance n gets envious bt smhw karan doesn't survives the injury aftr 2 mnths..kriya z shattered completely.she refuses 2 accept this n goes in a shock-like-state.seeing her agony rey z hating himself as he z responsible 4 kriya s plight n karan s death.had karan nt tried 2 save rey,he had been alive.he curses himself..kriya z 5 mnths pregnant by then.all efforts 2 bring bck kriya 2 normal fails n she z still in a shock-like state whr she z fed via a tube n she doesn't respond 2 anythng bt her eyes keep wetting wid tears.

Rey z helpless n he z feeling terrible seeing kriya in the same state like his sis!!

COMING UP:

lots ov twists n turns.get ready 4 a small leap!!😉

part B

my dear readers!em v v sorry 4 the late updtes n no pms owing 2 my exams.ll surely pm u all the updates as soon as em free..hope u r liking my ff.thr r many more twists n turns 2 come if u interested in reading.i'd like 2 xtend the kriya karan track bt ppl dint like it so much so i dcded 2 wind it up sooner than i had planned.soon u ll c kriyaansh love n more spice in a rather different way!!enjoy reading!!

Edited by tinatartari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
arrey nahi rithu it is just that i know hw embarassing nicknames cugd becoz i to have nicknames jo batane layak nahi hai...😉

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