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here is an OS

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A SWEET MEMORY




Sitting alone in a lone corner of his cabin he was again lost in the sweet and melodious voice of his life…. Something had changed his life eleven years ago….a sweet and never ending memory in deep in his memory lane again he was lost in the calm and gentle voice of her his soul that is already his..marked by her words that were not just the mere words that she was singing that day but that was his heart that she captured by her innocence…her cute antics….. his mind soul body and life is now only possessed by her…. A sweet acquaintance that day made him lost in her…. That day he didn't even know that what he was listening and hearing …his eyes were just lost in the eternal beauty singing and dancing in front of the lord…..

Sanson Ki Mala Pe
Sanson Ki Mala Pe Simroon Main Pi Ka Naam
Sanson Ki Mala Pe Simroon Main Pi Ka Naam
Prem Ke Path Pe Chalte Chale Ho Gayee Main Badnaam
Sanson Ki Mala Pe Simroon Main Pi Ka Naam


She was chanting even not knowing the literal meaning of the words but the words were having such deep meaning a true devotee of her lord…dressed in pure white lehenga…. Playing with water for some time like waiting for something …..

That was she…… his LOVE…. However it was too fast to know anything after all seeing a just ten year old beauty in front of your eyes and being just thirteen yourself it's not an easy task to recognize your feelings towards someone….

FLASHBACK

Maan was just thirteen he was on his vacations his dadaji's roots were connected to the small hill station sattal…being the apple of everyone's eyes , his family along with his parents and sister with his grandparents they were in the small village….. beautiful atmosphere with the blanket of snow all over …… chilly nights with heat coming from the fire lit in the chimneys….. a totally beauty of god created for the human…but he didn't knew that the next day he is going to meet the best creation of almighty….

Being an early riser …..maan wake up at four and was on his mission exploring the place ….. though a thirteen year old is enough….but still was with one of the caretaker…. He was looking at the places…. Everything seems so still and silent…

Well it has to be… in the early morning at five in the snowy and chilly morning no one would dare to come out of their rooms…. Maan was ahead and ..it was after two hours he saw something clad in white …. Singing…..



A melodious voice, that can mellow down anyone's bad mood…..a little girl….not little but an enchantress with the small dupatta covering her head….

Maan was standing looking at her from far….. he would have been drown in her if the person with him didn't disturbed him …his moment got ruined that time but his heart was at piece after listening to her …..

Days were same the second day maan was alone he didn't accompany anyone with him….saw the same small temple still closed but his sweet enthralling girl in white outfit ….her silky black shiny hairs touching her waist …she was playing with the water…. Maan was mesmerized….although he too was a child but wanted to know her….

She was laughing giggling ….her anklets making the jiggling sounds…."cham cham"….. since the temple was in the middle of the small lake…. It was surrounded by water all the sides a small pavement leading to the main entrance but she was standing in the water…..

Maan who was standing away from her a few feets away was …..he was covered with a warm sweater …and she was also having a warm shawl covering her making it look like a duppatta…….he was more worried what if his angel…will get cold….her face was radiating a glow that is not even found in the world's beauty…. All the girls fail before her…. It was after some minutes ….. she turned and made her way towards the temple…..


She let the curtain fall which was hiding her idol's image from her….she was cleaning the lord with her dupatta…. She was making him bathe….. a pure devotee….and started singing …..

Sanson Ki Mala Pe
Sanson Ki Mala Pe Simroon Main Pi Ka Naam
Sanson Ki Mala Pe Simroon Main Pi Ka Naam


She lit the lamp infront of him…. Looking at him with a longing…. And start giggling …she made the bells ring in the temple and started singing…..

Prem Ke Path Pe Chalte Chale Ho Gayee Main Badnaam
Sanson Ki Mala Pe Simroon Main Pi Ka Naam


Her each and every words were for her lord….. though if any other girl will sing this …the only meaning will be calculated that she is either singing for her husband or fianc..but how come a ten year old knows this…..

And even he who was just staring her was lost in her…..

The next set of words made him again see the beauty in front of him….who was twirling and turning..like playing hide and seek with the lord…

Dhanp Liya Palkon Mein Tujhko
Band Kar Liye Nain
Band Kar Liye Nain
Dhanp Liya Palkon Mein Tujhko
Band Kar Liye Nain
Band Kar Liye Nain
Tu Mujhko Main Tujhko Dekhoon Gairon Ka Kya Kaam
Sanson Ki Mala Pe
Sanson Ki Mala Pe Simroon Main Pi Ka Naam


With her each words…it was affecting maan…without knowing anything he just capturing her in his heart without knowing that know she owns him…..she was making the actions like telling to her friend…..a innocent beauty captured him that day,..it was like the magic of her voice….her bubbly nature….that made him her devotee from the day…..

The next few days were same…. But he never tried to ask her …who is she ….neither she knew that someone is there who admires her….and neither he saw her in day time at any place he visited….

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It was after twelve years …he saw her again..never in his life even for a second he let her memory to fade away from his mind…she was is and will ever remain his…his childhood love that is now stronger than anything ..which is searching for her from last five years …..his eyes were just fixed at her …again In that white outfit…those beautiful deep almond eyes, same features ..nothing has changed except she had grown into the most gorgeous girl …..

