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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pallavi.14

green light is on this means u r here so where is the update u promised sweetie... i know i being too demanding but kya karun mujhe baad mein time nahi milega isliye... sowwiee...



tu kitna demand kartha hai??? pls ussey thoda time do ussey...vaisa tumaharey baarey mem kuch batao ... kaha se ho.kya karthi ho????
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Posted: 13 years ago
aur sorry mujhe pata hai main demanding ho rahi hun par lya karun mere lo baad mein time nahi milega update padne ka kal ki preparation karni hai...
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Posted: 13 years ago
pallavi.14
dude imagine i had my paper 2day.got free sme hrs bck n em here on IF 4m then...i had made the update already bt then i ammended it thnkng it might bore u guys n i thot ov cuttng the crap!em just tryng 2 summ up all the karan scene tat i had planned so need a lil more tym..its 2 much..i cn elaborate easily bt pending up z bit d=freaky u knw!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part :)

loved it to the core


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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
omg itna sab kuch ek updt mai
kriya pregnant and karan died
update the nxt part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
ye to pura saddy saddy part hogaya...
Feeling sad 4 kriya...
Karan is soo sweet bt he is dead nw so sad...
Hope rey ko thodi akal aye ab...
Awsome update...
Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsm
wow karan kitane acha hai itana sab
hone ke baad bhi usne kriya ko accpt kiya aur child ko bhi
karan dead and nw kriya also like living dead without her soul in body...😔
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Posted: 13 years ago
dedicated 2 rhu90(rithu) n pallavi.14

CHAPTER 41(B)

Em v v sorry frnds 4 the late update.i ws updating bt mom came n asked me 2 rest..em so sorry I had written tat before bt thot ov reviewing n I actually merged 4 chaps into 2 parts ov the same chap 2 wind up karan s scene.hope u guys like it!!

PRECAP:

Karan z dead.kriya is 5 mnths pregnant n in a shock like state.rey helpless n blaming himself 4 everythng.

In order 2 giv name 2 karan's child so it may nt b calld as an orphan,vick marries kriya leaving neha almost dead shocked.she blames n curses kriya 4 snatchng her love.vicky still loves kriya bt karan had told him secretly before dying tat its actually rey's child.he doesn't tell this 2 rey as he thnks this ll complicate their lives further.rey cn go 2 any extend 4 his sis n he already did so he cnsdrs it the safest option.mrs singhaniya n rey z furious at this dsczn..vicky n kriya's marriage z v simple court marriage type cx kriya z in a shock-like-state n vick takes his sign by holding her hand.To add 2 his guilt n humiliation,pinky gains consciousness.thr z a state ov wedding in singhaniya mansion.mrs singhaniya z so happy 4 her daughter tat she arranges a party.rey goes 2 pinky.

R:u knw my sweet princess!hw much we r happy 2 c u bck aftr so many yrs?wanna knw wot u missed?

P:ya bro sure.

Rey shows him every1 s pics n tells her wot happened wid all..pinky z listening 2 the story keenly.aftr rey has ended wid the story pinky asks

P:bro!whr z kriya?

To this rey z numb.

P:bro!y r u silent?wot happened 2 her n whr z she nw?

R:pinky!u knw wot?aftr kriya pushed u I broke all my relations wid her n u knw wot?i took ur revenge 4m her.nw u r bck n she z in shock ov her husband s death n z carrying his baby!bt u knw wot?ur junior brother Vicky married her 2 giv a name 2 her child.

N then he tells her everything he did wid her.pinky z shocked

P:bro!wot u did 2 her?she z innocent.i hated her 4m the very beginning.hw stupid I ws n she ws so naive.i realized this wen I woke up!it ws me who pushed her.u shudnt hav done it wid her.u ruined her whole lyf.hw cud u b such an animal?i never thot my brothr cud do this.infact u wr in a position 2 hav told mom nt 2 hate her.we were just kids n she never deserved such a big punishment n look hw unlucky she z ov having got sucha gem in her lyf n then losing her n tat 2 bcoz ov u!u hav become her criminal n idk hw z she gonna 4give u or ll she evr 4give u or nt?vick did a noble deed bt he sacrificed his love 2 make 4 ur mistake bro!

Tat ws another bomb on rey.he ws numb

R(thnkng)damn!i punished my love 4 my sister who ws responsible.hw stupid n cruel ov me.vick ws right bt I never paid any heed 2 his wrds.oh my mano!wot I did wid u?i deserved 2 b unished badly!god!wot shud I do nw?

P:bro!reprimend 4 ur mistake.go look aftr her n her baby!mayb god 4gives u!

R:ya pinky!i ll 4 sure.

N then he goes 2 meet kriya in viky's home.he had arranged a nurse 4 her 2 look aftr her.vick z now an internee.vick z nt home n z on call so rey goes straight 2 kriya's room.she ws lying thr still n the nurse ws checking her bp n vitals.

Rey goes n sits on the chair besides her bed,holds her hand n asks the nurse 2 leave them alone.the nurse allows thnkng its just dr Vicky's brother bt she doesn't knws tat vick hasn't met rey since karan's death.

R:my mano!plx 4giv me.i did v wrong wid u.i shudnt hav done tat.i am responsible 4 ur plight n its me who shud b punished.plx wake up n punish me.pinky has recovered n she told me evrythng.i am so sorry..

A tear escapes kriya's eyes bt she z numb.rey wipes tat tear wid his fingers.he keeps on telling all the story 2 kriya n asking 4 his 4giveness.then he touches her tummy wich has a baby bump nw n he feels the baby kick.he is happy n tears escapes his eyes.he kisses her belly 4m above the cloth n asks 4 4giveness 4m the baby.(widout even knowing its actually his baby:their baby)

Just then vick comes 4m behind n pushes rey away 4m kriya.

V:hw dare u enter her room n touch her bro?i 4bade u 2 come near her.sister! y did u allow him 2 come here?

Nurse:sorry sir!i thot he z ur bro!!

R:vick!plx listen 2 me

V:no bhai!i tolerated ur misdoings cx u were elder than me n I ws helpless bt nt anymore.dnt u dare touch my wife or come near her ever again n dnt u dare even thnk ov harming ur baby!(vick said ur in the flow ov emotions bt rey ws nt in a cndtn 2 interpret tat)

R:vick!at least listen 2

V:go away 4m here at once bro or I ll b forced 2 call the guards n push u outta here.

Rey had 2 leave.he goes home n tells pinky everything.pinky calls Vicky

V:hello!

P:hi bro!

V:whoz this?

P:bro!em pinky!dnt u recognize me?

V:wot pinky?u r bck??

Tears escape 4m his eyes!!

P:ya bro n I wanna meet u!

V:ok em coming home.

Wen vick went thr,it ws a emotional scene between brother n sis n she told Vicky evrythng n requested him 2 allow rey take care ov her.

V:no pink!i cnt let him do tat.he already did v bad wid her n she z already in trauma.i cant let him kill my best frnd..(tears welled up in his eyes)

P:plx bro!i assure u he wud do no harm 2 kriya n her child.plx let him take care ov her.he z already feeling v guilty n he had taken leave ov 1 yr 4m IAF.u knw hw bad it is 4 a pilot.

V:ok I allow him on the cndtn he wud do no harm 2 any1 ov them.

R:I promise vick.i wont.

Then he ws allowed 2 take care ov kriya by Vicky.he went thr daily,change her sheets,tie her hair n kept talking 2 her 4 hrs.the nurse wud change her clothes(em nt gonna giv u tat much a treat ;) )

Kriya's pregnancy ws progressing n rey felt the child's quickening more often.nw kriya moved here n thr wid the child's quickening bt she dint respond 2 anythng else,nt even rey's touch.her body has become numb.she ws made 2 exercise daily n taken 4 a walk by rey 2 outside wid the aid ov a nurse.she cud hear,see n feel bt dint respond.her pregnancy ws progressing n so were her brexton hick's contractions wich made her wince in pain.rey ws v careful abt her n ws always by her side.she ws mrs kriya vickrant singhaniya nw 4 the wrld bt literally kriya reyaansh singhaniya!!

It ws 9 month ov her pregnancy gng on n kriya ws full-term.1 fine morning Vicky ws on-call in the hospital n rey ws sleeping beside kriya's bed on the chair wen he heard kriya's shrill cry.he got up 2 c kriya crying in pain n he came 2 knew its time nw.he rushed her 2 the hospital.she ws taken 2 the labour room.rey ws walking to n fro in tension.vick also came home aftr duty n gotta knw so he 2 rushed 2 hospital.

Aftr half an hr the doctor came out n said

Dr:cngrats mr singhaniya!u became the father ov a baby boy.the mother n baby both r fine.

Both hugged each other n rey congragulated Vicky.they then rushed 2 c them.kriya ws lying still on the bed.vick went 2wards kriya n rey 2wards her son.he held him in his arms n kissed him on the forehead.

R:vick!baby singhaniya z so cute(n he smiled wide)

A pang ov pain ran dwn vick hearing singhaniya.he knew the new-born ws a singhaniya wid his brother's blood running in his veins.

V:I hope kriya gets up soon n sees her son.

He took the baby 4m rey's hands n put it beside kriya.he held her hand in his n made her run it on his head(baby's head nt vick's) :P

Aftr a few days they brought her bck home.pinky came 2 visit her n ws amused on seeing the baby n said in excitement.

P:his eyes resemble u bro!(pointing at rey) he z so cute.(however she realized her mistake n tried 2 change the topic) vick wot u gonna name him?

V:well it ws kriya's right bt nw tat she z nt here I ll name him as per her fav name she used 2 tell me._____ (will b filled as per public demand)

P:wot a nyc name!!i loved it!!

Vick took him in his arms n kissed him on the forehead.

V:I love u little nemo(ps nemo z ma fav character so vick z gonna nick name the baby nemo.real name will b dcded by u guys so hurry up n suggest sme cool names.the name suggested by max readers ll b final)

P:aww!!cute nick nemo!!

R:aftrall he z so cute na!!

N they laughed at this!!

COMING UP NEXT:

Leap..

Kriyaansh romance xra hatkey!!!

guys plx adjust wid the length.i hope its lengthy.i ommitted every unnecessary detail tat i thot wud b!! hope u like it..cmnts,criticism all accepted.silent readers plx like at least!!
NOTE:
all ov u knw my pm rule.if u cmnt on my previous update,u gonna get the pm 4 the next.no complaints regarding this entertained cx it takes lot ov tym 2 write n then pm 2 ppl who dnt even read or cmnt!!
NEXT UPDATE on PAGE 125 n tat 2 within3 days or aftr next week
Chapter 42
Edited by tinatartari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res
when r u goin to update?
UNres

story is getting intresting...
Vicky's charecter is 2 gud...
Finally rey's gt to know d truth.,
hope kriya get well soon
waiting 4 d kriyansh romance...
Thankx 4 d pm
update soon
Edited by kitttu1309. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wsome update ..!
Loved it ..!
Feeling very bad 4 kriya !
Hopefully everytging gets well..!
Update soin ..!

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