There maan was lost in his angel…who was just making her presence gracious by the same song same…lyrics but this time she was dancing among the girls…. And overshadowing them….. the stage was full of her ….. the song started and the moment she smiled he knew he had found his long lost love….

Sanson Ki Mala Pe
Sanson Ki Mala Pe Simroon Main Pi Ka Naam
Sanson Ki Mala Pe Simroon Main Pi Ka Naam
Prem Ke Path Pe Chalte Chale Ho Gayee Main Badnaam
Sanson Ki Mala Pe Simroon Main Pi Ka Naam
Sanson Ki Mala Pe Simroon Main Pi Ka Naam


she was doing the traditional folk dance mix with katak steps …..making the dance look like made for her….there had not been any single day when maan didn't recalled her he even went umpteeth times to the place to search her but now she was not there , the temple seems to be dull without her…..


However he was a bit fast in knowing that he love her it ……. His twentieth birthday made him realize her importance in his life…however it was the realization that came between the teasings of his friends but that strong feel made him always get lost in her……

Sanson Ki Mala Pe
Sanson Ki Mala Pe Simroon Main Pi Ka Naam
Sanson Ki Mala Pe Simroon Main Pi Ka Naam
Prem Ke Path Pe Chalte Chale Ho Gayee Main Badnaam
Sanson Ki Mala Pe Simroon Main Pi Ka Naam
Sanson Ki Mala Pe Simroon Main Pi Ka Naam
Prem Ke Path Pe Chalte Chale Ho Gayee Main Badnaam
Sanson Ki Mala Pe Simroon Main Pi Ka Naam...


He was just lost wanting to call her tell her that how much he missed her ….. to tell her about his feeling about her…but somewhere scared of her reaction that how she will know that he is in love with her since he saw her……


Jeevan Ka Singar Hai Preetam
Maang Ka Hai Sindoor
Maang Ka Hai Sindoor
Jeevan Ka Singar Hai Preetam
Maang Ka Hai Sindoor
Maang Ka Hai Sindoor
Preetam Ki Nazroon Se Gir Ke Hai Jeena Kis Kaam
Sanson Ki Mala Pe Simroon Main Pi Ka Naam
Sanson Ki Mala Pe Simroon Main Pi Ka Naam
Prem Ke Path Pe Chalte Chale Ho Gayee Main Badnaam
Sanson Ki Mala Pe Simroon Main Pi Ka Naam...
Aaa...

The next set of wordings made him confident to made her his…she will be only his…. Though he is sounding selfish but can't let his love go away this easily ……there unknowingly geet made her actions towards her with the lyrics….when her actions went to acknowledge the sacred relation of a husband and wife…time has changed a lot……. A girl who once danced for her idol without knowing the real meaning of the words is now dancing infront of the person with whom she is destined to be……

Dhanp Liya Palkon Mein Tujhko

Band Kar Liye Nain
Band Kar Liye Nain
Dhanp Liya Palkon Mein Tujhko
Band Kar Liye Nain
Band Kar Liye Nain

It was true the day maan saw her he had just made her his life …it was like he was just waiting for her …. His eyes mind and soul are always searching for her whenever he opens his eyes after the sleep it seems he is just waiting for her arrival in his life…….

Tu Mujhko Main Tujhko Dekhoon Gairon Ka Kya Kaam
Sanson Ki Mala Pe
Sanson Ki Mala Pe Simroon Main Pi Ka Naam
Prem Ke Path Pe Chalte Chale Ho Gayee Main Badnaam
Sanson Ki Mala Pe Simroon Main Pi Ka Naam
Sanson Ki Mala Pe Simroon Main Pi Ka Naam...

The dance completed and the dancers along with his girl made exit from the stage..but how can he be at peace when his mind was wandering to talk to her to tell her everything….but when you look for someone with pure devotion then how can you be not his…that's what happened…..

Fortunately she was the girl whom he himself had selected to work with him…..she was the deserving candidate…. She was called and that's when he saw her from few inches …..



She said "thank you softly…." Making his heart beat rise to a higher level……

That was the beautiful beginning …….

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Maan was lost in his sweet memory when his life entered the cabin…. She was there to remind him that it was the time to go home…. Geet maan singh khurana…. A pure dominating wife who only knows how to capture his heart again and again by her pure love…. When he first time told her about his insanity all these years she was having tears…

It was six months since they are married and he is been extremely protective towards her since he can't take a single moment seeing her hurt when they are going to have their love in their hands soon….

A SWEET MEMORY THAT THEY WILL RELISH ALL THEIR LIFE…..

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So here is one more OS on our sweet maaneet

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SUHANA



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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is indeed a sweet memory

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Originally posted by: sdlife19

lovely and beautiful



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Originally posted by: shri12

This is indeed a sweet memory




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awesome n mindblowing os...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely os...


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Originally posted by: love2_soma

awesome n mindblowing os...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely os...





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all i want to say is
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BEAUTIFUL OS
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LVD IT..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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really really really beautiful os di
maan got lost in her when she was just 10 years old
love at first sight n childhood love dono mix
luved the song selection too
perfectly suited the situation n the story
the way she used 2 sing in front of the idol
symbolized her pure faith on god
without even knowing what lyrics is she singing
maan searched for her
n his pure luv n destiny brought them together
seeing her again dancing within a group
even god wont let these 2 lovers separate
they got married
n also expecting their baby soon
luved it thoroughly di
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thank u so much

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